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专题02应用文--申请信
-----三段式满分作文速成
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近三年考情分析
)
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024
新高考I&II卷
分享公园美术课的感想
邮件
全国甲卷
看图作文中国交通运输业的发展
发言稿
浙江卷月
向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿
投稿
2023
新高考I&II卷
给外教写邮件,告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议
建议信
全国甲卷
“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动
提纲类
全国乙卷
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及中获得的体验和感受。
提纲类
浙江卷1月
为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道
报道
2022
新高考I&II卷
校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈
邀请信
全国甲卷
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
英语学习方式的调查
提纲类
北京卷
邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。
提纲类
天津卷
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
浙江卷6月
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,邀请外国留学生一同体验。
提纲类
浙江卷1月
给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获
提纲类
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写作方法指导
)
首段:自我介绍、点明写作目的(1-2句话)不要写多,在20字左右,两行左右即可。
段中:展开申请理由。(摆明自己的优势。逻辑清晰。分条目如,To begin with; moreover/Additionally/Apart from these,)
段尾:重申主题意义或直接再次发出邀请或表达期盼。
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万能写作模板1
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Dear_________(称呼),
(自我价绍)I'm a student taking summer courses in London now.Learning volunteers are needed for Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery. I can't wait to apply for the position.
(优势1)Firstly, my fluent English enables me to communicate smoothly with British painting lovers. Moreover , with a wide knowledge of Chinese painting,I can introduce the art form better. (优势2)Better yet , I've participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with related experience (优势3)
(表明决心)If accepted , I will spare no effort to introduce those paintings on display and answer questions patiently .I'd appreciate it if you could consider my application .
Best regards,
(
万能写作模板2
)Li hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in________________________(报纸/网站名称) of________________________(广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but also I have the right personality for a ______________ (工作名称). On one hand, _____________________(第一个原因). On the other hand, ______________________(另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at________________________(电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
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留学生_____________________
有做某事的愿望_____________________
很高兴做某事_____________________
申请_____________________
坚信_____________________
目的是_____________________
有强烈的责任心_____________________
有相关经验_____________________
独立处理突发事件_____________________
乐观热情_____________________
特别擅长_____________________
和睦相处_____________________
具有/拥有良好的掌握能力_____________________
被选为_____________________
伸出援助之手_____________________
参与_____________________
不负所望_____________________
超越您的期望_____________________
(
句式积累
)
首段常用语
1. I am ... , a Chinese student
我是......,一名 ......的中国学生。
2. I am Li Hua, a high school graduate. Knowing that your company offers several summer part time jobs, I am writing to apply for one of them.
我是李华,一名高中毕业生。得知贵公司提供几个暑期兼职工作,我写信申请其中一个。
3. I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition, so I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer. 我想为展览做一些志愿工作,所以写信申请志愿者的职位。
4. I am Li Hua, a Grade 2 student. Getting the news that you will select five excellent students as exchange students to study abroad, I’m writing to apply to be one of them.
我是李华,一名二年级的学生。得知贵校将选择五名优秀学生作为交换生出国留学,我写信申请成为其中一员。
段中常用语
1. To begin with, I have a good command of English and I am familiar with ...
首先,我精通英语并且熟悉......
2.I have a good knowledge of English, enabling me to communicate with others well.
我精通英语,这使我能够很好地与他人交流。
3.I am easy-going and have strong team spirit, which helps me to get along well with others.
我性格随和,有很强的团队精神,这有助于我与他人友好相处。
5. The reasons why I apply for this position are as follows. For one thing, I can communicate with others in English. For another, I am a brilliant organizer. In addition, I master related knowledge well.
我申请这个职位的原因如下。一方面,我可以用英语和别人交流。另一方面,我是一个出色的组织者。此外,我还掌握了相关知识。
6. To begin with, I speak fluent English. Moreover, I am outgoing. Last but not least, I once participated in similar activities, making me experienced.
