选择性必修第一册Unit 3 The art of painting (建议信）-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）

Unit 3 The art of painting 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020） Giving instructions for making an unusual picture（建议信） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 记叙文 2023年全国新高考I&II卷 建议信应用非常广泛，也是英语高考作文常考的体裁。      话题一般要求给对方的各种烦恼以建议，如压力、失败、人际关系紧张等。或给项目策划如栏目优化等提出内容建议。亦或给对方的计划或兴趣提出方法建议，等等。 A suggestion letter is an applied form of writing in which one gives advice or advice about something to an organization or an individual. Make a proposal first, then give a good reason to persuade the other person to accept your proposal, the reason should be reasonable, use appropriate words, be polite and persuasive. 假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下：    1. 说明问题，    2. 提出建议。   注意：   1. 词数80左右   2. 开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 说明写信的目的套语 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二段 介绍详情、说明原因套语 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起……During the afternoon, we’ll together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三段 提出建议套语 我建议…… 1．I’d like to suggest that… 2．May I suggest that…? 3．In my opinion… 4．I would like to make a recommendation that… 5．I am writing to advise… 6．If I were you, I would… 第四段 希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 一、必备话题词汇及表达 1. 想要做某事: would like to do sth. 2. 主动做某事: offer to do sth. 3. 值得做某事: be worth doing sth. 4. 建议做某事: be suggested to do sth. 5. 某事是个好选择: Sth. is a better choice 6. 某事将有用: Sth will be helpful. 7. 做某事是个好主意: It would be a good idea to do sth. 8. 给某人提建议: give someone advice (on...) 9. 做某事有困难: have difficulty doing sth. 10. 如下: as follows 11. 利用: make use of 12. 认为......有用: find ... helpful / useful / beneficial 13. 把......考虑在内: take ... into account/ consideration 14. 得到改善: get improved 15. 依我看来: In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned 16. 我建议: I suggest that... / My suggestion is that ... 17. 如果我是你，我会: If I were you, I would ... 18. 你最好/ 最好不: You had better (not) ...  二、必备话题句型及表达 1. 已收到你寻求......建议的来信。以下是我个人的建议，我希望它们对你有帮助。I have received your letter asking me some advice / suggestions ...The following are my personal suggestions, which I hope can be of great help to you. 2. 听到你在......上有困难很难过。但你如果采纳以下建议，情况很容易改善。I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take the following advice. 3. 对某人而言做......是重要的/必要的/有益的It’ s + 形容词 / 名词 （important/ necessary / helpful） for sb to do sth. 4. 做某事是重要的/ 有益的/ 好主意。Doing sth. is +形容词/ 名词（important/ necessary/ helpful/ a good idea / of great importance / of great help） 5. 在你亲自来之前读一些关于这些地方的书是必要的。Reading some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes is necessary for you. 6. 我建议你应该做...I suggest / recommend that you should ... 7. 我建议你就他的行为和你朋友I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. 8. 在我看来，你最好停止玩电脑游戏，更多地专注于学校和家庭生活。From my point of view/ As far as I am concerned/ Personally speaking/ In my opinion，you had better quit playing computer game and concentrate more on school and family life. 9. 在我看来，我认为你应该和同学积极沟通。From my point of view，I think you’ re supposed to communicate with your classmate. (2023北京高考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours，Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 一、命题意图:要求考生根据邮件内容写一封建议信：向Jim提供关于以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议，包括活动形式和活动内容。 二、理解“绿色北京”的内涵“绿色北京”是指建设环境友好、生态健康的北京城市，以促进可持续发展和保护生态环境为目标。绿色北京的概念涵盖了以下几个方面：“Green Beijing” refers to the construction of an environmentally friendly and ecologically healthy city in Beijing, with the goal of promoting sustainable development and protecting the ecological environment. The concept of Green Beijing encompasses the following aspects: 1、环境保护：绿色北京强调保护自然资源和生态环境，减少污染物排放和资源浪费，提高空气质量、水质、土地利用和垃圾处理等环境指标。Environmental protection: Green Beijing emphasizes the protection of natural resources and the environment, reducing pollutant emissions and resource wastage, and improving environmental indicators such as air quality, water quality, land use, and waste disposal. 2、生态建设：绿色北京注重保护和恢复生态系统，增加绿地面积，改善城市生态环境，提供良好的生态服务功能，如净化空气、调节气温、保水保育等。Ecological construction: Green Beijing focuses on the protection and restoration of ecosystems, increasing green space, improving the urban ecological environment, and providing good ecological services such as air purification, temperature regulation, and water conservation. 3、可持续发展：绿色北京倡导经济、社会和环境的协调发展，追求经济发展与资源利用的可持续性，推动绿色产业和低碳生活方式的发展。Sustainable development: Green Beijing advocates for the coordinated development of the economy, society, and environment, pursues the sustainability of economic development and resource utilization, and promotes the development of green industries and a low-carbon lifestyle. 