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第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱
目 录
出彩句式 句子高级·表达脱俗
亮点写法 语段优美·彰显功底
课时作业评价
主题写作 命题热点·追根教材
句子高级·表达脱俗
出彩句式
1.不定式作定语
(1)当中心词是序数词或被序数词、形容词最高级,the next, the only, the last等修饰时,常用动词不定式(短语)作后置定语。
(2)一些抽象名词后常接动词不定式(短语)作定语,动词不定式(短语)说明名词的内容。常见的此类名词有:way, ability, chance, courage, opportunity, right, promise等。
(3)不定代词something, nothing, little等后常用不定式作定语。
(单句语法填空)
①The outstanding feature of the DF-41 missile is its ability __________(locate) the accurate position of the target.
②This is a good chance ________(go) to college, so she is unwilling to give it up.
③It is one of the first theme parks __________(become) popular around the world.
先学通
(通过题点训练把握用法规则)
to locate
to go
to become
④她是第一个在这届奥运会上获得金牌的运动员。
She was _____________________a gold medal at the Olympic Games.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
the first athlete to win
⑤和家人一起散步给了我们放松的机会,也让我们有机会聊聊彼此日常的情况。
Walking with our families gives us ________________and catch up on each other's days.
a chance to relax
2.It is/was the+序数词+time+that从句
(1)“It/This/That was the first/second/... time (that)+过去完成时”表示“第一/第二/……次……”。
(2)“It/This/That is the first/second/... time (that)+现在完成时”表示“第一/第二/……次……”。
(3)It is/was (about/high) time (that) ... should do/did sth.意为“到了做某事的时间了”,相当于It is/was time for sb.to do sth.。
(单句语法填空/句型转换)
①It was the second time that he ___________(make) the same mistake.
②It is the first time that you ______________(attend) a lecture concerning Tang poems.
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先学通
(通过题点训练把握用法规则)
had made
have attended
③I think it is high time that you __________________ (make) up your mind.
④It’s time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.
→_____________________________ measures to protect endangered animals.
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made/should make
It’s time that we took/should take
⑤这是我第一次被选中在即将到来的全运会上做一名志愿者。
This is the first time that _________________________________in the coming National Games.
⑥该是我们采取有效措施来防止环境污染的时候了。
_____________________________________________________to stop environmental pollution.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
I have been chosen to be a volunteer
It is high time that we took/should take effective measures
语段优美•彰显功底
亮点写法
1.赏用词与结构之美
Firefighters quickly put out the Henderson Tower fire last night. The fire, which is thought to have started from the 8th floor, spread quickly through the tower block on Sunday night, leaving people on the upper floors trapped.
写法领悟:第一句和第二句中两次使用副词quickly,分别修饰put out和spread,既描写了火势蔓延之快,又强调了消防员快速、高效的灭火过程。副词的灵活运用可以增强动词的表达效果,令语境更加生动鲜活。第二句中使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,具体介绍了火灾发生的有关情况;句尾使用了现在分词短语leaving people on the upper floors trapped作结果状语,说明了火灾引发的后果。
2.赏结构与修辞之美
Lisa Mayer, 29, is among the lucky ones who only suffered minor injuries.She recalled, “I was about to have a bath when I heard people screaming and dogs barking. I looked outside and the smoke was choking me.It was like an awful dream.”
写法领悟:第一句中的“29”为同位语,简洁明了地交代了有关Lisa Mayer的细节信息。第二句中运用了直接引语来阐述火灾的具体情况,增加了真实性、可信性。最后一句中借助介词like使用了比喻的修辞手法,描绘了火灾现场的可怕景象。除了介词like, 连词as, as if, as ...as,系动词seem,以及句型A is to B as C is to D等表示“好像”意义的词汇与句式都可以用来构成比喻句。
3.赏用词之美
We can see that the first news report pays more attention to the rescue efforts, while the second talks more about deaths and injuries.When we read more than one report, we come to understand an event in a more comprehensive way.
写法领悟:第一句中使用了并列连词while来表示对比,清晰明了地写出了两篇新闻报道的侧重点不同。对比手法的使用可以令表达效果更突出,给读者以深刻的印象。第二句中的“come to understand”意为“开始明白”,暗含“逐渐明白”之意,令表达内容动态化。 come 后面接认知动词 think, believe, know, understand, realize, expect, accept, regard 等的动词不定式,表示“开始、逐渐认为/看作……”等意思,写作时注意灵活使用以提升文章的表达效果。
①I ______________________for my name.
我快速浏览了一下名单,看有没有我的名字。
②Air is to human________________.(比喻修辞)
空气之于人,犹如水之于鱼。
针对练笔
(根据提示完成句子)
scanned the list quickly
as water is to fish
③Tom is very good at science______________________________.
