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专题04应用文--感谢信 -----三段式满分作文速成 ( 考情分析 ) 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024 新高考I&II卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 全国甲卷 看图作文中国交通运输业的发展 发言稿 浙江卷月 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 投稿 2023 新高考I&II卷 给外教写邮件，告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 建议信 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 提纲类 全国乙卷 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及中获得的体验和感受。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 报道 北京卷 学校生活之社团活动给出建议 建议信 2022 新高考I&II卷 校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈 邀请信 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 提纲类 北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 提纲类 天津卷 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 浙江卷6月 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，邀请外国留学生一同体验。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获 提纲类 2019 浙江卷6月 感谢Alex的帮助 提纲类 2009 山东卷 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助； 提纲类 ( 写作方法指导 ) 首段：简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意； 段中：描述事情经过、表明感谢的原因； 段尾：再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。 ( 万能写作模板 ) Dear ___________ (感谢对象) How is everything going?（熟悉的人之间简单打招呼）/ I'm Li Hua, ______________.（用于正式的感谢信中自我介绍）. I’m writing this email to express my gratitude for your help. First of all，thank you for ____________________(感谢理由1).Without your help，I would not have made such great progress in English learning(感谢理由2).Besides, during the competition, ___________________(具体的细节) I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey！ Yours， Li Hua ( 句式积累 ) 首段常用语 1. Words cannot convey how grateful I am to your generous help. 语言无法表达我对你的感激之情。 2. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London. 我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。 3. 1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help. 我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。 4. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you. 为此，我写这封信是为了表达我 5. 1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help. 我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助. 6. It was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister. 谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。 7. 1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me. 我很感谢你为我所做的一切。 8. 1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help. 我想感谢你的帮助。 段中常用语 1. Without/But for your help(If it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English. 要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。 2.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor. 我太感谢你的帮助了。 3. Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English. 多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。 4. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. 在你的专业指导下，我在英语方面取得了令人难以置信的进步。在你的专业指导下，我在英语方面取得了令人难以置信的进步。 5. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. 每当我遇到困难时，你总是让我高兴起来，帮助我摆脱困境，这激发了我对英语的热情，也促进了我重新获得极大的信心。 尾段常用语 1. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. 我要再次向您表示衷心的感谢！请接受我的感激。 2. Thanks again for helping me. 再次感谢你对我的帮助。 3. Thank you again for your generous help. 再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。 4. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks. 如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。 5. Your kindness and help will always be remembered. 我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。 5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality． 我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。 6. Words fail to express my gratitude for your help and support. Your generous assistance has not only improved my writing skills, but also stimulated my enthusiasm and confidence in English learning. 语言无法表达我对你的感谢。你的慷慨帮助不仅提高了我的写作技巧，也激发了我对英语学习的热情和信心。 ( 高考真题精讲 ) 1.（2019年浙江卷） 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3. 临别祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（2009·山东·高考真题）假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith，但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信： 1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助； 2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式； 3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。 注意：1. 词数120-150； 2. 可适当增加细节。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 名校模拟提升 ) 1．（2024·河南·模拟预测）假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 难忘的一件事； 3. 你的祝福。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·辽宁辽阳·模拟预测）假定你是校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人李华，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1．感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议; 2．希望有机会再次来节目做客。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, 3．（2024·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括： 1. 感谢邀请； 2. 作品简介。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4．（2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 介绍赛前准备。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．（2024·山东菏泽·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国好友John给你寄来了春节礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 告知已收到礼物； 2. 收到礼物的感受； 3. 表示感谢。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·江西南昌·三模）假如你是国际交流学生Jim，学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下： 1. 成长与收获； 2. 表达感恩； 3. 继续努力。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教Mr Potter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢，内容包括： 1.对老师的辛勤工作表示感谢； 2.感谢老师对自己的教导和帮助； 3.表达对老师的祝愿。 注意：1.可适当补充信息，以使行文连贯； 2.词数为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·河北承德·二模）假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.目前状况及感谢； 2.介绍健身计划。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Oliver, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 9．（2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享获奖的喜悦； 2. 感谢他的帮助； 3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·北京朝阳·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校这学期进行了一系列的英语讲座，上周邀请外教Jim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表达感谢并说明原因； 2.