Unit 2 Traditional skills 单元主题（传统工艺）写作满分范文15篇（分层练习）英语牛津上海版九年级上册

Unit 2 Traditional skills 单元主题（传统工艺）写作满分范文15篇 一、书面表达 1．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Mike想了解中国的传统艺术形式，请你根据表格提示介绍一至两种艺术形式，给外国友人发一封e­mail，讲述中国传统文化。 历史 材料 寓意/象征 风筝 2000 多年 竹子、丝绸 健康、长寿、幸福 剪纸 1500 多年 红纸、剪子 期盼幸福，寄托人们对美好未来的向往 灯笼 1800 多年 竹子、纸 迎接新年，寓意团圆 泥塑 2000 多年 陶土 对美好生活的期望 提示词：象征symbol，团圆reunion，泥塑clay 注意： 1. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，逻辑合理； 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Dear Mike, Art plays an important role in our life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   Yours, Li Hua 2．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国传统手工艺术很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，想请你介绍一种传统手工艺品。请你用英语回复一封邮件，描述你最喜欢的艺术形式及与其相关的文化习俗，如剪纸（papercutting）、泥塑（clay art）、孔明灯（sky lantern）等。 提示词语：be made of, design, shape, symbol, wish 提示问题： ●What is your favorite traditional Chinese art form? ●How are the artworks usually made? ●What do you know about its culture and custom? Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese art forms. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua 3．假设你是遵义阳光中学的李华，你们学校正在与珠海育才中学开展“手牵手”活动项目。你想赠送一份来自家乡的蜡染画给你的活动伙伴，并附上一段80词左右的英文介绍，文中不得出现真实学校和姓名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 要求： 1.介绍画的材质（棉布、染料、白蜡……）、产地及文化特色； 2.介绍画中情景和你理解的寓意； 3.表达你送这幅画的心意。 参考词汇：a batik painting蜡染画；dye染料；white wax白蜡；minority nationality少数民族 Dear friend, I’m glad to join this meaningful activity with you. I prepared a special gift for you. Let me introduce it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。 Kites History Mozi, in the Warring States period Characteristics materials for making kites:… shapes of kites:… Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity… ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province… Your ideas … 要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Kites Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．为弘扬中国文化，你校在校礼堂开展了一系列的工艺制作活动。请根据下表提示写一篇英语短文，并向校报投稿，同时谈谈你的感受。 Time: On Friday afternoon Place: In the school hall Activities Feeling ◎ Paper cutting ◎ Handwriting competition ◎ … ◎ Proud ◎ … 要求： （1）短文要求包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥想象； （2）注意大小写，不能出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息； （3）词数在80~100左右； （4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：弘扬promote 短文首句：To promote Chinese Culture, our school had art craft activities on Friday afternoon in the school hall. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你叫李华，你的外教Mr. Smith对中国的剪纸（paper cutting）非常感兴趣。请按下面的要点给他写封信，邀请他参加即将在你市举行的中国剪纸展览会（exhibition）。 要点： 1. 中国剪纸：已有1,500多年的历史；图案有花、动物等；贴在窗户、门上； 2. 时间：11月30日下午2:00； 3. 地点：历史博物馆（History Museum）； 4. 路线：乘坐80路公共汽车，在历史博物馆站下车（get off），沿着大街直走，博物馆就在你的右侧。 要求： 1. 内容必须包含以上提示要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 字数不少于60词，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mr. Smith,      I know you are interested in Chinese paper cutting. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I do hope you will come. I wish you to have a pleasant time. Yours, Li Hua 7．糖画（sugar painting）是中国的传统技艺。假如你是李明，得知你的好朋友Jack对糖画很感兴趣，请根据提示，用英文给Jack写一封80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）的电子邮件，向他介绍糖画。要点包括： 起源：明代（Ming Dynasty） 制作：由糖制成，可以食用，也是艺术品 发展：最初，被制成动植物形状；后来被制成各种图案 你的观点：（请你补充） Dear Jack, Knowing that you are interested in sugar painting, I’m writing to introduce it to you. It is one of the most popular Chinese traditional skills. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 8．你班同学将在下周的艺术节上表演《大闹天宫》的英语皮影戏。你需要在校园网英文版上介绍相关内容，请你根据以下要点，完成介绍。 皮影戏 ·中国传统艺术 ·（请补充） 《大闹天宫》 ·1963年上映 ·（请补充） 演出创意 ·由同学们配音 ·（请补充） 注意： 1. 词数80左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 3. 参考词汇：《大闹天宫》：Havoc in Heaven Havoc in Heaven Our class will put on a shadow puppet play Havoc in Heaven in our Art Festival next week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It will be a fantastic experience for you. Don’t miss it. 9．保护和传承中国传统是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近你校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统技艺”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的传统技艺，并号召大家来保护传统技艺。 注意： 1. 