第二章 话题11 尊老敬老 善待老人-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计word（基础版）

高中英语 读后续写高分设计　基础版 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·江西省赣州市兴国中学高一月考)“Mom, I'm ready to go，” called Jason. Every Saturday, Jason looked forward to going to Chinatown to shop for food because his mom let him pick his favorite snacks: roast pork buns and bubble tea. The streets in Chinatown were crowded with cars and pedestrians. His mother could not find the same exotic vegetables in the local supermarkets, so they always came here to shop. What fascinated Jason was tasty roast pork, even the whole pigs hanging on big hooks in the windows, their skins roasted to a glistening brown. Jason's mouth would water just looking at them. As they passed the newsstand carrying Chinese newspapers and magazines, Jason spotted an old man sitting on the sidewalk. His hair was long, white, and messy. The face beneath was lined, dirty, and unshaven. Frayed and torn clothing wrapped around his thin frame, and in this kind of cold weather, he even wore sandals, his feet blue with cold. He banged an empty can against the sidewalk. As Jason walked by, he could smell a musty odor and pinched his nostrils together. The old man reached out and touched Jason's left leg. Instinctively, Jason gathered all his strength to jerk (猛拉) his leg away and kick the old man's hand heavily. Frightened, he hurried to catch up with his mother without looking back. “Mom, the old man touched me，” he cried, “He touched me with his dirty hands. It's disgusting! And he smelled too.” Jason's mother glanced back at the man with a look of understanding and said gently, “Jason, he can't help it. He's homeless. He didn't mean any harm.” Mom's words made Jason look back at the old man with regret, who now was looking up at other passersby, still banging his can. On their way home, Jason asked, his voice filled with concern, “Why is that old man homeless? Where does he sleep？” “I don't know. It's tough to be homeless, especially in this cold weather. He did look quite weak，” his mother replied. Mom's words made Jason's regret deepened. He confessed his heavy kick to his mother, who reminded him that it was crucial to acknowledge his mistake and try to make up for it. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 The next day, with his mother's help, Jason decided to do something.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Hearing this, the old man looked at them with watery eyes. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 when on a Saturday what When Jason and his mom went to Chinatown to shop for food, an old homeless man reached out and touched Jason's left leg. Jason kicked__the__old__man's__hand heavily. who Jason(和母亲买食物，踢老人的手，害怕，承认错误) ①Jason and his mom went to Chinatown to shop__for__food. ②Jason spotted an__old__man sitting on the sidewalk. ③Jason gathered all his strength to jerk his leg away and kick the old man's hand heavily. ④Frightened,__he hurried to catch up with his mother without looking back. ⑤He confessed his__heavy__kick. An old man(脏，邋遢，无家可归) ①His hair was long, white, and messy. The face beneath was lined, dirty, and unshaven. Frayed and torn clothing wrapped around his thin frame, and in this kind of cold weather he even wore sandals, his feet blue with cold. ②The old man reached out and touched__Jason's__left__leg. Jason's mom(理解老人，教育儿子) ①Jason's mother glanced back at the man with a look of understanding. ②Mom's words made Jason's__regret__deepened. ③She reminded Jason that it was crucial to acknowledge his mistake and try to make__up__for__it. Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 Jason (詹森)和妈妈每周六都会去唐人街购物，一次，当他经过一个卖报刊的摊位时，一个脏兮兮的老人碰了他的腿，他本能地一脚踢开了老人。在妈妈的解释下，Jason意识到了自己的错误，他决定怎样弥补错误呢？Jason和老人道歉后，老人有何反应？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：Jason和妈妈去唐人街购物时，一个脏兮兮的老人碰了他的腿，Jason踢了老人。 合理的解决办法：妈妈对Jason解释说这位老人并没有恶意，Jason真诚地向老人道歉。 2．情节发展 第一段：意识到错误→看望老人→表达关心 第二段：老人感激→Jason道歉→感悟 3．主旨升华 Jason为自己踢开老人而感到抱歉和愧疚，随后和妈妈一起看望老人并真诚地向老人道歉，同时Jason也意识到弥补自己的错误永远为时不晚。 Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 ①通过动作描写，更具体形象地描绘出人物的特点、彰显人物性格、推动情节发展。例如：“Jason opened his packages and handed the old man a pair of shoes and some clothes.”“He bowed deeply”。 ②通过语言描写，增强故事的真实感和生动性，帮助读者更好地融入故事情节，感受人物的情感和内心世界。例如：“He said gently to the man, ‘I hope they fit.’”“‘I'm sorry for that kick，’ Jason apologized sincerely.”。 2．结构衔接 运用时间衔接词及时间状语从句连接词，使文章结构更加紧凑、逻辑更加清晰，帮助读者更好地理清故事的发展脉络，使文章更具连贯性和可读性。例如：“And then he took a package of roast pork”“When the old man was wolfing down the roast pork ...”。 3．