专题10 书面表达（满分范文，20篇）【考题猜想】-2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期期中考点大串讲（沪教版五四学制2024）

专题10 书面表达（精选期中真题，15篇） 选 题 来 源 1、2024·位育中学·期中卷 2、2024·上海大学附属中学·期中卷 3、2024·建青中学·期中卷 4、2024·立达中学·期中卷 5、2024·西南模范中学·期中卷 6、2023·华二实验学校·期中卷 7、2024·罗南中学·期中卷 8、2023·建平实验西校·期中卷 9、2024·回民中学·期中卷 10、2023·闵行区统考·期中卷 11、2024·奉贤区统考·期中卷 12、2024·闵行区统考·期中卷 13、2024·浦东新区统考·期中卷 14、2024·松江区统考·期中卷 15、2024·竹园中学·期中卷 1、2024·位育中学·期中卷 58. Write at least 50 words on the topic “The trip I enjoyed most” （以“我最喜欢的一次旅行”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2、2024·上海大学附属中学·期中卷 63. Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic“My Favorite Festival”(以“我最喜欢的节日”为题写一篇短文，不少于50字) Questions: 1. What’s your favorite festival? Why? 2. When is the festival? 3. What do you often do during the festival? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3、2024·建青中学·期中卷 61. Write at least 50 words about the topic “A trip to...”. （根据要求将题目补充完整，并以“一次……之旅”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as a reference. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. Where did you go for a trip? 2. What did you do there? 3. What do you think of the trip? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4、2024·立达中学·期中卷 60. Write at least 60 words on the topic “Be friends with animals”. （以“和动物做朋友”为题写话，至少60个单词，标点符号不计入。） Before writing, you may think about… ♢Why is it important to be kind to animals as our friends? ♢What can we do in our daily life to be friendly to animals? （注意：文章不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等其他相关信息，否则不给予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5、2024·西南模范中学·期中卷 61. Write a short passage about “My plan to take care of the cat”.(以“我照顾猫的计划”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文) Situation: Our family have a cat at home. Every day my parents take care of it. But they will travel to America tomorrow and be back in a month. So I have to take care of it. You may begin like this: My parents will fly to America tomorrow... _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6、2024·华二实验学校·期中卷 60. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My neighbour” (以“我的邻居”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于60个，要求内容连贯，语句通顺，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: （以下问题仅供参考） 1. Who is your neighbour? 2. What does he/she do? 3. What does he/she usually do at work? 4. What do you think of him/her? (注意：文中不得出现任何人名、校名等个人信息，否则不与给分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7、2024·罗南中学·期中卷 42．（11分）Please write at least 60 words on the topic "My dream job"，using the following questions below for reference.（请根据提示问题，以"我的理想工作"为题写一篇短文，不少于60词。） Suggested questions： （1）What's your dream job？ （2）What will you do to realize your dream job？ （3）How do you like your job？ My dream job 8、2024·建平实验西校·期中卷 59. Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel in Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it.Write at least 50 words.(假设你的朋友Ben要来你上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于50个单词） Suggested expressions: interesting places; It takes ... to do; I hope ... Dear Ben, I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9、2024·回民中学·期中卷 Writing. Write at least 60 words on the topic “My flat”, using the following questions below as reference. （请根据提示问题，以“我的公寓”为题写一篇短文，不少于60词。） Suggested questions: 1. What does your flat look like? 2. Do you like your bedroom or other rooms? Why? 3. What kind of flat would you like to have? ____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10、2023·闵行区统考·期中卷 60. Write at least 60 words on the topic “My _________’s job”. (以“我______的职业”为 题，写⼀篇不少于60词的短⽂，标点符号不占格。 在疫情期间，我们居家学习，⾛进社区，对于身边的⼈有了更多的了解，也许这个⼈是你的爸爸妈妈、也许是你的亲戚，还也许是你的邻居……结合你⾃身，谈谈他的职业以及你⼜可以从他的身上学到什么呢？ (注意：短⽂中不得出现考⽣真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，也不得抄袭本试卷中的⽂章，否则不予评分。 My _________’s job __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11、2024·奉贤区统考·期中卷 78. Suppose you are writing to your cousin Lihua, choose a topic to tell her something new about yourself. (假设你要写信给你的表妹李华，请选择其中一个话题来告诉她你的近况。) ① 去了一次旅行 ②换了一个新家 ③养了一只宠物 ④ 定了一个小目标 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12、2024·闵行区统考·期中卷 58. (根据情境写一封不少于60词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格。) 