首先,我能说流利的英语。此外,我很外向。最后但并非最不重要的是,我曾经参加过类似的活动,让我经验丰富。
尾段常用语
1. Given the precious chance, I hold the firm belief that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.
如果能够得到这个宝贵的机会,我坚信我可以完美地达到您的期望。
2. I am convinced that I am suitable for this job/position/occupation.
我相信我很适合做这份工作。
3. I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration and give me the chance to win the scholarship.
如果你能好好考虑一下,给我一个机会赢得奖学金,我将不胜感激.
4. All in all, these qualities will make me a qualified volunteer.
总之,这些品质将使我成为一名合格的志愿者。
8. I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration and give me the chance to win the scholarship.
如果您能给予我考虑,给我这个获得奖学金的机会,我将不胜感激
9. I would be very much grateful if you would give me a kind consideration / take me into consideration.
如果您能考虑一下我,我将不胜感激
10. I shall be much thankful if I am offered a precious opportunity for an interview.
如果能给我一次宝贵的面试机会,我将不胜感激.
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高考真题精讲
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1.【2023·天津卷】假设你是李津,作为交换生在英国的学校学习。学校要办一个叫 Chinese Workshop 的活动以促进中英文化交流。活动内容包括中国美食、手工艺品和书法。其中有个环节还要求参与者教别人做中国传统的东西。
请描述这项活动的意义,并申请参加此次活动,阐述你所参加的活动内容及想法。
注意 :1.词数不少于 100 ;2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.【2019·全国·高考真题】假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势;
3. 能做的事情。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 结束语已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 【2010·天津·高考真题】
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信:
● 对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生级社会的益处等)
●个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)
●你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
4.【2018·浙江·高考真题】假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:
(1) 口语能力:
(2) 相关经验;
(3) 应聘目的。注意:
(1) 词数80左右;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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名校模拟提升
)
1.(2024·重庆·模拟预测)假定你是李华,现就读于一所国际学校,打算向校学生会申请成立一个社团。请给学生会主席写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 社团的类型;
2. 社团的活动计划和目的;
3. 希望获得批准。
注意: 1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear President,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
2.(23-24高三下·重庆涪陵·阶段练习)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地博物馆正在展出来中国的文物。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的:
2.个人优势:
3.能做的事情。
注意: 1.词数 100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(23-24高三下·四川泸州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校下周将邀请英国友人来校参观,需要志愿者介绍你校的历史和现状。请你写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.申请原因;
2.你的优势。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4.(2024·山西晋中·模拟预测)假定你是李华,正在美国留学,得知校街舞社团将组建团队参加市中学生街舞表演,你想报名参加本次活动。请你给活动指导老师Alice写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.自我介绍;2.询问活动相关信息;3.表达意愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2024·湖南娄底·一模)假定你是李华,你打算在暑假期间为来华的外国游客当导游。请给某旅游公司写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你为外国游客当导游的申请;
2.你为外国游客当导游的优势;
3.你为外国游客当导游的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
6.(23-24高三下·天津南开·开学考试)最近中学生英文网站Student Post为了纳新,面向全市招聘中学生英文记者。假设你是晨光中学的李津。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)应聘本地新闻(local events)记者一职;
(2)个人基本情况、相关特长;
(3)你做出该决定的具体理由。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I am writing to apply for a position at Student Post, which I saw advertsed in the school newspaper last week.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
7.(23-24高三上·河北沧州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校外教Tracy正在招募英语好的同学协助开办英语角,请你给Tracy写一封申请信。内容包括:
(1)写信目的;
(2)你的条件;
(3)表达愿望。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tracy,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
8.(23-24高三下·海南省直辖县级单位·开学考试)假设你是李华,在英国的一所学校做交换生。最近你在学校公告栏上获悉当地社区拟招聘一名中文志愿者。请你给负责人Tom写一封电子邮件,申请此职位,内容包括:
(1)提出申请;(2)个人优势;(3)表达希望。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2024·全国·一模)假定你是李华,你校寒假期间将有一批来访的英国学生,需招募志愿者帮助完成接待工作。学校委托外教布朗先生负责招募。请给布朗先生写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 申请成为志愿者;
