必修第二册 Unit 6 Section Ⅱ 句式、语篇与主题写作（课件PPT）-【创新方案】2025年高考英语一轮总复习（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅱ　句式、语篇与主题写作 目 录 课前晨背 多积词汇•强基扩容 课堂精析 聚焦重难•深化学习 好句好段•增分写作 课前晨背 Ⅰ. 教材经典句式的活用背诵 1．not only ...but also ... 教材原句 They not only put out fires, but also save people who are in danger. 他们不仅灭火而且拯救处于危险中的人们。 推荐佳句 ①(2024·浙江1月高考写作)This newfound skill not only helped Eva navigate her school but also instilled in her a sense of confidence and adventure. 这项新发现的技能不仅帮助Eva在学校里游刃有余，还给她灌输了自信和冒险精神。 推荐佳句 ②(外研版必修2佳句)It was not only for the delicious food that we seldom got to eat, but for the opportunity to have our whole family gathered together. 不仅可以吃到平时难以吃到的美食，而且全家人能有机会团聚在一起。 2．that引导同位语从句 教材原句 However, Tu Youyou had an idea that Chinese herbs might hold the secret. 然而，屠呦呦认为中药可能会起作用。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷写作)Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words, I held the firm belief that I would produce more works. 听到他的话后我感到无比的兴奋和自豪，我坚信自己会创作出更多的作品。 推荐佳句 ②(译林版必修3佳句)Sometimes I had the uncomfortable feeling that this little machine had taken up too much of my time, and that I could have done something more meaningful than just looking at a tiny screen all day. 有时候，我有种不安的感觉，这台小机器占用了我太多的时间，我本可以做一些更有意义的事，而不是整天只盯着一块小屏幕看。 3．There is no doubt that ...“毫无疑问……” 教材原句 There is no doubt that he was one of the most important figures of the 20th century. 毫无疑问，他是20世纪最重要的人物之一。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·浙江1月高考写作)There is no doubt that I have gained a lot of knowledge on plants and have become interested in them through this meaningful activity. 毫无疑问，我已经获得了许多关于植物的知识，并且通过这个有意义的活动对它们产生了兴趣。 推荐佳句 ②(外研版选择性必修2佳句)There is no doubt that humankind is drawn towards Mars, with dreams of making it our second home. 毫无疑问，人类被火星所吸引，梦想着把它作为我们的第二家园。 4．too ...to ...“太……而不能……” 教材原句 So you can see, I'm too busy with living to think of giving up! 所以你可以看到，我忙于生活，无暇考虑是否放弃！ 推荐佳句 ①(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷写作)Though David was too slow to catch up with others, he didn't give up. 虽然大卫太慢了不能赶上其他人，但他没有放弃． 推荐佳句 ②(译林版必修2佳句)His mouth was too dry to speak but he could not reach for the water now. 他的嘴干得说不出话来，但他现在不能伸手去拿水喝。 5．despite＋名词(短语) 教材原句 Despite their limited resources and hundreds of failed experiments, they found a possible chemical. 尽管他们的资源有限，实验失败了数百次，但他们发现了一种可能的化学物质。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·全国乙卷书面表达)Despite the first failure, I continued to practice cooking bean curd and eventually succeeded. 尽管第一次失败了，我还是继续练习炒豆腐，最终成功了。 推荐佳句 ②(外研版必修1佳句)Despite arguments over “stupid things” now and then, Alistair agrees that having a brother is an advantage. 尽管偶尔会为一些“蠢事”争吵，阿利斯泰尔仍然觉得有个兄弟是种优势。 Ⅱ. 单元主题佳句的集约背诵 对接单元主题——杰出人物 1．The person I respect most is Yang Liwei, who was the first Chinese astronaut to be sent to space. 我最尊敬的人是杨利伟，他是第一位被送上太空的中国航天员。 2．People have been more inspired by Franklin's spirit of scientific exploration. 人们更多是为富兰克林的科学探索精神所激励。 3．Through self-belief, hard work, perseverance and some help from other pioneers, the great scientist has shown us that anything is possible. 这位伟大的科学家通过自信、努力工作、坚持不懈以及其他先驱者的帮助，向我们展示了一切皆有可能。 4．He is so humorous, responsible and selfless that I respect and love him very much. 他是如此的幽默、负责任、无私，我非常尊重和爱戴他。 5．Not only did he find an effective solution, but he inspired countless volunteers to join him, which benefited a great many people in need. 他不仅找到了一个有效的解决方案，而且鼓励无数的志愿者加入他(的行列)，这使很多需要帮助的人受益。 Ⅲ. “续写”精彩语段的唯美背诵 “续写”系列背诵(一) 形体描写之“心” And then she heard the beat of her daddy's heart. The heart beat steadily, unconcerned about the damage to the rest of the body. And while she rested there, the magic happened. The little girl heard what she wanted to hear. His heart beat out the words that his mouth could no longer say — I have you, little girl！And she was comforted and cried out, “I love you, Daddy, with all my heart.” As she knew, this would be the last time she would ever hear or say “I love you”． 