第二章 话题17 帮助对手 友谊第一-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计word（基础版）

高中英语 读后续写高分设计　基础版 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·河北省张家口市尚义县第一中学等校高一联考)Grace and Ellen, both promising in their school's dance competition, were fierce competitors. They both had great passion for dancing and dreamed for bigger stages. They were both friends and competitors. They had similar taste in music, and had similar dressing styles. They had both devoted themselves to preparing for the upcoming contest. Grace's journey to the competition was marked by countless hours of practice and determination. She would rise before the sun, and the studio lights were her only company. Every movement was perfected with unwavering mind. She knew that this competition wasn't just about personal success; it was also about upholding her school's honor. “Grace, you're incredible！” Grace's dance instructor, Mrs Anderson, often praised her. “Your hard work will pay off.” Ellen had been practicing hard for this competition as well. Her love for dance was her driving force. After school, she would head straight to the dance studio, tirelessly perfecting every step. Her dance shoes had become a part of her feet, and her heart burned with a strong desire for victory. “Ellen, you're a natural，” her fellow dancers would often say. “You've got this！” The day of the competition finally arrived, and there were five competitors fighting for the championship title. Ellen was scheduled to perform before Grace. As Ellen stood backstage, the butterflies in her stomach seemed to have turned into a whirlwind. She practiced every move once again but suddenly broke her dress with a sharp movement. Panic set in as her mind raced for a solution. “Ellen, you're up next！” the stage manager announced. In the dimly lit backstage area, Grace overheard Ellen's whispers to her friend, Sarah. “I broke my dancing dress, Sarah，” Ellen's voice trembled. “What am I going to do？” Grace's heart sank as she overheard the conversation. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Grace knew her dress would fit Ellen perfectly, but she hesitated.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Tears of thanks welled up in Ellen's eyes as she put on Grace's dress. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 when the day of the competition what Grace and Ellen, both promising in their school's dance competition, were fierce competitors. The day of the competition finally arrived, but Ellen broke her dancing dress. who Grace(希望获胜，刻苦训练，有决心，听到对话) ①Grace's journey to the competition was marked by countless hours of practice and determination. ②She knew that this competition wasn't just about personal__success;__it was also about upholding her school's honor. ③Grace's heart sank when she overheard Ellen's whispers to her friend, Sarah. Ellen(爱跳舞，刻苦训练，希望获胜，弄破舞裙，向Sarah求助) ①Ellen had been practicing hard for this competition as well and her__love__for__dance was her driving force. ②Her heart burned with a__strong__desire__for__victory. ③She suddenly broke__her__dress with a sharp movement. ④“I broke my dancing dress, Sarah，” Ellen's voice trembled. “What am I going to do？” Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 Grace (格蕾丝)和Ellen (埃伦)是舞蹈比赛的竞争对手，她们都希望在即将到来的舞蹈比赛中获胜。赛前，Ellen不小心弄破了自己的舞裙，Grace会怎么做？Ellen能顺利完成比赛吗？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：Grace 和 Ellen是舞蹈比赛的竞争对手，赛前，Ellen不小心弄破了自己的舞裙。 合理的解决办法：Grace经过内心的挣扎后最终决定将自己的舞裙借给Ellen，Ellen穿上Grace的舞裙，完美地完成了比赛。 2．情节发展 第一段：Grace犹豫是否要帮助→决定帮助 第二段：Ellen深受感动→完成比赛→友谊升华 3．主旨升华 赛前，Ellen因弄破自己的舞裙而特别慌张，此时竞争对手Grace把自己的舞裙借给Ellen，Ellen深受感动，两人友谊升华。 Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 ①通过使用对话描写揭示人物的性格，铺垫出合理的续写情节，从而推动情节向前发展。例如：“‘Ellen, I heard your problem，’Grace said with a soft voice, ‘my dress can fit you perfectly.’”。 ②通过使用心理描写塑造人物形象、刻画人物性格，揭示人物的内心世界，表现人物丰富而复杂的思想感情。例如：“She vowed to herself that she would not let Grace down and would do her best in the competition.”。 2．结构衔接 运用转折词表明前后句之间的转折关系，突出文章重点，使文章更具有层次感和逻辑性。例如：“However, Grace also understood that ...”“But what made her happiest was having such a good friend.”。 3．高分范文赏读 Grace knew her dress would fit Ellen perfectly, but she hesitated. After all, it was Ellen's own fault for breaking her dress. However, Grace also understood that sometimes in competition, they should put aside their differences and help each other. She took a deep breath and approached Ellen. “Ellen, I heard your problem，” Grace said with a soft voice, “my dress can fit you perfectly. You can wear my dress on stage.” Ellen's eyes widened in surprise. “Grace, you would do that for me？” she asked, her voice trembling. “Of course, Ellen，” Grace replied, a gentle smile on her face. “Now, go out there and show them what you've got.” Tears of thanks welled up in Ellen's eyes as she put on Grace's dress. She knew that she had let herself down and almost gave up, but Grace's act of kindness restored her faith in herself. She vowed to herself that she would not let Grace down and would do her best in the competition. Finally, Ellen won the competition with her outstanding performance. But what made her happiest was having such a good friend. 