2. 自身优势。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10.(23-24高三上·江苏泰州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,最近你从校英文报上得知该报正在招募兼职编辑。请你给招聘负责人Mr. Brown写一封求职信。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 说明自己的竞争优势;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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专题02应用文--申请信
-----三段式满分作文速成
(
近三年考情分析
)
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024
新高考I&II卷
分享公园美术课的感想
邮件
全国甲卷
看图作文中国交通运输业的发展
发言稿
浙江卷月
向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿
投稿
2023
新高考I&II卷
给外教写邮件,告诉学生随机分组练口语的建议
建议信
全国甲卷
“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动
提纲类
全国乙卷
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及中获得的体验和感受。
提纲类
浙江卷1月
为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道
报道
2022
新高考I&II卷
校广播站“Talk and Talk”节目的负责人给外写邮件邀请做访谈
邀请信
全国甲卷
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
英语学习方式的调查
提纲类
北京卷
邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的线上经验交流。
提纲类
天津卷
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
浙江卷6月
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,邀请外国留学生一同体验。
提纲类
浙江卷1月
给爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件回忆活动经历并分享个人收获
提纲类
(
写作方法指导
)
首段:自我介绍、点明写作目的(1-2句话)不要写多,在20字左右,两行左右即可。
段中:展开申请理由。(摆明自己的优势。逻辑清晰。分条目如,To begin with; moreover/Additionally/Apart from these,)
段尾:重申主题意义或直接再次发出邀请或表达期盼。
(
万能写作模板1
)
Dear_________(称呼),
(自我价绍)I'm a student taking summer courses in London now.Learning volunteers are needed for Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery. I can't wait to apply for the position.
(优势1)Firstly, my fluent English enables me to communicate smoothly with British painting lovers. Moreover , with a wide knowledge of Chinese painting,I can introduce the art form better. (优势2)Better yet , I've participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with related experience (优势3)
(表明决心)If accepted , I will spare no effort to introduce those paintings on display and answer questions patiently .I'd appreciate it if you could consider my application .
Best regards,
(
万能写作模板2
)Li hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in________________________(报纸/网站名称) of________________________(广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but also I have the right personality for a ______________ (工作名称). On one hand, _____________________(第一个原因). On the other hand, ______________________(另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at________________________(电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
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词汇积累
)
(
4
)原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!
(
3
)原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
an exchange student 留学生
have a desire to do sth. 有做某事的愿望
be thrilled to do sth. 很高兴做某事
apply for 申请
hold the strong belief that 坚信
with the intention of 目的是
have a strong sense of responsibility 有强烈的责任心
have previous experience in 有相关经验
deal with emergencies independently 独立处理突发事件
optimistic and warmhearted 乐观热情
be particularly skilled in 特别擅长
get along well with 和睦相处
have/ possess a good command of 具有/拥有良好的掌握能力
be elected as 被选为
lend a helping hand 伸出援助之手
participate in 参与
live up to one’s expectations 不负所望
surpass your expectation 超越您的期望
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句式积累
)
首段常用语
1. I am ... , a Chinese student
我是......,一名 ......的中国学生。
2. I am Li Hua, a high school graduate. Knowing that your company offers several summer part time jobs, I am writing to apply for one of them.
我是李华,一名高中毕业生。得知贵公司提供几个暑期兼职工作,我写信申请其中一个。
3. I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition, so I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer. 我想为展览做一些志愿工作,所以写信申请志愿者的职位。
4. I am Li Hua, a Grade 2 student. Getting the news that you will select five excellent students as exchange students to study abroad, I’m writing to apply to be one of them.
我是李华,一名二年级的学生。得知贵校将选择五名优秀学生作为交换生出国留学,我写信申请成为其中一员。
段中常用语
1. To begin with, I have a good command of English and I am familiar with ...
首先,我精通英语并且熟悉......
