专题10 书面表达（满分范文，20篇）【考题猜想】-2024-2025学年六年级英语上学期期中考点大串讲（沪教版五四学制2024）

专题10 书面表达（满分范文，20篇）【考题猜想】 选 题 来 源 1、2024·位育中学·期中卷 2、2024·浦东新区统考·期中卷 3、2024·闵行区五校联考·期中卷 4、2024·大同初级中学·期中卷 5、2024·松江区统考·期中卷 6、2024·闵行区六校联考·期中卷 7、2024·金山区统考·期中卷 8、2024·崇明区部分学校联考·期中卷 9、2024·回民中学·期中卷 10、2024·奉贤区统考·期中卷 11、2023·民办华二浦东实验学校·期中卷 12、2023·闵行区莘松中学·期中卷 13、2023·上海市实验学校·期中卷 14、2023·位育中学·期中卷 15、2023·嘉定区统考·期中卷 1、2024·位育中学·期中卷 56. Write at least 60 words on the topic“My favourite job in the future”, using the following questions below as reference.（以“未来我最喜欢的职业”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. What’s your favourite job in the future? 2. What is the job like? 3. Why do you like the job? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2、2024·浦东新区统考·期中卷 59. Please write at least 40 words on the topic “My best friend”, using the following questions below for reference. （请根据提示问题，以“我最好的朋友”为题写一篇短文，不少于40词。） Suggested questions: 1. Who is your best friend? 2. What do you usually do with your best friend? (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3、2024·闵行区五校联考·期中卷 64. Please write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “A/An ________ classmate”. (请以“一位________的同学”为题写一篇短文，不少于50词。) 提示： 在你的生活中，一定有很多值得你学习的同学。请你选取一位同学，描述他/她是怎样的一位同学，说一说你在生活与他/她相处的日常，并谈一谈你可以从他/她身上学习到什么。 （注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4、2024·大同初级中学·期中卷 65. 以“我未来梦想职业”为题写一篇最少50个单词的作文标点符号不占格。 1. What would you like to be in the future? 2. What does this job do? 3. Why would you like to do this job in the future? 4. What will you do to realize your dream? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5、2024·松江区统考·期中卷 6、2024·闵行区六校联考·期中卷 7、2024·金山区统考·期中卷 8、2024·崇明区部分学校联考·期中卷 9、2024·回民中学·期中卷 10、2024·奉贤区统考·期中卷 11、2023·民办华二浦东实验学校·期中卷 12、2023·闵行区莘松中学·期中卷 13、2023·上海市实验学校·期中卷 14、2023·位育中学·期中卷 15、2023·嘉定区统考·期中卷 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 7 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题10 书面表达（满分范文，20篇）【考题猜想】 选 题 来 源 1、2024·位育中学·期中卷 2、2024·浦东新区统考·期中卷 3、2024·闵行区五校联考·期中卷 4、2024·大同初级中学·期中卷 5、2024·松江区统考·期中卷 6、2024·闵行区六校联考·期中卷 7、2024·金山区统考·期中卷 8、2024·崇明区部分学校联考·期中卷 9、2024·回民中学·期中卷 10、2024·奉贤区统考·期中卷 11、2023·民办华二浦东实验学校·期中卷 12、2023·闵行区莘松中学·期中卷 13、2023·上海市实验学校·期中卷 14、2023·位育中学·期中卷 15、2023·嘉定区统考·期中卷 1、2024·位育中学·期中卷 56. Write at least 60 words on the topic“My favourite job in the future”, using the following questions below as reference.（以“未来我最喜欢的职业”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. What’s your favourite job in the future? 2. What is the job like? 3. Why do you like the job? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My favourite job in the future Doing your favorite job will make you happy and feel meaningful. It’s my pleasure to share my favourite job in the future with you. I want to be a secretary in the future. I will work in an office in the city centre. I will answer the phone, type letters, go to meetings with my manager and take notes for him. I will do many different things to make me grow up. I will work well with all the people in my office. I think being a secretary is very interesting because I like meeting different people and I’m good at working out difficult problems. Secretary is my favourite job in the future. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：本文为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。表达出“选择喜爱的工作的重要性”以及引出“我的未来最喜爱的工作”这个话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“What和Why等”几个重点方面来介绍你的未来职业规划，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 第三步，书写结语。再次表达对这份工作的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①meaningful有意义的 ②be good at擅长 ③work out解决 [高分句型] ①It’s my pleasure to share my favourite job in the future with you.（it做形式主语） ②I will do many different things to make me grow up.（不定式做目的状语） ③I think being a secretary is very interesting because I like meeting different people.