词数：80 词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My favourite traditional Chinese skill What 介绍一种传统技艺（至少2点） Why 1. 是中国文化的重要部分 2.（请你补充1﹣2点） How （请你补充1﹣2点） As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese skills is our obligation. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together to protect this tradition skill and keep it alive. 10．假设你的学校要举办以“Traditional Skills Around Us”为主题的活动，目前正在征集相关稿件，请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，以“A Person with a Traditional Skill”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，写出你眼中一位身怀传统技艺的人物。 Name Li Qiyi (65 years old) Appearance average height and a little thin, short hair and wearing glasses Specialty (特长) good at paper-cutting; learned paper-cutting when he was 4 years old; skillful (熟练的), cut paper into different kinds of shapes; … Your opinion (观点) … 要求： 1.可参考表格提示内容，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） A Person with a Traditional Skill Li Qiyi is a 65-year-old man.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．中国各地都有自己独特的传统艺术形式。中国结是中国特有的传统艺术, 请根据以下提示, 以“A Special Art of China—Chinese Knots”为题写一篇短文。 历史 世界著名;有数千年的历史;偶然被发明 制作 手工制成;颜色多而美;红色使用最广泛;象征好运和繁荣 用途 过去用于记录事件;现在用于节日和其他庆典； 春节期间, 人们在屋里悬挂； 平时, 女孩们喜欢把它和手机或钥匙系在一起 现状 在中国随处可见;在全世界越来越受欢迎 要求： 1. 条理清楚, 语言通畅。 2. 短文应包括以上要点, 可适当发挥。 3. 词数不少于80词。文章开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 参考词汇：Chinese knot n. 中国结, prosperity n. 繁荣, celebration n. 庆典, record v. 记录, hang v. 悬挂, be famous, used to, a symbol of, be made of Each different part of China has its own special forms of traditional art. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．苏州，丝绸的故乡，以生产蚕丝被 (silk quilt) 而闻名。请你根据下面表格的内容写一篇介绍苏州蚕丝被的文章，90词左右。开头已给出。 What the product is silk quilts What it is made of silk What it is made by factory workers Where it is made Suzhou What it can do keep you warm and comfortable Why it is special made of real silk that is soft, light and comfortable; also decorated with beautiful patterns Suzhou is famous for its silk quilts._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．油纸伞（oilpaper umbrella）作为中国传统艺术形式之一，现在得到了越来越多的关注，常常被用于各种节日与庆典中。假如你是李华， 得知英语周报就“做传统文化的守护人”为主题举行英语征文活动，你准备投稿。请简要介绍油纸伞的现状，并结合以下表格信息描述油纸伞，同时号召同学们从现在做起，加入保护中国传统文化（Traditional Chinese Culture）的行列中来。 历史 1000多年 材料 油纸，竹子，手工制作 外观 颜色各异，图案通常为花，鸟等 象征 对好运与美好生活的愿望 要求： 1、字迹工整，结构清晰， 80—100词； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Keep Oilpaper Umbrella Alive As we all know,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．江西省景德镇市的瓷器享誉海内外，而且已经成为中国的一张名片。请你根据本卷完形填空B篇的内容简单介绍景德镇陶瓷的历史和特点，并按照下列表格信息写一篇英文短文。 写作要点 具体内容 1. Basic information ●Place: Jingdezhen ●Material: a special clay ●Usage: contain things and decoration （装饰） 2. The history of porcelain 根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文） 3. Meaning ①____________________________________ ②____________________________________ ... 要求： 1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80—120。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．根据材料内容写作。风筝的制作材料：竹子（竹子须挺直并且长）、宣纸、线、胶水、剪刀。 制作：（1） 我们先将竹子削光滑，然后用火把竹子弯曲成型。 （2） 竹子经过加工修理，再绑扎成型。 　 　 （3） 风筝结扎完成后，接下来的就是把彩绘的纸糊在上面。 The words used：Smooth(光滑)     bend(弯曲)   glue(胶水)   stick(粘，糊)   procedure（步骤） 1. NO REAL NAME is allowed(school or person) 2. About 80-100 words. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 13 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文： Dear Mike, Art plays an important role in our life. Today I’d like to introduce paper cutting and lanterns to you. Paper cutting is one of China’s most popular traditional folk arts. Paper-cutting has a history of more than 1500 years. The materials it needs are red paper and scissors. During the Spring Festival, people usually paste paper-cuts on their doors or windows to hope for happiness and express their yearning for a better future. In China, lanterns are one of the most popular decorations. Lanterns have a long history of over 1,800 years. They are made of bamboo and paper. They mean welcoming the New Year and reunion. Chinese paper cutting and lanterns are also very popular around the world. I hope they will be passed on forever. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文写作，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：从表各种选取两种艺术形式，向Mike介绍中国的传统文化，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体根据表格中的信息提示，介绍其中两种艺术形式； 第三步，总结，并表达自己的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①plays an important role in在……中发挥重要作用 ②introduce...to...向某人介绍某物 ③more than超过 ④made great progress取得很大的进步 [高分句型] ①They are made of bamboo and paper.（被动语态） ②I hope they will be passed on forever.（宾语从句） 2．例文： Dear Chris,   I’m glad to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese art forms. There are different kinds of art forms in China. You can find beauty in them. Now let me introduce paper cutting to you. As we all know that paper cutting is one of the most popular traditional art forms in China. It has the history of over 1500 years. It is not only interesting but also beautiful. It is easy for us to make paper cutting. You only need a pair of scissors and some paper. We can use them to cut out different shapes we like, such as animals, flowers and so on. What’s more, I like it because it represents good luck and best wishes for the future. People use them to decorate their houses. It’s also used to celebrate the festival. How interesting paper cutting is! I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己感兴趣的一种艺术形式； 第二步，介绍剪纸的历史，用处以及意义。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also 不但……而且…… ②cut out 切断，剪出 ③such as 例如 ④be used to do sth 被用来做某事 [高分句型] ①There are different kinds of art forms in China.（there be句型） ②As we all know that paper cutting is one of the most popular traditional art forms in China.（“one of the+形容词最高级+复数名词”的结构） 3．例文： Dear friend, I’m glad to join this meaningful activity with you. I prepared a special gift for you. Let me introduce it. It is believed that batik painting appeared in China as early as the late Qing or early Han dynasty, but it first occurred as a finished product during the Tang dynasty. As one of the characteristic national arts in China, batik painting products are including dye, white wax, letter bags and table-clothes and so on. In this white wax, a girl of minority nationality are pasturing cattle. The scenery in this white wax is so beautiful that one feels relaxed. I hope you can feel happy when you watch this this batik painting after doing your homework. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时” 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中蜡染画的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“赠送一份来自家乡的蜡染画给活动伙伴”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“画的材质、产地及文化特色、介绍画中情景和你理解的寓意、你送这幅画的心意等”几个方面重点介绍蜡染画的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语表达“希望你看到这幅画会开心”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] appear in出现于 feel relaxed感到放松 be glad to...很开心做某事 [高分句型] ①It is believed that batik painting appeared in China as early as the late Qing or early Han dynasty,but it first occurred as a finished product during the Tang dynasty.（it为形式主语，that引导的主语从句为真正的主语） ②I hope you can feel happy when you watch this this batik painting after doing your homework.（when引导的时间状语从句） 4．例文： Kites Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mozi in the Warring States period. He made a bird out of wood. It was the first kite in history. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on. The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. People all over the world want to go there. Flying kites is deeply loved by people. It is a very popular outdoor activity. Every weekend, I can see many people flying kites in the park. They play happily. But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. Few people make their own kites. I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点； 第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况； 第三步，最后提出自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① with the invention of paper随着纸的发明 ② take on呈现 ③ all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ① I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down.（宾语从句） ② But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores.（定语从句） 5．