2.I have a good knowledge of English, enabling me to communicate with others well.
我精通英语,这使我能够很好地与他人交流。
3.I am easy-going and have strong team spirit, which helps me to get along well with others.
我性格随和,有很强的团队精神,这有助于我与他人友好相处。
5. The reasons why I apply for this position are as follows. For one thing, I can communicate with others in English. For another, I am a brilliant organizer. In addition, I master related knowledge well.
我申请这个职位的原因如下。一方面,我可以用英语和别人交流。另一方面,我是一个出色的组织者。此外,我还掌握了相关知识。
6. To begin with, I speak fluent English. Moreover, I am outgoing. Last but not least, I once participated in similar activities, making me experienced.
首先,我能说流利的英语。此外,我很外向。最后但并非最不重要的是,我曾经参加过类似的活动,让我经验丰富。
尾段常用语
1. Given the precious chance, I hold the firm belief that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.
如果能够得到这个宝贵的机会,我坚信我可以完美地达到您的期望。
2. I am convinced that I am suitable for this job/position/occupation.
我相信我很适合做这份工作。
3. I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration and give me the chance to win the scholarship.
如果你能好好考虑一下,给我一个机会赢得奖学金,我将不胜感激.
4. All in all, these qualities will make me a qualified volunteer.
总之,这些品质将使我成为一名合格的志愿者。
8. I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration and give me the chance to win the scholarship.
如果您能给予我考虑,给我这个获得奖学金的机会,我将不胜感激
9. I would be very much grateful if you would give me a kind consideration / take me into consideration.
如果您能考虑一下我,我将不胜感激
10. I shall be much thankful if I am offered a precious opportunity for an interview.
如果能给我一次宝贵的面试机会,我将不胜感激.
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高考真题精讲
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1.【2023·天津卷】假设你是李津,作为交换生在英国的学校学习。学校要办一个叫 Chinese Workshop 的活动以促进中英文化交流。活动内容包括中国美食、手工艺品和书法。其中有个环节还要求参与者教别人做中国传统的东西。
请描述这项活动的意义,并申请参加此次活动,阐述你所参加的活动内容及想法。
注意 :1.词数不少于 100 ;2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:(1)申请参加本次活动;(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
参加:take part in→participate in
有助于:be conducive to→contribute to
促进、推动:promote→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.
拓展句:I would be very appreciative if you would enroll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knowing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.(not only...but also连接句子时,not only位于句首引起的部分倒装)
2.【2019·全国·高考真题】假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势;
3. 能做的事情。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 结束语已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信,属于书信应用文。
【详解】1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式,称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段,写信的目的,中间段写个人优势和能做的事,最后一段总结。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有:volunteer,a Chinese Painting Exhibition,advantages,I am good at…,I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误,并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇,如First of all,Besides,to begin with,moreover,as for me,Last but not least等,使全文衔接自然,语义流畅。
【点睛】本文开门见山,表达了写信的目的;之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情,详略得当,内容完整,同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇:be qualified for,be fluent in,be beneficial for等;高级句式:because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。
3. 【2010·天津·高考真题】
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信:
● 对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生级社会的益处等)
●个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)
●你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One,Senior Two.As far as I am concerned,I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors,which thus will result in substantial social benefits.
I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach,because I have good character,and I'm independent in life and proficient in English.That's why I apply for the position.I hope I can join the instructive activity.