高分范文赏读 The next day, with his mother's help, Jason decided to do something. They drove to the familiar side street in Chinatown with several packages of necessities. The old man was still there, looking even skinnier than the day before. He glanced at Jason and seemed to recognize him. Jason opened his packages and handed the old man a pair of shoes and some clothes. He said gently to the man, “I hope they fit.” And then he took a package of roast pork from his mom. Eagerly slipping it to the old man's hand, he said, “It's also for you.” Hearing this, the old man looked at them with watery eyes. He bowed deeply, whispering “Thank you！” in a trembling voice. Jason helped him put on the new shoes and clothes. Surprisingly, Jason didn't think of the man as smelly but someone worthy of respect and care at this moment. When the old man was wolfing down the roast pork, his eyes misted over once again. “I'm sorry for that kick，” Jason apologized sincerely. Touched by the man's gratitude, Jason understood that it was never too late to make up for a past mistake, no matter how late it might seem. 写在最后的话： 尊老、敬老、爱老是中华民族的传统美德，关爱老人，从我做起，作为当代中学生，我们要传承中华美德，彰显时代风尚。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·内蒙古优质高中高二期中)After a hard day's work, I usually go shopping in the nearby commercial center to relieve my tiredness. Last Monday, I was in the commercial center as usual and I decided to go and get a cup of coffee. As I was making my way to the coffee shop, I noticed an old gentleman rather poorly dressed sitting on a bench nearby. I knew from first sight that he was in need of some kind of help. He had a little lunch laid out in front of him and was wholeheartedly enjoying it. It was also rather obvious that he had a problem with his right eye and probably couldn't see out of it. I then joined the line and waited to be served. Then one thing that made me unforgettable happened. There was a young man in front of me in the line who was also waiting to be served. The next thing I knew was that the young man handed the server a twenty－dollar bill and requested an orange juice, as well as a favour. The server looked at the young man, a little confused, not fully understanding the request. “Please help me give the juice to the old gentleman eating his lunch outside on the bench, as well as the change from the 20 dollars，” the young man said to the server. At that time, the server hesitated for a moment and said, “I am a little scared for his behavior and appearance.” “Don't worry. I have the confidence that he is a kind and warm－hearted gentleman. He is just in need of some kind of help and has a problem with his right eye and probably couldn't see out of it. I will be watching every second so that you will be completely safe at all times，” the young man added. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Then the server approached the old gentleman slowly. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 I wondered there must be some reason for the young man not to do the act of kindness himself.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者在咖啡店看到了一位年轻人递给服务员一张20美元的钞票，要求服务员给一位衣着褴褛的老人点一杯橙汁，服务员帮忙了吗？这位年轻人为什么要让服务员帮忙而不是亲自这么做？ [精彩范文] Then the server approached the old gentleman slowly. “Hello, the orange juice and the money for you，” the server said with a little cautiousness. Hearing that, the old gentleman was very surprised at the unexpected event. Knowing what had happened, he took them with a big smile, stood up and bowed to the server and the young man. The server felt relaxed immediately and talked happily with the old gentleman. The young man smiled happily. The old gentleman showed great gratitude to them again after drinking the juice. I wondered there must be some reason for the young man not to do the act of kindness himself. From the young man's behavior, I suspected that deep down in his heart he was hoping that this act of kindness might inspire others to do something for the old gentleman as well and inspire others to do something when the same things happen around us. Absolutely beautiful! From then on, I made up my mind to let the chain of love pass on and help someone who needs help whenever and wherever possible. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future. 1．As I was making my way to the coffee shop, I noticed an old gentleman rather poorly dressed sitting on a bench nearby. 译文：在我去咖啡店的路上，我注意到一位衣衫褴褛的老先生坐在旁边的长凳上。 亮点：①As引导时间状语从句；②make one's way to意为“前往某地”；③sitting on a bench nearby为现在分词短语作宾语补足语。 2．The next thing I knew was that the young man handed the server a twenty­dollar bill and requested an orange juice, as well as a favour. 译文：我所知道的下一件事是，那个年轻人递给服务员一张20美元的钞票，要了一杯橙汁，(并请他帮)一个小忙。 亮点：①I knew为省略了引导词that的定语从句；②that引导表语从句，and连接两个并列的谓语动词：handed和requested。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$