例文： To promote Chinese Culture, our school had art craft activities on Friday afternoon in the school hall. There were many activities that we could take part in, such as Paper cutting, Sugar painting and Handwriting competition. Paper cutting is usually in red and scissors are usually used to cut the paper into the shapes of animals, flowers and Chinese characters. Different shapes and each of them expressed different meanings. Sugar painting is always in yellow. And it is not only beautiful but also tasty. I entered the Handwriting competition. I wrote some Chinese characters with a writing brush. The activities benefited us a lot. Not only did they improve our understanding of our culture, but they also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. We are proud of our culture. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出学校为了弘扬中国文化，举办了一场手工艺活动； 第二步，具体介绍这场活动中的手工艺活动； 第三步，这场活动的意义以及我们的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ③such as 例如 ④be proud of为……而自豪 [高分句型] Not only did they improve our understanding of our Chinese culture, but they also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves.（not only...but also…连接的并列复合句） 6．例文 Dear Mr. Smith, I know you are interested in Chinese paper cutting. I want to tell you some things about paper cutting. Chinese paper cutting has a history of more than 1500 years. Paper Cuttings have many patterns, but mainly flowers, animals and so on. We often stick them on windows and doors during the new year. I want to invite you to come to the Chinese paper cutting exhibition because there will be lots of beautiful and interesting paper cuts there. I think you will like them. It will start at the History Museum at 2 pm on November 30th. You can take No.80 bus there, and get off at the History Museum station. Then, walk along the street, and you can see the history museum on your right. I do hope you will come. I wish you to have a pleasant time. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“对中国剪纸的介绍，邀请Mr. Smith来参加中国剪纸展览会，展览会的相关信息以及去展览会的路线和交通方式”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我知道你对中国剪纸很感兴趣。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“对中国剪纸的介绍，邀请Mr. Smith来参加中国剪纸展览会，展览会的时间，地点以及去展览会的交通方式和路线”重点介绍邀请Mr. Smith参加中国剪纸展览会的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我祝你过得愉快。” [亮点词汇] ① more than超过 ② lots of许多 [高分句型] ① I want to invite you to come to the Chinese paper cutting exhibition because there will be lots of beautiful and interesting paper cuts there.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② I think you will like them.（省略that的宾语从句） 7．例文： Dear Jack, Knowing that you are interested in sugar painting, I’m writing to introduce it to you. It is one of the most popular Chinese traditional skills. Sugar painting starts in Ming Dynasty, and it has a really long history. As you know, it is made of sugar, so we can eat it. It is also a kind of artwork. At first, it was only in the shape of animals and plants. Later, we can see all kinds of patterns made by sugar painting, such as buildings, characters and so on. Sugar painting is so amazing that I love it so much. I even want to learn how to make it someday. Maybe we can learn this skill together. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出对糖画的介绍； 第二步，按照要点提示，介绍糖画的信息，包括起源、制作和发展，并适当补充发挥； 第三步，结尾总结，并补充自己对糖画的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of由……做成 ②a kind of一种 ③in the shape of……以……的形状 ④so...that...如此……，以至于…… [高分句型] ①Sugar painting is so amazing that I love it so much.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句） ②Later, we can see all kinds of patterns made by sugar painting, such as buildings, characters and so on.（过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰patterns） 8．例文 Havoc in Heaven Our class will put on a shadow puppet play Havoc in Heaven in our Art Festival next week. Shadow puppy plays are an ancient Chinese art. During the play, the artists move the puppets behind a white screen with lights behind it. The audience sit in front of the screen to enjoy the show. Havoc in Heaven is one of the most popular cartoons in China. It was firstly put on in 1963. We have lots of new ideas to make this traditional cartoon much livelier. For example, some classmates and teachers are invited to do the characters’ voices, and I also add some sound effects from Beijing Opera to fill the fighting scenes with more excitement. It will be a fantastic experience for you. Don’t miss it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题属于材料作文。 ②时态：时态以一般现在时为主，介绍《大闹天宫》的上映时间时采用一般过去时。 ③提示：写作要点和开头已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中演出创意，写作时应写出具体的创意，紧扣要点提示并进行适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头提示，引出本文要介绍皮影戏《大闹天空》。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从皮影戏的形式，《大闹天宫》的基本情况，以及演出创意几个方面来进行介绍。 第三步，根据结尾提示，吸引更多人关注此次表演。 [亮点词汇] ①behind在……后 ②audience观众 ③in front of在……前 ④lots of new ideas许多新想法 ⑤livelier更鲜活的 [高分句型] ①Havoc in Heaven is one of the most popular cartoons in China.（“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”） ②I also add some sound effects from Beijing Opera to fill the fighting scenes with more excitement.（动词不定时作目的状语） 9．例文 As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese skills is our obligation. My favourite traditional Chinese skill is paper cutting. Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on. Paper cutting is an important part of Chinese culture. People often put them up on the walls. Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck. We should try our best to protect this traditional skill. I think paper cutting should be taught in schools so that students can learn this skill. Let’s work together to protect this tradition skill and keep it alive. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，保护和传承中国传统技艺是我们的义务； 第二步，结合表格提示，介绍自己最喜爱的传统技艺； 第三步，号召大家来保护传统技艺。 [亮点词汇] ①such as 例如 ②put up 张贴 ③try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事 [高分句型] ①Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on.（含情态动词can的被动语态） ②Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck.（because引导的原因状语从句） ③I think paper cutting should be taught in schools so that students can learn this skill.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 10．参考范文： A Person with a Traditional Skill Li Qiyi is a 65-year-old man. He is of average height and a little thin. He has short hair and he is wearing glasses. Li Qiyi is good at paper cutting. He began to learn paper cutting from his father when he was 4 years old. He works very hard. He has a pair of skillful hand. He uses color paper and scissors in his work. He can finish one piece of work in only a few minutes. His works are in all kinds of shapes, such as animals, plants and characters. I think Li Qiyi’s works are really fantastic. We should learn from him. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍身边一位身怀传统技艺人物的名字、年龄和外貌等； 第二步，结合表格内容具体介绍他的特长，例如擅长剪纸、技艺娴熟等； 第三步，总结性地评价这位人物，表达自己的观点，例如我们应该向他学习。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at 擅长 ②begin to do 开始做…… ③learn...from...向……学习 ④work hard 工作努力 ⑤a pair of 一双 ⑥all kinds of 各种各样的 ⑦fantastic 极好的 [高分句型] ①He began to learn paper cutting from his father when he was 4 years old. （when引导的时间状语从句） ②I think Li Qiyi’s works are really fantastic.（省略that宾语从句） 11．例文 A Special Art of China—Chinese Knots Each different part of China has its own special forms of traditional art. Chinese knots are a special traditional art of China. They are famous around the world. They are made by hand and have been formed for thousands of years. They are invented by accident. Chinese knots are colorful and beautiful. Red is used the most widely. In China, red is usually a symbol of good luck and prosperity. In the past, people used to record events with them, but now they are used at festivals and other celebrations. During the Spring Festival, people enjoy hanging the Chinese knots in rooms. In our daily life, girls like tying the Chinese knots and their phones or keys together. Nowadays, Chinese knots are here and there in China. And they are becoming more and more popular in the world. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“A Special Art of China—Chinese Knots”为题，根据要点提示的内容，从历史、制作、用途、现状等方面写一篇短文介绍中国特有的传统艺术——中国结；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 12．     