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening,speaking,reading and writing.What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language,creating a good learning environment.I hope you can offer the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是书信类作文。
【详解】本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信,申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,但不是很具体,考生要把要点全交代,不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容,在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。重要短语:As far as I am concerned (据我所知),result in (导致),be qualified for (有资格,合格),be independent (独立),instructive(有教育意义),stimulate interests in(激发…的兴趣)等
【点睛】所给范文语言简洁,应用了一些较好的词组和句子: As far as I am concerned据我所知,be qualified for 合格的。I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.这句话用了非限制性定语从句, That’s why I apply for the position.这句话用了表语从句, My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 这句话用了不定式做表语。What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. 这句话用了主语从句和现在分词。
4.【2018·浙江·高考真题】假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:
(1) 口语能力:
(2) 相关经验;
(3) 应聘目的。注意:
(1) 词数80左右;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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名校模拟提升
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1.(2024·重庆·模拟预测)假定你是李华,现就读于一所国际学校,打算向校学生会申请成立一个社团。请给学生会主席写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 社团的类型;
2. 社团的活动计划和目的;
3. 希望获得批准。
注意: 1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear President,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear President,
I’m Li Hua, writing to apply for the establishment of a new club within our student community.
The proposed club is dedicated to promoting cultural exchange and diversity among students. We plan to organize various activities, including cultural festivals, language workshops, and international film screenings. These events will provide an excellent platform for students to broaden their horizons and enhance their cross-cultural understanding. We also believe it will foster a more inclusive and diverse campus culture, while enhancing students’ interpersonal skills and global awareness.
Thank you for considering my application. I'm looking forward to your favorable response.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生现就读于一所国际学校,打算向校学生会申请成立一个社团,要求考生按照要求给学生会主席写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
致力于:be dedicated to→ be devoted to
促进:promote→ facilitate
计划做:plan to do→ intend to do
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We plan to organize various activities, including cultural festivals, language workshops, and international film screenings.
拓展句:We plan to organize various activities, which include cultural festivals, language workshops, and international film screenings.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m Li Hua, writing to apply for the establishment of a new club within our student community.(运用了现在分词writing作状语)
【高分句型2】The proposed club is dedicated to promoting cultural exchange and diversity among students(运用了动名词promoting作宾语)
2.(23-24高三下·重庆涪陵·阶段练习)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地博物馆正在展出来中国的文物。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的:
2.个人优势:
3.能做的事情。
注意: 1.词数 100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese cultural relics exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生写一封信申请做伦敦博物馆中国文物展的志愿者。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→pleased
首先:first of all→to begin with
另外:what’s more→in addition
总之:all in all→in a word
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English.
拓展句:First of all, because I have been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese cultural relics exhibition to be held in the local art gallery.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.(23-24高三下·四川泸州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校下周将邀请英国友人来校参观,需要志愿者介绍你校的历史和现状。请你写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.申请原因;
2.你的优势。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Learning that you are in desperate need of volunteers for the foreigners from Britain, I am writing to apply for this position.
I’m convinced that I am definitely qualified for the job. In the first place, having an extensive knowledge of our school’s history and current situation enables me to give an accurate description of our school, which is of some help to the foreign guests to understand the development of our school thoroughly. Additionally, I have a good command of English, making it easy for me to communicate with foreign guests freely. More importantly, having been involved in a good deal of reception work before, I am an experienced receptionist to some extent.
Your time and consideration are highly appreciated, and I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校下周将邀请英国友人来校参观,需要志愿者介绍你校的历史和现状这一情况,写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确信:be convinced→ be sure of
首先:In the first place → First of all
擅长:have a good command of→ be good at
在一定程度上:to some extent→ to a certain degree
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, I have a good command of English, making it easy for me to communicate with foreign guests freely.
拓展句:Additionally, I have a good command of English, which can make it easy for me to communicate with foreign guests freely.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In the first place, having an extensive knowledge of our school’s history and current situation enables me to give an accurate description of our school, which is of some help to the foreign guests to understand the development of our school thoroughly.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Learning that you are in desperate need of volunteers for the foreigners from Britain, I am writing to apply for this position. (运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。)
4.(2024·山西晋中·模拟预测)假定你是李华,正在美国留学,得知校街舞社团将组建团队参加市中学生街舞表演,你想报名参加本次活动。请你给活动指导老师Alice写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.自我介绍;2.询问活动相关信息;3.表达意愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alice,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student studying in the US now. Hearing that middle school students are wanted for street dance performance, I’m writing to apply to join it.
