第二章 话题44 化解隔阂 重归于好-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计word（基础版）

高中英语 读后续写高分设计　基础版 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 For my fourteenth birthday, my mom offered to take me and my several friends to the city nearest our small town to visit a mall, go shopping, eat pizza in the food court, and then watch a movie. Afterwards, we would all return to my house for a party. It was just the kind of celebration that a teenage girl expected. When it was time to climb aboard the bus and ride together to my home out in the country, Nora didn't show up. I felt confused. Then I felt mad. Why didn't she tell me she couldn't make it? Why would she tell me she'd come to the party and then back out without letting me know? I decided to call Nora and get some answers. Nora explained that she'd had to stay home from school because she had gotten sick. She couldn't ride the bus home with me and my other friends or join us at the shopping mall for food－court pizza and a movie because she had been too sick to come to school. Nora began crying on the phone, hurt and surprised that I was angry with her. Moments later, her mother called back. Angrily, she told me how much I'd hurt her daughter, how much Nora had wanted to join us, and that she had been the one to change Nora's plans because she didn't allow her to go to school sick that day. I seldom gave Nora or her absence from our festivities another thought. At school on Monday, I found it easy to avoid her since she and I had no classes together. For the rest of the school year, we seldom spoke, and I forgot about my hurtful call with Nora as time went by. The next year I started at the high school, with twice as many students as my middle school. I made some new friends and kept some old ones. Maybe I glanced at Nora with a small smile once in a while as we passed in the halls, but our friendship had been relegated (使降级) to the past. It happened sometimes, and I shrugged it off (不予理睬)． 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Years later, Facebook suggested Nora as an online friend for our similarities. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 I wrote an apology letter to Nora. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 when on my fourteenth birthday what My good friend Nora didn't__turn/show__up on my birthday. I was angry and questioned her on the phone. Then a barrier arose between us, and the friendship gradually faded. who My Mom(筹备生日派对) ①My mom offered to take me and my several friends to the city. ②Afterwards, we would all return to my house for a party. Nora(没有到场，做出解释) ①Nora didn't show up. ②Nora explained that she had to stay home from school because she had__gotten__sick. I(困惑生气，电话质问，不再多想，关系降级) ①I felt confused. Then I felt mad. ②I decided to call Nora and get__some__answers. ③I seldom gave Nora or her absence from our festivities another thought. ④Maybe I glanced at Nora with a small smile once in a while as we passed in the halls, but our friendship had been relegated (使降级) to the past. Nora's mother(生气指责) Moments later, her mother called back. Angrily,__she told me how much I'd hurt her daughter. Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 作者的好朋友Nora (诺拉)没有参加作者14岁的生日派对，作者很生气，导致和Nora的关系破裂。很长一段时间以后，网络又将Nora作为好友推荐给作者。这时，作者会怎么做呢？作者和Nora能够重归于好吗？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：好朋友没能参加作者的生日派对，作者一气之下，打电话质问，造成隔阂，导致关系破裂。 合理的解决办法：一段时间之后，抓住机会，消除隔阂，重归于好。 2．情节发展 第一段：脸书推荐Nora做好友→作者发出加好友请求→作者和Nora在网上互动→感到后悔 第二段：写道歉信→获得原谅→隔阂消除 3．主旨升华 作者和好朋友因为沟通出现问题，造成关系破裂。但是后来，作者认识到问题所在，主动行动，消除隔阂，这才是正确的选择。 Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 通过恰当的形容词表现人物情绪，可以推动情节发展并为下文做好铺垫。例如：“I recognized how selfish, self－centered, and self－absorbed I'd been.”。 2．结构衔接 通过使用表示衔接的副词，如表示因果关系的so，意为“因此”或是表示时间关系的now，意为“现在”等，使得上下文更连贯。例如：“So, I reached out and sent the friend request.” “Now, I regretted it deeply.”。 3．