选择性必修第二册 Unit 3 Fit for Life 第2课时（Word教师用书）-【创新方案】2025年高考英语一轮总复习（译林版2020）

第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱 　without引导的含蓄虚拟条件句 (1)在without引导的含蓄虚拟条件句中，如果表示与过去事实相反的假设，主句谓语动词用would/could/might＋have done；如果表示与现在或将来事实相反的假设，则用would/could/might＋do。 (2)含蓄虚拟条件句还可以用but for, otherwise, or, but等词(词组)来引导。 (3)otherwise, or构成的含蓄虚拟语气模式为“真实情况＋otherwise/or＋虚拟情况”；而but构成的含蓄虚拟语气模式为“虚拟情况＋but＋真实情况”。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 ①I would have failed in the examination if you hadn't helped me. →I would have failed in the examination without_your_help. ②If my parents hadn't lent me the money, I couldn't have afforded the trip. →My parents lent me the money.Otherwise,_I_couldn't_have_afforded_the_trip. ③If you hadn't just rescued him in time, the boy would have been drowned. →But_for_your_timely_rescue,_the boy would have been drowned. |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ④信心和阳光一样重要，没有阳光，所有的生物都无法生存。 Confidence is as important as sunshine, without which all creatures would_not_survive. ⑤拥有友谊，生活就会快乐又和谐；没有友谊，生活将会充满敌意与不幸。 With friendship, life is happy and harmonious; without_friendship,_life would be hostile and unfortunate. ⑥要不是开会，我那时早就回家了。 But_for_the_meeting,_I would have gone home at the time. ⑦我当时太忙，否则我就给你打电话了。 I was too busy at that time; otherwise, I_would_have_called_you. 1．赏用词与结构之美 Over the course of my career, I have seen many wonderful scientific developments, but none are as game-changing as genome editing.I am full of excitement about the possibilities this scientific advance can bring and I hope to share my excitement with you today. 写法领悟：第一句后半句中，“as＋adj.＋as”与表示否定的代词none连用，在此表示最高级含义，能够起到加强语气的作用，引起公众的关注和共鸣。第二句中的“am full of excitement”写出了作者对基因组编辑所能带来的可能性满怀兴奋之情。 2．赏修辞之美 One day soon we will be able to use genome editing to increase the human resistance to colds and flus, to make people taller, to help their muscles develop faster, to sharpen all of their senses or to make them more intelligent. 写法领悟：本句中出现了多个不定式短语连用，这种排比修辞手法可以增加演讲时的节奏感和音韵美，突出演讲者的雄辩口才和强烈感情，增强演讲语言的气势，提高说服力。 3．赏结构与修辞之美 This means putting appropriate controls in place to make sure that genome editing will work to our advantage.Without them, genome editing could be as dangerous as a car out of control. 写法领悟：第二句中使用了含蓄条件句(Without ...)引起的虚拟语气，属于写作中的高级句式，表达出演讲者对于基因组编辑技术失控可能导致严重后果的担忧。同时，句中使用了比喻修辞手法，将失控的技术比作失控的汽车，形象地说明了后果的严重性。 [针对练笔]　(根据提示完成句子) ①I have seen many moving films in my life, but none_are_as_touching_as the film we saw last night.(否定词＋as ...as) 我一生中看过许多感人的电影，但没有一部像我们昨晚看的那部电影那样感人。 ②As a modern college student, I get online everyday to_acquire_the_information_I_need,_to_download_the_music_and_movies_I_like,_and to_chat_with_the_friends_I_miss.作为一名现代大学生，我每天都上网获取我需要的信息，下载我喜欢的音乐和电影，和我想念的朋友聊天。 本单元主题是“疾病与健康”，属于“人与社会”的主题语境。针对此类主题，应用文在设题时有时会以活动报道的形式考查学生对急救知识的掌握程度，以增强学生的健康安全意识；或者以征文投稿、新闻报道或倡议书等形式介绍医学领域的新成果或中国传统医学的杰出成就，帮助学生了解中外医学发展的现状和趋势，并激发学生积极弘扬传统中医药文化的热情，坚定文化自信。　　 构建语义场 (一)疾病与健康 1．affect our chances of contracting certain diseases影响我们罹患某种疾病的概率 2．an effective means of disease treatment and prevention治疗和预防疾病的一种有效手段 3．increase the human resistance to colds and flus提高人体对感冒和流感的抵抗力 4．treat a wide variety of health problems治疗各种各样的健康问题 5．Genome editing, serving as a new weapon in the fight against diseases, will lead to a fundamental change in our approach to health care. 基因组编辑技术作为对抗疾病的一种新武器，将从根本上改变我们的医疗保健方式。 (二)中国传统医学 1．one of the most famous Chinese medical treatments最负盛名的中国医术之一 2．feel his or her pulse　　 搭脉 3．a popular form of treatment 一种广受欢迎的疗法 4．as a unique contribution of traditional Chinese medicine作为传统中医的一项独特贡献 5．be recognized as a symbol of traditional Chinese culture 被认为是中国传统文化的一个符号 6．come into widespread use around the world在世界各地得到广泛应用 7．