第二章 话题15 消除误会 弥合罅隙-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计word（基础版）

高中英语 读后续写高分设计　基础版 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·广西柳州市大联考高二月考)Once upon a time, there were two brothers who lived on two adjoining (相邻的) farms. The elder brother is John and the younger one is Jack. One day they got a problem. It was the first serious disagreement in 40 years of farming side­by­side, sharing machines and using goods as needed. Clearly they could not get on well with each other like before and the long­time good relationship fell apart. It began with a small misunderstanding and then it grew into a big difference. Finally, they had a quarrel with each other followed by weeks of silence. No one was willing to be the first to accept mistakes or forgive each other. One morning there was a knock on John's door. He opened it to find a man with a carpenter's toolbox. “I'm a carpenter (木匠), and I am good at making chairs, tables, and even bridges. Now I'm looking for a few days' work，” the man said. “Perhaps you would have some small projects and I could help. Could I help you？” “Yes，” said John. “I do have a job for you. Look across the river at that farm. That's my neighbor. In fact, it's my younger brother! There was a piece of grassland between us. However, he recently brought his bulldozer (推土机) and now there is a river between us. Well, he may have done this to upset me on purpose, but I'll do more. See the wood over there? I want you to build a fence, an eight－foot－long fence, so I won't need to see his place or his face anymore.” The carpenter said, “I think I understand the situation. Show me the materials and I'll be able to do a job that pleases you.” John had to go to town to buy something for his farm, so he helped the carpenter get the materials ready and then he left. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 The carpenter worked hard all that day.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 The two brothers stood at each end of the bridge.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 when after John had a quarrel with his brother what There were two brothers who got__a__problem. It began with a small misunderstanding and then it grew into a__big__difference. Finally, they had a quarrel with each other. who The elder brother John(出现分歧，关系破裂，找人帮忙修篱笆) ①One day the two brothers got a problem. ②Finally, they had__a__quarrel with each other. ③One morning there was a knock on John's door. He opened it to find a man with a__carpenter's__toolbox. ④He wanted the carpenter to build__a__fence,__so he would not need to see his younger brother's place or his face anymore. The carpenter (找活干，聪明，修了一座桥) ①“I'm a carpenter. Now I'm looking for a__few__days'__work，” the carpenter said. ②John wanted the carpenter to build a fence, an__eight－foot－long__fence. ③The carpenter said, “Show me the materials and I'll be able to do a job that pleases__you．” Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 John (约翰)和弟弟Jack (杰克)因为误会而出现隔阂，有一天一位木匠来到哥哥家里找活儿干，哥哥让木匠帮他修一道长篱笆，这样他就可以不再见到弟弟，木匠在两兄弟的家之间修了什么？两兄弟最终解开心结、重归于好了吗？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：两兄弟产生误会，弟弟Jack在两家之间挖了一条河，哥哥John让木匠帮他修一道长篱笆将两家隔开。 合理的解决办法：木匠在两兄弟的家之间修了一座桥，让两兄弟重归于好。 2．情节发展 第一段：木匠建桥→哥哥查看成果→弟弟微笑走来 第二段：握手言和→承认错误→原谅对方 3．主旨升华 人与人之间没有解不开的心结，只要愿意并积极地沟通，误会终究会被解开。 Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 ①场景描写服务于文章主题，营造意境，渲染气氛，烘托人物的心情，推动情节的发展。例如：“It was a beautiful bridge! The bridge connected one side of the river with the other side！”。 ②通过人物之间简单而质朴的对话，突显人物的性格，刻画人物形象，使得故事情节更加活灵活现。例如：“John said, ‘Please stay here to help me. I will pay you a lot of money.’ The carpenter replied, ‘No, thanks. I still have important bridges to build ...’”。 2．结构衔接 运用表示时间的介词短语或状语从句，使得上下文逻辑关系更加清晰明朗，文章节奏更加层次分明。例如：“When John returned ...”“After a while ...”。 3．