内容正文:
专题03 书面表达
【五年考情回顾】
年份
体裁
主题内容
2024年
材料作文
你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
2023年
电子邮件
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme)为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动,交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件,向他介绍活动的安排。
2022年
话题作文
你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。
2021年
日记写作
跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记,记录这特别的一课。
2020年
图表
今天的英语课上,班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物,”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文,汇报你们四人小组的分享内容,需包括以下要点。
1.(2024·广东广州·中考真题)你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
An unforgettable school trip
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(2023·广东广州·中考真题)你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme)为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动,交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件,向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme
Healthy You and Me
Time
8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place
Sports Center
Activities
…
Purpose
…
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右(邮件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2022·广东广州·中考真题)你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(2021·广东广州·中考真题)今天,跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记,记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点:
1.授课者:李华,14岁,红星中学学生;
2.上课内容:跳绳讲解和示范等;
3.你的收获和感受。
注意:1.参考词汇:跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion);
2.词数:80词左右(日记的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Monday, May 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we had a special online PE lesson.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2020·广东广州·中考真题)今天的英语课上,班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物,”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文,汇报你们四人小组的分享内容,需包括以下要点。
From
Bob
Kate
Lily
You
To
parents
good friend
foreign teacher
(请补充)
What
soup
Photo album
Paper cutting
(请补充)
Why
thanks and love
friendship
culture
(请补充)
注意:1.词数:80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数):
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
In today's English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in ou group. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2024·广东广州·三模)假设你是李华,学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿,包含以下内容:
注意:
1.参考词汇:AI人工智能。
2.文中需包含所给的相关信息,并可作适当想象和发挥。
3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
4.词数80词左右。
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
7.(2024·广东广州·二模)假如你是校研学俱乐部(Study Trip Club)部长李华,俱乐部将于下周六组织研学活动,请你以“Welcome to Our Study Trip”为题给校报写一篇短文,介绍这次研学活动的内容和意义,并号召同学们积极参加。
Who will go?
Where will you go?
What will you do?
What will you learn?
Grade 7 students
The Children’s Park
plant trees
…
Grade 8 students
Tea House
make dim sum
a… skill
Grade 9 students
The History Museum
…
Chinese history ...
注意:
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(开头已给出,不计入字数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Welcome to Our Study Trip
Our Study Trip Club will organize a trip for us next Saturday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.(2024·广东广州·二模)初中生活即将结束,英语校报计划开展以“回顾初中生活,书写难忘时光”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图的提示,任选一或两点,分享你的成长故事及其对你的启发。
注意:
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(稿件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Growing up
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2024·广东广州·二模)假设你是李华,你的英国网友Mike写邮件告知你,他暑假即将来中国游玩,并计划在广州停留两天,体验广府文化,请你为他设计广州两天的文化体验之旅并回邮件告诉他你的计划。
Two-day cultural journey in Guangzhou
时间
参观、体验活动
理由
Day 1
喝早茶、……
(请补充至少两个项目……)
能更好地了解广州的文化、体验地道的广 州生活……
Day 2
(请补充至少两个项目)……
.......
参考词汇:
Chen Clan academy 陈家祠
Sun Yat-sen Memory Hall 中山纪念堂 Cantonese opera 粤剧
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息,设计符合实际;
2. 词数80词左右,邮件开头和结尾已给出;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China and planning to spend two days in Guangzhou. Here’s the brief plan for your cultural experience. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your visit!
Best wishes,
Li Hu
10.(2024·广东广州·三模)上周,你去了科技博物馆参观,你对“未来人类与机器人生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人Home Doctor很感兴趣,你打算在本周英语课上向同学们介绍它。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇英语短文,为介绍做准备。
Home Doctor
What does it look like?
●…
●…
What can it do?
●…
●…
What did it do at the show?
●…
What do you think of it?
●…
How did you feel after the visit?