I started to learn street dance when I was ten and have been practicing it for over seven years. Devoted to the energetic and lively style of dance, I try my best to express the vitality of the young. So I consider myself as a perfect fit for the team. Would you please tell me how I can sign up for the event?
I hope I will be admitted! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给街舞表演活动指导老师Alice写一封邮件,报名参加社团组建的街舞表演活动,介绍自己,询问活动相关信息并表达意愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
现在:now→currently
热衷的,投入的:devoted→committed
有活力的:energetic→vigorous
认为:consider→regard
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Hearing that middle school students are wanted for street dance performance, I’m writing to apply to join it.
拓展句:Because I hear that middle school students are wanted for street dance performance, I’m writing to apply to join it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that middle school students are wanted for street dance performance, I’m writing to apply to join it.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I started to learn street dance when I was ten and have been practicing it for over seven years.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
5.(2024·湖南娄底·一模)假定你是李华,你打算在暑假期间为来华的外国游客当导游。请给某旅游公司写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你为外国游客当导游的申请;
2.你为外国游客当导游的优势;
3.你为外国游客当导游的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. I’m writing to apply for the position as a tour guide for foreign visitors during the summer holiday.
Firstly, I have a good command of English, which means I am able to communicate freely and fluently in English. In addition, in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. Furthermore, my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and provide me with a chance to spread Chinese culture among foreigners.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给旅游公司写一封申请邮件,申请成为暑假来华旅游的外国游客的导游,说明申请目的,自身优势和申请理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
游客:visitor→tourist
参加:take part in→participate in
导致:contribute to→make for
提供:provide→supply
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Firstly, I have a good command of English, which means I am able to communicate freely and fluently in English.
拓展句:Firstly, I have a good command of English, meaning I am able to communicate freely and fluently in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, I have a good command of English, which means I am able to communicate freely and fluently in English.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和省略连接词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.(运用了介词+which引导的限制性定语从句)
6.(23-24高三下·天津南开·开学考试)最近中学生英文网站Student Post为了纳新,面向全市招聘中学生英文记者。假设你是晨光中学的李津。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)应聘本地新闻(local events)记者一职;
(2)个人基本情况、相关特长;
(3)你做出该决定的具体理由。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I am writing to apply for a position at Student Post, which I saw advertsed in the school newspaper last week.
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I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Editor,
I am writing to apply for a position at Student Post, which I saw advertised in the school newspaper last week. I am 17 years old and I am in my second year at Chenguang Middle School. I would like to work for you because I am very interested in becoming a journalist.
I am a hard-working and committed person. I have participated in a volunteer programme, visiting elderly people in my area for the last three years. Moreover, I feel that I can get on well with people from different backgrounds since I have worked with lots of different people on many projects for local events. I think I have the language skills to be a good reporter. I have always been good at writing and I have read many novels. Last year, I won second prize in our District Wring Competition. In addition, I am also a good photographer, which might be useful for some of the articles.
The main reason that prompted me to make this decision was that I would like to learn more about the things that are going on in the city, as I feel that it is important to know about the city we live in.
I look forward to hearing from you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就中学生英文网站Student Post面向全市招聘中学生英文记者写一篇申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→show an interest in
参加:participate in→take part in
此外:moreover→what’s more
擅长:be good at→do well in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am 17 years old and I am in my second year at Chenguang Middle School.
拓展句:I am 17 years old who is in the second year at Chenguang Middle School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, I feel that I can get on well with people from different backgrounds since I have worked with lots of different people on many projects for local events.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, I am also a good photographer, which might be useful for some of the articles.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.(23-24高三上·河北沧州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校外教Tracy正在招募英语好的同学协助开办英语角,请你给Tracy写一封申请信。内容包括:
(1)写信目的;
(2)你的条件;
(3)表达愿望。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tracy,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tracy,
Hearing that you need some students to help with the English Corner, I really want to participate in this project.