写在最后的话： 赛场上，成绩固然重要，但是更重要的是参赛者在赛场上的精神面貌，以及展现出来的风度。比赛第二，友谊第一。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·四川省宜宾市第三中学高二期末) The Comeback Laurie sat quietly in the empty dressing room at the ice－skating rink (溜冰场). She has not been skating in any competition since her left knee was badly injured in an accident six months ago. As she waited for her turn to skate, Laurie was very nervous. She knew that today was a very important day in her comeback. “If I can win today，” she thought, “I can skate in the World Cup next year and then maybe I can make it to the Olympics.” Laurie was told that she had a tough competition this year, and a girl from Connecticut named Jinny Jordan who was really strong in everything. “She is the one you have to beat this year，” the coach said. Minutes later, the door opened and Laurie saw a young woman who was about her own age. The young woman dumped some of her belongings onto a chair. The bag fell to the floor with a sound. Laurie felt uncomfortable as she looked at Jinny. “So this is my competitor，” thought Laurie, “Because of her, I may lose tonight.” “This costume (服装) was my mom's idea，” Jinny started the conversation, looking down at her red, white, and blue skating dress. “looks like a flag.” Laurie couldn't keep from smiling. She pointed to Jinny's skating bag. “Something fell out of your bag，” Laurie said. Jinny looked at the clothing and equipment that lay scattered on the floor. As she began to gather her belongings, the door opened. “Jinny，” called someone, “You'd better give the tape of your music to the sound engineer right away.” “I thought I gave him my music tape an hour ago，” said Jinny, “Tell him it's the green box with my initials written in white in the right­hand corner.” “He said you never gave it to him and he's getting angry.” “Then I don't know what I did with it，” said Jinny, hurrying out. Laurie knew that music was nearly as important to the program as skating itself. If she lost her music tape, she might as well forget about skating. Laurie stood up and walked to the chair to do a few more knee bends. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Suddenly she saw something small and dark green behind the leg of the dressing table.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Feeling relaxed, Laurie skated quickly to the center of the rink after the announcer finally called her name.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Laurie (劳里)在滑冰场等待上场，今天是她复出的重要日子，她要打败竞争对手Jinny Jordan (吉尼·乔丹)。Jinny离开休息室找音乐磁带去了，Laurie却发现磁带就在眼前，她会怎么做？最后比赛结果如何？ [精彩范文] Suddenly she saw something small and dark green behind the leg of the dressing table. She pulled it out and saw the white Initials J．J in the top right­hand corner. “It's Jinny's music tape！” she exclaimed. Laurie's heart started beating fast. “All I'd have to do is forget that I found this，” she thought. “If Jinny doesn't have her music, she might as well not skate. And then I would win.” Laurie shivered slightly as she thought about this. Then she wondered, “Does winning mean so much to me that I'd be willing to cheat for it？” She walked to the door and called Jinny loudly. Feeling relaxed, Laurie skated quickly to the center of the rink after the announcer finally called her name. The music filled the stadium and she skated gracefully and beautifully. Her left knee was fine and she felt herself gliding on the ice. The audience applauded from time to time, enthusiastically supporting her in her comeback. When she finished, her coach ran up to her and hugged her. “You did it, Laurie！” she said. Laurie smiled and thought about Jinny's music tape. “No one will ever know how close I really came to losing.” she said softly to herself. 1．She has not been skating in any competition since her left knee was badly injured in an accident six months ago. 译文：自从六个月前她的左膝在一次事故中严重受伤，她就一直没有参加过任何比赛。 亮点：①has been skating为现在完成进行时；②since引导时间状语从句，后接表示过去的动作或时间时，主句应用现在完成时。 2．Laurie was told that she had a tough competition this year, and a girl from Connecticut named Jinny Jordan who was really strong in everything. 译文：劳里被告知今年她将面临一场激烈的竞争，一个来自康涅狄格州，名叫吉尼·乔丹的女孩，在所有方面都很强大。 亮点：①that引导宾语从句；②from Connecticut为介词短语作a girl的后置定语；③named Jimmy Jordan为过去分词短语作a girl的后置定语；④who引导定语从句，修饰Jinny Jordan。 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$