（because引导原因状语从句） 2、2024·浦东新区统考·期中卷 59. Please write at least 40 words on the topic “My best friend”, using the following questions below for reference. （请根据提示问题，以“我最好的朋友”为题写一篇短文，不少于40词。） Suggested questions: 1. Who is your best friend? 2. What do you usually do with your best friend? (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Best Friend My best friend is Clark. He is 12 years old. He is an outgoing boy with a round face, two big bright eyes and a straight nose. Clark is good at English and Chinese. He often helps me with my English. On weekends we often play basketball and climb the mountains together. We get along well with each other. In a word, he is a popular and helpful boy. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为人物介绍； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍具体对象。可简要描述基本信息和外貌等； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。包括通常和最好的朋友做的事情， 第三步，书写结语。总结朋友的特点。 [亮点词汇] ① be good at擅长 ② help sb. with sth.在某方面帮助某人 ③ on weekends在周末 ④ get along well with相处融洽 ⑤ in a word总而言之 [高分句型] He is an outgoing boy with a round face, two big bright eyes and a straight nose.（with作伴随状语） 3、2024·闵行区五校联考·期中卷 64. Please write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “A/An ________ classmate”. (请以“一位________的同学”为题写一篇短文，不少于50词。) 提示： 在你的生活中，一定有很多值得你学习的同学。请你选取一位同学，描述他/她是怎样的一位同学，说一说你在生活与他/她相处的日常，并谈一谈你可以从他/她身上学习到什么。 （注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： A model classmate I have a good friend in my class. His name is Li Lei. I think he is a model classmate. Li Lei is a kind boy. He likes helping others. He often helps me with my English. Now my English is better than before. Also, Li Lei often picks up litters, rides bike to school and plants trees and so on. He says it is our duty to protect our world. I think friends should be similar. I decide to be a person like LiLei. I will help others and protect our environment. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点根据自己的朋友的特点自行拟定。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我有一个好朋友”来引出重点介绍的内容； ②第二步，分别从好友的姓名、爱好、及相处情况等方面去叙述； ③第三步，描述我从朋友那里学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事 ②pick up 捡起 ③and so on 等等 [高分句型] ①I think he is a model classmate.（宾语从句） ②He says it is our duty to protect our world. （宾语从句） 4、2024·大同初级中学·期中卷 65. 以“我未来梦想职业”为题写一篇最少50个单词的作文标点符号不占格。 1. What would you like to be in the future? 2. What does this job do? 3. Why would you like to do this job in the future? 4. What will you do to realize your dream? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to be a teacher in the future. A teacher is a person who imparts knowledge. I love children. Being a teacher, I can always stay with the purest persons in the world all the time. Being a teacher can also make me proud of myself because teachers are called the engineers of human’s spirit. In a word, I think I must work hard now. I must have enough knowledge to teach the students. There goes an old saying that knowledge is power. It is true. I have a dream in my mind which is to be a teacher in the future. I will try my best to make my dream come true. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你未来想成为什么； 第二步，介绍其中的原因； 第三步，最后介绍你打算如何去实现梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①want to be想成为 ②all the time一直 ③In a word总之 [高分句型] ①A teacher is a person who imparts knowledge. （who引导的定语从句） ②Being a teacher can also make me proud of myself because teachers are called the engineers of human’s spirit.（because引导的原因状语从句） 5、2024·松江区统考·期中卷 6、2024·闵行区六校联考·期中卷 7、2024·金山区统考·期中卷 8、2024·崇明区部分学校联考·期中卷 9、2024·回民中学·期中卷 10、2024·奉贤区统考·期中卷 11、2023·民办华二浦东实验学校·期中卷 12、2023·闵行区莘松中学·期中卷 13、2023·上海市实验学校·期中卷 14、2023·位育中学·期中卷 15、2023·嘉定区统考·期中卷 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 7 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$