First of all, my English is very good. Actually, I was one of the three winners in last year’s oral English contest organized by our school. I can communicate with people fluently in English. Besides, I have organized such activities, which makes me have an advantage over other students.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的申请信。要求考生给外教Tracy写封信,申请帮助其开办校英语角。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→ take part in
首先:first of all → firstly
事实上:actually → in fact
此外:besides → what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Actually, I was one of the three winners in last year’s oral English contest organized by our school.
拓展句:Actually, I was one of the three winners in last year’s oral English contest which was organized by our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you need some students to help with the English Corner, I really want to participate in this project.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, I have organized such activities, which makes me have an advantage over other students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8.(23-24高三下·海南省直辖县级单位·开学考试)假设你是李华,在英国的一所学校做交换生。最近你在学校公告栏上获悉当地社区拟招聘一名中文志愿者。请你给负责人Tom写一封电子邮件,申请此职位,内容包括:
(1)提出申请;(2)个人优势;(3)表达希望。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my interest in the Chinese volunteer position advertised in the school notice board.
As an exchange student from China studying at your school, I believe I am well-suited for this role due to my proficiency in Mandarin Chinese and my deep understanding of Chinese culture. Growing up in China has given me a unique perspective and insight into the language, customs, and traditions that I would love to share with the local community.
I look forward to the possibility of contributing to the local community as a Chinese volunteer. Thank you for considering my application.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作,你在英国的一所学校做交换生,最近你在学校公告栏上获悉当地社区拟招聘一名中文志愿者,请你给负责人Tom写一封电子邮件,申请此职位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey
宣布:advertise→announce
因为:due to→thanks to/owing to/because of
独特的:unique→distinct
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Thank you for considering my application.
拓展句:I sincerely appreciate your consideration of my application.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my interest in the Chinese volunteer position advertised in the school notice board. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Growing up in China has given me a unique perspective and insight into the language, customs, and traditions that I would love to share with the local community.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
9.(2024·全国·一模)假定你是李华,你校寒假期间将有一批来访的英国学生,需招募志愿者帮助完成接待工作。学校委托外教布朗先生负责招募。请给布朗先生写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 申请成为志愿者;
2. 自身优势。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Brown,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class3, Senior 2. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
As an outgoing boy, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates. I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.
I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教布朗先生写封邮件,申请当志愿者,接待寒假期间将要来访的英国学生。
【详解】1.词汇积累
另外:besides→moreover
肯定的:sure→certain
感激的:grateful→thankful
精通:have a good command of→be well up in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, a student from Class3, Senior 2.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is a student from Class3, Senior 2.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. (运用了so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.(23-24高三上·江苏泰州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,最近你从校英文报上得知该报正在招募兼职编辑。请你给招聘负责人Mr. Brown写一封求职信。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 说明自己的竞争优势;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’ve learned from our school paper that you’re looking for students as part-time editors. I’m sure I’m the right person for the job.
First, as a hard-working student, I have a good command of English, especially in speaking and writing. Besides, I’ve ever worked as a part-time reporter since I was at my middle school, so with much experience, I’m familiar with this kind of work. Last, I can work under pressure, which I think is a must to be an editor. For these reasons, I’m sure I can be equal to the job.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Version 2
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to express my interest in the position as a part-time editor at the school English newspaper. I believe I will make a valuable addition to your team.
Having worked on several school publications, I have experience in writing and editing. I have a keen eye for detail and a strong grasp of grammar and syntax. Additionally, I am highly organized and capable of meeting tight deadlines.
I am excited about the opportunity to work with you and contribute to the school newspaper. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在从校英文报上得知该报正在招募兼职编辑后,给招聘负责人Mr. Brown写一封求职信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找:look for→search for
压力:pressure→stress
担任:work as→serve as
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, as a hard-working student, I have a good command of English, especially in speaking and writing.
拓展句:First, I have a good command of English, especially in speaking and writing because I’m a hard-working student.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve learned from our school paper that you’re looking for students as part-time editors. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Last, I can work under pressure, which I think is a must to be an editor. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
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