注意:
(1)必须包含全部要点,可适当拓展;
(2)词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Last week, I went to the Science and Technology Museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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专题03 书面表达
【五年考情回顾】
年份
体裁
主题内容
2024年
材料作文
你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
2023年
电子邮件
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme)为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动,交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件,向他介绍活动的安排。
2022年
话题作文
你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。
2021年
日记写作
跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记,记录这特别的一课。
2020年
图表
今天的英语课上,班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物,”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文,汇报你们四人小组的分享内容,需包括以下要点。
1.(2024·广东广州·中考真题)你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
An unforgettable school trip
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
An unforgettable school trip
Our school organized a trip to the Science Museum last Saturday. I went there with all the students and teachers of Grade 9 together.
We got together at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate and left for the museum by bus. We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. After that, we took a visit around the different halls of the museum. A variety of advanced inventions had been displayed, from the appliance to industry, education and life. What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by an AI robot. How amazing!
At the end of the visit, we said goodbye to the AI guide. It is a meaningful trip which not only broadens our horizon of the creation world, but also builds up our national confidence. I made up my mind to study hard and make a contribution to my motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:一般过去时;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生需要按照要点写出相应的内容,不得遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,介绍学校旅行的时间、地点和人物;
第二步,具体介绍这次旅行中你们都做了什么;
第三步,表达对于此次经历的感想以及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take a lecture听讲座
②A variety of各种各样的
③have a better understanding of更好地理解……
④make a contribution to对……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
②What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. (which引导的定语从句)
2.(2023·广东广州·中考真题)你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme)为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动,交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件,向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme
Healthy You and Me
Time
8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place
Sports Center
Activities
…
Purpose
…
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右(邮件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you.
The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, “Healthy You and Me” speech will be on, too. If you want to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes, such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like.
The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出对活动的重点介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“主题、时间、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,介绍活动的目的并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce...to...介绍……给……
②from...to...从……到……
③different kinds of各种不同的
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. (and连接并列句)
②The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.(不定式结构作表语和作宾语补足语)
3.(2022·广东广州·中考真题)你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文主要以“My Green School Library”为题,并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆,写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4.(2021·广东广州·中考真题)今天,跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记,记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点:
1.授课者:李华,14岁,红星中学学生;
2.上课内容:跳绳讲解和示范等;
3.你的收获和感受。
注意:1.参考词汇:跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion);
2.词数:80词左右(日记的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Monday, May 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we had a special online PE lesson.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Monday, May 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we had a special online PE lesson. The teacher was the world champion of rope skipping named Li Hua. He is 14 years old, and he is also the student of Hongxing Middle School. In the class, he explained the way of rope skipping and showed us how to do it well. We were interested in the sports. He answered some questioned and told his experience to us. I learned that the best way to do something best is by practicing it a lot. Practice makes perfect. What an interesting lesson we had!
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头;讲述授课者的个人信息,上课的内容,最后讲述个人的收获和感受。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称来叙述;时态采用一般过去时为主,讲述授课人的信息和课堂内容需要叙述完整,保证条理清晰。
5.(2020·广东广州·中考真题)今天的英语课上,班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物,”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文,汇报你们四人小组的分享内容,需包括以下要点。
From
Bob
Kate
Lily
You
To
parents
good friend
foreign teacher
(请补充)
What
soup
Photo album
Paper cutting
(请补充)
Why
thanks and love
friendship
culture
(请补充)
注意:1.词数:80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数):
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
In today's English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in ou group. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文:
In today’s English class.we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”.Here is what we shared in our group.
A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her/him, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.
For me, what I gave to my grandparent was a smartphone. We don't live together and my parents are so busy that we can't meet each other often. However, we can have video chats by smartphone.