Suzhou, is famous for its silk quilts. These quilts are made of real silk. They are made by skillful workers in many silk factories in the city. They are made in Suzhou. The silk quilts are used to keep people warm and comfortable in bed. They are known to be very comfortable because they are light and soft. In addition, they look beautiful as they are decorated with beautiful patterns. Many people from all over the world come to Suzhou to visit the silk factories and buy not only the silk quilts but also many other silk products. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图表信息中“提示问题”的六个方面的阐述，适当发挥。 【写作步骤】 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“苏州因蚕丝被而闻名”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照图表提示的六个问题——产品名称、产品来源、产地、产品制作人、产品特点、产品用途均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“全世界各地的人来买蚕丝被及相关产品”的美好。 【亮点词汇】 ①skillful works有手艺的工人 ②look beautiful看起来漂亮 ③all over the world全世界 【高分句型】 ① These quilts are made of real silk. (被动语态) ②Many people from all over the world come to Suzhou to visit the silk factories and buy not only the silk quilts but also many other silk products. (not only...but also...的用法) 13．例文： Keep Oilpaper Umbrella Alive As we all know, Oilpaper umbrellas, as one of the traditional Chinese art forms, have attracted more and more attention. They are often used in festivals and celebrations. We should keep Oilpaper Umbrella alive. Oilpaper umbrellas have a history of 1,000 years. They are usually made of oiled paper and bamboo by hand. Oil-paper umbrellas have many kinds of colors. The patterns on it are usually flowers, birds and so on. They look very beautiful. These show people’s wishes for good luck and a good life. From now on, we should join in protecting Traditional Chinese Culture. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求给英语周报投稿介绍油纸伞的现状，并结合以下表格信息描述油纸伞，同时号召同学们从现在做起，加入保护中国传统文化。根据下表中的内容，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。 2. 写作指导：本文用到一般现在时态，文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式及被动语态的表达等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。 14．例文 There are lots of inventions in China. Among them, the porcelain in Jingdezhen is one of the brightest ones. The porcelain is made from a special kind of clay. And it should be fired at a very high heat. There are different kinds of porcelains in Jingdezhen. The most popular one is the blue and white porcelain, because the colors and pictures on it make it lively and beautiful. Now, almost each family has a porcelain. It is mainly used for containing things and also for decoration. Jingdezhen is famous as the capital of porcelain. It was the first place in south China to produce white porcelain, and has achieved great success in making the porcelain. Its porcelain has been well known for more than 1,800 years. Now the porcelain in Jingdezhen is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. And people all over the world love it very much. People also buy some as gifts for their family and friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏概括完形填空B的内容，可适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍景德镇瓷器的基本信息，包括产地，原料和用途； 第二步，简单介绍景德镇瓷器的历史； 第三步，说明景德镇瓷器的意义。 [亮点词汇] ① one of the 形容词最高级+名词复数 最……之一的…… ② be made from由……制作 ③ different kinds of各种各样的…… ④ be famous as作为……而出名 [高分句型] ① The most popular one is the blue and white porcelain, because the colors and pictures on it make it lively and beautiful. （because引导的原因状语从句） ② It was the first place in south China to produce white porcelain, and has achieved great success in making the porcelain. （and连接的并列句） 15．例文： Kites have been around for thousands of years and they are a part of many different cultures around the world. But how to make a kite? The following are the procedures. Making kites requires bamboo, rice paper, thread, glue and scissors. We first cut the bamboo smooth, and then bend it into shape with fire. Bamboo is processed and repaired, and then bound and formed. Once the kite is tied, the next step is to stick the painted paper on it. A beautiful kite is made successfully. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照所给要点介绍风筝的制作过程。内容包括：制作风筝的材料以及制作步骤。 2.写作指导：文章以一般现在时为主介绍风筝的制作过程；写作时注意按照制作步骤分层次描写，可使用first、then等词汇增强条理性。 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 13 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$