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2024-2025学年七年级上学期第一次月考（上海专用） 英语 本试卷考试时间：100分钟 试卷满分：140分。 注意事项： 1. 答卷前，考生务必在答题卡上用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔填写自己的考生号、姓名、试室号、座位号，再用2B铅笔把对应这两个号码的标号涂黑。 2. 选择题每小题选出答案后，用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需要改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案。不能答在试卷上。 3. 非选择题必须用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔作答，答案必须写在答题卡各题目指定区域的相应位置上；如需要改动，先划掉原来的答案，然后再写上新的答案，改动的答案也不能超出指定的区域；不准使用铅笔、圆珠笔和涂改液。不按以上要求作答的答案无效。 4. 考生必须保持答题卡的整洁，考试结束，将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。 Part 1 Listening (第一部分 听力 略） Part 2 Grammar and Vocabulary（第二部分语法和词汇） II. Choose the best answer （选择最恰当的答案） （本大题共 15题，每题1分，共15分。每题只有一个正确选项） 1．Dogs guard our houses at night. Which of the following is correct for the underlined word in the sentence? A．/gaId/ B．/guad/ C．/ga:d/ D．/gaud/ 2．________ girl with a pair of glasses is ________ European student. A．An; a B．An; / C．The; an D．The; a 3．The police caught the thief ________ the evening ________ April 1st. A．in; of B．of; on C．on; of D．with; of 4．Have you ever ________ Russia in magazines? A．visited B．been to C．read D．read about 5．Today she feels ________, so she went to school. A．good B．badly C．bad D．well 6．There are over ________ books in our school library. A．two thousands B．two thousand C．thousands of D．two thousand of 7．This theatre is ________ for children. A．put up B．set up C．set out D．put on 8．Alice will visit my family ________ in the future. A．some times B．some time C．sometimes D．sometime 9．My grandmother ________ in the countryside, so she doesn’t want to live with us. A．used to living B．is used to living C．used to live D．is used to live 10．Tom ________ an interesting question in yesterday’s class meeting. A．rose B．raised C．rise D．raise 11．________ mothers both teach English at Shanghai No.1 Junior High School. A．Tim and Peter’s . B．Tim’s and Peter C．Tim’s and Peter’s D．Tim and Peter 12．________ great fun it is to have a picnic with your friends! A．What B．How C．What a D．How a 13．At the gate of the library I showed ________ card, and Tony showed ________. A．my, him B．my, his C．mine, his D．mine, him 14．—Have you ever been to The USA? —Yes, I ________ there when I was six years old. A．have gone B．have been C．went D．goes 15．A: I didn’t go to Tom’s birthday party yesterday. B: What a pity! The underlined part means “________”. A．That’s all right B．What a shame C．I’m sorry to hear that D．You’re welcome Ⅲ. Choose the proper words in the box to complete the following passage. Each can be used only once （选择最恰当的选项填入空格。每空格限填一词， 每词只能填一次）（本大题共8题，每题1分，共8分，每题只有一个正确选项） A．never B．along C． everything D．teller E. something Mark Twain was famous as a writer, but he was also famous as a public 16 of funny stories. He often went from town to town to give lectures. One day, he was walking 17 the street of a small town. He was going to give a lecture there that evening. He met a young man. The young man said, “Mr. Twain, I’d like to talk to you for a minute, please. I have an uncle, but he 18 laughs or smiles. Can you do 19 ?” A．make B．for C． funniest D．