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How did you feel on your first day at senior high?
senior high
nervous
in panic
homesick
eagerness
pleased
frustrated
disapointed
upset
Lead-in
with butterflies in my stomach
Lead-in
Review the features of a journal entry:
日期
第一人称
一般过去式
时间顺序
Fast-reading
Her general impression of the first week
An enjoyable class
After-school activities
Her plan for tomorrow
Divid the journal entry into four parts
Read the journal entry and answer the questions.
What is the passage about?
What happened in her physics class?
What did she do after class?
While-writing
It’s about the author’s experiences during the first day at senior high.
She couldn’t take notes of everything the physics teacher said, but the teacher told her to stop taking notes and just listen. He said that thinking was more important than note-taking and memorising.
She hurried to the school skatebording club, and bumped into a girl on the way. Then she tried skateboarding at the club and make friends with the girl she bumped into earlier.
Excited
disappointed
sorry
look forward to
laugh
General impression of the school
In physics class
After class
Tomorrow evening
· come to an end
around the corner
couldn’t take everything down
struggle with...
· hurried to the scholl skateboarding club
bump into a girl
say sorry to
make friends with the girl
watch a film
Retell the experiences about the first week with expressions in the passage.
日记的格式什么时候讲?
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come to an end
around the corner
struggle with
Thinking is a more important ability than note-taking and memorising.(动名词做主语)
I was running out of the classroom when I bumped into a girl literally. (be doing...when 正在做...这时)
Useful expressions for writing
While-writing
Your own experiences of first week at senior high.
English/ math/ physics/PE...
When I ...
be doing....when
excited/embarrassed...
badminton club
drama club
music
debate club...
An enjoyable class
How I made a new friend?
My impression of the first week
After-school activities
3
1
2
4
Friday 8 September
How time flies! I can't believe the first week is coming to an end. Things are going quite well and there are one or two things in particular that have left a deep impression on me.
The English class on Thursday was unforgettable. During the class, we were asked to give a short speech about the first day at senior high. I was secretly hoping that nobody would notice me, when suddenly heard my name called. I stood up, blushing (涨红了脸), with nothing coming out of my mouth. “Don’t be shy! Just think of your first day at senior high and say whatever comes to mind.” The teacher‘s words made me relaxed a bit, and I finally began to say something. lt was hard, but it didn't feel bad.
After school that day, I decided to go to the English Club to further practise my English. l was trying to pick up the courage to talk to someone when I heard a kind voice behind me. “Hello, I'm Tom. Nice to meet you.“ Sitting side-by-side, he shared with me some tips on how to improve my English. We had a lovely chat and soon became friends.
The first week of senior high has been quite exciting, and I am looking forward to making the most of senior high!
Share your journal entry with the class and rate it according to the chart.
Post-writing
Assessment standard
date
person
tense
sentence pattern
content(four parts) General impression
An enjoyable class
After-school activities
How I made a new friend?
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