09.必修第一册Unit 5 Into the wild(介绍动物)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 5 Into the wild 单元写作深度指导 如何介绍动物 单元话题 考题展示 介绍动物 （21-22高二下·全国·单元测试）假定你是李华，你校英语报“Iconic Animals”栏目正在征文。请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍某个国家或地区的标志性动物。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Each country has its own iconic animals. The brown eared pheasant is a precious species in China. It mainly lives in the forests of North China. It has a beautiful appearance with a black brown head and back. Brown eared pheasants are good at running because of their strong legs. They like living in groups and mainly feed on leaves and berries. In recent years, the number of brown eared pheasants has greatly decreased because of human activities. Fortunately, measures have been taken to protect this valuable species. 动物介绍类英语写作是一种专门用于描述和阐述动物特征、‌习性以及与人类关系的文体。‌在写作时，‌作者会注重展现动物的外貌特征、‌行为习性、‌生活环境以及它们与人类之间的互动和关系。‌通过这种写作，‌读者可以更深入地了解动物的多样性和它们在人类生活中的重要性。‌同时，‌这类写作也常常用于科普教育、‌动物保护宣传等领域，‌旨在提高公众对动物的认识和保护意识。‌‌ 考向分析与应对策略 高中英语写作中，‌介绍动物类的文章通常需要关注以下几点：‌ 1.‌生动描述‌：‌使用形象的语言和生动的细节来描述动物的外观、‌行为或习性，‌使读者能够仿佛亲眼看到或感受到所描述的动物。‌ 2.‌准确用词‌：‌选择准确、‌具体的词汇来描绘动物的特征，‌避免使用模糊或泛泛之词，‌以增强描述的真实性和精确性。‌ 3.‌结构清晰‌：‌文章通常遵循清晰的段落结构，‌如开头引入动物、‌中间详细描述其特征和行为，‌以及结尾总结或提出保护建议。‌ 4.‌融入情感‌：‌在描述中融入对动物的喜爱、‌同情或敬畏等情感，‌使文章更具感染力和吸引力。‌ 5.‌使用修辞手法‌：‌运用比喻、‌拟人等修辞手法来增强语言的表现力和趣味性，‌使文章更加生动有趣。‌ 6.‌关注细节‌：‌注重描述动物的独特细节，‌如特殊的身体结构、‌行为习性或生活环境，‌以展现其独特性和多样性。‌ 7.‌教育意义‌：‌在介绍动物的同时，‌可以融入保护野生动物、‌生态平衡等教育意义，‌提升文章的深度和价值。‌ 8.‌语言多样性‌：‌使用多样的句式和词汇来丰富文章内容，‌避免单调和重复，‌使文章更加流畅和有趣。‌ 　介绍一种动物, 需要学会从哪些方面来描述。可以是具体的动物特征, 习性的描写, 也可以是某种动物的生存现状或者历史的表达。。 I.话题词汇 ①movement　 活动 ②mass 大量的 ③amazing 惊人的 ④awareness 认识 ⑤survive 活下来 ⑥observe 观察 ⑦magical 奇妙的 ⑧such as 例如 ⑨in fact(as a matter of fact/in effect/actually) 事实上 II. 话题句式(试着替换方框中的黑体部分, 变成你需要表达的意思) (1)描述动物: ①There are many animals in nature. 自然界有许多动物。 ②The monkey is one of the most intelligent animals in the wild. 猴子是野生世界最聪明的动物之一。 ③Most of the movements of monkeys are in the tree. 猴子多数的活动都在树上。 ④The jumping ability of monkey is amazing to human beings. 猴子的跳跃能力是非常惊人的。 (2)表达观点: ①We should be aware of the importance of protecting wildlife. 我们应该意识到保护野生动物的重要性。 ②In fact, they are an important part of nature. 事实上, 它们是自然界重要的一部分。 ③No one can deny/doubt that protecting the animals is helpful to us humans as well. 没人能够否认/怀疑, 保护动物同样有利于人类自己。 III.模版框架 An animal fact file 根据下列内容, 写一篇有关濒危动物——金丝猴的短文。 1. 外貌: 金黄色或者灰色; 尾巴几乎和身体一样长。 2. 栖息地: 主要在中国, 海拔在1 500—3 300 米的森林中。 3. 生活习性: 群居, 吃树叶、果子。 4. 濒危动物, 呼吁大家保护金丝猴。 注意: 词数80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作分析】 [结构建构] [激活表达] 1. 金丝猴是一种可爱的动物。 The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal.   2. 它们的毛是金黄色或灰色的。 Their fur is golden or gray.   3. 它们居住在森林里。 They live in the forests.   4. 处于海拔1 500—3 300米的地方。 The altitude is 1, 500—3, 300 metres high.   5. 我们的政府已经建立了一些自然保护区来保护它们。 Our government has set up some nature reserves to protect them.   6. 越来越多的人意识到保护它们的重要性。 More and more people realize the importance of protecting them.   7. 用whose引导的定语从句改写句1和句2。 The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal, whose fur is golden or gray.   8. 用where引导的定语从句改写句3和句4。 They live in the forests, where the altitude is 1, 500—3, 300 metres high.   9. 用with的复合结构合并句5和句6。 With our government setting up some nature reserves, more and more people realize the importance of protecting them.   [衔接成篇] ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] 　　The golden monkey is a kind of lovely animal, whose fur is golden or gray. Their tails are almost as long as their bodies. Golden monkeys mainly live in China. They live in the forests, where the altitude is 1, 500—3, 300 metres high. Besides, they like to live in groups and eat fruit, tree leaves, and so on. Nowadays, the number of the golden monkey is decreasing. So our government has taken measures to control this. With our government setting up some nature reserves, more and more people realize the importance of protecting them. It’s time for every one of us to take immediate action to preserve golden monkeys. 一、单句翻译 1.如果你砍伐幼树,你会受到惩罚。 If you cut down the young trees, you will be punished.  2.不要相信广告,毕竟还是顾客买单。 Don’t believe the advertisement. After all, it is the customers who pay for whatever they are given.  3.欲速则不达。 The more you hurry, the less progress you are likely to make.  4.他热泪盈眶,感谢我们让他的儿子活了下来。 With tears welling up in his eyes, he thanked us for keeping his son alive.  5.我能在这里讲这个故事是因为我想鼓励他人继续前行。 The reason why I’m here to tell the story is that I want to encourage others to move on.  二、语篇翻译 [翻译句子] 1.一些动物的数量急剧下降,因为人们杀死了它们,破坏了它们的栖息地。(crash, destroy) 2.因此,我们应该采取措施让它们幸存下来。(measure, survive) 3.提高人们保护野生动物的意识,严惩捕杀野生动物的人。(awareness, who) 4.应该建立更多的自然保护区。(found) 5.我希望更多有决心的志愿者能够参与进来,希望政府能够想出更好的办法来增加野生动物的数量。(determined, solution) 6.越早越好。(the+比较级,the+比较级) [衔接成篇] ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] The number of some animals has crashed because people kill them and destroy their habitats.Therefore, we are supposed to take measures to make them survive. First, raise people’s awareness of protecting wild animals and seriously punish those who hunt or kill them. Besides, more natural reserves should be founded. I hope more determined volunteers will take part and that the government will think of more good solutions to increasing the population of wild animals. The sooner, the better. 三．书面表达 某动物保护组织就某些动物濒临灭绝的原因进行了调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一份调查报告，描述调查情况，谈谈自己的观点，并就此提出解决的建议。 濒危原因 比例 例子 物种自身发展不适被淘汰 10% 大熊猫等 栖息地遭破坏 20% 鱼类、鸟类等 人类乱捕滥猎 50% 兽类、鸟类等 工农业生产污染环境 10% 鸟类、鱼类等 自然灾害 10% 1998年南方洪灾等 注意：1.词数80词左右； 2. 文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Recently a survey about the reasons for the animals’ dying out has been carried by a wildlife protection organization. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Recently a survey about the reasons for the animals’ dying out has been carried out by a wildlife protection organization. The result shows that about half of the animals’dying out results from unplanned hunting performed by human beings. About 20 percent is caused by the losing of their habitats. Some species such as pandas cannot adapt to the changing environment, while others die out because of the pollution caused by agriculture and industry. Besides, natural disaster, such as the flood which happened in South China in 1998, also make many species disappear. In my opinion, we should take an active part in preventing the animals from dying out. The government should get tough with those who destroy nature or kill precious animals illegally. Meanwhile, we can set up more reserves to protect the valuable species. （2023·四川·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校将以“保护野生动物”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.