高分范文赏读 Years later, Facebook suggested Nora as an online friend for our similarities. So, I reached out and sent the friend request. Nora accepted. After a year or so of polite online interactions, I began to reflect on that ugly phone conversation I'd initiated with Nora all those years before. Now, I regretted it deeply. I recognized how selfish, self－centered, and self－absorbed I'd been. I didn't even give her a chance to talk with me, and I didn't think about how disappointed she must have been, or even ask how she was feeling. I wrote an apology letter to Nora. I wondered if Nora would even remember the incident. But only a few days later, she responded with a message of her own—one of heartfelt receptivity and forgiveness. She told me how she'd missed me after that ill－fated birthday celebration weekend and wanted to stay friends with me. I expressed my regret that the opportunity had been wasted—all because of that one phone call and how I'd handled it. 写在最后的话： 朋友或是亲人之间难免会产生隔阂，要懂得互相体谅，将隔阂化解，让美好得以延续。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Prissy Baker was in Oscar Miller's store on New Year's morning when her uncle, Richard Baker, a bachelor, came in. He did not look at Prissy, nor did she wish him a happy New Year. Uncle Richard had not been on speaking terms with her or her father for eight years. When she had been a little girl they had been great friends; but that was before the quarrel. When Prissy had been nine years old, Richard and Irving Baker had quarreled over the division of a piece of property. The fault had been mainly on Richard's side, and that very fact made him all the more stubborn. He had never spoken to his brother since, and he declared he never would. Prissy and her father felt very badly over it, but Uncle Richard seemed to have completely forgotten them. Richard told Mr Miller that he was on business but that he didn't like it.“Well, I always like a good dinner on New Year's，” said Richard. “It's about the only way I can celebrate. I got everything ready last night, but I won't get back before one o'clock, so I think I'll have to put up with a cold bite.” After Richard had driven away, Prissy walked thoughtfully home. She had planned to spend a holiday with a new book. She did not even mean to cook dinner, for her father had had to go to the town that morning and would be gone the whole day. There was nobody else to cook dinner for. Prissy's mother had died long ago. Suddenly an idea popped into Prissy's head. Dared she? Oh, she never could! But he would never know. There would be plenty of time! Prissy had no trouble breaking into Uncle Richard's house, for the woodshed door was unfastened. She tripped into the kitchen with rosy cheeks and mischief sparkling in her eyes. In a short time, the kitchen was full of appetizing odors. As the clock struck twelve, Prissy had the table set. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Prissy was about to slip away when the door was pushed open.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 When the meal was over, he talked to Prissy kindly and politely.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Prissy (普里西)的父亲与叔叔Richard (理查德)关系破裂，没有任何来往。Prissy偶然得知叔叔新年那天不能自己做饭庆祝，便想给叔叔一个惊喜。Prissy准备离开时遇到了谁？他会对Prissy说些什么呢？ [精彩范文] Prissy was about to slip away when the door was pushed open. It was his uncle Richard who opened the door! He was surprised to see that Prissy was in his house. “Why are you here, little Prissy？” “I am here to cook for you, Uncle Richard. Because I heard in Oscar Miller's store that you have no time to cook.” “Oh！” Uncle Richard replied with a lump in his throat. With Prissy's company, he went to the dining room, where he smelt the appetizing odors created by Prissy immediately. Then, they had a perfect dinner together. When the meal was over, he talked to Prissy kindly and politely. Overwhelmed by pleasure, Uncle Richard said, “How time flies! Eight years has passed. I always want to apologize but I am afraid that my brother wouldn't accept it.” Hearing his explanation, Prissy knew she did a right thing. She invited Uncle Richard to come to her home the next day when her father would be at home, saying that love can eliminate all hatred. Prissy's father was extremely happy to reunite with his brother. So, with love, all would turn out all right. 1．He did not look at Prissy, nor did she wish him a happy New Year. 译文：他没有看普里西，同样，普里西也没有祝他新年快乐。 亮点：nor＋倒装结构，用在否定句后面，表示“……也没有……”。 2．Prissy had no trouble breaking into Uncle Richard's house, for the woodshed door was unfastened. 译文：普里西毫不费力就进入了理查德叔叔的房子，因为房子的木头门没有锁。 亮点：①固定短语have (no) trouble (in) doing sth意为“做某事(没)有困难”；②for连接并列句，表示原因，对前面的句子做出解释。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$