in E. first “Bring your uncle to my lecture this evening. I will 20 him laugh and smile.” That evening, the young man and his uncle sat in the 21 row, Mark Twain told some funny stories, but the young man’s uncle didn’t smile. Then Mark Twain told the 22 story he knew, but the old man still didn’t smile. Mark Twain was disappointed. Later he talked with a friend about this. “Oh!” said the friend, “I know that old man. He has been deaf 23 years.” IV. Complete the sentences with the given words in their proper forms （用括号中所给单词的适当形式完成下列句子。每空格限填一词） （本大题共8题，共8分） 24．Joe, help to some fish.(you) 25．More and more want to know the history of China.(foreign) 26．They had a journey last week.(love) 27．This scientist is from .(British) 28．Sometimes he is to his poor dog.(cruelty) 29．Between the two flat, I made a good . (choose) 30．Nowadays, some rare animals are in great . (dangerous) 31．Thank you for (invite) me to the party. V.Rewrite the following sentences as required(根据所给要求, 改写下列句子,32-37每空限填一词)(共14分) 32．Alice has already done her homework.(改为一般疑问句) Alice done her homework ? 33．Jack likes Chinese food better than western food.(保持原句意思不变) Jack Chinese food western food. 34．I spent two days finishing the model plane.(对划线部分提问) did you spend finishing the model plane? 35．This is an interesting story.(改为感叹句) this story is! 36．He is from Canada. (对划线部分提问) he from? 37．Kitty wrote an e-mail to her penfriend yesterday evening. (改为否定句) Kitty an e-mail to her penfriend yesterday evening. 38．sister, has, tried shopping, on the Internet, my, never(连词成句) . Part 3 Reading and Writing（第三部分读写） VI. Reading comprehension （阅读理解）（本大题共25题，共50分） A. Choose the best answer （根据以下内容，选择最恰当的答案）（12 分） Choose the best answer（根据短文内容，选择最恰当的答案） Harry’s Diary Here is Harry’s diary for a week in May. MayMonday 15th It rained all day, so we did not have PE lesson. We stayed in our classroom and read our library books. Tuesday 16th I missed the bus and was late for school. It wasn’t my fault. The bus came earlier than usual. Wednesday 17th I had an English exam today. I got 96 scores. It’s my highest grade ever. I made only one mistake. I used the wrong tense in a sentence. Thursday 18th I went swimming with Ben. We had lessons with a swimming instructor (教练). He taught us how to dive. Friday 19th     I was sick all day. I caught a cold at the swimming pool. I stayed in bed and slept all day. Saturday 20th I was much better today, but Mum made me stay at home. It was boring. Sunday 21st     I did not do anything interesting this weekend. 39．Harry’s class didn’t have PE lesson on Monday because _______. A．they had to read the library books B．they missed the bus C．it rained all day D．they had an English exam 40．What happened on Tuesday? A．Harry was sick all day. B．Harry missed the bus and was late for school. C．Harry got to school early. D．Harry’s bus was late and he was late for school. 41．What was Harry’s only mistake in the English exam? A．He made a spelling mistake. B．He used a wrong tense in a sentence. C．He used a wrong sentence in the writing task. D．He used a wrong word in a sentence. 42．On which day did Harry miss school? A．Tuesday. B．Thursday. C．Saturday. D．Friday. 43．Harry stayed at home on Saturday because _______. A．his mum made him B．he wanted to watch television C．he felt very sick D．he wanted to sleep all day 44．Harry had a _______ weekend. A．fun B．exciting C．interesting D．