假设你是Ben，你的加拿大笔友Gary发邮件告诉你他将要和他的父母来北京旅游，请你回复他的邮件，帮他们规划一个合理的北京三日游的旅行计划，并邀请他上海游玩。 (注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13、2024·浦东新区统考·期中卷 60. According to the following information, write a letter of at least 60 words to Tom.（根据所给信息给Tom写一封不少于60词的信。开头已给出，不计入总词数，标点符号不占格。） 假设你是李华，和英国朋友Tom是刚认识的笔友，你们通过Email经常通信联络。请向Tom介绍一下你的家庭成员及他们的工作，并介绍一下最近你们家庭出游的一次经历。 Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考） 1. How many people are there in your family? What do they do? 2. Where did you go together recently? 3. How was the trip? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14、2024·松江区统考·期中卷 65. Suppose you are Kitty. Your pen friend, Lucy, is going to Shanghai soon. She wants to know more about Chinese culture but can only spare a day. Please choose a place and make a travel plan for her. And then write a letter of at least 60 words to tell her your plan. (假设你是Kitty。你的笔友Lucy不久将到上海。她想了解中国文化但只有一天的观光时间。请为她精选一个地点并制定一份旅行计划，然后写一封不少于60词的信告诉她这个旅行计划。) 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 The following questions are for reference： (1)Which place are you going to visit with her? (2)What can you do there? (3)Why do you choose the place for her? (注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Dear Lucy, I have made a wonderful travel plan for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Kitty 15、2024·竹园中学·期中卷 60. Write at least 60 words about topic“ _____ has changed my life” Questions for reference: 1. What has changed your life. 2. How does it change your life. 3. 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Write at least 50 words on the topic “The trip I enjoyed most” （以“我最喜欢的一次旅行”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The trip I enjoyed most Last summer vacation, I went to Qingdao with my family. We went there by train. We stayed in a hotel near the sea. We went to the beach and took some photos. We could see lots of people who enjoyed themselves there. We ate some sea food and it tasted nice. We visited some places of interest. They looked great and beautiful. We also visited Qingdao Polar Ocean World. There we saw many different kinds of fish and other sea animals. It is such a wonderful place that we will never forget it. We had a wonderful time in Qingdao and I hope to go there again. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：介绍曾经去过的地方，分享个人的经历（具体包括参观了什么景点，品尝了哪些美食等），避免语法错误，保持行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍旅行经历（去的地方、时间、交通方式、游玩的景点以及美食等）； 第三步：总结全文，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ① took photos 拍照 ② be famous for 以……而著名 ③ places of interest 名胜 [高分句型] ① We could see lots of people who enjoyed themselves there.（who引导定语从句） ② It is such a wonderful place that we will never forget it. （such...that...引导结果状语从句） 2、2024·上海大学附属中学·期中卷 63. Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic“My Favorite Festival”(以“我最喜欢的节日”为题写一篇短文，不少于50字) Questions: 1. What’s your favorite festival? Why? 2. When is the festival? 3. What do you often do during the festival? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Festival Of all the Chinese festivals, I like Mid-autumn Festival best because it is a traditional Chinese festival. More importantly, it is the symbol of “family reunion” as well. Mid-autumn Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. On that day, all my family members get together to celebrate it. My parents and I go to visit my grandparents. My cousins and I are excited because we can play happily. We watch TV and play games together. We have delicious get-together dinner. We also have fruit and moon cakes. After dinner, we enjoy the beautiful moon and talk about our life happily. What a wonderful time it is! I like Mid-autumn Festival. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你最喜欢的节日以及原因； 第二步，介绍节日的时间； 第三步，最后介绍节日里你做的事。 [亮点词汇] ①the symbol of……的象征 ②get together一起 ③play games玩游戏 [高分句型] Of all the Chinese festivals, I like Mid-autumn Festival best because it is a traditional Chinese festival.（because引导的原因状语从句） 3、2024·建青中学·期中卷 61. Write at least 50 words about the topic “A trip to...”. （根据要求将题目补充完整，并以“一次……之旅”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as a reference. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. Where did you go for a trip? 2. What did you do there? 