Unit 1 Section 读后续写微讲堂(课件PPT)-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第二册（人教版2019）

CULTURAL HERITAGE UNIT 1 读后续写微讲堂 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 　 英语　必修　第二册 制 作 者：状元桥 适用对象：高中学生 制作软件：Powerpoint2010、 Photoshop cs3 运行环境：WindowsXP以上操作系统 读后续写入门篇之快速构思 读后续写要求考生依据原文材料的内容、所给段落开头语进行续写，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接，情节架构自然，而且结构完整的短文。要续写前文，考生需要知道如何续写故事。一个完整的故事需要具备时间、地点、人物、情节、细节等要素，即何人在何时何地发生了何事，事件是如何展开的，在展开故事时带有何种情感，而把故事串连起来的还需要有一条线索。 故事线索通常有两种：一种是关于人的故事；另一种是间接涉及人的寓言故事。考生在续写故事时应注意以下事项： (1)明确故事的主题，即你的故事是基于原文的主题； (2)把故事说“小”。续写故事最忌讳把话说得很“大”，大话一出口就很难和具体人物情节直接挂钩，不知不觉就发展成为评论，也得不到高分。 (3)故事角度要新，即从常人忽视的角度去构思故事、叙述故事，让故事出乎意料，又在情理之中。 (4)合理的故事情节。合理的故事情节有两个方面的要求：一是人物性格、情节在故事前后保持一致，不能有矛盾。二是故事情节不能违背生活逻辑、情感逻辑、思维习惯等。 (5)善于营造悬念。营造悬念就是在故事开始或结尾的时候提出一些悬而未决的问题，以调动读者读故事的兴趣。 总之，续写故事要时刻关注故事的四要素：时间、地点、人物、情节。即时间、地点要具体，人物要有冲突，情节要有悬念，叙述要有画面感。那么，作为基础阶段的学生应当如何续写故事呢？我们可以从“依据首句，‘六所’写篇”来入手。 续写的两个段首语是很重要的续写提示，它们控制着情节发展的主方向，在续写段落时可仔细研读段首情节，合理推理段落情节。在推理情节的过程中，要把握故事情节的发展脉络：开端、发展、高潮、结局。然后协同关键词，用“何人何时何地做了何事”的记叙性写作方式来表达脉络情节。即他人当时所见(what to see)，所听(what to hear)，所说(what to say)，所想(what to think)，所做(what to do)，所感(what to feel)，当然有时为了故事或语篇的连贯性和简洁化，也可选部分要素来写。这种依据所给首句的“六所”表达方式让学生有话可写，有情可推。 【典例】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldn't get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you've got a problem，” Arthur said. “I'm afraid so.I'm in a big hurry and I can't start my car.” “Is there something I can do to help？” Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks.If you're sure it wouldn't be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.” “No trouble at all.I'd be glad to help.” The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)! Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other, “What happened？” But everyone had a different answer. Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that？” He thought.“The suitcase! She thinks I'm the bank thief！” Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Paragraph 1：As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop！” ... ________________ __________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：The taxi stopped in front of the police station and Arthur... _________________________________ __________________________________________________ 【语篇解读】 根据第一段首句As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop！”，接下来可写Arthur听到shouting后的想法，所做出的行为，再根据Paragraph 2的段首提示语是The taxi stopped in front of the police station and Arthur…，我们可以推理出在Paragraph 1结尾处一定要讲到Arthur坐上了taxi，且目的地是 police station。那么此时可写，Arthur上车的动作，说了什么，当时怎么想的？根据Paragraph 2：The taxi stopped in front of the police station and Arthur…可知，Arthur坐的taxi目的地是警察局，续写时可写Arthur到了警察局说了什么？做了什么？警察的回应是什么？说了什么？做了什么？最后得出结论：箱子是从 the young man的车里拿来的，推断the young man可能是嫌疑犯。 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1：As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop！”(所听) But just at the moment, Arthur realized(所想) that the young man might be the bank robber.So Arthur didn't stop, but continued to run until he saw a taxi(所做)．He stopped it, jumped in with the suitcase still in his hand(所做) and said to the driver, “Go to the police station, please.The man shouting behind is the bank thief.(所说)” The taxi raced away like the wind and left the loud noise of an alarm behind(所见)． Paragraph 2：The taxi stopped in front of the police station and Arthur told the police what had happened(所说)．Obviously, the police had already received the call about the bank robbery(所想)．They opened the suitcase(所做) and there was a large sum of money inside, as Arthur had expected.Then the police asked Arthur to describe all the details about the young man and the other suitcase(所说)．Later, the police caught the robber successfully(所做) and Arthur was awarded for his brave and right decision(所感)． 【拓展训练】 阅读下面短文，填写空白部分，构成一个完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately, ①_________________. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so ②_________________(所感) that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp” (所说) and walked away(所做)． With no path to follow, Jane just walked for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around(所做), hoping to ③___________________(所想)．To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top(所见)．She suddenly realized that she was ④________________(所想)． “⑤________________！” she cried.“Help！”(所说) 答案　①根据下文判断，夫妇二人有了不愉快。参考答案on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel ②angry/irritated/annoyed/unhappy等表示生气的词汇 ③这个位置有点难度。生气出走，独自一人，漫无目的，心里在想什么可以写得五花八门，可仔细阅读上文，夫妇二人来湖边野营，Jane走到高处是为了什么呢？而且后面令她意外的是只看到了雪山，所以此处参考答案see the lake或者see the camp或者see their campsite等 ④lost ⑤Help $$