高分范文赏读 The carpenter worked hard all that day. When John returned, the carpenter had just finished his job. John was surprised because there was no fence at all. It was a beautiful bridge! The bridge connected one side of the river with the other side! He has never seen such a fine piece of work in his life! And the neighbor, his younger brother Jack, was coming toward them with a big smile on his face. The two brothers stood at each end of the bridge. They met on it, taking each other's hand. They both admitted that they should have accepted their own mistakes and forgiven each other earlier. After a while, they saw the carpenter picking up his own tools. John said, “Please stay here to help me. I will pay you a lot of money.” The carpenter replied, “No, thanks. I still have important bridges to build. I hope you will get on well with each other like before.” 写在最后的话： 人际交往中难免会发生一些误会。误会本身并不可怕，发现误会，及时澄清，人与人之间的情谊会因为误会的消除而变得更加深厚。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市高一月考)“Why she let out my secret? why she did that to me？” I vividly remembered that day when I was confused at the knowing looks which everyone gave me. That terrible experience was imprinted (铭刻) on my mind. I couldn't forgive the person with whom I had shared my secret. She lost all my trust and friendship. Five years back, Sally was a new addition in our class. I don't know what but there was something sticky about her that attracted me towards her. She was the most friendly person I knew. We started as classmates but after a few months we were like best friends. We did homework together and dreamed of going to the same university one day. We hung out and went to the movies on weekends. That was a sweet time. Nevertheless, I couldn't expect such an enormous betrayal from her. I didn't know what made me tell Sally about my personal life. I felt much regret to myself. She exaggerated (夸大) the matter, added her own spices to it and made it the hottest topic in school. It was like someone had stabbed a knife in my back. After she revealed my secret, everyone at school started laughing at me and gazing at me wherever I passed. I was like a pond in which someone had thrown a stone and it had been spilled up. It was the most embarrassing time I had gone through. Soon afterwards, I left school and shifted to another one, because I thought no one had the right to laugh at me. Sally called me many times but I didn't answer. My heart was broken because the person whom I trusted most cheated me. I made efforts to remove the scar from my heart. I started a new life, leaving all the bad memories behind, because they made me a person who often thought about the past experiences. Five years later, with the life going on, I made new friends and seldom thought about the past. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 I immediately called Sally in order to explain the misunderstanding.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者跟好朋友Sally (萨莉)分享自己的秘密，却被很多同学知道了，作者十分伤心，后来作者在市场上遇到了以前的同学Anna (安娜)。事情的真相是什么？作者和Sally重归于好了吗？ [精彩范文] But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news. Anna said that after I left school the gossip soon disappeared. Everyone in our class missed me. Because I left without saying goodbye, Sally was sad for a long time. And to my amazement, she told me that Sally was not the one who brought my secret to light. It was Mary who had a big mouth and always wanted to put her nose in other people's matters. She happened to overhear my conversation with Sally. I was all at sea, feeling that the floor had slipped away beneath my feet. Anxious and regretful, I asked Anna for any contact with Sally. I immediately called Sally in order to explain the misunderstanding. After getting through, I sincerely apologized to her. She said softly, “Never mind. We are good friends.” I was in tears, guilt and joy. At that moment, I wished it had not happened. I wished time could go back and I could overcome my mistake. From that I got a lesson in life that we should learn to trust our loved ones, because a little mistake can lead us to ruin what we should value. Trust is the foundational principle that holds friendship. It is also the easiest thing in the world to lose. We need to be open and trust our friends. 1．After she revealed my secret, everyone at school started laughing at me and gazing at me wherever I passed. 译文：在她透露了我的秘密之后，学校里的每个人都开始嘲笑我，无论我走到哪里，他们都盯着我看。 亮点：①After引导时间状语从句；②gaze at sb意为“盯着某人”；③wherever引导让步状语从句。 2．My heart was broken because the person whom I trusted most cheated me. 译文：我的心碎了，因为我最信任的人欺骗了我。 亮点：①because引导原因状语从句；②whom引导定语从句，修饰the person。 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$