3. What do you think of the trip? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A trip to Beijing Last year, I went to Beijing with my parents, and it was a very wonderful trip. First, I went to Tian’anmen Square. It is so big, and there were many children playing there. The second day, we went to the Palace Museum. It is so great, and I learnt much about Chinese history. And shopping in Beijing was very interesting, too. If you want to have a good holiday, Beijing will be a good choice. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在叙述过去的经历时，应用一般过去时。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍。简单介绍旅行的时间和地点； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。叙述在北京的旅游过程； 第三步，书写结语。说明旅行的收获并推荐来北京旅游。 [亮点词汇] ①wonderful trip 美妙的旅行 ②Palace Museum 故宫博物院 ③Chinese history 中国历史 ④a good choice 一个不错的选择 [高分句型] If you want to have a good holiday, Beijing will be a good choice.（if引导的条件状语从句） 4、2024·立达中学·期中卷 60. Write at least 60 words on the topic “Be friends with animals”. （以“和动物做朋友”为题写话，至少60个单词，标点符号不计入。） Before writing, you may think about… ♢Why is it important to be kind to animals as our friends? ♢What can we do in our daily life to be friendly to animals? （注意：文章不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等其他相关信息，否则不给予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Be friends with animals Animals are very important to us, because they play an important role in balancing our ecosystem and stabilizing natural processes. Also, we rely on animals for food, labor and companionship. Without animals, the world will not be as colorful and different as it is today. To be friends with animals, we can help the communities and groups that take care of animal life in our regions. Moreover, it’s beneficial to recycle as much as plastic products as possible to reduce pollution in the sea and soil, by which we can do a favor to leave more land for animals. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Be friends with animals”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍把动物当朋友的重要性； 第二步，针对我们能做些什么来对动物友好给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色 ②rely on依靠 ③take care of照顾 ④do a favor帮忙 [高分句型] ①Animals are very important to us, because they play an important role in balancing our ecosystem and stabilizing natural processes. （原因状语从句） ②To be friends with animals, we can help the communities and groups that take care of animal life in our regions.（定语从句） 5、2024·西南模范中学·期中卷 61. Write a short passage about “My plan to take care of the cat”.(以“我照顾猫的计划”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文) Situation: Our family have a cat at home. Every day my parents take care of it. But they will travel to America tomorrow and be back in a month. So I have to take care of it. You may begin like this: My parents will fly to America tomorrow... _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My parents will fly to America tomorrow. I have to take care of my parents’ pet — cat. It is a white and black cat. It is cute and gentle. I really like it. I give it milk and cat-food every morning. Ang I give it small fish for lunch. I take a bath for it every night. I make it stay in the room playing with toys every day when I go to school. I will play with it after school. It likes playing hide and seek the most. I believe that when my parents are away, I will take good care of it. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍为什么要照顾小猫的原因及小猫的基本情况； 第二步，具体从饮食及生活方面介绍如何照顾小猫； 第三步，最后总结文章，说明自己一定会照顾好小猫。 [亮点词汇] ① take care of照顾 ② have to不得不 ③ after school放学后 [高分句型] ① I make it stay in the room playing with toys every day when I go to school.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I believe that when my parents are away, I will take good care of it.（that引导的宾语从句） 6、2024·华二实验学校·期中卷 60. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My neighbour” (以“我的邻居”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于60个，要求内容连贯，语句通顺，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: （以下问题仅供参考） 1. Who is your neighbour? 