4、环保意识：绿色北京鼓励公众养成环保意识和行为习惯，包括节约资源、垃圾分类、绿色出行、环保消费等，推动全社会参与环保行动。Environmental awareness: Green Beijing encourages the public to develop environmental awareness and habits, including resource conservation, waste sorting, green transportation, and eco-friendly consumption, to promote the participation of the whole society in environmental actions. 通过绿色北京的建设，可以提高居民的生活质量，减少对自然资源的消耗和环境的破坏，实现经济社会的可持续发展，为后代留下一个更美好的环境。Through the construction of Green Beijing, the quality of life of residents can be improved, the consumption of natural resources and environmental damage can be reduced, and sustainable development of the economy and society can be achieved, leaving a better environment for future generations. 写作思路： 1、首先，我们需要考虑活动形式。可以建议组织一次绿色环保主题的社区清洁活动，邀请志愿者一起清理公园、街道或者河流等公共场所。可以提供相关的清洁工具和垃圾袋，让参与者亲身体验环保的重要性。 2、其次，关于活动内容，可以提议进行一次绿色生活讲座或者展览，邀请专家学者或者环保组织代表来分享绿色生活的理念和实践。可以涵盖节能减排、垃圾分类、植树造林等方面的内容，让参与者了解和学习如何在日常生活中实践绿色环保。 3、此外，还可以建议组织一次绿色旅游活动，带领参与者去参观北京的自然景点或者生态农场，让他们亲身感受大自然的美丽与脆弱，增强环保意识。 以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动可以采取以下形式和对应的内容：Activities for a club with the theme “Green Beijing” can take the following forms: 1、植树活动：组织学生一起参与植树行动，可以选择在学校附近的绿化带或者公园进行植树，以增加绿色植被覆盖面积。Tree planting: Organize students to participate in tree planting activities. Choose areas near the school or parks to increase green vegetation coverage. 2、清洁行动：组织学生一起进行垃圾清理活动，可以选择在学校周边的公共区域或者街道上进行垃圾清理，以保持环境的整洁和美观。Clean-up actions: Organize students to clean up garbage. Choose public areas near the school or streets to maintain a clean and beautiful environment. 3、环保讲座：邀请环保专家或者学者进行讲座，介绍环保知识和绿色生活方式，激发学生的环保意识和行动。Environmental lectures: Invite environmental experts or scholars to give lectures on environmental knowledge and green lifestyles to inspire students’ environmental awareness and actions. 4、创意手工制作：组织学生使用废旧材料进行手工制作，例如利用废纸制作纸袋，利用废物制作艺术品等，既可以减少废弃物的产生，又可以培养学生的创造力和环保意识。Creative crafts: Organize students to use recycled materials for handicrafts, such as making paper bags from waste paper or creating artwork from waste. This not only reduces waste generation but also fosters creativity and environmental consciousness. 5、环保影视欣赏：举办环保主题的电影或纪录片放映活动，通过观影引发学生对环境问题的思考和关注。Environmental film screenings: Organize screenings of environmental-themed movies or documentaries to stimulate students’ thinking and concern about environmental issues. 6、环保义卖活动：组织学生筹备义卖活动，将所筹集的资金用于支持环保项目或者捐赠给环保组织，同时也可以售卖一些环保产品或手工制品。Eco-friendly fundraising: Organize students to prepare fundraising activities, using the funds raised to support environmental projects or donate to environmental organizations. Additionally, eco-friendly products or handicrafts can be sold. 7、环保宣传活动：组织绿色北京的宣传活动，如海报展览、宣传册发放等，向大众宣传绿色环保理念，提高环保意识。Environmental awareness campaigns: Organize promotional activities for “Green Beijing” such as poster exhibitions and distribution of brochures to raise public awareness of environmental protection. 8、环境保护行动：组织环境保护的实际行动，如清洁活动、垃圾分类活动等，通过实际行动改善环境质量。Environmental protection actions: Organize practical actions for environmental protection, such as clean-up activities and waste segregation, to improve the quality of the environment through tangible efforts. 9、绿色科普活动：组织绿色科普活动，如参观绿色科技企业、举办绿色科技展览等，向社团成员介绍绿色科技的应用和发展。Green science outreach activities: Organize visits to green technology companies and hold exhibitions on green technologies, introducing the application and development of green technologies to community members. 10、绿色创意竞赛：组织绿色创意竞赛，鼓励社团成员提出创意的环保方案，通过比赛评选出最佳创意，推动绿色创新。Green creative competitions: Organize green creative competitions to encourage community members to propose innovative environmental solutions. Select the best ideas through the competition to promote green innovation. 11、绿色旅行活动：组织绿色旅行活动，选择环保友好的旅游目的地，鼓励社团成员以绿色的方式进行旅行，提倡低碳出行。Green travel activities: Organize green travel activities, selecting eco-friendly tourist destinations and encouraging community members to travel in a sustainable manner, advocating for low-carbon travel.以上是一些可能的绿色北京为主题的社团活动内容，具体内容可以根据社团成员的兴趣和实际情况进行调整和组织。These are some possible contents for community activities with the theme of “Green Beijing.” The specific content can be adjusted and organized based on the interests and actual situations of community members. （2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers. May your entry stand out in the competition! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的交换生Mike回一封邮件，就视频创意提出建议并阐明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想法：idea →opinion 安全：security →safety 因此：therefore →thus 确信：convinced →sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 拓展句：Because I learn you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.