选择性必修第一册 Unit 1 Food matters（读后续写）-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）

Unit 1 Food matters单元写作深度指导（译林版2020） （读后续写） 三年考情（2022-2024） 命题趋势 2024 新高考I卷&II卷：人与社会（打车费）        浙江1月：人与自我（校园话题） 2023   新高考I卷&II卷：人与自我（老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣） 2022 新高考I卷&II卷；人与自我（鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑）       浙江1月：人与自我（与队友互助完成任务） 浙江6月：人与社会（参加社区服务） 新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料通常具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、逆境脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友爱类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类等等。 中华美食 food culture of China 中国饮食文化 The main course was swimming in oil. 主菜油汪注的 The smell of freshly baked bread filled the room. 刚出炉烤面包香味弥漫整个房间。 There are many versions of moon cakes from different places around China.中国各地的月饼有很多种。 Chinese cuisine is heavily influenced by regional differences, with each province offering unique dishes and cooking styles.中国菜深受地区差异的影响，每个省份都提供独特的菜肴和烹饪风格。 The delicious smell soon reaches my nose and my mouth starts to water.香味扑鼻而来，我开始口舌生津。 I've thrown myself into home cooking, from boiling noodles in the pot to frying steak in the pan.从煮面条到煎牛排，我全身心地投入到家庭烹饪中。 it definitely hit the spot when I tried salted duck, and it become one of my personal favourites. 我尝了盐水鸭，真的对我胃口了，(现在)它已经成了我最喜欢的食物之一。 Cooking together gives us a chance to relax and catch up on each other’s days.一起做饭给了我们放松的机会，也让们有机会聊聊彼此日常的情况。 The moon cake is always my favourite because of its satisfying taste that is out of this world and the happy memories it brings to mind.月饼一直是我的最爱，因为它令人满足的口味是世界上独一无二的，给我带来了美好的回忆。 The mouth-watering hot pots of Sichuan are as famous overseas as they are in China, and the hot flavour is enough to heat up a cold midwinter evening or to let loose rivers of sweat on a summer afternoon.今人垂涎欲滴的四川火锅驰名中外，热辣的味道足以让寒冷的隆冬之夜变得暖和起来。 1.（2024届浙江省嘉兴市高三下学期4月二模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Special#2，Please My flight arrived in San Diego around midnight, and by the time I drove home and got into bed it was nearly 2:00 a. m. I was tired and jet-lagged when I dragged myself out of the bed. Nevertheless,I had to be up bright and early that morning: I was the opening keynoter(主旨发言人) at a national conference. In short, I needed to recover quickly. A hearty breakfast in the early morning sun was what I needed. I headed for Carlos & Annie’s, a popular restaurant located in the heart of the seaside town. “I’d like steak and eggs, please,” I said to the waitress after I had finally found a table in the restaurant. “Oh, I'm sorry,” she apologized. “We're out of Special#2. We've served the last of our steaks. How about Special#14?” “Oh, no steak and eggs?” I couldn't seem to accept it. I'm not sure if it was my heartfelt sigh that caught Carlos, the owner's attention. His warm, caring brown eyes seemed determined to pinpoint the best solution. He then said, “You know, I think I did see one final steak back there.” Pressing my luck,I quickly declared, “Wow,that would be great. But you know, I’m not sure if I want a breakfast stink at all. What I really want is a steak—one that’s two inches thick, tender and juicy, served medium rare.” “Not to worry,” Carlos assured me and left. The young waitress gave me a wink(眨眼) and said with a knowing smile, “Carlos is being Carlos again!” I did not give her words much thought. Then, I noticed Carlos as he left the restaurant through the side door and walked into a neighborhood grocery store across the street. Carlos exchanged morning greetings with everyone he knew and even helped the owner of the bookstore next door by holding the items that filled her arms. Then he reentered the restaurant with a bag in his hand. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Within minutes，an exact Special#2 was in front of me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I was about to leave when I learned Carlos had already sold the restaurant. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Within minutes, an exact Special#2 was in front of me, its sight and smell instantly lifting my spirits. If Carlos hadn't stepped in, my day might have continued in a haze of disappointment. As I took the first bite, I couldn't help but marvel at how a simple act of kindness could profoundly alter one's outlook. "In a world often filled with haste and indifference, gestures like these stand out," I thought to myself, savoring not just the meal but the warmth and care that came with it. I was about to leave when I learned Carlos had already sold the restaurant, a revelation that made my heart sink. Had I known this would be my last encounter in this familiar setting, perhaps I would have lingered a bit longer, soaking in every detail. This unexpected change served as a poignant reminder that nothing in life is permanent, except the memories we hold dear and the impact we have on each other. "It's the moments of genuine connection that truly enrich our lives," I reflected as I walked away, grateful for the brief but meaningful interaction that would now be treasured in my collection of memories. 【导语】本文以时间为线索。讲述了作者希望通过一顿丰盛的早餐来恢复元气，却发现所想要的菜单项已售罄。Carlos的做法不仅满足了作者的需求，还让作者体会到了人性中的善意和关怀，成为作者记忆中的一个温暖瞬间，强调了即使是小小的行为也能在他人心中留下深刻印象。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句“几分钟后，一模一样的Special#2出现在我面前。”可知，本段可以描述Carlos成功地为作者提供了他所期待的早餐，为作者带来了喜悦和惊喜。 ②由第二段首句“当我得知Carlos已经卖掉了餐厅时，我正要离开，这个消息让我的心一沉。”可知，本段可描述作者得知这个消息后开始反思生活中的变化和遇见的意义，以及每个瞬间的宝贵。 2.续写线索 提供食物—食物去除阴霾—感悟—得知消息——感悟——感激 3.词汇激活 ①行为类 介入：step in/get involved 改变：alter/change/transform 充满：filled with/full of ②情感类 精神振奋：lift one's spirit/cheer up 感激：grateful/appreciative 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Had I known this would be my last encounter in this familiar setting, perhaps I would have lingered a bit longer, soaking in every detail.（运用了虚拟语气和现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】It's the moments of genuine connection that truly enrich our lives,（运用了强调句型） 1.（东北三省三校2023-2024学年高三下学期第一次联合模拟） Tomato Changed My Life Doing things-without being planned was never my strength. As a 14-year-old, I would refuse to go for walks around the block with my friends if I was the least bit behind in my schoolwork. Unlike most teenagers, I lived not in my room, but in an unused kitchen upstairs where I spread my books and papers on a large round table. I spent considerable time there, working continuously for hours, and my mother worried. She would try to lure (引诱) me away. “Come and watch the parade!” she would call from downstairs. “All neighbors are out there!” She thought of all kinds of tricks-the swimming pool, ice cream, stray cats and turtles-to remove me from my -studies, but nothing ever worked. Later, in college, the pattern continued. The library and my college dorm replaced the unused kitchen at home. When spring came along friends would stop by my dorm or peer into my library room to persuade me to play Frisbee on the lawn. “No, I would almost always say.” I have too much to do. My college study days were gone, but not my need and love for schedules. My friends and sisters tried to keep me away from my plans, but they were hardly ever successful. This summer, though, while house sitting for my parents, I was persuaded to change my plans in the most unexpected way. The sight of tomatoes growing in my mother’s garden lured me out of my tightly scheduled world. They drew me with the power of a lover’s gaze. Hundreds of them were turning ripe and red by the minute, decorating the garden like decorations on a Christmas tree. “If I have time, I’ll make tomato sauce (番茄酱).” I told myself. But my long week in the house by myself was already filled with things to do: writing, and finishing a project that I brought home from the office. Then, watching the fascinating tomatoes continuously falling to the ground in ever-greater numbers, again I mentally argued about all the things I had planned and needed to do. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Finally, I gave in. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A month later, my parents came back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Finally, I gave in. I picked up the recipe that I had copied down from a friend. “Prepare a little bit of water with garlic and onions. Add…,” it read. I scorched for 20 minutes in the kitchen cabinet and pulled out a huge white china pot. I washed the tomatoes, cutting away sections that were spoiled, and sliced and threw them into the pot. I swayed the watery mixture as if I were washing gold. Meanwhile, turning on the stereo, I sang along with Billy Joel and reviewed a step I’d picked up in my swing-dance class. A month later, my parents came back. They found a daughter who had discovered the beauty of flexibility. I shared stories of my tomato adventures, and we laughed together. My mom, the same woman who used to try and lure me away from my books, now shared in my newfound passion for the kitchen. As I stood in the kitchen, surrounded by the rich flavour of tomato sauce, I realized the importance of allowing life to surprise us. Those tomatoes had taught me a valuable lesson: balance in life is not just about sticking to schedules and plans; it’s also about embracing the unexpected, reminding me that there’s a world of joy beyond the limitations of a strict schedule. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者做事一直都很有计划，不会受外界的人和事物诱惑。一次做西红柿酱的经历使作者得到一个教训：生活中的平衡不仅仅是坚持时间表和计划；这也是关于拥抱意想不到的事情，提醒作者在严格的时间表限制之外还有一个快乐的世界。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“最终，我屈服了。”可知，第一段可描写作者做西红柿酱的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“一个月后，我的父母回来了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和父母分享制作西红柿酱的经历以及感悟。 2.续写线索：拿起食谱——制作西红柿酱——和父母分享经历——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 拿起：pick up/hold up 打开：turn on/switch on 发现：find/discover 意识到：realize/be aware of 情绪类 使惊讶：surprise/amaze 【点睛】 [高分句型1] I washed the tomatoes, cutting away sections that were spoiled, and sliced and threw them into the pot.（运用了现在分词作状语，that引导定语从句） [高分句型2] As I stood in the kitchen, surrounded by the rich flavour of tomato sauce, I realized the importance of allowing life to surprise us.（运用了as引导时间状语从句，动名词作宾语） 2.（2024届浙江省杭州第二中学新高考模拟） During this past year I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time, when these things happened, I was disgusted with the way people didn’t bother to help. The people at the gas stations where I asked for a gas can told me they couldn’t lend it out “for safety reasons,” but that I could buy a coverless can for $15. But you know who came to my rescue all three times? Immigrants. Mexican immigrants. None of them spoke any English. One of those guys stopped to help me with the blowout even though he had his whole family of four. I was on the side of the road for three hours with my, big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said, “NEED A JACK (千斤顶),” and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a truck pulled over, and the guy jumped off. He understood the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack. Then we were in business. I started taking the wheel off, and, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: he ran to the truck and handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash to buy a new one. She was back in 15minutes. We finished the job with a little sweat, and I was a very happy man. The two of us were filthy and sweaty. His wife produced a water jug for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived, thinking maybe I’d send them a gift for being so awesome. She said they lived in Mexico. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could pick cherries for the next few weeks. Then they were going to pick peaches, then go back home. After I said my goodbyes and started walking back to the Jeep, the girl called out and asked if I’d had lunch. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When I told her no, she ran up and handed me a tamale（墨西哥粽）. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ He saw the $20 in my hand and just started shaking his head. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When I told her no, she ran up and handed me a tamale. She explained to me that it was typical Mexico food and eagerly asked me to have a try. Meanwhile, she invited me to where they were going to have lunch together, for their truck happened to have some food and some things for a picnic. Therefore we ate together in a vacant lot by the side of the road. We shared interesting stories while enjoying the tasty food. After lunch, I was about to say goodbye when I again pulled out $20 intended for the favor. He saw the $20 in my hand and just started shaking his head. He insisted on not accepting my money because he didn’t want to convert good intentions into numbers. Also, they stuffed a paper bag full of fresh fruits into my hand and then left. I swung back to my jeep, deeply touched and lost in thought. There was indifference as well as warmth and kindness among strangers. It was the experience that gave me new faith in people’s good virtue. And I decided to pay forward the kindness. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了去年作者汽车出现了三次故障，大多数人都懒得帮忙，作者对此感到很厌烦。