boring B.Choose the best answer and complete the passage （选择最恰当的选项完成短文）（12分） My father lost his job, so I felt unhappy. One day, while I was 45 on the street, I heard the piano music and singing rising above the noise of the people. I walked more slowly to 46 where it was coming from. Then I saw a young lady sitting at a piano. The beautiful music made me a little comfortable. I stood there 47 , watching her playing. She noticed me. I walked over and told her how good her music sounded. “I have been going through a hard time recently（近来）, 48 your music made me hopeful again.” I said to her. “I’m glad that I could help,”she answered, “Why are you so 49 ?” “Well, my father has lost his job, and I’m not sure what to do.” “Did you notice the 50 you were walking? Your head was down.” she said. “Don’t be upset, because chances come in different ways. You should smile more.” “Why are you playing the piano here?” I asked her with a smile. She explained（解释）that she saw a lot of unhappy people in the world and she tried to cheer them up by playing music. 45．A．driving B．riding C．running D．walking 46．A．find out B．send out C．take out D．get out 47．A．quickly B．loudly C．clearly D．quietly 48．A．or B．but C．so D．and 49．A．dirty B．busy C．sad D．lazy 50．A．way B．time C．reason D．station C.Fill in the blanks with proper words（在短文的空格内填入适当的词，使其内容通顺。每空格限填一词，首字母已给）（14分） Three Apples changed the world. The first one seduced（诱惑）Eve. The second one awakened（唤醒）Newton. The t 51 one was in the hands of Steve Jobs. Steve Jobs died at the age o 52 56, after a very long battle with cancer. His death was mourned(哀悼) by m 53 of people worldwide. He was a businessman, but he was the “Michael Jackson” of businessmen. His Apple products（产品） were l 54 songs that touched people’s hearts and changed their lives. Jobs was not an inventor（发明者）, b 55 he was an innovator（创新者）and a man with a great vision. He took technology（技术）that others had invented and designed products that had great style and were e 56 for people to use. And he m 57 Apple products seem cool! The iMac, iPod, iPhone and iPad were all the coolest products on the market. D. Answer the questions（根据短文内容回答下列问题）：（ 12分） I arrived in London at last. The railway station was big, black and dark. I did not know the way to my hotel, so I asked an Englishman. I not only spoke English very carefully, but also clearly. The Englishman, however, could not understand me. I repeated(重复) my question several times and at last he understood. He answered me, but he spoke quickly. “I am a foreigner,” I said. Then he spoke slowly, but I could not understand him. My teacher never spoke English like that. The Englishman and I looked at each other and smiled. Then he said something and I understand it. “You’ll soon learn English!” he said. To my surprise, in England, each person speaks a different language. The English people understand the English, but I don’t understand them! Do they speak English? 58．How was the railway station in London? 59．Why did the writer ask the Englishman for help? 60．Why did the writer repeat his question? 61．How did the Englishman speak at first? 62．Did the writer’s teacher speak English like the Englishman? 63．What kind of language does each person speak in England? Ⅶ. Writing （作文）（共20分） 64．