2. What does he/she do? 3. What does he/she usually do at work? 4. What do you think of him/her? (注意：文中不得出现任何人名、校名等个人信息，否则不与给分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My neighbour, Uncle Wang, is a teacher. He teaches P. E in No. 8 Middle School. It is one of the key schools in Shanghai. He has taught there for 4 years. His teaching is highly appreciated and he is loved by all his students. He often tells his students to pay attention to their health. Sometimes he plays football with them after school. In summer, he always takes them to the swimming pool. He’s a good teacher. 【解析】 详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，要求介绍人物； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生在介绍人物时应详细具体，不可遗漏提示信息，可适当增加细节，但文中不得出现任何人名、校名等个人信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，指出“我”的邻居是何人； 第二步，按照提示信息，从职业和工作情况等方面详细介绍邻居； 第三步，总结全文，对邻居进行简单评价。 [亮点词汇] ① highly很；非常 ② tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人做某事 ③ pay attention to注意 ④ take sb. to…带某人到…… [高分句型] ① It is one of the key schools in Shanghai （“one of+可数名词复数”句型） ② He has taught there for 4 years.（现在完成时） ③ His teaching is highly appreciated and he is loved by all his students.（被动语态） 7、2024·罗南中学·期中卷 42．（11分）Please write at least 60 words on the topic "My dream job"，using the following questions below for reference.（请根据提示问题，以"我的理想工作"为题写一篇短文，不少于60词。） Suggested questions： （1）What's your dream job？ （2）What will you do to realize your dream job？ （3）How do you like your job？ My dream job 【分析】【高分句型一】 When we are in trouble，teachers always take good care of us． 当我们遇到困难时，老师总是好好照顾我们。when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，in trouble处于困境中，take good care of 好好照顾。 【高分句型二】 I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it． 我相信如果我全心投入，我的梦想就会实现。if如果，引导条件状语从句。 【解答】 My dream job Everyone has a dream．I want to be a teacher、其工作地点及工作内容）Do you know why I want to be a teacher．When we are in trouble．【高分句型一】They do many things for us as our parents do．My teachers are also very kind and care about me.So it's my dream to be a teacher.（想当老师的原因）How can I make my dream come true，I must try my best to study hard at all subjects，I will read more books，English，science and so on，I'm going to enter a good university to study math. （怎样实现梦想） I must work hard to realize my dream，实现梦想）Let's fight for our dreams 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 8、2024·建平实验西校·期中卷 59. Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel in Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it.Write at least 50 words.(假设你的朋友Ben要来你上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于50个单词） Suggested expressions: interesting places; It takes ... to do; I hope ... Dear Ben, I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Ben, I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai, I will meet you at the airport. Then I will show you around the Bund of Shanghai. You will see many famous buildings here. Of course, I will also take you to taste our local food. I will also show you around the museum. You can visit many historical relics here. I will also show you around Central Street. You can shop here. I’m sure you will have a great time. I look forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：要求为你即将来上海旅游的朋友设计一份旅行计划书，计划应详细具体，注意不少于50词。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用简单问候，引出下文的旅行安排； 第二步，表达自己的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①show sb around带某人四处看看 ②have a great time玩得高兴 ③look forward to期望 [高分句型] I’m sure you will have a great time.（宾语从句） 9、2024·回民中学·期中卷 Writing. Write at least 60 words on the topic “My flat”, using the following questions below as reference. （请根据提示问题，以“我的公寓”为题写一篇短文，不少于60词。） Suggested questions: 1. What does your flat look like? 2. Do you like your bedroom or other rooms? Why? 3. What kind of flat would you like to have? ____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My flat My flat is not big but nice and clean. I like my bedroom. It is a small room with one big window. Below the window there is a desk. I enjoy reading at the desk with sunshine all over me. There is a shelf opposite the desk. I used to put my books on it. Between the desk and the door, there is a small bed at the corner. I have slept on it for ten years. I like my flat but I’d like to have a flat with a bigger bedroom and a bigger living room. I hope I can move to this kind of flat as soon as possible. 10、2023·闵行区统考·期中卷 60. Write at least 60 words on the topic “My _________’s job”. (以“我______的职业”为 题，写⼀篇不少于60词的短⽂，标点符号不占格。 