第二章 话题42 发自内心 真正分享-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计word（基础版）

高中英语 读后续写高分设计　基础版 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a warm summer evening in Surat, my wife and I were on our way to the grocery store, when I noticed a man sitting on the pavement under a street light. Something about him made me stop. He sat motionless, his steady gaze fixed on an object only he could see. His beard was long and untidy, much like the matted hair on his head. An abandoned advertisement banner (横幅) hung loosely around his waist was his only protection from the environment. The vacant look in his eyes indicated he was possibly incapable of normal mental function. We tried asking him a few questions, but he showed no signs of having heard or understood us. He just sat there, staring into the darkness, unaware of our presence. It was quite apparent that he was in need of help and we thought a while about what we could do. “He looks hungry，” my wife remarked, “but there is no point in giving him money.” I agreed. “Let's buy him a loaf of bread instead，” I suggested. It took us a while to finish our shopping. When we returned to the spot where we had first seen the man, he wasn't there. We looked around, but there was no sign of him. Disappointed, we decided to go home, wondering what to do with the loaf of bread. We'd barely gone a hundred meters when we spotted him. Driven by hunger, he had crossed the road and was seated with a family of migrant labours, who had camped there. They were workers who were tired out from a long day work under the boiling summer sun and struggled to support family. Surprisingly, none of the family members seemed to mind his presence. In fact, he looked to be quite welcome. The family had accepted him without question, just as he was a visiting relative or a close friend. Curious, I stopped my motorcycle in the shadows and watched. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 It was dinner time when a lady was roasting meat over an open fire with her family. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Watching for a while, we were deeply touched. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 when on a warm summer evening what My wife and I noticed a man, who was apparently in__need__of__help. We decided to buy him some bread. But when we returned, he wasn't there. Then, I found he had went to a family of migrant labours and seemed to be__enjoying__himself there. who My wife and I (注意到一个人需要帮助，决定买面包，找不到人) ①My wife and I were on our way to the grocery store, when I noticed a man. ②“Let's buy him a__loaf__of__bread instead，” I suggested. ③When we returned to the spot where we had first seen the man, he wasn't there. The man (需要帮助，饥饿驱使寻找食物) ①It was quite apparent that he was in need of help. ②Driven by hunger,__he had crossed the road and was seated with a family of migrant labours. The migrant family (毫不介意，完全接受) ①Surprisingly, none of the family members seemed to mind__his__presence. ②The family had accepted him without question. Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 作者和妻子看到一个看起来很邋遢的男人坐在人行道上，于是决定给他买面包，买好面包后，却看到他和一个民工家庭坐在一起，并且看起来很受欢迎。他在那里做什么？作者又能从中得到什么启发呢？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：作者去给一个需要帮助的乞丐买面包，而乞丐却去了一个农民工的临时住所。 合理的解决办法：农民工家庭从内心深处接受这个乞丐，并倾心帮助，展示了分享的真正含义。 2．情节发展 第一段：女主人烤肉→确保乞丐有肉吃→乞丐狼吞虎咽→家庭成员高兴就餐 第二段：受到感动→留下面包→了解分享和给予的意义 3．主旨升华 作者和妻子看到乞丐在民工家庭被当作真正的家人招待，作者体会到真正的分享既能让他人感到开心，也能让自己在帮助他人的同时感到快乐。 Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 通过动作及神态描写，可以反映主人公心理活动的进程，细腻、生动、真实地展示人物的心理，并推动情节的发展。例如：“The beggar was eating hungrily from an aluminum plate. She smiled as she watched him dig into the food clumsily”。 2．结构衔接 通过使用时间状语从句，使得过渡自然、文章连贯。例如：“As she rolled and roasted more meat, she handed the beggar a share”“The other members of the family chatted happily as they ate”。 3．高分范文赏读 It was dinner time when a lady was roasting meat over an open fire with her family. As she rolled and roasted more meat, she handed the beggar a share, keeping an eye on him to make sure that his plate was not empty. The beggar was eating hungrily from an aluminum plate. She smiled as she watched him dig into the food clumsily, dropping every other share on to his chest and then to the ground. The other members of the family chatted happily as they ate, the meat disappearing faster than the cheerful lady could make them. Watching for a while, we were deeply touched. The scene where the family worked and earned a few rupees under the boiling summer sun to keep their stomachs from growling came to mind. Overcome with guilt, we placed the loaf of bread near the man and rode away. Not until then did we learn the true meaning of giving and sharing. That family was far from wealthy, but they shared what they had, not something they had no use for, or something they could easily afford, like a loaf of bread. 