【详解】题干解读:这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的图表,汇报一下你这个小组中四个人送过的珍贵的礼物。写作前,应仔细观察图表中的信息,浏览可知,短文中应介绍清楚这个礼物是谁送给谁的,是什么以及为什么送这个礼物。图表中给出的都是关键词语,学生写作时,应用完整的句子表达。并且对于最后一栏中自己送的礼物,学生需要发挥想象力,结合实际情况,进行补充。短文应以一般过去时态为主来叙述。
例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先文章内容完整,包括了图表中的所有信息,对最后一栏的内容进行了补充,并对细节进行了拓展,使文章的内容更加充实。短文有三段,第一段是题目中给出的开头;第二段中作者主要介绍了小组中其他三人送的礼物;最后一段介绍了自己送过的礼物。层次清晰,叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,符合表达需要,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,有变化,增强了文章的表现力。
高分亮点:
短语:in one’s opinion;in addition;each other。
句型:过去分词作后置定语;动词不定式作目的状语;because引导原因状语从句;现在分词作伴随状语;which引导定语从句;what引导主语从句;so…that引导结果状语从句。
6.(2024·广东广州·三模)假设你是李华,学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿,包含以下内容:
注意:
1.参考词汇:AI人工智能。
2.文中需包含所给的相关信息,并可作适当想象和发挥。
3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
4.词数80词左右。
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文:
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. We can see all kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient. If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphones for help. Cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society.
However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves.
All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从学习及生活等方面介绍AI改变了我们的生活;
第二步,介绍对于AI的一些担忧;
第三步,最后介绍自己对AI的一些看法。
[亮点词汇]
① all kinds of各种各样的
② ask for help请求帮助
③ in the future在将来
[高分句型]
① If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphones for help.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.(that引导的宾语从句)
7.(2024·广东广州·二模)假如你是校研学俱乐部(Study Trip Club)部长李华,俱乐部将于下周六组织研学活动,请你以“Welcome to Our Study Trip”为题给校报写一篇短文,介绍这次研学活动的内容和意义,并号召同学们积极参加。
Who will go?
Where will you go?
What will you do?
What will you learn?
Grade 7 students
The Children’s Park
plant trees
…
Grade 8 students
Tea House
make dim sum
a… skill
Grade 9 students
The History Museum
…
Chinese history ...
注意:
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(开头已给出,不计入字数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Welcome to Our Study Trip
Our Study Trip Club will organize a trip for us next Saturday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Welcome to Our Study Trip
Our Study Trip Club will organize a trip for us next Saturday. Grade 7 students will go to the Children’s Park to plant trees. This activity will help them understand the importance of environmental protection. Grade 8 students will visit the Tea House to learn how to make dim sum, which is a valuable traditional skill. Grade 9 students will go to the History Museum to learn about Chinese history, which will deepen their understanding of our cultural heritage.
This study trip is a great opportunity for us to learn outside the classroom. Let’s all participate and make the most of it!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍研学活动的安排;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“年级、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,介绍活动的意义并号召同学们积极参加。
[亮点词汇]
①organize a trip 组织一次旅行
②environmental protection 环境保护
③valuable traditional skill 宝贵的传统技能
④cultural heritage 文化遗产
[高分句型]
Grade 8 students will visit the Tea House to learn how to make dim sum, which is a valuable traditional skill.(定语从句)
8.(2024·广东广州·二模)初中生活即将结束,英语校报计划开展以“回顾初中生活,书写难忘时光”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图的提示,任选一或两点,分享你的成长故事及其对你的启发。
注意:
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(稿件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Growing up
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Growing up How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories. One of the the most mermorable experiences was partcipating in the school’s annual science fair. I worked tirelessly on my project about renewable energy sources. Through this experience, I learned the importance of perseverance and teamwork. It also sparked my interest in environmental science, which I plan to pursue in the future. Another unforgettable moment was when I had a speech in front of the classmates, I was so nervous that I couldn’t speak out any words. But after adjusting my mood, I overcame the nervousness and tried to speak. Finally , I won the second prize. Although it was not perfect, I knew how great I was in my mind.