Up to now, more than 360 acupuncture points have been identified, each linked to a different part of the body.到目前为止，已有360多个穴位被确认，每个穴位对应着身体的不同部位。 (三)急救常识 1．give sb.first aid at once　 立刻对某人实施急救 2．save the lives of others 挽救他人的生命 3．apply medicine to the wound 　　 给伤口敷药 4．wrap the wound with bandages 　　 用绷带包扎伤口 5．First aid is very essential in our life, especially when people suddenly fall ill or get injured. 在我们的生活中，急救非常重要，特别是在有人突发疾病或受伤的时候。 6．If a person is poisoned by the gas, open the doors and windows to let the fresh air in. 若有人煤气中毒，打开门窗，让新鲜空气进入。 7．Remove any clothes using scissors if necessary, unless you see the fabric sticking to the burnt skin.如有必要，用剪刀剪掉烧伤部位的衣服，除非衣服与被烧伤的皮肤粘连在一起。 平时勤练笔 写作任务——基础写作的建模训练 [题目]　假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Mary 来信说她对中国的传统医学非常感兴趣，希望你能给她介绍一些有关中医的信息。请给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1．简介中医的历史及重要意义； 2．建议她阅读一些中医著作。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mary， I feel honored to introduce some information about traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) to you. 　 　 Please don't hesitate to let me know if you need more details. Yours， Li Hua [构思与要点表达] 第一部分　中医的历史及地位 要点1：中医的悠久历史 [从教材中学]　It was developed long ago, perhaps as early as 2000 BCE. [到写作中用]　中医历史悠久，最早或起源于公元前2000年。 TCM_was_developed_long_ago,_perhaps_as_early_as_2000_BCE. 要点2：中医的重要地位 [从教材中学]　Today, acupuncture is recognized as a symbol of traditional Chinese culture and has come into widespread use around the world. [到写作中用]　今天，中医被公认为中国传统文化的重要组成部分，并在世界各地得到广泛应用。 Today,_TCM_is_recognized_as_an_important_part_of_traditional_Chinese_culture_and_has_come_into_widespread_use_around_the_world. 第二部分　举例说明中医的重要性 [从教材中学] 1．By checking all the positions, the acupuncturist can find out which energy channel does not have enough energy. 2．...as they believe genome editing is an effective means of disease treatment and prevention. [到写作中用]　通过参考中药配方，屠呦呦成功制备了青蒿提取物。她相信，借鉴中医的智慧，人们将能发现更多治疗与预防疾病的有效措施。 By_referring_to_traditional_Chinese_medical_recipes,_Tu Youyou succeeded in making qinghao extract.She_believed_that drawing on the wisdom of traditional Chinese medicine, people_will_discover_more_effective_means_of_disease_treatment_and_prevention. 第三部分　推荐阅读中医著作 [从教材中学] 1．There is still much to be explored and debated on the subject of genome editing. 2．This means putting appropriate controls in place to make sure that genome editing will work to our advantage. [到写作中用]　历史上有许多著名的中医代表人物，例如张仲景、孙思邈和李时珍等。你可以翻阅他们的著作来了解中医知识。 There_are_a_lot_of_famous_representatives_of_TCM_in_history,_such as Zhang Zhongjing, Sun Simiao, Li Shizhen and so on.You can look through their masterpieces to_acquaint_yourself_with_knowledge_of_TCM. [衔接与逻辑成篇] 运用补加、过渡与衔接，将上述语句连接成篇 Dear Mary， I feel honored to introduce some information about traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) to you. Traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) was developed long ago, perhaps as early as 2000 BCE.Today, TCM is recognized as an important part of traditional Chinese culture and has come into widespread use around the world.As we all know, by referring to traditional Chinese medical recipes, Tu Youyou succeeded in making qinghao extract.She believed that drawing on the wisdom of traditional Chinese medicine, people will discover more effective means of disease treatment and prevention. There are a lot of famous representatives of TCM in history, such as Zhang Zhongjing，Sun Simiao, Li Shizhen and so on.You can look through their masterpieces to acquaint yourself with knowledge of TCM. Please don't hesitate to let me know if you need more details. Yours， Li Hua [课时作业评价]　　　　主题表达升格训练 Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子 1．