Unit 3 Family life 作文学案 -2025-2026学年沪教牛津版（2012）英语九年级上册

Unit 3 Family life 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Family life”为话题，属于“家庭与生活”主题范畴，核心聚焦“用英语描述家庭生活、谈论家务分工、表达家庭关系与规则”，运用系动词（linking verbs）、家庭相关词汇及实用句型，提升说明类写作的真实性和情感表达力。常见写作角度包括：① 介绍自己的家庭生活（成员、分工、活动）；② 对比不同家庭的生活方式；③ 谈论家庭规则与相处之道；④ 分享家庭中最珍贵的情感或回忆。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，适配九年级学生认知水平，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “介绍你的家庭生活”。请根据课本“Reading”板块两位青少年的家庭访谈范例，写一篇短文，介绍你的家庭生活，包括家庭成员、家务分工、家庭活动、规则及你对家庭的感受，词数100-120左右，题目为“My Warm Family Life”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Warm Family Life I live in a happy family of four: my parents, my younger sister and me. Unlike some families where members are busy with their own things, we value the time spent together, which makes our family life warm and meaningful. My dad is a doctor who often works overtime, but he always helps with housework on weekends—he’s good at fixing things and cleaning the windows. My mum is a teacher. She cooks delicious meals every day and teaches us to be kind to others. As the elder sister, I usually wash the dishes after dinner and help my sister with her homework. My sister, who is 10 years old, likes tidying her bedroom and watering the plants. We have a simple rule: finish homework before watching TV. Every Sunday afternoon, we go for a walk in the park or watch a film together. Our family doesn’t have many expensive possessions, but we have a close relationship. We support each other when facing difficulties. I feel lucky to grow up in such a loving family. It teaches me the importance of responsibility and mutual care. 【译文】 我温暖的家庭生活 我生活在一个幸福的四口之家：我的父母、我的妹妹和我。不像有些家庭里成员们忙于自己的事情，我们珍惜在一起的时光，这让我们的家庭生活温暖而有意义。 我的爸爸是一名医生，经常加班，但他周末总会帮忙做家务——他擅长修理东西和擦窗户。我的妈妈是一名老师，她每天做美味的饭菜，还教导我们要善待他人。作为姐姐，我通常晚饭后洗碗，帮妹妹辅导作业。我的妹妹10岁了，喜欢整理自己的卧室和浇花。我们有一条简单的规则：看完作业才能看电视。每个周日下午，我们会一起去公园散步或看电影。 我们家没有很多贵重的物品，但我们关系亲密。遇到困难时，我们互相支持。能在这样一个充满爱的家庭里长大，我感到很幸运。它教会我责任感和相互关怀的重要性。 亮点词块 1.value the time spent together 珍惜在一起的时光 2.work overtime 加班 3.be good at fixing things 擅长修理东西 4.mutual care 相互关怀 5.close relationship 亲密的关系 6.face difficulties 面对困难 7.housework division 家务分工 8.family rules 家庭规则 高分句子 1.Unlike some families where members are busy with their own things, we value the time spent together, which makes our family life warm and meaningful.（运用对比和定语从句，贴合单元语境，突出家庭特点） 2.My dad is a doctor who often works overtime, but he always helps with housework on weekends.（用定语从句描述家庭成员，丰富句式，贴合单元语法重点） 3.It teaches me the importance of responsibility and mutual care.（升华主题，表达家庭生活的意义，提升作文深度） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友想了解中西方家庭生活的差异，请你写一封邮件，对比你家和课本中Emily家的生活差异，突出核心不同点，词数不少于80。 Dear Lisa, You asked about the differences between Chinese family life and Western family life. Let me share my family life and compare it with Emily’s family from our textbook! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Yu 【拓展1范文】 Dear Lisa, You asked about the differences between Chinese family life and Western family life. Let me share my family life and compare it with Emily’s family from our textbook! Emily’s family has four members, but her parents are often busy—her dad is abroad on business and her mum works too. They usually do their own things and don’t do much housework together. However, my family of three does almost everything together. We eat meals at home every day, and my parents always ask about my school life. In terms of housework, Emily isn’t expected to do any, but I help my mum wash clothes and tidy the living room every weekend. My parents think it’s important to learn to look after ourselves. Also, Emily’s parents don’t set many rules, but we have a rule: no phone use during dinner. Though our family lives are different, both are full of love. What’s your family life like? Yours, Wang Yu 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的莉萨： 你问起中西方家庭生活的差异，让我分享我的家庭生活，并和课本里埃米莉的家庭做个对比吧！ 埃米莉家有四口人，但她的父母经常很忙——爸爸出差国外，妈妈也有工作。他们通常各自做自己的事，不怎么一起做家务。然而，我们三口之家几乎什么都一起做。我们每天在家吃晚饭，父母总会问起我的学校生活。 关于家务，埃米莉不需要做任何家务，但我每个周末都会帮妈妈洗衣服、整理客厅。我父母认为学会照顾自己很重要。另外，埃米莉的父母没有制定太多规则，但我们有一条规定：晚饭时不能用手机。 虽然我们的家庭生活不同，但都充满了爱。你的家庭生活是什么样的？ 你的， 王宇 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，谈论你对“理想家庭生活”的看法，运用系动词和相关表达，词数100左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心内容 理想家庭的特点（成员和睦、分工明确、相互支持、有共同活动）、具体表现、你的期待 语言要求 运用系动词（be, feel, seem, become等），贴合单元语法重点 In my opinion, an ideal family life is not about having many possessions, but about love and harmony. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 In my opinion, an ideal family life is not about having many possessions, but about love and harmony. First, family members should be kind to each other. They shouldn’t argue over small things—instead, they listen to each other’s ideas. Second, housework should be divided fairly. Parents and children all do their part, which makes everyone feel responsible. Third, a good family always supports each other. When someone is in trouble, others offer help immediately. An ideal family also has regular activities together, like having Sunday brunch or going hiking. These activities make the relationship closer. Such a family seems warm and peaceful. I hope every family can be like this—where everyone feels loved and valued. 【拓展2译文】 在我看来，理想的家庭生活不在于拥有多少财物，而在于爱与和睦。 首先，家庭成员之间应该友善相处。他们不应该为小事争吵——相反，要倾听彼此的想法。其次，家务应该公平分工。父母和孩子都尽自己的一份力，这会让每个人都有责任感。第三，一个好的家庭总会互相支持。当有人遇到困难时，其他人会立即提供帮助。 理想的家庭还会有定期的共同活动，比如周日早午餐或徒步旅行。这些活动让关系更亲密。这样的家庭看起来温暖而平和。我希望每个家庭都能这样——每个人都能感受到被爱和被重视。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.家庭与生活相关（单元重点） · 家庭成员：parents 父母；father/dad 爸爸；mother/mum 妈妈；sister 姐妹；brother 兄弟；grandpa/grandfather 爷爷/外公；grandma/grandmother 奶奶/外婆；elder sister 姐姐；younger brother 弟弟 · 家务分工：do housework 做家务；wash the dishes 洗碗；clean the windows 擦窗户；tidy the bedroom 整理卧室；water the plants 浇花；cook meals 做饭；wash clothes 洗衣服；fix things 修理东西 · 家庭活动：have meals together 一起吃晚饭；go for a walk 散步；watch a film 看电影；go hiking 徒步旅行；have Sunday brunch 吃周日早午餐；talk about school life 谈论学校生活 · 语法相关：系动词（be, feel, seem, become, get, look, sound, taste, smell）；定语从句（who/which/that引导） · 情感与评价：warm 温暖的；harmonious 和睦的；close 亲密的；loving 充满爱的；meaningful 有意义的；responsible 有责任感的；mutual care 相互关怀 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 系动词用法： · 后接形容词：Our family life is warm.（我们的家庭生活很温暖。）/ The dinner smells delicious.（晚饭闻起来很香。） · 后接名词/名词短语：My mum is a teacher.（我妈妈是一名老师。）/ He became a responsible boy.（他变成了一个有责任感的男孩。） · 常用系动词：be（是）、feel（感觉）、seem（似乎）、become（成为）、get（变得）、look（看起来）、sound（听起来）、taste（尝起来）、smell（闻起来） · 定语从句（描述家庭成员/事物）： · 指人用who/that：My dad is a doctor who often works overtime.（我爸爸是一名经常加班的医生。） · 指物用which/that：We have a rule that no phone use during dinner.（我们有一条规定：晚饭时不能用手机。） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：unlike 不像；however 然而；first 首先；second 其次；third 第三；also 另外；though 虽然；instead 相反；when 当……时 · 感悟表达：value the time 珍惜时光；the importance of... ……的重要性；be lucky to... 幸运能……；feel loved and valued 感到被爱和被重视；look after oneself 照顾自己 二、实用句型积累 1.介绍家庭生活（贴合单元核心） · I live in a... family of...: my parents, my... and me. 我生活在一个……口之家：我的父母、我的……和我，例：I live in a happy family of three: my parents and me. · My... is a... who/that... 我的……是一名……，他/她……，例：My mum is a teacher who likes cooking. · We usually/often... together. 我们通常/经常一起……，例：We often go for a walk in the park on weekends. · There is a rule in my family: ... 我们家有一条规则：……，例：There is a rule in my family: finish homework before playing. 1. 描述家务与分工（贴合单元主题） · ... is good at... ……擅长……，例：My dad is good at fixing things. · I help... with... 我帮……做……，例：I help my sister with her homework. · Housework is divided fairly in my family. 我们家的家务分工很公平。 · ... is responsible for... ……负责……，例：My sister is responsible for watering the plants. 1. 表达家庭情感与感悟（贴合单元内涵） · Our family is not about..., but about... 我们的家庭不在于……，而在于……，例：Our family is not about wealth, but about mutual care. · I feel lucky to grow up in such a... family. 能在这样一个……的家庭里长大，我感到很幸运，例：I feel lucky to grow up in such a loving family. · It teaches me the importance of... 它教会我……的重要性，例：It teaches me the importance of family harmony. · Though..., we... 虽然……，但我们……，例：Though my parents are busy, we still spend time together. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：Who are the members of your family?；What housework do you usually do?；What activities do you do together?；Are there any rules in your family?；What do you like most about your family? · 回答句型：There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and me.；I usually wash the dishes and tidy my bedroom.；We often go hiking on weekends.；Yes, we have a rule: no TV before homework.；I like the close relationship between us most. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $