建议信写作课 课件-2026-2027学年高一英语上学期作文复习专项

Writing a Letter of Advice How to Give Advice That Really Works 高中英语写作课 1.7.2013 各位同学，大家好！欢迎来到今天的高中英语写作课。今天我们将一起探讨如何撰写一封有效的建议信（Letter of Advice）。无论是在日常生活中给朋友提建议，还是在考试中遇到相关的写作题目，掌握这一文体的写作技巧都至关重要。 ‹#› Warm-up: A Letter from Your Friend Dear XXX, I'm writing to tell you that I'm having a really hard time at the new school. I don't know anyone here, and the subjects are much harder than in my old school. I feel lonely and stressed all the time. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Yours, Li Hua What’s his problem? How can you help him? 1.7.2013 Before we start our formal lesson, let's look at this letter from Li Hua. He's facing a common problem for students who transfer to a new school. First, he's in a completely new environment with no friends. Second, the academic load is heavier than before, which causes stress. Third, he feels lonely and doesn't know how to cope. Now, I want you to think about this question: If you were his friend, what advice would you give him to help him adapt to the new school life? ‹#› Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble adapting to your new school life. It’s normal to feel lonely and stressed here. I’m writing to offer you some practical advice. First of all, it would be a good idea to join a school club like the English Corner. You can meet classmates with the same interests, which helps you make new friends easily.Besides, I suggest you turn to your teachers for help after class. They can guide you with your study and help you fit in better.Last but not least, you might as well greet your classmates or share snacks. These small acts will help you build connections and feel at home. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Wish you a happy school life. Best wishes, Yours sincerely, 1.How many parts is the letter divided into? 2.What does each part talk about? Beginning:写信的背景+表示理解/安慰+写信目的 Body:具体建议+理由 Ending:表达希望/祝愿 Beginning:写信的背景+表示理解/安慰+写信目的 I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble adapting to your new school life. It’s normal to feel lonely and stressed here. I’m writing to offer you some practical advice. 写信背景： 表示理解/安慰： 写信目的： ①I am sorry to hear that you have trouble doing.... ②I have heard that you have trouble doing.... ① It’s normal/common to have such feelings. ②I fully understand how you feel. ③ You’re not alone in facing this problem. ④There is no need to worry too much. ①I am writing to offer/give you some suggestions/tips. ②I am writing to share some advice with you. 你的朋友管理时间有困难，感到很焦虑。请你写一封信给他提一些有用的建议。（只写第一段） I am sorry to hear that you have trouble managing your time and feel anxious.It’s normal to have such feelings.I am writing to offer you some useful suggestions. How to make our suggestions persuasive? First of all, it would be a good idea to join a school club like the English Corner. You can meet classmates with the same interests, which helps you make new friends easily.Besides, I suggest you (should) turn to your teachers for help after class. They can guide you with your study and help you fit in better.Last but not least, you had better greet your classmates or share snacks. These small acts will help you build connections and feel at home. 1.How many suggestions are given in the letter? Underline the sentences that give advice. Tip 1:使用连接词让文章更有逻辑性。(First of all; Besides; Last but not least) 比较下列建议，哪个更好 Tip 2:建议要具体、可行。 Tip 3:建议的语气要礼貌、得体。（不用you should） 1.It would be a good idea to do... 2.If I were you, I would do.... 3. You had better do... 4.I suggest that you (should) do.... A:You should manage your time well. B:I suggest you make a daily timetable. A:You should improve your speed. B:It would be a good idea to finish important tasks first. Ending:表达希望/祝愿 1. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. I am looking forward to your early reply. 2.I hope you will find my suggestions useful/helpful. 比较下列建议，哪个更好 Tip 4:在建议之后加上建议的理由，让建议更有说服力。 A:I suggest you make a daily timetable. B:I suggest you make a daily timetable. It will help you arrange your tasks clearly and reduce your stress. A letter of advice a clear structure Beginning:背景;安慰；写信目的 Body:建议+理由 Ending:表达祝愿 How to make suggestions persuasive 1.使用连接词：First of all；Besides 2.建议要具体、可行 3.语气要礼貌、得体 4.加上建议的理由 假定你是李华的朋友。你的朋友李华刚升入高中，很难交到新朋友，为此感到苦恼。他写信向你求助，请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 表示安慰； ​2. 提出2-3条具体建议，每条建议说明理由； ​3. 表达祝愿。 Dear Li Hua, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Li Hua, I have heard that you have trouble making new friends in high school. It’s normal to feel upset when you are in a new environment. First of all, it would be a good idea to join school clubs. You can meet classmates with the same interests there, which helps you make friends easily. Besides, I suggest you take part in the Orientation Day. It is a great chance to know more students. Last but not least, you had better give others a hand when they need help. Small kindnesses will help you build close connections. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. I am looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes! Yours, Good advice comes from a caring heart. Write clearly, give reasons, and be sincere. 1.7.2013 Thank you for listening. Remember, the best advice is rooted in empathy and clarity. ‹#› $