野生动物的现状； 2.保护野生动物的重要性； 3.保护野生动物的措施。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 As is known to us, some wild animals are in serious trouble nowadays, whose habitats are being destroyed. To make it worse, the population of some animals has crashed sharply due to many factors, like climate change, disasters as well as human activities. However, it’s of significance for us to protect wild animals because they are not only essential part of the living environment where humans live in, but also important natural resources. Therefore, it’s high time that immediate action should be taken to work out the issue. On the one hand, our government should make laws and regulations to protect them. On the other hand, nature reserves should be set up to make sure they have a safe habitat. The last but not least, the public awareness of protecting the wild animals should be further improved. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“保护野生动物”为主题写一篇英语短文投稿。 【要点详解】 1.词汇积累 破坏：destroy→ruin 确保：make sure→ensure 因为：due to→because of 必要的：essential→necessary 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：On the one hand, our government should make laws and regulations to protect them. On the other hand, nature reserves should be set up to make sure they have a safe habitat. 拓展句：Not only should our government should make laws and regulations to protect them, but also nature reserves should be set up to make sure they have a safe habitat. [高分句型1] As is known to us, some wild animals are in serious trouble nowadays, whose habitats are being destroyed. (运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] However, it’s of significance for us to protect wild animals because they are not only essential part of the living environment where humans live in, but also important natural resources. (运用了because引导原因状语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 5 Into the wild 单元写作深度指导 如何介绍动物 单元话题 考题展示 介绍动物 （21-22高二下·全国·单元测试）假定你是李华，你校英语报“Iconic Animals”栏目正在征文。请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍某个国家或地区的标志性动物。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Each country has its own iconic animals. The brown eared pheasant is a precious species in China. It mainly lives in the forests of North China. It has a beautiful appearance with a black brown head and back. Brown eared pheasants are good at running because of their strong legs. They like living in groups and mainly feed on leaves and berries. In recent years, the number of brown eared pheasants has greatly decreased because of human activities. Fortunately, measures have been taken to protect this valuable species. 动物介绍类英语写作是一种专门用于描述和阐述动物特征、‌习性以及与人类关系的文体。‌在写作时，‌作者会注重展现动物的外貌特征、‌行为习性、‌生活环境以及它们与人类之间的互动和关系。‌通过这种写作，‌读者可以更深入地了解动物的多样性和它们在人类生活中的重要性。‌同时，‌这类写作也常常用于科普教育、‌动物保护宣传等领域，‌旨在提高公众对动物的认识和保护意识。‌‌ 考向分析与应对策略 高中英语写作中，‌介绍动物类的文章通常需要关注以下几点：‌ 1.‌生动描述‌：‌使用形象的语言和生动的细节来描述动物的外观、‌行为或习性，‌使读者能够仿佛亲眼看到或感受到所描述的动物。‌ 2.‌准确用词‌：‌选择准确、‌具体的词汇来描绘动物的特征，‌避免使用模糊或泛泛之词，‌以增强描述的真实性和精确性。‌ 3.‌结构清晰‌：‌文章通常遵循清晰的段落结构，‌如开头引入动物、‌中间详细描述其特征和行为，‌以及结尾总结或提出保护建议。‌ 4.‌融入情感‌：‌在描述中融入对动物的喜爱、‌同情或敬畏等情感，‌使文章更具感染力和吸引力。‌ 5.‌使用修辞手法‌：‌运用比喻、‌拟人等修辞手法来增强语言的表现力和趣味性，‌使文章更加生动有趣。