Writing Your penfriend from another country will come to Shanghai to see you and you will show her/him around Shanghai. Now, write an email to your best friend Tom and tell him something about your penfriend and your travel plan for your penfriend. Write at least 60 words. （你的外国笔友即将来上海探望你，你将带他/她在上海游玩。现在写一份邮件给你的好朋友Tom，告诉他一些关于你的笔友和你们的游玩计划，写一篇至少 60 个字的邮件，注意邮件格式。） Some suggested questions. 1. Introduce your penfriend’s name, nationality, interests and so on. 2. When will you show her/him around Shanghai? 3. What do you plan to do with her/him? Dear Tom, My penfriend will come to Shanghai to visit me. I am going to tell you something about my penfriend and my travel plan for my penfriend. ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 题号 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 答案 C D C D D B B D B B 题号 11 12 13 14 15 39 40 41 42 43 答案 C A B C B C B B D A 题号 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 答案 D D A D B C A 1．C 【详解】句意：狗在晚上守卫我们的房子。对于句子中划线的单词，下列哪项是正确的？ 考查单词的读音。guard的发音是[ɡɑːd]，选项C符合。故选C。 2．D 【详解】句意：戴眼镜的那个女孩是一个欧洲学生。 考查冠词的用法。空格一处特指“戴眼镜的女孩”，用定冠词，排除AB；空格二处泛指“一个欧洲学生”，European以辅音音素开头，用不定冠词a。故选D。 3．C 【详解】句意：4月1日晚，警方抓到了那个小偷。 考查介词辨析。in在（某年、月或季节）；of……的；on在某一天（早中晚）；with和。空格一处表示在4月1号的晚上，具体到某一天用介词on，the evening of April 1st“4月1号的晚上”。故选C。 4．D 【详解】句意：你在杂志上读过关于俄罗斯的报道吗？ 考查动词（词组）辨析。visited参观；have been to曾经去过；read读；read about读到。根据“in magazines”可知，在杂志上应用“读”，结合空后的“Russia ”可知，应是指读到过关于俄罗斯的内容，故选D。 5．D 【详解】句意：今天她感觉很好，所以她去上学了。 考查形容词辨析。good好的；badly非常；bad坏的；well身体健康的。根据“so she went to school”可知说明她今天身体好，作feel的表语用形容词well；而feel good侧重于心情好。故选D。 6．B 【详解】句意：我们学校图书馆有两千多本书。 考查数词的用法。thousand与of连用时，应用复数形式，表示概数；若其前有基数词修饰，则用单数形式，且不与of连用，表示确数，故排除A、D。根据“over”可知，空处应是具体的数，应用two thousand。故选B。 7．B 【详解】句意：这个剧院是为孩子们设立的。 考查动词短语。put up张贴；set up设立；set out出发；put on增加（体重）。根据“This theatre is...for children”可知剧院是给孩子设立的。故选B。 8．D 【详解】句意：Alice在将来的某个时候会来我家做客。 考查副词辨析。some times几次；some time一些时间；sometimes有时；sometime某个时候。根据“in the future”可知，是未来某个时候来我家做客；故选D。 9．B 【详解】句意：我奶奶习惯了住在乡下，所以她不想和我们一起住。 考查动词短语。used to living错误表达；is used to living习惯住在；used to live过去常住在；is used to live被用来住。根据“so she doesn’t want to live with us.”可知，不想和我们一起住，应是习惯了自己住在乡下的生活，故选B。 10．B 【详解】句意：汤姆在昨天的班会上提出了一个有趣的问题。 考查动词辨析以及时态。rise升起，不及物动词；raise提出，及物动词。此空后接宾语an interesting question，应填及物动词raise，结合“in yesterday’s class meeting”可知，句子用一般过去时，动词用过去式，故选B。 11．C 【详解】句意：蒂姆和彼得的妈妈两人都在上海第一初中教英语。 考查名词所有格。根据“mothers both”可知，此处指的是两位妈妈，所以应是蒂姆的妈妈和彼得的妈妈，应分别在两个名字后加’s构成所有格，作定语修饰名词mothers。故选C。 12．A 【详解】句意：和你的朋友们去野餐是多么有趣啊！ 考查感叹句。本句的中心词是不可数名词fun，所以用what引导，句子结构符合“What+形容词+不可数名词+主谓+其他！”的构成。故选A。 13．B 【详解】句意：在图书馆门口，我出示了我的证件，托尼出示了他的证件。 考查代词辨析。my我的；him他；his他的；mine我的。第一空后有名词card，所以应用形容词性物主代词作定语，结合主语I可知，出示的应是“我的”证件，用my；第二空后没有名词，指代“托尼的证件”，应用名词性物主代词his。故选B。 14．C 【详解】句意：——你去过美国吗？——是的，我六岁的时候去过那里。 考查时态。根据“when I was six years old”可知去美国的动作发生在过去，用一般过去时，动词用过去式。故选C。 15．B 【详解】句意：A：我昨天没去参加汤姆的生日聚会。B：太遗憾了！下划线部分的意思是“真遗憾”。 考查情景交际。That’s all right不用谢；What a shame真遗憾；I’m sorry to hear that很抱歉听到这个消息；You’re welcome不用谢。根据“What a pity!”可知，是“真可惜”之意，与“What a shame”同义，故选B。 16．D 17．B 18．A 19．E 20．A 21．E 22．C 23．B 【分析】本文是记叙文。一个年轻人问擅长讲故事的马克·吐温能否让他的叔叔发笑，马可·吐温答应了他。晚上，这个人和他叔叔坐在第一排，马可·吐温讲得很生动，把最滑稽的故事将给他们，可是这个人的叔叔始终不笑，马可·吐温承认失败。后来，马可·吐温和朋友谈起了这件事，朋友告诉他那个老人已经失聪好多年。 16．句意：……但是，他还以滑稽的故事讲述者而著名。故选D。 17．句意：一天，他正在沿着小镇上的一条街散步。短语walk along a street沿着街道散步，故选B。 18．句意：我有一个叔叔，他从来没有大笑或者微笑过。 