(完成句子)All the factories must clean the waste water before_it_is_poured_into rivers or lakes. 工厂在排放废水进入河流或湖泊之前必须净化废水。 2．(完成句子)We might_have_been_lost in the forest without the compass. 如果没有指南针，我们可能就在森林里迷路了。 3．(完成句子)I have a good command of both Chinese and English, so there_is_no_doubt_that_I_can_communicate_with_visitors_fluently.(there is no doubt that ...) 我精通中文和英文，所以毫无疑问，我可以流利地与游客交流。 4．(完成句子)There_is_evidence_that running can strengthen your immune system and reduce the risk of serious diseases.有证据表明，跑步能增强你的免疫系统，降低患严重疾病的风险。 5．(一句多译)天气允许的话，我们明天去看你。 ①Weather_permitting,_we_are_going_to_visit_you_tomorrow.(独立主格结构) ②If_weather_permits,_we_are_going_to_visit_you_tomorrow.(if) 6．If you didn't help me, I would not have made such great progress in English-learning. →Without_your_help,_I_would_not_have_made_such_great_progress in English-learning.(用without升级) Ⅱ.语法填空 (2024·济宁模拟)Chinese acupuncture, also known as the art of “magic needles”， is __1__ branch of traditional Chinese medicine. It has a long history __2__ (date) back to the Stone Age. It has been used to treat a wide __3__ (vary) of health problems, like severe pains, sports injuries, depression, etc. The World Health Organization recommends it __4__ a good treatment for over 100 medical problems. How does it work? Special thin needles are placed in the __5__ (target) points of your body. __6__ (typical), the number of points range between 1 and 12, depending on your body situations. The needles are pushed just under the skin, though in some cases, they are pushed slightly __7__ (deep) in order to reach the muscle tissue. The belief behind it is __8__ illness and pain occur because of blocked energy (or Qi) in the body. Acupuncture is used to reestablish the flow of energy and stimulate the body's natural healing (治愈) ability. __9__ (human) are most happy and healthy when this energy is harmonious and balanced. Following treatment, you'll feel incredibly relaxed and calm. Due to its unique contribution, Chinese acupuncture __10__ (name) a UNESCO Intangible Cultural Heritage in 2010, fully indicating its worldwide recognition. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了中国针灸的发源及作用原理等。 1．a　考查冠词。branch“分支”为可数名词，结合句意可知，此处指单数含义，且branch以辅音音素开头，所以空处应用不定冠词a。 2．dating　考查非谓语动词。空处在句中作后置定语，date back to意为“起源于，追溯到”，无被动形式，所以此处应用现在分词形式。 3．variety　考查名词。a variety of 意为“各种各样的”，为固定搭配，故填variety。 4．as　考查介词。recommend ...as ...意为“推荐……作为……”，为固定搭配。 5．targeted　考查形容词。形容词修饰名词，空后points为名词，所以空处应用形容词。动词target和名词points之间为动宾关系，所以此处用形容词targeted。 6．Typically　考查副词。空处为陈述性状语，位于句首，所以用副词Typically。 7．deeper　考查形容词比较级。句意：针头被推入皮肤下方，但在某些情况下，为了到达肌肉组织，它们会被推得更深一些。根据句意可知，要使用比较级，故填deeper。 8．that　考查表语从句。空处及之后的内容在句中为表语从句，且空后的句子结构完整，成分齐全，所以此处使用从属连词that来连接。 9．Humans　考查名词复数。空处在句中为主语，结合空后的“are”可知，此处应用名词复数，因位于句首，所以首字母大写。 10．was named　考查时态、语态和主谓一致。空处在句中为谓语，结合句中“in 2010”可知，时态为一般过去时；主语Chinese acupuncture为单数含义，与动词name之间为动宾关系，所以空处填was named。 Ⅲ.应用文写作 (2024·福州质检)假定你是李华，你校邀请在福建医科大学工作的外籍眼科专家Tim教授到校开设关于如何保护眼睛的讲座。作为校学生会主席，请根据以下内容用英文写一篇欢迎稿，内容包括： 1．教授简介； 2．讲座意义； 3．表示欢迎。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　 参考范文： Good afternoon，dear fellow students! I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union.On behalf of the school, it's my privilege to welcome Professor Tim, a well-known eye specialist working at Fujian Medical University. We're delighted to have Professor Tim deliver a lecture on how to protect eyes.He will combine theory with practice.With his expertise, the lecture is bound to raise our awareness of eye healthcare and equip us with practical strategies to safeguard our eyes. Prepare yourselves to be educated and inspired.Before I hand over to Mr Tim, I want to say once more: thank you and welcome！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$