Growing up is like a race with yourself. I hope that we will try our best to become the best one.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“回首往事,有很多难忘的回忆。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——成长故事及启发等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“希望我们都能努力成为最好的。”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①the importance of……的重要性
②come to an end结束
③plan to do计划做某事
[高分句型]
①It also sparked my interest in environmental science, which I plan to pursue in the future.(定语从句)
②I was so nervous that I couldn’t speak out any words. (so...that...引导结果状语从句)
9.(2024·广东广州·二模)假设你是李华,你的英国网友Mike写邮件告知你,他暑假即将来中国游玩,并计划在广州停留两天,体验广府文化,请你为他设计广州两天的文化体验之旅并回邮件告诉他你的计划。
Two-day cultural journey in Guangzhou
时间
参观、体验活动
理由
Day 1
喝早茶、……
(请补充至少两个项目……)
能更好地了解广州的文化、体验地道的广 州生活……
Day 2
(请补充至少两个项目)……
.......
参考词汇:
Chen Clan academy 陈家祠
Sun Yat-sen Memory Hall 中山纪念堂 Cantonese opera 粤剧
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息,设计符合实际;
2. 词数80词左右,邮件开头和结尾已给出;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China and planning to spend two days in Guangzhou. Here’s the brief plan for your cultural experience. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your visit!
Best wishes,
Li Hu
【答案】范文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China and planning to spend two days in Guangzhou. Here’s the brief plan for your cultural experience. On the first day you may go to the Canton Tower. The tower is about 600 meters high, which is the third tallest tower in the world and the landmark of Guangzhou. Of course, you should also have morning tea. These can help you better understand Guangzhou's culture, experience authentic Guangzhou life and our scenery. On the second day, you can visit Guangdong Museum where you can appreciate Chinese traditional paintings. And you can take a bus to visit Yuexiu Park which is the largest park in downtown Guangzhou. The park is made up of three artificial lakes and seven hills of Yuexiu Mountain. Please let me know if you need more information.
Look forward to your visit!
Best wishes,
Li Hu
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件作文;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给内容要点完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明写作主题;
第二步,推荐行程及理由;
第三步,总结祝福语。
[亮点词汇]
①landmark地标
②appreciate欣赏
③be made up of...由……组成
[高分句型]
①The tower is about 600 meters high, which is the third tallest tower in the world and the landmark of Guangzhou.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
②On the second day, you can visit Guangdong Museum where you can appreciate Chinese traditional paintings.(where引导限制性定语从句)
10.(2024·广东广州·三模)上周,你去了科技博物馆参观,你对“未来人类与机器人生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人Home Doctor很感兴趣,你打算在本周英语课上向同学们介绍它。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇英语短文,为介绍做准备。
Home Doctor
What does it look like?
●…
●…
What can it do?
●…
●…
What did it do at the show?
●…
What do you think of it?
●…
How did you feel after the visit?
注意:
(1)必须包含全部要点,可适当拓展;
(2)词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Last week, I went to the Science and Technology Museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Last week, I went to the Science and Technology Museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot “Home Dcotor”. It is red and looks like a lovely girl, and it is about 1.2 meters tall. Home Doctor can not only offer health advice, but also treat diseases at home. At the show, it demonstrated how to check blood pressure and give dietary suggestions.
I think it’s a very useful invention that will be a good assistant to people. If its prices can be a little lower, each family can enjoy its service. After the visit, I felt excited and hopeful about the future of healthcare technology.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示要点介绍这款家庭医生机器人,注意不要遗漏参观后的感受的写作,可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍家庭机器人的外形、颜色等内容;
第二步,介绍机器人能做什么及它在展览中展示了什么;
第三步,表达自己的看法及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②give dietary suggestions提供饮食建议
③check blood pressure检查血压
[高分句型]
①At the show, it demonstrated how to check blood pressure and give dietary suggestions. (疑问词+不定式作宾语)
②I think it’s a very useful invention that will be a good assistant to people. (宾语从句;that引导定语从句)
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