(while)汤姆非常擅长理科,而他的弟弟却在文科方面表现很好。
④I hope we shall be friends and___________________________.我希望我们能成为朋友,逐渐相互理解。
while his brother does well in arts
come to understand one another
命题热点•追根教材
主题写作
本单元主题是“大众传媒”,属于“人与社会”的主题语境。针对此类主题,高考在设题时通常直接要求写一篇新闻报道,考查考生对其文体特点及写作技巧的掌握;此外,命题人也会以论说文的形式考查对各种新闻媒体的看法,以引导学生正确认识并理解大众传媒的形式和内涵,以及它们对日常生活和社会发展的影响和作用;帮助学生学会合理使用各种大众传媒工具,培养学生的思维品质,让其在充斥着各种媒体信息的现代社会中学会批判性思考。
命题导向
(一)新闻报道的写作
1.according to figures released by ... 根据……公布的数据
2.cause serious damage 造成严重损失
3.there is concern that ... 人们担心……
4.Firefighters quickly put out the Henderson Tower fire last night.昨晚消防员迅速扑灭了亨德森大楼的大火。
构建语义场
5.The fire has also left dozens of people injured, 5 of whom are in a critical condition.
大火还造成许多人受伤,其中5人伤势严峻。
6.A team is currently investigating the accident further.
调查组目前正在进一步调查这起事故。
(二)认识大众传媒
1.reading news reports critically批判性地阅读新闻报道
2.understand an event in a more comprehensive way更全面地了解一起事件
3.contradict each other in terms of factual details在事实性的细节上相互矛盾
4.give false information 提供错误信息
5.use our own judgement运用我们自己的判断力
6.To sum up, it is wise to read news reports written from various perspectives and at different stages, which brings us a more accurate understanding of a situation.
总之,阅读从不同角度、不同阶段写就的新闻报道是明智之举,这样可以让我们更准确地了解情况。
写作任务——基础写作的建模训练
[题目] 你校英文报正组织同学们分享自己对网络新闻(network news)的看法,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.优点:有助于获取最新新闻;减少纸张的使用等;
2.缺点:存在虚假信息;容易误导大众;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
平时勤练笔
[构思与要点表达]
第一部分 描述现象,导入主题
[从教材中学] We rely on news to learn about what is happening in the world around us.
[到写作中用] 随着互联网的发展,越来越多的人依靠网络新闻来了解我们周围世界正在发生的事情。
With the development of the Internet, more and more people rely on network news to learn about what is happening in the world around us.
第二部分 网络新闻的优势
[头脑风暴] 网络新闻有哪些优势?
1.让人们能够获取最新信息
allow people to get the latest information
2.快速便捷地获取新闻___________________________________
3.配有图片和视频_________________________________
have a quick and easy access to the news
be equipped with pictures and videos
4.以生动、直观的方式欣赏新闻
appreciate the news in a lively and visual way
5.减少纸张的使用_______________________
reduce the use of paper
[连词成句]
The network news ________________________________________
_____________________________________equipped with pictures and videos,______________________________________________________.
In addition, by reading the network news, _________________________
_________________________________________.
allows people to have a quick and easy access
to a huge amount of the latest information
enabling readers to appreciate the news in a lively and visual way
we can reduce the use of
paper, which is beneficial to the environment
网络新闻使人们能够快速便捷地获取海量最新信息,这些信息配有图片和视频,使读者能够以生动、直观的方式欣赏新闻。此外,通过阅读网络新闻,我们可以减少纸张的使用,这对环境有益。
第三部分 网络新闻的弊端
[头脑风暴] 网络新闻有哪些弊端?
1.充斥着虚假信息_____________________________
2.在事实性的细节上相互矛盾_____________________________
_____________
3.容易误导人们____________________
be flooded with false information
contradict each other in terms of
factual details
mislead people easily
[连词成句]
The Internet news is also flooded with false information and often contradicts each other in terms of factual details, which tends to mislead people easily.
网络新闻也充斥着虚假信息,在事实细节上往往相互矛盾,容易误导人们。
第四部分 你的建议
[从教材中学] We also need to be critical about the information we receive and remember not to blindly trust what we have read.
[到写作中用] 我们要运用自己的判断力,批判性地阅读网络新闻,并且记住不要盲目相信我们读到的新闻报道。
We need to use our own judgement to read the network news critically and remember not to blindly trust what we have read.
[衔接与逻辑成篇]
运用补加、过渡与衔接,将上述语句连接成篇
With the development of the Internet, more and more people rely on network news to learn about what is happening in the world around us.
The network news allows people to have a quick and easy access to a huge amount of the latest information equipped with pictures and videos,enabling readers to appreciate the news in a lively and visual way.In addition, by reading the network news, we can reduce the use of paper, which is beneficial to the environment.However, the Internet news is also flooded with false information and often contradicts each other in terms of factual details, which tends to mislead people easily.