（运用了虚拟语气） 【高分句型2】Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语） （2024·安徽黄山·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括： （1）说明问题； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Christine, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Christine, I am writing to express my concern about the upcoming English handwriting competition. As scheduled, our submissions are required to be handed in online. This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition. I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. I’d appreciate it if you can take my suggestion into account. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Christine写封邮件，说明正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品存在的问题。 【详解】1.词汇积累 要求：require→ request 可能：likely→ probably 减少：reduce→ decrease 考虑：take … into account→ take … into consideration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. 拓展句：I consider it a better alternative that all participants should complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】 I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.（不定式作宾语） 【高分句型2】This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） （2024·江苏南京·二模）假定你是李华，英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.使用教材的收获； 2.改进教材的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Professor Nunan, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Professor Nunan, Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I’m glad to share my thoughts. I find the textbooks incredibly beneficial. The well-selected materials, filled with intriguing stories and fresh opinions, have aroused my interest in language learning and opened up a new world for me. My language skills have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook. However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience. Thank you for considering my feedback. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见，要求考生按照要求给考生所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 搜集：gather→ collect 高兴的：glad→ pleased 想法：thought→ idea 难以置信地：incredibly→ fabulously 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My language skills have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook. 拓展句：It is with the help of the Workbook that my language skills have also been significantly enhanced. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I’m glad to share my thoughts.（运用了现在分词Learning作状语、that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience.（运用了it作形式主语、不定式作真正的主语） （2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。 要点：1. 你的建议；2. 你的祝福。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Charles, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Charles, How delighted I am to hear about your new removal! Given your enthusiasm for Chinese culture, I suggest the design and decoration of your room embracing Chinese style with elegance. From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life. Additionally, use colors of red, gold and black, associated with Chinese culture, their richness enhancing the warmth of your space. There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space. Were it possible, you could combine these elements to create a room reflecting your personal taste. I am sure your creation will be a masterpiece, a perfect blend of China and the foreign countries. Eager to see the fruit of your endeavor! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同龄朋友Charles写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→joyful 热情：enthusiasm→passion 优雅：elegance→grace 此外：additionally→what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：How delighted I am to hear about your new removal! 拓展句：How delighted I am when I hear about your new removal! 【点睛】 【高分句型1】From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life. (运用了not only位于句首的倒装句式和独立主格结构) 【高分句型2】There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) （2024·山东·三模）假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角，校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信，内容包括： 1. 提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等)； 2. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Editor, Learning that an English corner will be open in our school, I’m writing to give some advice. First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practice our oral English using multimedia devices. What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included. I hope my advice is worth taking and the first session will arrive on time! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校即将要开设英语角这一事写一封建议信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：advice→suggestion 机会：chance→opportunity 提高，加强：improve→strengthen 各种的：various→ a variety of 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included. 拓展句：What’s more, the English corner should include various topics, the theme of which is about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practice our oral English using multimedia devices.（运用了so that引导的状语从句和现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included.（运用了独立主格结构） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 The art of painting 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020） Giving instructions for making an unusual picture（建议信） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 记叙文 2023年全国新高考I&II卷 建议信应用非常广泛，也是英语高考作文常考的体裁。      话题一般要求给对方的各种烦恼以建议，如压力、失败、人际关系紧张等。或给项目策划如栏目优化等提出内容建议。亦或给对方的计划或兴趣提出方法建议，等等。 A suggestion letter is an applied form of writing in which one gives advice or advice about something to an organization or an individual. Make a proposal first, then give a good reason to persuade the other person to accept your proposal, the reason should be reasonable, use appropriate words, be polite and persuasive. 假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下：    1. 说明问题，    2. 提出建议。   注意：   1. 词数80左右   2. 开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 说明写信的目的套语 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二段 介绍详情、说明原因套语 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起……During the afternoon, we’ll together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三段 提出建议套语 我建议…… 1．I’d like to suggest that… 2．May I suggest that…? 3．In my opinion… 4．I would like to make a recommendation that… 5．I am writing to advise… 6．If I were you, I would… 第四段 希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 一、必备话题词汇及表达 1. 想要做某事: would like to do sth. 2. 主动做某事: offer to do sth. 3. 值得做某事: be worth doing sth. 4. 建议做某事: be suggested to do sth. 5. 某事是个好选择: Sth. is a better choice 6. 某事将有用: Sth will be helpful. 7. 做某事是个好主意: It would be a good idea to do sth. 8. 给某人提建议: give someone advice (on...) 9. 做某事有困难: have difficulty doing sth. 10. 如下: as follows 11. 利用: make use of 12. 认为......有用: find ... helpful / useful / beneficial 13. 把......考虑在内: take ... into account/ consideration 14. 得到改善: get improved 15. 依我看来: In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned 16. 我建议: I suggest that... / My suggestion is that ... 17. 如果我是你，我会: If I were you, I would ... 18. 你最好/ 最好不: You had better (not) ...  二、必备话题句型及表达 1. 已收到你寻求......建议的来信。以下是我个人的建议，我希望它们对你有帮助。I have received your letter asking me some advice / suggestions ...The following are my personal suggestions, which I hope can be of great help to you. 2. 听到你在......上有困难很难过。但你如果采纳以下建议，情况很容易改善。I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take the following advice. 3. 对某人而言做......是重要的/必要的/有益的It’ s + 形容词 / 名词 （important/ necessary / helpful） for sb to do sth. 4. 做某事是重要的/ 有益的/ 好主意。Doing sth. is +形容词/ 名词（important/ necessary/ helpful/ a good idea / of great importance / of great help） 5. 在你亲自来之前读一些关于这些地方的书是必要的。Reading some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes is necessary for you. 6. 我建议你应该做...I suggest / recommend that you should ... 7. 我建议你就他的行为和你朋友I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. 8. 在我看来，你最好停止玩电脑游戏，更多地专注于学校和家庭生活。From my point of view/ As far as I am concerned/ Personally speaking/ In my opinion，you had better quit playing computer game and concentrate more on school and family life. 9. 在我看来，我认为你应该和同学积极沟通。From my point of view，I think you’ re supposed to communicate with your classmate. (2023北京高考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours，Li Hua （2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （2024·安徽黄山·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括： （1）说明问题； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Christine, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （2024·江苏南京·二模）假定你是李华，英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.使用教材的收获； 2.改进教材的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Professor Nunan, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua （2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。 要点：1. 你的建议；2. 你的祝福。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Charles, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua （2024·山东·三模）假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角，校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信，内容包括： 1. 提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等)； 2. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$