建议下周讲解的内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ( 4 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 3 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题04应用文--感谢信 -----三段式满分作文速成 ( 考情分析 ) 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024 新高考I&II卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 全国甲卷 看图作文中国交通运输业的发展 发言稿 浙江卷月 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿 投稿 2023 新高考I&II卷 给外教写邮件，告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议 建议信 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 提纲类 全国乙卷 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及中获得的体验和感受。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 报道 北京卷 学校生活之社团活动给出建议 建议信 2022 新高考I&II卷 校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈 邀请信 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类 全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 提纲类 北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 提纲类 天津卷 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类 浙江卷6月 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，邀请外国留学生一同体验。 提纲类 浙江卷1月 给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获 提纲类 2019 浙江卷6月 感谢Alex的帮助 提纲类 2009 山东卷 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助； 提纲类 ( 写作方法指导 ) 首段：简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意； 段中：描述事情经过、表明感谢的原因； 段尾：再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。 ( 万能写作模板 ) Dear ___________ (感谢对象) How is everything going?（熟悉的人之间简单打招呼）/ I'm Li Hua, ______________.（用于正式的感谢信中自我介绍）. I’m writing this email to express my gratitude for your help. First of all，thank you for ____________________(感谢理由1).Without your help，I would not have made such great progress in English learning(感谢理由2).Besides, during the competition, ___________________(具体的细节) I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey！ Yours， Li Hua ( 句式积累 ) 首段常用语 1. Words cannot convey how grateful I am to your generous help. 语言无法表达我对你的感激之情。 2. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London. 我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。 3. 1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help. 我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。 4. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you. 为此，我写这封信是为了表达我 5. 1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help. 我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助. 6. It was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister. 谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。 7. 1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me. 我很感谢你为我所做的一切。 8. 1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help. 我想感谢你的帮助。 段中常用语 1. Without/But for your help(If it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English. 要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。 2.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor. 我太感谢你的帮助了。 3. Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English. 多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。 4. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. 在你的专业指导下，我在英语方面取得了令人难以置信的进步。在你的专业指导下，我在英语方面取得了令人难以置信的进步。 5. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. 每当我遇到困难时，你总是让我高兴起来，帮助我摆脱困境，这激发了我对英语的热情，也促进了我重新获得极大的信心。 尾段常用语 1. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. 我要再次向您表示衷心的感谢！请接受我的感激。 2. Thanks again for helping me. 再次感谢你对我的帮助。 3. Thank you again for your generous help. 再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。 4. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks. 如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。 5. Your kindness and help will always be remembered. 我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。 5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality． 我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。 6. Words fail to express my gratitude for your help and support. Your generous assistance has not only improved my writing skills, but also stimulated my enthusiasm and confidence in English learning. 语言无法表达我对你的感谢。你的慷慨帮助不仅提高了我的写作技巧，也激发了我对英语学习的热情和信心。 ( 高考真题精讲 ) 1.（2019年浙江卷） 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3. 临别祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Alex, Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help. Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。 【详解】 1. 审题立意 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。 2.谋篇布局 书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。 3. 关键词和句子 根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。 【点睛】 本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。 高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等； 高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。 2.（2009·山东·高考真题）假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith，但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信： 1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助； 2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式； 3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。 注意：1. 词数120-150； 2. 可适当增加细节。 【答案】 Dear Tom, I am now back China and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory. I have been missing our English professor, Mr. Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me. What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available. So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox? I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship. You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances, which is extremely exciting. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home. With my best regards!Yours cordially, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同学Tom写一封信，询问老师Mr. Smith的联系方式。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：convey→express 此外：Additionally→What’s more 渴望：desire to→be eager to 一定：be bound to→be sure to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available. 拓展句：I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability, but his email address is not available. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句） ( 名校模拟提升 ) 1．（2024·河南·模拟预测）假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 难忘的一件事； 3. 你的祝福。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Miss Gao, I would like to write a letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for tomorrow’s Teachers’ Day. I remember one Monday I was reading in class when my stomach hurt. Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. You are a reliable teacher. I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life. Happy Teachers’ Day and wish you success in work and good health. Your student, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的英语老师写一封感恩信，介绍自己最难忘的一件事，并表达祝福。