写在最后的话： 我们很多时候都会与别人分享或是给予别人一些东西，但是，真正的分享是发自内心的，只有这样，双方才能真正体会到分享的意义。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day, a man in a nice suit who seemed to have a respectable job went into a restaurant after the busy work in the evening, with a little tiredness on his face. “What a busy day！” he said to himself in a low voice. He sat down at a table and ordered a big pizza at once in order to eat some food quickly and then go home. After a little while, another man who looked homeless with worn­out clothes came into the restaurant and sat near the nice suit man with a smile on his face. The nice suit man didn't give back a smile with respect, and nor did he cast a glance at the homeless man. Ten minutes later, the pizza arrived and was put in the middle of the table. The nice suit man couldn't wait to eat it, so he grabbed (吃) it without hesitation because of hunger. A few seconds later, the homeless man took a piece of the pizza and chewed (咀嚼) it slowly with a happy smile on his face. “I won't be angry about this, because he is a homeless person. It won't really matter if he doesn't continue to eat my second piece of pizza，” the nice suit man thought. Then the homeless man took the second piece and third piece during the next ten minutes with a very satisfied smile. The nice suit guy finally got angry and shouted, “Why don't you order one by yourself? Why can't you stop eating my pizza？” At the same time, the waiter came and held a pizza to the nice suit man, saying, “Sir, this one is yours and that one just now was this gentleman's.” The nice suit man felt a little embarrassed and said to the homeless man, “Why didn't you tell me the one just now was yours? I am sorry to have shouted at you.” The homeless man was still calm and in peace with a kind voice, “Because you looked hungry and I like to share my food with you.” The nice suit man felt ashamed and he decided to give his whole one to the homeless man. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 But the homeless man said, “No, please don't give it to me; share it with me please.” 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 The next day, the nice suit man was on his way to visit the homeless man. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了一个流浪汉走进餐馆，坐在西装革履的男子旁边，流浪汉不断在盘子里面拿比萨饼吃，最终惹恼了西装男，结果却发现第一盘比萨饼是流浪汉的，于是西装男决定将自己的比萨饼送给流浪汉，却遭到拒绝。流浪汉为什么拒绝呢？西装男又会怎么做呢？ [精彩范文] But the homeless man said, “No, please don't give it to me; share it with me please.” The nice suit man was touched by these sincere words from the homeless man in front of him and he felt the homeless man was rich for his spiritual world. That might be the reason why the homeless man was always having a smile on his face, not a fake smile but a genuine one from the bottom of his heart. The nice suit man said, “Sir, I hope you will be here tomorrow at this time. I am going home now because I have to finish the rest of the work.” The next day, the nice suit man was on his way to visit the homeless man. “He is supposed to be in the restaurant，” the nice suit man thought. There was no doubt that the homeless man was in that restaurant again. When they saw each other they were smiling at the same time and the nice suit man said, “Today, I am going to share the food with you.” At this both of them smiled again, and then they talked like old friends, sharing interesting stuff they experienced or heard. At the end of that day's “sharing”， the nice suit man gave a hug to the homeless man and then he realized what kindness and sharing meant in life. 1．He sat down at a table and ordered a big pizza at once in order to eat some food quickly and then go home. 译文：他坐在桌旁，立刻点了一大份比萨饼，想要赶快吃完然后回家。 亮点：①at once意为“立刻”；②短语in order to意为“目的是”，后接动词原形，作目的状语。 2．The nice suit man didn't give back a smile with respect, and nor did he cast a glance at the homeless man. 译文：那个穿着漂亮西装的男人，没有礼貌地回以微笑，甚至都没有看那个流浪汉一眼。 亮点：①nor意为“也不”，置于句首时要使用部分倒装结构；②介词短语with respect意为“礼貌地，出于尊重地”；③动词短语cast a glance at sb意为“扫某人一眼”。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$