根据下文马可·吐温讲故事让这个人发笑，可推测他从未笑过，用副词never表示否定，故选A。 19．句意：你能作什么事情吗？ 不定代词something表示希望得到肯定回答，故选E。 20．句意：我将要让他大笑或者微笑。短语make sb. do. sth.意为“让某人做某事”，故选A。 21．句意：那天晚上，这个人和他叔叔坐在第一排。 上文提到为了让他打叔叔发笑，可知他们坐在第一排，冠词the放在序数词first前，故选E。 22．句意：然后，马可·吐温讲述了他知道的最滑稽的故事， 考查形容词最高级，根据上一段马可·吐温想让他发笑，可推测他讲述了最滑稽的故事，故选C。 23．句意：他已经失聪好几年了。现在完成时后面跟for+一段时间，表示动作持续了一段时间，故选B。 24．yourself 【详解】句意：Joe，请随便吃点鱼。help oneself to：随便吃点；根据“Joe”及提示词可知，这是对Joe说的话，故填yourself。 25．foreigners 【详解】句意：越来越多的外国人想知道中国的历史。空处作主语，应用名词形式，根据“want to know the history of China”可知，此处指的是“外国人”，foreigner“外国人”，是可数名词，空前有“More and more”修饰，名词用复数形式，故填foreigners。 26．lovely 【详解】句意：他们上星期有一次愉快的旅行。此空修饰名词journey，要用形容词作定语，故填lovely。 27．Britain 【详解】句意：这位科学家来自英国。根据“This scientist is from”可知，此处指的是国家，应用名词，Britain“英国”，是专有名词，故填Britain。 28．cruel 【详解】句意：有时他对他的可怜的狗很残忍。is后接形容词作表语，cruelty对应的形容词是cruel“残忍的”，故填cruel。 29．choice 【详解】句意：在这两个公寓中，我做了一个很好的选择。根据“a good”可知，此空应填入一个单数名词，故填choice。 30．danger 【详解】句意：现在，一些珍稀动物处于极大的危险之中。be in danger“处于危险中”，是固定短语，故填danger。 31．inviting 【详解】句意：谢谢你邀请我参加聚会。thank sb for doing sth：因某事感谢某人，故填inviting。 32． Has yet 【详解】句意：爱丽丝已经做了家庭作业。原句中has是助动词，改为一般疑问句要将助动词has提到句首，且首字母要大写，问句要把already改成yet，故填Has；yet。 33． prefers to 【详解】句意：杰克喜欢中餐胜过西餐。可用prefer sth to sth表示“比……更喜欢……”，句子是一般现在时，主语Jack是第三人称，动词用三单形式，故填prefers；to。 34． How long 【详解】句意：我花了两天时间完成模型飞机。根据划线部分“two days”可知，此处是对时间长度进行提问，应用how long提问，位于句首的单词首字母要大写，故填How；long。 35． How interesting 【详解】句意：这是一个有趣的故事。中心词interesting是形容词，用how引导的感叹句结构：how+形容词+主谓，故填How；interesting。 36． Where is 【详解】句意：他来自加拿大。划线部分表地点，对此提问用疑问词where，be动词is提到主语前，故填Where；is。 37． didn’t write 【详解】句意：Kitty昨晚给她的笔友写了一封电子邮件。原句时态是一般过去时，且含有实义动词“wrote”，因此变否定句应用助动词didn’t，后接动词原形。故填didn’t；write。 38．My sister has never tried shopping on the Internet 【详解】my sister作主语；has是助动词，后接过去分词tried；频度副词never放在助动词后，实义动词前；try doing sth：尝试做某事；on the Internet：在网上，故填My sister has never tried shopping on the Internet“我妹妹从未试过在网上购物”。 39．C 40．B 41．B 42．D 43．A 44．D 【导语】本文主要介绍了Harry在五月的一周的日记。 39．细节理解题。根据“It rained all day, so we did not have PE lesson”可知雨下了一整天，所以我们没有上体育课。故选C。 40．细节理解题。根据“I missed the bus and was late for school”可知周二的时候，Harry错过了公共汽车，上学迟到了。故选B。 41．细节理解题。根据“I made only one mistake. I used the wrong tense in a sentence”可知Harry在句子中用错了时态。故选B。 42．细节理解题。根据“I stayed in bed and slept all day”可知在周五Harry生病了，整天都待在家里，没有去学校。故选D。 43．细节理解题。根据“but Mum made me stay at home.”可知Harry的妈妈让他周六也待在家里。故选A。 44．细节理解题。根据“I did not do anything interesting this weekend”可知Harry周末没做什么有趣的事情，觉得周末比较无聊。故选D。 45．D 46．A 47．D 48．B 49．C 50．A 【分析】本文是记叙文。讲述了作者的父亲失业了，作者很难过，然后一天在街上遇见了一位歌手，这位歌手的歌声以及她的话语，又重新让作者燃起了生活的希望。 45．句意：一天，当我在街上散步时，我听到钢琴声和歌声盖过了人们的喧闹声。 driving驾驶；riding骑车；running跑步；walking步行，散步。根据下一句“ I walked more slowly”可知，作者正在散步，故选D。 46．句意：我走得很慢，想弄清楚它是从哪里来的。 find out找出；send out发送，派遣；take out出发，发泄；get out出去，出版。根据“where it was coming from”和“Then I saw a young lady sitting at a piano”可知，应是为了找到弹钢琴的人，故选A。 47．句意：我安静地站在那里，看她演奏。 quickly迅速地；loudly大声地；clearly清晰地；quietly安静地。根据“watching her playing.”可知，应是安静地站在旁边观看，故选D。 48．句意：我最近过得很艰难，但是你的音乐使我又充满希望。 or或者；but但是，表转折关系；so所以，因此；and和。根据常识可知，经历艰难时刻和充满希望是转折关系，用连词but，故选B。 49．句意：你为什么那么难过？ dirty脏的；busy忙碌的；sad难过的，悲伤的；lazy懒惰的。根据下文作者的回答“Well, my father has lost his job, and I’m not sure what to do.”可知，是询问他为什么难过，故选C。 50．句意：你注意到你走路的方式了吗？ way方式；time时间； reason原因，理由；station车站。根据后一句“Your head was down”可知，此处指作者走路的方式，故选A。 51．(t)hird 52．(o)f 53．