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感谢：gratitude→thankfulness 立刻：immediately→right away 买：buy→purchase 照顾：take care of→look after 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. 拓展句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore which was next to the school to buy me some medicine. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) 2．（2024·辽宁辽阳·模拟预测）假定你是校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人李华，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1．感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议; 2．希望有机会再次来节目做客。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, “Live in China”. Your insightful comments and valuable suggestions made for a truly memorable interview. The response from our listeners was overwhelmingly positive, and many have expressed their appreciation for your participation and the depth of your insight. We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your experiences and knowledge with our community. We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the future. Your insights and perspectives would be a valuable addition to our discussions. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好这一情况，给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 见解：insights→ opinion 建议：suggestions→ advice 高兴的：delighted→ happy 宝贵的：valuable→ precious 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, “Live in China”.. 拓展句：I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, whose theme is “Live in China”.. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your experiences and knowledge with our community.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式to do作后置定语修饰willingness。） 【高分句型2】We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the future.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。） 3．（2024·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括： 1. 感谢邀请； 2. 作品简介。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition themed on Amazing Nature! I’d like to attend it and here briefly introduce my work. In line with the theme, I will create a traditional Chinese painting featuring my picturesque hometown. Trees and flowers will be highlighted with bright and vivid colors. The spectacular mountains and the crystal water are certain to impress you. When observing the painting, you will also be amazed at the achievements that have been made in sustainable development. Please let me know if you need any further details. Thanks again for this opportunity. Yours sincerely, Li Hua One possible version 2 Dear Peter, I am delighted to accept your invitation to the art exhibition themed “Amazing Nature”. Thank you for the fantastic opportunity and I am writing to give you a brief introduction of my work. The painting I created features the harmony of natural world. I am an enthusiast of both nature and art; therefore, my works are often full of elements of nature. You will be deeply impressed by the peaceful landscapes, elegant birds and delicate flowers in the paining, which is in line with the theme. Thanks again for the opportunity to demonstrate my passion for art and nature. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。要求考生给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：attend→participate in 给人印象深刻：impress→make an impression on 对……感到惊奇：be amazed at→be astonished at 感激：thank→appreciate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition themed on Amazing Nature! 拓展句：Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition which is themed on Amazing Nature! 【点睛】【高分句型1】When observing the painting, you will also be amazed at the achievements that have been made in sustainable development.（运用了状语从句的省略，that引导定语从句） 【高分句型2】Please let me know if you need any further details.（运用了条件状语从句） 4．（2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 介绍赛前准备。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, Thanks for your letter and for your question as well. Now I am delighted to share with you more details about the mini-marathon. Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. Be careful to avoid injury. Besides, you should stay confident and keep a good mood. As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. I think you can enter the one next year. Looking forward to your participation. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生向英国朋友Chris写信感谢他向你在学校迷你马拉松中获奖表达的祝贺，并介绍相关情况。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴：delighted→pleased 重要的：important→significant 避免：avoid→prevent 自信：confident→assertive 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. 拓展句：Before the race, it is important that we should practice running and do some physical training every day. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. (运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. (运用了it作形式主语) 5．（2024·山东菏泽·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国好友John给你寄来了春节礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 告知已收到礼物； 2. 收到礼物的感受； 3. 表示感谢。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear John, How’s everything going? I’m glad to tell you that I have received your gift for the Spring Festival. You can’t imagine how excited I was when I opened the package and saw the original English novel that I had dreamed of owing. I couldn’t believe my eyes even when I touched the fresh cover of the book. I was so eager to delve into the story that I stayed up the whole night reading some chapters, which was really engaging. I can’t love the gift enough and I’m deeply grateful for your kindness. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给英国好友John写封邮件，感谢他寄来的春节礼物。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 激动的：excited→ thrilled 有趣的：engaging→entertaining 感激的：grateful→ thankful 2.句式拓展 陈述句变倒装句 原句：I was so eager to delve into the story that I stayed up the whole night reading some chapters, which was really engaging. 拓展句：So eager was I to delve into the story that I stayed up the whole night reading some chapters, which was really engaging. 【点睛】【高分句型1】You can’t imagine how excited I was when I opened the package and saw the original English novel that I had dreamed of owing.