在疫情期间，我们居家学习，⾛进社区，对于身边的⼈有了更多的了解，也许这个⼈是你的爸爸妈妈、也许是你的亲戚，还也许是你的邻居……结合你⾃身，谈谈他的职业以及你⼜可以从他的身上学到什么呢？ (注意：短⽂中不得出现考⽣真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，也不得抄袭本试卷中的⽂章，否则不予评分。 My _________’s job __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My father’s job My father is a nice man. He is an owner of a factory which produces many things. He is good at designing. He works very hard. I love him very much because he is friendly to me and he is patient with me. Sometimes, I can help him to do something in his factory. My father is always on business trips because he has his business everywhere. So it takes up much of his time. Therefore, he doesn’t have any time to play with me but I don’t blame him for that. I often spend a lot of my time on the computer and learn much knowledge about designing from my father. And I will try to study hard like my father. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，写人的记叙文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括爸爸的工作情况以及从爸爸身上学到的东西等。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍父亲的职业； 第二步，介绍父亲的品质以及工作中的表现； 第三步，最后是叙述自己从父亲身上学到的东西。 [亮点词汇] ① be good at擅长于 ② be friendly to对……友好 ③ take up占据 [高分句型] ① I love him very much because he is friendly to me and he is patient with me.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② He is an owner of a factory which produces many things.（which引导的定语从句） 11、2024·奉贤区统考·期中卷 78. Suppose you are writing to your cousin Lihua, choose a topic to tell her something new about yourself. (假设你要写信给你的表妹李华，请选择其中一个话题来告诉她你的近况。) ① 去了一次旅行 ②换了一个新家 ③养了一只宠物 ④ 定了一个小目标 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Li Hua, How’s it going? I had a wonderful trip to Sanya with my parents last summer holiday. Let me tell you something about it. Sanya is in the south of Hainan and it is about 1,921 square kilometres. It’s hot in the day and cool at night. It’s famous for its blue sea and beautiful beaches. There are lots of coconut trees around the seaside. We did lots of activities in Sanya. We enjoyed the seafood and coconut juice. We tasted all kinds of fruit as well. They were very delicious. We also enjoyed water games. It was very interesting. Later in the afternoon, we took a walk along the beach. There were many beautiful shells. I also collected some. From this trip, I learned a lot about the history of Sanya and its culture. I think it was relaxing to spend my last holiday in Sanya. I am looking forward to going there again. Best wishes, Lucy 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。 ②时态：主时态为“一般过去时”。 ③提示：写作注意时态清晰，客观描述为现在时，描述经历为过去时，做到无语法和单词拼写错误；同时确保逻辑连贯，内容充实简洁。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题。 第二步，详细描述旅行的过程。 第三步，总结旅行给带来的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for以某事而出名 ②look forward to期待 ③all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①Sanya is in the south of Hainan and it is about 1,921 square kilometres.(and连接的并列句) ②I think it was relaxing to spend my last holiday in Sanya.（省略that的宾语从句） 12、2024·闵行区统考·期中卷 58. (根据情境写一封不少于60词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格。) 假设你是Ben，你的加拿大笔友Gary发邮件告诉你他将要和他的父母来北京旅游，请你回复他的邮件，帮他们规划一个合理的北京三日游的旅行计划，并邀请他上海游玩。 (注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Gary, I heard that you are going to travel to Beijing with your parents. I’d like to give you some advice. There are many places of interest in Beijing. On the first day, I suggest you go to Tian’anmen Square to watch the flag-raising ceremony. Then you can go to visit the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and other famous attractions. On the second day, I suggest you climb the Great Wall. On the third day, I suggest you go to the Wangfujing Street. You can buy some souvenirs there. You can also experience the Hutong culture in Beijing. I hope you will have a good time in Beijing and I am looking forward to meeting you in Shanghai. Yours, Ben 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出后文的建议； 第二步，介绍北京三日游的旅行计划； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest下班回家 ②watch the flag-raising ceremony观看升旗仪式 ③have a good time玩得愉快 [高分句型] I hope you will have a good time in Beijing and I am looking forward to meeting you in Shanghai.