‌ 6.‌关注细节‌：‌注重描述动物的独特细节，‌如特殊的身体结构、‌行为习性或生活环境，‌以展现其独特性和多样性。‌ 7.‌教育意义‌：‌在介绍动物的同时，‌可以融入保护野生动物、‌生态平衡等教育意义，‌提升文章的深度和价值。‌ 8.‌语言多样性‌：‌使用多样的句式和词汇来丰富文章内容，‌避免单调和重复，‌使文章更加流畅和有趣。‌ 　介绍一种动物, 需要学会从哪些方面来描述。可以是具体的动物特征, 习性的描写, 也可以是某种动物的生存现状或者历史的表达。。 I.话题词汇 ①movement　 活动 ②mass 大量的 ③amazing 惊人的 ④awareness 认识 ⑤survive 活下来 ⑥observe 观察 ⑦magical 奇妙的 ⑧such as 例如 ⑨in fact(as a matter of fact/in effect/actually) 事实上 II. 话题句式(试着替换方框中的黑体部分, 变成你需要表达的意思) (1)描述动物: ①There are many animals in nature. 自然界有许多动物。 ②The monkey is one of the most intelligent animals in the wild. 猴子是野生世界最聪明的动物之一。 ③Most of the movements of monkeys are in the tree. 猴子多数的活动都在树上。 ④The jumping ability of monkey is amazing to human beings. 猴子的跳跃能力是非常惊人的。 (2)表达观点: ①We should be aware of the importance of protecting wildlife. 我们应该意识到保护野生动物的重要性。 ②In fact, they are an important part of nature. 事实上, 它们是自然界重要的一部分。 ③No one can deny/doubt that protecting the animals is helpful to us humans as well. 没人能够否认/怀疑, 保护动物同样有利于人类自己。 III.模版框架 An animal fact file 根据下列内容, 写一篇有关濒危动物——金丝猴的短文。 1. 外貌: 金黄色或者灰色; 尾巴几乎和身体一样长。 2. 栖息地: 主要在中国, 海拔在1 500—3 300 米的森林中。 3. 生活习性: 群居, 吃树叶、果子。 4. 濒危动物, 呼吁大家保护金丝猴。 注意: 词数80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作分析】 [结构建构] [激活表达] 1. 金丝猴是一种可爱的动物。 The golden monkey is ______________________.   2. 它们的毛是金黄色或灰色的。 Their fur ______________________.   3. 它们居住在森林里。 ______________________ 4. 处于海拔1 500—3 300米的地方。 The altitude ______________________.   5. 我们的政府已经建立了一些自然保护区来保护它们。 Our government ______________________.   6. 越来越多的人意识到保护它们的重要性。 More and more people ______________________.   7. 用whose引导的定语从句改写句1和句2。 ______________________ 8. 用where引导的定语从句改写句3和句4。 ______________________ 9. 用with的复合结构合并句5和句6。 ______________________ [衔接成篇] ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、单句翻译 1.如果你砍伐幼树,你会受到惩罚。 If you ______________________ the young trees, you will be punished.  2.不要相信广告,毕竟还是顾客买单。 Don’t believe the advertisement. ______________________, ______________________ who pay for whatever they are given.  3.欲速则不达。 ______________________ you hurry, ______________________ you are likely to make.  4.他热泪盈眶,感谢我们让他的儿子活了下来。 With ______________________, he thanked us for keeping his son alive.  5.我能在这里讲这个故事是因为我想鼓励他人继续前行。 ______________________ is that I want to encourage others to move on.  二、语篇翻译 [翻译句子] 1.一些动物的数量急剧下降,因为人们杀死了它们,破坏了它们的栖息地。(crash, destroy) 2.因此,我们应该采取措施让它们幸存下来。(measure, survive) 3.提高人们保护野生动物的意识,严惩捕杀野生动物的人。(awareness, who) 4.应该建立更多的自然保护区。(found) 5.我希望更多有决心的志愿者能够参与进来,希望政府能够想出更好的办法来增加野生动物的数量。(determined, solution) 6.越早越好。(the+比较级,the+比较级) [衔接成篇] ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．书面表达 某动物保护组织就某些动物濒临灭绝的原因进行了调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一份调查报告，描述调查情况，谈谈自己的观点，并就此提出解决的建议。 濒危原因 比例 例子 物种自身发展不适被淘汰 10% 大熊猫等 栖息地遭破坏 20% 鱼类、鸟类等 人类乱捕滥猎 50% 兽类、鸟类等 工农业生产污染环境 10% 鸟类、鱼类等 自然灾害 10% 1998年南方洪灾等 注意：1.词数80词左右； 2. 文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Recently a survey about the reasons for the animals’ dying out has been carried by a wildlife protection organization. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023·四川·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校将以“保护野生动物”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.野生动物的现状； 2.保护野生动物的重要性； 3.保护野生动物的措施。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$