有一次，他的汽车又出故障了。他在路边求助了接近3个小时，但是没有人停下来帮忙。就在打算放弃的时候，一个过路的墨西哥家庭停下来，提供了帮助。之后，这家人还邀请了作者吃午饭，结束后，作者想要给钱报酬，但是被拒绝了，这件事让作者有了新的感悟。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当我告诉她没有的时候，她跑过来递给我一个墨西哥粽。”可知，第一段可描写小女孩代表一家人邀请作者吃午饭，作者想要给报酬。 ②由第二段首句内容“他看到我手里的20美元，就开始摇着头。”可知，第二段可描写女孩爸爸拒绝作者的金钱，并给了作者一些水果，作者有了新的感悟。 2.续写线索：女孩给作者墨西哥粽——邀请共进午餐——给钱报酬——拒绝金钱——相赠水果——作者的感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①解释：explain/make it clear ②想要：want/would like 情绪类 ①急切地：eagerly/desperately ②感动：touched/moved 【点睛】 [高分句型1] She explained to me that it was typical Mexico food and eagerly asked me to have a try.（由that引导的宾语从句） [高分句型2] It was the experience that gave me new faith in people’s good virtue.（强调句型） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 Food matters单元写作深度指导（译林版2020） （读后续写） 三年考情（2022-2024） 命题趋势 2024 新高考I卷&II卷：人与社会（打车费）        浙江1月：人与自我（校园话题） 2023   新高考I卷&II卷：人与自我（老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣） 2022 新高考I卷&II卷；人与自我（鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑）       浙江1月：人与自我（与队友互助完成任务） 浙江6月：人与社会（参加社区服务） 新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料通常具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、逆境脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友爱类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类等等。 中华美食 food culture of China 中国饮食文化 The main course was swimming in oil. 主菜油汪注的 The smell of freshly baked bread filled the room. 刚出炉烤面包香味弥漫整个房间。 There are many versions of moon cakes from different places around China.中国各地的月饼有很多种。 Chinese cuisine is heavily influenced by regional differences, with each province offering unique dishes and cooking styles.中国菜深受地区差异的影响，每个省份都提供独特的菜肴和烹饪风格。 The delicious smell soon reaches my nose and my mouth starts to water.香味扑鼻而来，我开始口舌生津。 I've thrown myself into home cooking, from boiling noodles in the pot to frying steak in the pan.从煮面条到煎牛排，我全身心地投入到家庭烹饪中。 it definitely hit the spot when I tried salted duck, and it become one of my personal favourites. 我尝了盐水鸭，真的对我胃口了，(现在)它已经成了我最喜欢的食物之一。 Cooking together gives us a chance to relax and catch up on each other’s days.一起做饭给了我们放松的机会，也让们有机会聊聊彼此日常的情况。 The moon cake is always my favourite because of its satisfying taste that is out of this world and the happy memories it brings to mind.月饼一直是我的最爱，因为它令人满足的口味是世界上独一无二的，给我带来了美好的回忆。 The mouth-watering hot pots of Sichuan are as famous overseas as they are in China, and the hot flavour is enough to heat up a cold midwinter evening or to let loose rivers of sweat on a summer afternoon.今人垂涎欲滴的四川火锅驰名中外，热辣的味道足以让寒冷的隆冬之夜变得暖和起来。 1.（2024届浙江省嘉兴市高三下学期4月二模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Special#2，Please My flight arrived in San Diego around midnight, and by the time I drove home and got into bed it was nearly 2:00 a. m. I was tired and jet-lagged when I dragged myself out of the bed. Nevertheless,I had to be up bright and early that morning: I was the opening keynoter(主旨发言人) at a national conference. In short, I needed to recover quickly. A hearty breakfast in the early morning sun was what I needed. I headed for Carlos & Annie’s, a popular restaurant located in the heart of the seaside town. “I’d like steak and eggs, please,” I said to the waitress after I had finally found a table in the restaurant. “Oh, I'm sorry,” she apologized. “We're out of Special#2. We've served the last of our steaks. How about Special#14?” “Oh, no steak and eggs?” I couldn't seem to accept it. I'm not sure if it was my heartfelt sigh that caught Carlos, the owner's attention. His warm, caring brown eyes seemed determined to pinpoint the best solution. He then said, “You know, I think I did see one final steak back there.” Pressing my luck,I quickly declared, “Wow,that would be great. But you know, I’m not sure if I want a breakfast stink at all. What I really want is a steak—one that’s two inches thick, tender and juicy, served medium rare.” “Not to worry,” Carlos assured me and left. The young waitress gave me a wink(眨眼) and said with a knowing smile, “Carlos is being Carlos again!” I did not give her words much thought. Then, I noticed Carlos as he left the restaurant through the side door and walked into a neighborhood grocery store across the street. Carlos exchanged morning greetings with everyone he knew and even helped the owner of the bookstore next door by holding the items that filled her arms. Then he reentered the restaurant with a bag in his hand. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Within minutes，an exact Special#2 was in front of me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I was about to leave when I learned Carlos had already sold the restaurant. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1.（东北三省三校2023-2024学年高三下学期第一次联合模拟） Tomato Changed My Life Doing things-without being planned was never my strength. As a 14-year-old, I would refuse to go for walks around the block with my friends if I was the least bit behind in my schoolwork. Unlike most teenagers, I lived not in my room, but in an unused kitchen upstairs where I spread my books and papers on a large round table. I spent considerable time there, working continuously for hours, and my mother worried. She would try to lure (引诱) me away. “Come and watch the parade!” she would call from downstairs. “All neighbors are out there!” She thought of all kinds of tricks-the swimming pool, ice cream, stray cats and turtles-to remove me from my -studies, but nothing ever worked. Later, in college, the pattern continued. The library and my college dorm replaced the unused kitchen at home. When spring came along friends would stop by my dorm or peer into my library room to persuade me to play Frisbee on the lawn. “No, I would almost always say.” I have too much to do. My college study days were gone, but not my need and love for schedules. My friends and sisters tried to keep me away from my plans, but they were hardly ever successful. This summer, though, while house sitting for my parents, I was persuaded to change my plans in the most unexpected way. The sight of tomatoes growing in my mother’s garden lured me out of my tightly scheduled world. They drew me with the power of a lover’s gaze. Hundreds of them were turning ripe and red by the minute, decorating the garden like decorations on a Christmas tree. “If I have time, I’ll make tomato sauce (番茄酱).” I told myself. But my long week in the house by myself was already filled with things to do: writing, and finishing a project that I brought home from the office. Then, watching the fascinating tomatoes continuously falling to the ground in ever-greater numbers, again I mentally argued about all the things I had planned and needed to do. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Finally, I gave in. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A month later, my parents came back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（2024届浙江省杭州第二中学新高考模拟） During this past year I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time, when these things happened, I was disgusted with the way people didn’t bother to help. The people at the gas stations where I asked for a gas can told me they couldn’t lend it out “for safety reasons,” but that I could buy a coverless can for $15. But you know who came to my rescue all three times? Immigrants. Mexican immigrants. None of them spoke any English. One of those guys stopped to help me with the blowout even though he had his whole family of four. I was on the side of the road for three hours with my, big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said, “NEED A JACK (千斤顶),” and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a truck pulled over, and the guy jumped off. He understood the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack. Then we were in business. I started taking the wheel off, and, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: he ran to the truck and handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash to buy a new one. She was back in 15minutes. We finished the job with a little sweat, and I was a very happy man. The two of us were filthy and sweaty. His wife produced a water jug for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived, thinking maybe I’d send them a gift for being so awesome. She said they lived in Mexico. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could pick cherries for the next few weeks. Then they were going to pick peaches, then go back home. After I said my goodbyes and started walking back to the Jeep, the girl called out and asked if I’d had lunch. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When I told her no, she ran up and handed me a tamale（墨西哥粽）. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ He saw the $20 in my hand and just started shaking his head. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$