（运用了how引导的宾语从句、when引导的时间状语从句以及that引导的限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】I was so eager to delve into the story that I stayed up the whole night reading some chapters, which was really engaging.（运用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句以及which引导的非限定性定语从句） 6．（2024·江西南昌·三模）假如你是国际交流学生Jim，学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下： 1. 成长与收获； 2. 表达感恩； 3. 继续努力。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear dad and mom, How time flies! Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. During these years, I gradually gained a lot of confidence from your companion and encouragement, and I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me. Dad and mom, I will spare no effort to pursue my dream and try my best to live up to your expectation. Love you forever! Yours loving boy, Jim 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，要求考生写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下：1. 成长与收获；2. 表达感恩；3. 继续努力。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 获得：gain→obtain 激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth. 感激的：grateful→appreciative 此外：what’s more→in addition 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. 拓展句：So I’m writing this letter so that I can convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born.(运用了what引导宾语从句，since引导时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 7．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教Mr Potter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢，内容包括： 1.对老师的辛勤工作表示感谢； 2.感谢老师对自己的教导和帮助； 3.表达对老师的祝愿。 注意：1.可适当补充信息，以使行文连贯； 2.词数为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Mr Potter, I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. Firstly, I’d like to express my gratitude for your excellent teaching and your care as well as love for me! It’s you who cheered me up. Never will I forget what you said — doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instructions. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you all the best! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教Mr Potter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感激：gratitude→thankfulness 表达：express→extend 高兴的：glad→delighted 快乐：happiness→joy 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instructions. 拓展句：I really appreciate your instructions because without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Never will I forget what you said — doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. (运用了否定词Never置于句首引起的部分倒装以及what引导的宾语从句) 8．（2024·河北承德·二模）假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.目前状况及感谢； 2.介绍健身计划。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Oliver, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Oliver, This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor. It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence. I feel warm to have friends like you. Spring has arrived. A year’s plan lies in spring. I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said. Firstly, participate in more outdoor activities and breathe fresh air. Secondly, handle the relationship between learning and health correctly, and emphasize the role of physical health in learning. In the future, I will continue to communicate with you about this situation. I also wish you better health. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好，你的网友Oliver时常关心着你”这一情况，用英语写一封回复邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 缺乏：lacked→ was short of 增强，提升：strengthened → enhanced 参加：participate in→ take part in 强调：emphasize→ stress 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor. 拓展句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, which led to my physical condition poor. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence.（运用了It is…that…的强调句式。） 【高分句型2】I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said.（运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句。） 9．（2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享获奖的喜悦； 2. 感谢他的帮助； 3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week! This accomplishment is undoubtedly a result of your invaluable assistance. Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. I really appreciate your help. To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit. It would be a pleasure to have you as my guest and to thank you in person for all your help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Peter写封邮件，告诉他在上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，同时感谢他的帮助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→ excited 帮助：assistance→ help 至关重要的：crucial→ vital 感谢：appreciate→ thank 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. 拓展句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial, which helped me prepare for the competition. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week!（运用了从属连词that引导的宾语从句。） 【高分句型2】To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式To express作目的状语。） 10．（2024·北京朝阳·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校这学期进行了一系列的英语讲座，上周邀请外教Jim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表达感谢并说明原因； 2.建议下周讲解的内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on English vocabulary learning. I’ve learnt really a lot from the lecture, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck of vocabulary memorization. However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in reading, especially when it comes to strange words. For example, I find it hard to guess the unfamiliar words when reading. Would you please give me some advice? Would you give a speech about the use of different words in different contexts next week? I would be really grateful if you could help me out. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校这学期进行了一系列的英语讲座，上周邀请外教Jim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座，请考生给他写一封邮件，表达感谢并说明原因并建议下周讲解的内容。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth. 克服：overcome→get over 困惑的：puzzled→confused 建议：advice→suggestion 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：For example, I find it hard to guess the unfamiliar words when reading. 拓展句：For example, I find that it is hard to guess the unfamiliar words when reading. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on English vocabulary learning. 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