So, we need to use our own judgement to read the network news critically and remember not to blindly trust what we have read.
主题表达升格训练
课时作业评价
Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子
1.(完成句子)At first, she gave ___________________were given by the others.
最初,她给出的是和其他人一样的答案。
2.(完成句子)The fog was so heavy, _________________________
________________.(make it+adj.+to do)
雾太大了,这使得我们不可能按时到达那里。
the same answers as
making it impossible for us to
get there on time
3.(完成句子)_____________________ a routine medical check-up every year.(advisable)
每年做一次常规的健康检查是明智的。
4.(完成句子)Health _____________________________________a balanced diet and plenty of exercise.(be thought to)
人们通常认为健康是与均衡饮食及充分锻炼联系在一起的。
It is advisable to have
is frequently thought to be associated with
5.(一句多译)毕业后,林巧稚随即成为北京协和医院妇产科聘任的第一位女住院医师。
①Lin Qiaozhi immediately __________________________________
as a resident physician in the OB-GYN department of the PUMC Hospital after graduation.(不定式作定语)
became the first woman ever to be hired
②Lin Qiaozhi immediately ________________________________
_______as a resident physician in the OB-GYN department of the PUMC Hospital after graduation.(定语从句)
became the first woman who was ever
hired
6.The mountains turn bright green with growing rice in summer.
→_____________________________________________________
____________ (用witness将句子升级为拟人写法)
Summer witnesses the mountains turn bright green with
growing rice.
Ⅱ.语法填空
(2024·邯郸调研)Scientists have proposed several objectives for a future international lunar research station, 1 (include) moon-based Earth observation and lunar resource utilization (利用), the China Science Daily 2 (report) on Friday.
Zou Yongliao, head of the lunar and deep space exploration division of the Chinese Academy of Sciences, revealed the goals at a recent 3 (nation) space conference.China plans 4 (establish) a basic model for a lunar research station based on two planned exploration missions by 2028, and 5 (subsequent) expand it into an international one.
According to Zou, as scientists continue to develop the blueprint for the research station, they have already made progress by coming up 6 specific objectives for science and application.These objectives mainly involve studying the moon's evolution (进化), exploring star formation and 7 (activity), and observing the sun and Earth from the moon.
Zou also mentioned the 8 (perform) of scientific experiments, like growing plants on the lunar surface, and the utilization of lunar resources, such as moon minerals 9 solar energy.The scientist noted that the moon is still the “main field” of deep space exploration and the construction of an international lunar research station was 10 historical necessity.
语篇解读:本文是一篇新闻报道。文章讲述了科学家们为未来的国际月球研究站提出了几个目标,包括月球对地观测和月球资源利用。
1.including 考查介词。根据句意,此处应用including“包括”构成介词短语作状语。
2.reported 考查动词时态。 分析句子可知,report在句中作谓语;再由时间状语“on Friday”可知,应用一般过去时。
3.national 考查形容词。此处修饰名词短语space conference,应用形容词作定语,故填national。
4.to establish 考查非谓语动词。plan后接不定式作宾语,故填to establish。
5.subsequently 考查副词。修饰动词expand应用副词作状语,故填subsequently。
6.with 考查介词。come up with意为“提出”,是固定短语。
7.activities 考查名词复数。分析句子可知,此处应用名词与star formation并列作宾语,且activity是可数名词,其前无限定词,应用复数,表泛指。故填activities。
8.performance 考查名词。定冠词the与介词of之间应填名词形式,在句中作宾语;performance意为“表现”时为不可数名词,故填performance。
9.and 考查连词。前后文之间是并列关系,故填并列连词and。
10.a 考查冠词。此处泛指“一个历史必然性”,应用不定冠词,且historical以辅音音素开头,故填a。
Ⅲ.应用文写作
(2024·湖北八市高三联考)为了增强学生的安全防范意识,今天上午你校组织了紧急逃生疏散演练活动。假定你是李华,请你给校英文广播站写一篇相关的新闻报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的; 2.活动流程; 3.活动感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
One emergency evacuation drill
参考范文:
One emergency evacuation drill
In order to enhance the security awareness of the students, and teach us what to do when a fire or an emergency happens, our school organized a fire evacuation drill this morning.
At 9:30 a.m., we heard the alarm.Instructed by some teachers in charge, we rushed to the appointed areas in order.Afterwards, we followed the messages on the air to head for the safe place.On arriving at the playground, we stood in line.Our headmaster made a summary, attaching great importance to safety.
Not only did the drill increase our knowledge of protecting ourselves in the face of emergencies, a fire in particular, but it also provided a precious opportunity to deal with them.
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