Unit 3 Family life 单元话题必背满分范文-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（沪教牛津版）

Unit 3 Family life 单元话题满分范文必背 1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike因为家规和父母产生了矛盾，心情很沮丧，并向你求助。请你写一篇英文信件回应他的问题。 Dear Li Hua， I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My parents set too many rules for me. They always tell me，“Don’t spend so much time playing computer games. You should do something meaningful.” “Don’t stay up late.” “Do some house work.” I’m annoyed(烦恼) . What should 1do? Yours, Mike 注意: 1.首先阐明制定家规的意义，再逐条谈谈你对Mike家规的看法，并给他提出至少一条如何与父母交流沟通的建议。 2.要求词数80-100词。开头部分内容不计入总词数。 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。否则不予评分。 Dear Mike, Most of the students will meet this kind of problem._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mike, Most of the students will meet this kind of problem. As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along well with my parents. Here is some advice for you. Your parents talks much, because they care about you. Maybe it is not a good way, but it shows your parents’ love. So I think you should listen to them. If your opinions are different from your parents’, you can communicate with them, and tell them what you are thinking about. If your parents don’t take your advice, just keep silent and give them a smile. I hope what I say here can help you a lot. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对Mike家规的看法的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍对Mike家规的看法”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“对家规的看法、父母的用意、和父母交流的方法等”几个方面重点介绍对Mike家规的看法的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语：希望自己的建议对迈克有帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①be different from和……不同 ②get along well with和……相处很好 ③care about关心 [高分句型] ①If your opinions are different from your parents’, you can communicate with them, and tell them what you are thinking about.（if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句） ②I hope what I say here can help you a lot.（what引导的宾语从句） 2．在与父母相处的过程中，我们很幸福但也曾遇到过一些问题或困惑，我们要学会恰当地去解决问题来改善亲子关系。请用英语写一篇80个词左右的短文（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。内容包括： 1.你和父母相处方面曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼； 2.你解决问题或烦恼的过程； 3.就与父母相处方面谈谈你的感想和建议（至少两点） 4.呼吁大家关心父母，努力和父母融洽相处。 During my growing-up years, not only did I have happy time with my parents, but I had kinds of problems.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： During my growing-up years, not only did I have a happy time with my parents, but I had different kinds of problems. My biggest problem with parents was that I wasn’t allowed to spend more time on my hobbies because they thought that the hobbies would take up my time and thus they would affect my study. How could I deal with the problem? On the one hand, I studied harder in class and finished the homework as soon as possible so that I could have more time for my hobbies. On the other hand, I promised my parents that I could keep a balance between hobbies and schoolwork. As a result, my parents finally agreed with me. As we all know, parents always care for us. Therefore, we should regard them as our friends. Then we should share our worries with them. Last, I hope everyone can care about our parents and get along well with them. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍自己与父母之间最大的问题； 第二步，阐述自己如何解决烦恼的； 第三步，阐述与父母相处的建议以及呼吁大家关心父母，努力和父母融洽相处。 [亮点词汇] ①take up占据 ②deal with处理 ③on one hand..., on the other hand...一方面……，另一方面…… [高分句型] ①I studied harder in class and finished the homework as soon as possible so that I could have more time for my hobbies.（目的状语从句） ②Last, I hope everyone can care about our parents and get along well with them.（宾语从句） 3．你的同学Tom最近很烦恼。他刚升入九年级，父母担心他浪费学习时间所以不允许他每天放学后打篮球。上周末，Tom和父母大吵一架，因为他发现父母在家还偷偷查看他的聊天记录。请你给他回一封电子邮件就他的困惑给出合理建议。要点如下： 参考词汇：吵架quarrel 查看聊天记录check chat records 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Tom, I’m so sorry that you are feeling upset these days. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m so sorry that you are feeling upset these days. I think you should talk to your parents and not quarrel with them. You should tell them that playing basketball is your hobby. As long as you manage your time well, playing basketball will not affect your studies, so that your parents will allow you to play basketball. As for parents check your chat records, it’s not right. You should tell your parents your thoughts, communicate with them more, let them understand your situation, let them understand you, and support you. If so, your relationship with your parents will get better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先承接短文开头。 第二步，就他的困惑给出合理建议。 [亮点词汇] ①quarrel with与……争吵 ②check chat records查看聊天记录 ③communicate with与……沟通 ④get better and better变得越来越好 [高分句型] ①I think you should talk to your parents and not quarrel with them.（省略that的宾语从句） ②As long as you manage your time well, playing basketball will not affect your studies, so that your parents will allow you to play basketball.（so that引导的目的状语从句） ③If so, your relationship with your parents will get better and better.（if引导的条件状语从句） 4．你叫Linda，是初三的一名学生，你的好朋友Joyce近期很烦恼，她上周日因为使用手机的问题与她父亲发生了争吵，她父亲把她手机摔坏了，她这几天情绪很低落，学习不认真，你很担心她，所以你给她写了一封信。 要点： 1）非常理解她的感受 我们想更独立但家长们有时还是把我们当小孩子； 2）与父亲吵架的原因 Joyce和她父亲对手机的使用有不同看法，父亲担心会影响学习 3）对她的问题提出建议 至少写出两条建议。 注意： 1）字数：90词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2）文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可适当发挥； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4）条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：1）have a quarrel 与……吵架；2）treat v. 