(m)ost 54．(l)ike 55．(b)ut 56．(e)asy 57．(m)ade 【导语】本文主要讲述了乔布斯的生平及其发明。 51．句意：第三个在史蒂夫·乔布斯手中。根据“Three Apples changed the world.”和首字母提示可知，此处指第三个苹果，third“第三”符合句意，故填(t)hird。 52．句意：史蒂夫·乔布斯在与癌症进行了长期斗争后去世，享年56岁。根据“at the age”和首字母提示可知，at the age of+年龄“在……岁”，故填(o)f。 53．句意：他的逝世受到全世界大多数人的哀悼。根据“of people worldwide.”和首字母提示可知，most of“大多数”，故填(m)ost。 54．句意：他的苹果产品就像歌曲一样触动了人们的心灵，改变了他们的生活。根据“songs that touched people’s hearts and changed their lives”和首字母提示可知，像歌曲触动人们的内心，like“像”符合句意，故填(l)ike。 55．句意：乔布斯不是一个发明家，但他是一个革新者，一个有远见卓识的人。根据“he was an innovator（创新者）and a man with a great vision.”和首字母提示可知，前后是转折关系，but“但是”符合句意，故填(b)ut。 56．句意：他采用了别人发明的技术，设计出了很有风格、易于使用的产品。根据“for people to use”和首字母提示可知，人们容易使用，easy“容易的”符合句意，故填(e)asy。 57．句意：他让苹果产品看起来很酷！根据“Apple products seem cool”和首字母提示可知，让苹果产品似乎很酷，make“使”符合句意，描述过去发生的事情，动词用过去式，故填(m)ade。 58．The railway station was big, black and dark. 59．Because he didn’t know the way to his hotel.                 . 60．Because the Englishman couldn’t understand him. 61．He spoke quickly.                                        . 62．No, he didn’t. 63．Each person speaks a different language. 【导语】本文主要讲述了作者在伦敦遇到的语言交流问题。 58．根据“The railway station was big, black and dark”可知，火车站很大，又黑又暗，故填The railway station was big, black and dark. 59．根据“I did not know the way to my hotel, so I asked an Englishman”可知，因为他不知道去酒店的路，故填Because he didn’t know the way to his hotel. 60．根据“The Englishman, however, could not understand me. I repeated(重复) my question several times”可知，因为这个人不明白作者说什么，故填Because the Englishman couldn’t understand him. 61．根据“He answered me, but he spoke quickly”可知，起初他说得很快，故填He spoke quickly. 62．根据“My teacher never spoke English like that”可知，老师从未像那样说英语，故填No, he didn’t. 63．根据“in England, each person speaks a different language”可知，在英国，每个人都说不同的语言，故填Each person speaks a different language. 64．Dear Tom, My pen friend will come to Shanghai to visit me. I am going to tell you something about my pen friend and my travel plan for my pen friend. His name is John and he is from America. He likes China and he is studying Chinese. He is a tall boy with big eyes and small mouth. He has short hair and he wears glasses. He likes playing basketball and playing the guitar. When he comes, I will show him around Shanghai. I will take him to Chenghuang temple and buy some interesting things. We can also eat some delicious food. Besides, we will go Disney Land together. We’d like to ride the roller coaster. I think he will like it. 【详解】1.    题干解读：这篇作文要求我们给好朋友Tom写信，告诉他你的笔友要来上海的情况。审题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先给Tom介绍自己的笔友的情况，如他的姓名、国籍、爱好等；其次介绍你的游玩计划。题目中用问题的形式列出了文章的提纲，这是学生们写作的依据。学生们应在此基础上，发挥想象力，补充具体的细节内容，串联成文。短文应用一般现在时和一般将来时，第一人称和第三人称来叙述。 2.    例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，结构清晰，层次清楚。短文分三段，第一段是题目给出的开头；第二段介绍了笔友的基本情况；第三段介绍了游玩的具体计划。内容安排合理，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词的形式准确，语法规范。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了简单句、并列句和复合句结构，使用了一些较好的短语和句型，意思连贯，表达流畅。 3.    高分亮点 短语：be from；with big eyes and small mouth；play basketball；play the guitar；show around。 句型：His name is John and he is from America. ；He likes China and he is studying Chinese. He is a tall boy with big eyes and small mouth.；When he comes, I will show him around Shanghai.。 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$