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句） 13、2024·浦东新区统考·期中卷 60. According to the following information, write a letter of at least 60 words to Tom.（根据所给信息给Tom写一封不少于60词的信。开头已给出，不计入总词数，标点符号不占格。） 假设你是李华，和英国朋友Tom是刚认识的笔友，你们通过Email经常通信联络。请向Tom介绍一下你的家庭成员及他们的工作，并介绍一下最近你们家庭出游的一次经历。 Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考） 1. How many people are there in your family? What do they do? 2. Where did you go together recently? 3. How was the trip? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m happy to tell something about my family. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my father, my mother and me. Both my grandfather and grandmother are teachers. They teach English in a junior high school. My father is a worker and my mother is a doctor in a hospital. They love their jobs very much. We usually have a trip at weekends. Last Sunday, we climbed the Great Wall in Beijing. I took a lot of photos with my camera. I felt very tired but I was happy. I look forward to visiting it again. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏提示，注意时态运用，适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的家庭成员和他们的工作； 第二步，介绍家庭最近出游的经历及感受； 第三步，表达美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of 很多 ②look forward to doing sth 期待做某事 [高分句型] ①Both my grandfather and grandmother are teachers.（both…and…连接主语） 14、2024·松江区统考·期中卷 65. Suppose you are Kitty. Your pen friend, Lucy, is going to Shanghai soon. She wants to know more about Chinese culture but can only spare a day. Please choose a place and make a travel plan for her. And then write a letter of at least 60 words to tell her your plan. (假设你是Kitty。你的笔友Lucy不久将到上海。她想了解中国文化但只有一天的观光时间。请为她精选一个地点并制定一份旅行计划，然后写一封不少于60词的信告诉她这个旅行计划。) 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 The following questions are for reference： (1)Which place are you going to visit with her? (2)What can you do there? (3)Why do you choose the place for her? (注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Dear Lucy, I have made a wonderful travel plan for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Kitty 【答案】例文 Dear Lucy, I have made a wonderful travel plan for you. You should visit Shanghai World Expo Park first. In the afternoon you can go to Nanjing Road. This is the busiest street in Shanghai. Then you will visit the tallest building, the Oriental Pearl Tower. The Oriental Pearl Tower is also the tallest building in Asia. In this tower, you will learn a lot about Shanghai. In the evening, you will enjoy the magnificent night view of the Huangpu River. Then I think you can go and enjoy the food in Shanghai. Shanghai is known as the “paradise of food”. I think you’re going to have a great time. Yours, Kitty 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏题干中的信息，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点出自己制定了一份计划； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细地描述一天的旅行计划； 第三步，书写结语。表达祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot许多 ②be known as 作为……而有名 [高分句型] Then I think you can go and enjoy the food in Shanghai.（宾语从句） 15、2024·竹园中学·期中卷 60. Write at least 60 words about topic“ _____ has changed my life” Questions for reference: 1. What has changed your life. 2. How does it change your life. 3. What do you think of it? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Sports have changed my life Nowadays, doing sports has become more and more important in people’s life. It’s good for people’s health, and it’s also a good way to relax. I fell in love with sports when I was very young, and my favorite sport is swimming. I like the feeling of swimming in a big swimming pool or the blue sea. I think swimming is relaxing and fun. By doing sports, I become very strong and healthy, and I also made lots of good friends. This makes me so happy. Because of doing sports, my life is full of sunshine! 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“运动改变了我的生活”的话题； 第二步，介绍它是如何改变你的生活的； 第三步，表达自己的观点的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①be good for对……有好处 ②swimming pool游泳池 ③be full of充满 [高分句型] ①I fell in love with sports when I was very young, and my favorite sport is swimming.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 7 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$