对待；3. affect v, 影响 Dear Joyce, I am so sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and he even broke your smart phone. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Linda 【答案】例文： Dear Joyce,   I am so sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and he even broke your smart phone. I can fully understand your feelings. We want to depend more on ourselves but sometimes our parents still treat us like a primary school student. You have different opinions on using a smart phone with your father. I think your father worried that using a smart phone may affect your study. After all we are in Grade 9 and we must try our best to study. Here I have two suggestions for you. First, you should find a chance to communicate with your father when you both calm down. If you don’t want to talk to him, you can write a letter or an email to him. Second, I think you should forget this unhappy thing and start to study again. Time is valuable for us, so we can’t afford to waste it. Please raise your spirits! Best wishes! Yours, Linda 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对Joyce遇到的问题感到抱歉，并分析出现该问题的原因； 第二步，从两方面给出具体建议。 [亮点词汇] ①fully充分地 ②after all毕竟 [高分句型] ①I think your father worried that using a smart phone may affect your study.（think后接省略引导词that的宾语从句） ②If you don’t want to talk to him you can write a letter or an email to him.（if引导的条件状语从句） 5．上周班会课，你的班级对同学们进行了亲子关系调查，数据显示有很多同学与父母沟通方面存在困难。假设你是班长，请你写一份发言稿，针对如何与父母沟通的问题，给同学们提出合理建议。 要求: 1、至少提3点建议 2、字数80词左右, 3、发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：agree, disagree, quarrel with sb, solve the problem, be patient, get a satisfactory result, find an acceptable answer, put oneself in one’s shoes (换位思考) Dear friends, I’m so sorry to hear that most of us have trouble communicating with our parents. Today I’d like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【答案】One possible version: Dear friends, I’m so sorry to hear that most of us have trouble communicating with our parents. Today I’d like to give some suggestions. Nowadays, students cannot communicate with parents well. Many students think it’s hard to talk with their parents. How to communicate with our parents? Here are some suggestions. Firstly, talk to your parents politely, or they will not feel like to talk to you. Second, try to think about your parents more, so you will find that you can understand them. Also, do not forget to care your parents, they will be pleased if you do that and they will be happy to listen to you too. If you feel hard to communicate with them, you can tell your parents about this situation, maybe they will think about themselves and try to understand you. By doing these things, you can talk to your parents more easily. That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题； 第二步，就如何与父母沟通，提出合理的建议； 第三步，感谢聆听。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble doing sth做某事有困难 ②communicate with与……沟通 ③think about考虑 [高分句型] ①Here are some suggestions.（倒装句） ②If you feel hard to communicate with them, you can tell your parents about this situation（if引导条件状语从句） 6．俗话说，家和万事兴，家庭关系和睦对每个家庭成员都至关重要。假如你是李华，你的好朋友Mike给你写了一封邮件，告诉你最近他和家人的关系比较紧张，不知道应该如何与家人相处。请你给他回一封邮件，并给他一些建议。 写作要求：1．短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展。 2．重点谈谈应该如何与父母更好地相处。 3．文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you have problems communicating with your family. Don’t worry. I also had the same situation in the past. Here is some advice for you. First, you should communicate with your family as often as possible and tell them your feelings. I think they will understand you better. Second, you should spend more time with your family. For example, you can do some sports with them on weekends. Last but not least, prepare some gifts for your family when they celebrate birthdays. I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a better relationship with them. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，安慰Mike，说明跟家庭成员关系紧张是很正常的情况； 第二步，针对对方的问题提出合理的建议； 第三步，提出希望，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①have problems doing sth做某事有问题 ②communicate with与……沟通 ③spend time with sb与某人共度时光 [高分句型] ①Here is some advice for you.（倒装句） ②I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a better relationship with them.（宾语从句） 7．为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，你校英文周刊以“Build good relationships with parents”为题，向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.与父母建立良好关系的重要性； 2.具体做法； 3.感悟与号召。 注意事项： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：respect (v.尊重); housework(n.家务); communicate(v.交流); patient(adj.耐心的) Build good relationships with parents We are supposed to build good relationships with parents. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Build good relationships with parents We are supposed to build good relationships with parents. Because a good family relationship will make our life happier and easier. Here are some things we can do. First, we can offer to help with housework such as doing the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work. Second, we should communicate with our parents often and be patient with them. Share our happiness and sorrow with them. Last but not least, we should respect our parents at all times. Don’t make them angry and try to take their advice when we disagree with each other. Parents give us everything they can give. Let’s build good relationships with parents from now on! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，阐述与父母建立良好关系的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍怎样与父母建立良好的关系； 第三步，发出号召。 [亮点词汇] ①be supposed to应该 ②such as例如 ③each other彼此 ④disagree with不同意 [高分句型] ①First, we can offer to help with housework such as doing the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work.(so that引导目的状语从句) ②Don’t make them angry and try to take their advice when we disagree with each other.(祈使句；and并列句；when引导时间状语从句) 8．青少年正处于价值观形成的关键时期，对于很多事情都有自己的想法，为此，也免不了和自己的父母产生分歧。你一定也有类似的经历。请简单写出你的家规，结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何化解与他们之间的矛盾的，并谈谈你自己的想法及建议。 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现真实人名、校名。 提示：be (not) supposed/expected to; be(not) allowed to A country has its laws and a family has its rules. My family also has some rules. First of all, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A country has its laws and a family has its rules. My family also has some rules. First of all, I have to finish my homework as soon as I come home from school. Second, I can’t watch TV or play computer games on weekdays. Third, I can’t hang out with my friends alone. Last weekend, I wanted to watch a movie with my best friend. But my parents didn’t allow me to go. I told them I would call them as soon as I arrived at the movie theater. At last, my parents agreed. In my opinion, it is of great importance for parents to create more chances to talk with their children so that they can understand each other better. What’s more, it’s necessary for parents to build up friendly and close relationship with their children before expressing their expectations. Last but not least, parents should spare more time to be with their children. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家规，结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何化解与家人之间的矛盾的，并谈谈你自己的想法及建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己家的家规； 第二步，结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何化解与家人之间的矛盾的； 第三步，谈谈你自己的想法及建议。 [亮点词汇] ①hang out with sb.和某人闲逛 ②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ③be of great importance很重要 [高分句型] ①I have to finish my homework as soon as I come home from school. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句) ②In my opinion, it is of great importance for parents to create more chances to talk with their children so that they can understand each other better. (so that引导的目的状语从句) 9．你们学校英语社团正在组织题为“My family life is ________”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一篇短文参加活动。 内容要点如下： 1. 五口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦： 2. 分担家务，周末户外活动： 3. 相互支持，经常交流，良好家规助我成长； 4. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。 注意： 1. 先用一个形较词补充题目； 2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数：80字左右； 4. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译。 My family life is ________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My family life is happy My family is a small but happy one. There are five people in my family. Our neighbors are friendly. In our family, everyone shares the housework. We help each other. At weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. It’s a great way to relax and enjoy nature together. We also have some good family rules that help me grow healthily. My family loves pets. We have a cute cat named Mimi who brings us lots of joy. In conclusion, I am grateful to have such a happy family. They give me love, support and guidance, which make me feel safe and confident. I love my family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：阐述家庭基本情况； 第二步：阐述家人们分担家务，周末户外活动以及相互支持，经常交流，良好家规助我成长； 第三步：阐述你的感想，呼应标题。 [亮点词汇] ①healthily健康地 ②be grateful to 对……心存感激 ③guidance指引 [高分句型] ①We also have some good family rules that help me grow healthily. (that引导的定语从句) ②They give me love, support and guidance, which make me feel safe and confident.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 10．为了使我健康成长，我父母制定了一些家规。例如，晚上九点之前务必回家，不得和朋友一起外出；务必努力学习，按时完成作业；不能玩电脑游戏；要我自己洗衣服；不得不每天早晨六点起床，每晚十点钟务必上床睡觉……，以My Family Rules 为题写一篇短文，谈谈你对这些规则的看法，并说说他们是否合理。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。 2. 简要说明理由。 3. 词数：不少于80词。 My Family Rules ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文                                                                           My Family Rules      There are many rules in my family.      Every morning I have to get up at six o’clock and go to school at seven o’clock. I can’t play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself. After school I must go back home before nine o’clock in the afternoon and I can’t go out with my friends at school nights. And at night, I have to study hard and do my homework on time. And I must go to bed before ten o’clock in the evening.      Thanks to these rules. I can live healthily. But I think the sleep time is not enough. Students need nine hours sleep! And I think playing some computer games is not bad. So I think the family rules can make some changes and we can make it together.　　 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：根据所给内容完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。   [写作步骤]   第一步，引出话题家规； 第二步，详细介绍家规；   第三步，表达自己对这些家规的看法。   [亮点词汇]   ①get up起床 ②by myself独自 ③on time准时 ④Thanks to多亏 [高分句型]   ①There are many rules in my family. (there be句型) ②And I think playing some computer games is not bad. (省略that的宾语从句+动词ing作主语) ③After school I must go back home before nine o’clock in the afternoon and I can’t go out with my friends at school nights.（并列句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$