Unit 1 A new start Developing ideas Writing 课件-2024-2025学年高中英语外研版（2019）必修第一册

Period5 Writing a journal entry Developing ideas 目 录 Lead-in Pre-writing Fast-reading While-writing Post-writing How did freshmen feel on their first day at senior high? (write down as many words as you can to describe their feelings.) Lead-in homesick、frustrated、upset、disapointed、 nervous、in panic、eagerness、pleased、with butterflies in my stomach... Review the first passage and think about how to write a journal entry? Lead-in Structure? Person? Tense? Order? How to write a journal entry? 第一人称 一般过去式 时间顺序 Lead-in Beginning/ Introduction Main Body Main Body Ending/Conclusion Her general impression of the first week (Beginning/ Introduction) An enjoyable class (Main Body) After-school activities (Main Body) Her plan for tomorrow (Ending/Conclusion) Divid the journal entry into four parts and get the main idea of each part. Fast-reading Read the journal entry and answer the questions. What is the passage about? What happened in her physics class? What did she do after class? It’s about the author’s experiences during the first day at senior high. She couldn’t take notes of everything the physics teacher said, but the teacher told her to stop taking notes and just listen. He said that thinking was more important than note-taking and memorising. She hurried to the school skateboarding club, and bumped into a girl on the way. Then she tried skateboarding at the club and make friends with the girl she bumped into earlier. Pre-writing Excited disappointed sorry look forward to laugh General impression of the school In physics class After class Tomorrow evening · come to an end around the corner couldn’t take everything down struggle with... · hurried to the scholl skateboarding club bump into a girl say sorry to make friends with the girl watch a film Retell the experiences about the first week with expressions in the passage. 日记的格式什么时候讲？ 8 Your own experiences of first week at senior high. English/ math/ Chinese/ chemistry/ physics/ history/ politics/ psychology/ PE... When I ... be doing....when excited/confident/embarrassed/curious/in panic/stressful.. badminton club/ drama club/ music club/ debate club/ English corner... An enjoyable class How I made a new friend? My impression of the first week After-school activities 3 1 2 4 While-writing 1.at last__________________________ 2.during class__________________________ 3.give a speech__________________________ 4.call one's name__________________________ 5.lose heart__________________________ 6.speak up in class__________________________ 7.sign up for__________________________ 8.a busy schedule__________________________ 9.at the end of the first week__________________________ 10.hang out 闲逛：在某个地方消磨时间，特别是与朋友一起 ◆写作训练 Ⅰ.【参考词块】翻译下列词块。 终于/最终 在课堂上 发言/做演讲 叫某人的名字 灰心 在课上大胆发言 报名参加 紧张的日程安排 （开学）第一周结束的时候 对开学第一周的印象： 1.时间过得真快!明天就是周末了。 _____________________________________________________________________ 2.开学第一周发生了很多有趣的事。(happen to sb) ________________________________________during the first week at senior high. 一堂有意思的课： 3.尤其令我印象深刻的是周二的英语课。(be impressed by…) ___________________________________________________________________ 4.老师让我们用英语介绍一下自己。(ask sb to do sth) ____________________________________________________________________ 5.我害怕在一群人面前讲话。(be frightened to do sth) _____________________________________________________________________ 6.在老师的鼓励下，我最终鼓起勇气表达自己。(pick up the courage to do sth) _____________________________________________________________________ Ⅱ.【实用表达】翻译下列句子。 How time flies! It's going to be the weekend tomorrow. Many interesting things happened to me. I was especially impressed by the English class on Tuesday. Our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves in English. I was frightened to speak in front of a group of people. With my teacher's encouragement, I finally picked up the courage to express myself. 课外活动： 7.课余时间，我会参加各种各样的课外活动。(I'd like to…) In my spare time, ________________________________________________ 8.为了提高口语能力，我决定加入英语俱乐部。(decide to do sth) ______________________________________________________________ 怎样交到了新朋友： 9.她主动帮我纠正发音。(offer to do sth) ______________________________________________________________ 10.我们都对摄影感兴趣，这让我感到很惊讶。(It surprises sb that…, share) ______________________________________________________________ 结尾： 11.我期待着精彩的高中生活。(look forward to sth) ________________________________________________________________ I'm looking forward to a wonderful life at senior high. It surprised me that we shared an interest in photography. She offered to correct my pronunciation. .In order to improve my speaking skills, I decided to join the English Club. I'd like to take part in various after-school activities. Now write a journal entry about your first-week experience at senior high. Use the expressions above to help you. While-writing Friday 8 September How time flies! I can't believe the first week is coming to an end. Things are going quite well and there are one or two things in particular that have left a deep impression on me. The English class on Thursday was unforgettable. During the class, we were asked to give a short speech about the first day at senior high. I was secretly hoping that nobody would notice me, when suddenly heard my name called. I stood up, blushing (涨红了脸), with nothing coming out of my mouth. “Don’t be shy! Just think of your first day at senior high and say whatever comes to mind.” The teacher‘s words made me relaxed a bit, and I finally began to say something. lt was hard, but it didn't feel bad. After school that day, I decided to go to the English Club to further practise my English. l was trying to pick up the courage to talk to someone when I heard a kind voice behind me. “Hello, I'm Tom. Nice to meet you.“ Sitting side-by-side, he shared with me some tips on how to improve my English. We had a lovely chat and soon became friends. The first week of senior high has been quite exciting, and I am looking forward to making the most of senior high! Assessment standard date person tense sentence pattern content(four parts) General impression An enjoyable class After-school activities How I made a new friend? Post-writing Share your journal entry with the class and make a comment according to the chart. Thanks! $$