本段中使用了“the beat of her daddy's heart, heart beat, his heart beat out, with all my heart”等与心有关的动作、心理描写，形象地展现了女儿与受伤的爸爸之间“心灵”上的情感交流。 高分悟道 “续写”系列背诵(二) 形体描写之“腰” With the wind roaring angrily and the raincoat dancing, I felt warm and secure inside. Mom bent forward and pedaled (骑自行车) with all her strength, her waist twitching (抽动) with tension. I started to feel guilty of my coldness, tears welling up in my eyes. Quietly, I slipped my hands around Mom's waist and gently pressed my face against her back. In the crying wind and pouring rain, I found myself hugging my mother, tighter than ever. 本段中使用了“bent forward, her waist twitching with tension, around Mom's waist”等词块描述了作者的母亲载着作者在风雨中奋力骑车的画面，表达了作者的母亲不畏困难的伟大母爱。 高分悟道 发掘教材•强化表达 课堂赏析 1．not only ...but also ...不但……而且…… (1)not only ...but also ...用于连接两个并列成分，着重强调后者，意为“不但……而且……”；其中also有时可以省略； (2)若连接两个句子，且not only位于句首时，含not only的句子要用部分倒装，but also后面的句子不倒装； (3)若连接的两个并列成分作主语，其谓语动词的单复数通常与就近的主语保持一致。 注意：遵循就近一致原则的还有：not ...but; neither ...nor; either ...or ...; there be等。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 ①The students and their teacher are enjoying the film.(用not only ...but also ...升级) → is enjoying the film. Not only the students but also their teacher ②As we all know, reading classics can not only improve our study but also enrich our everyday life.(用倒装句升级) →As we all know, ____________________________________________ . not only can reading classics improve our study but also enrich our everyday life |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③在这次剪纸展览上，我们不但能欣赏到民间艺术作品，而且能学到很多。 We will in this paper-cutting exhibition. not only enjoy the folk art works but also learn a lot ④过度使用智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康有很大的危害。 Overusing smartphones _______________________________________ . not only takes up our valuable time, but also does great harm to our health 2．There is no doubt that ...毫无疑问…… (1)There is no doubt that ...意为“毫无疑问……”，that之后的从句为同位语从句，说明doubt的内容； (2)doubt在肯定句中后接whether/if引导的宾语从句(若doubt是名词，则只能接whether引导的同位语从句)；在疑问句和否定句中其后接that从句。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 (用doubt升级) ①I believe that Chinese diet is the healthiest in the world. → Chinese diet is the healthiest in the world. ②Certainly using energy efficiently reduces the release of greenhouse gases. → using energy efficiently reduces the release of greenhouse gases. I don't doubt that There is no doubt that |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③毫无疑问，熬夜更有可能导致人过度焦虑。 staying up is more likely to result in over-anxiety. There is no doubt that ④她被困在电梯里，手机没电了。她感到很绝望，她怀疑是否会有人来救她。 She was trapped in the lift and her mobile phone was dead. She felt desperate. She . ⑤毫无疑问，技术将提高为公众提供服务的质量。 technology will improve the quality of services for the public. doubted/had her doubts whether someone would come to her rescue There's no doubt that 3．too ...to ...结构 (1)too ...to ...结构的基本形式为“too＋形容词/副词＋to＋动词原形”，意为“太……以至于不能……”。 (2)too ...to ...结构表示肯定意义的情况：一是当副词too后面修饰的形容词是glad, ready, delighted, pleased等表示情感的词汇时；二是当副词too的前面有否定词修饰时。 (3)有时不定式前可以带一个由介词for引出的逻辑主语。 (4)此结构有时可与so/such ...that ...句型或not ... enough to ...句型转换。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 (用too ...to ...结构升级) ①He was tired.He couldn't walk farther. →______________________________ ②I received your gift.I was too happy. →________________________________ He was too tired to walk farther. I was too happy to receive your gift. |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③我很高兴收到你的电子邮件。 I am . ④由于生病，他太虚弱了，不能去参加聚会，所以他不得不拒绝他们的邀请。 Due to the illness, he was , so he had to decline their invitation. too delighted to receive your email too weak to go to the party ⑤他几乎是哭着说：“对不起，我不好意思找你帮忙。” Almost crying, he said, “I'm sorry, but I __________________________ .” was too embarrassed to ask for your help 4．despite＋名词(短语) (1)despite是介词，意为“尽管，虽然”，相当于in spite of，后面接名词、代词、动词的-ing形式，有时也接what引导的从句。另外，常用于in spite of/despite the fact＋that 从句。 (2)连词though, although, while也有“尽管，虽然”之意，引导让步状语从句。 (3)as表示“尽管，虽然”时，通常把从句中的表语或状语置于as之前，使用倒装结构。 (4)regardless of表示“不管”，常强调不考虑。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 (用despite改写) ①Although there are concerns, the comments on the videos are filled with praises. → , the comments on the videos are filled with praises. ②Though we had a bad time, we didn't give up. → , we didn't give up. Despite concerns Despite having a bad time |再|写|美|(通过一句多译做到运用自如)　 当埃里克爬上了山顶时，尽管很累，他却很兴奋。 ③When Eric reached the top of the mountain,_____________________ , he was excited.(despite) ④When Eric reached the top of the mountain,_____________________ ___________, he was excited. (although/though/while) ⑤When Eric reached the top of the mountain, , he was excited. (as) despite his tiredness/ despite the fact that he was tired although/though/while he was tired tired as he was 1．赏用词和衔接之美 Tu Youyou bravely volunteered to be the first human subject when they were ready to start testing and the rest of her team followed her. The test was a success. 写法领悟：本段使用了bravely, volunteered, the first human subject等词，生动鲜明地说明了在科学研究中屠呦呦的勇敢和担当。and连接并列的句子，其后紧接着提到团队中的其他人也紧跟着她，这体现了屠呦呦的号召力以及团队协作的精神。后面一句使用的a success体现了勇敢、拼搏、团结就会取得成功。 2．赏修辞之美 During this time, Reeve felt like he had lost all hope. Having once been a healthy and successful young man to being trapped in a broken body was like a living nightmare to him. 写法领悟：本段使用了比喻的修辞手法，形象地描述了里夫难以接受自己被困在一副受伤的身体里的状况，生动地刻画了里夫内心的灰心、沮丧。 针对练笔 (根据提示完成句子) ①He , ignoring the potential risks and jumping into the churning water without hesitation. 他勇敢地自愿去救那个溺水的孩子，不顾潜在的风险，毫不犹豫地跳进翻腾的水中。 bravely volunteered to save the drowning child ②The sun was , slowly rising from the horizon, spreading its golden rays of hope and warmth, filling the world with bright sunshine. 太阳就像一个面带微笑的巨人，慢慢从地平线升起，散发出希望和温暖的金色光芒，用明亮的阳光充满世界。 like a smiling giant [命题导向] 本单元主题是“杰出人物”，属于人与社会的主题语境。高考在设题时通常以征文投稿、推荐信、告知信、新闻报道、演讲稿等形式考查著名人物的介绍、身边人物的介绍或个人介绍等内容，引导学生了解中外各行各业优秀人物的精神品质，学习他们的工匠精神，学会做人做事，发现自己的人生价值，树立正确的人生观与价值观。　　 构建语义场 (一)人物的外表和品质 1．a middle-aged man　　　 一个中年男人 2．a beautiful girl with curly brown hair 有着卷曲的棕色头发的漂亮女孩 3．a handsome young man usually wearing a bright smile 一个通常带着灿烂笑容的英俊的年轻人 4．have an inquiring mind 爱动脑筋 5．Nancy has an athletic build, fair skin and straight black hair. 南希有着运动员般的身材、白皙的皮肤和黑色的直发。 6．Not only is he outgoing, but he also has a strong sense of humor. 他不仅性格外向，而且很有幽默感。 (二)人物的生平和成就 1．be born in ...　　　　　 出生在…… 2．at the age of five 在五岁时 3．major in 主修……专业 4．gain scholarship 获得奖学金 5．get a master's degree 获得硕士学位 6．graduate from 毕业于 7．be experienced in 在……方面有经验 8．be devoted to 致力于，献身于 9．Tu Youyou was born in Zhejiang Province, China, on 30 December, 1930. 1930年12月30日，屠呦呦出生于中国浙江省。 (三)对人物的评价 1．be regarded as　　　　　 被认为是 2．be honoured for 因……而受到尊敬 3．make contributions to 对……做出贡献 4．a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师 5．As a teacher, she is kind, helpful and patient, so all of us like her. 作为一名教师，她善良、乐于助人且有耐心，因此我们都喜欢她。 6．As a monitor, he is hard-working and warm-hearted, who sets a good example for us. 作为班长，他勤奋、热心，为我们树立了好榜样。 7．Even though Tu Youyou is not interested in fame, she has become a scientist whose work is internationally renowned. 尽管屠呦呦对名声不感兴趣，但她已经成为一位国际知名的科学家。 8．Li Hua, considered to be optimistic and versatile, is liked by both his classmates and teachers. 李华被认为是一个乐观和多才多艺的人，他的同学和老师都喜欢他。 9．Today Madame Curie is remembered not only as a great scientist but also for her determination and courage. 今天人们怀念居里夫人，不仅因为她是一位伟大的科学家，而且因为她的决心和勇气。 平时勤练笔 写作任务——基础写作的建模训练 [题目]　你们学校正举办主题为“用英语讲中国科学家的故事”的征文活动。请你以“一位中国著名科学家”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．人物简介及其成就； 2．评价。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 A famous scientist in China [构思与要点表达] 第一部分　引出人物 [头脑风暴]　人物介绍类写作引出人物的常用表达： 1．说到广泛认可的中国科学家，我不得不提到袁隆平。(when it comes to) When it comes to the scientists in China that are widely acknowledged, I have to mention Yuan Longping. 2．在中国令人钦佩的科学家中，袁隆平是值得我尊敬的一位。 (定语从句) Among the admirable scientists in China, Yuan Longping is the one that deserves my respect. 3．至于中国令人钦佩的科学家，那一定是袁隆平。(as for) As for the admirable scientists in China, it must be Yuan Longping. 第二部分　介绍人物的主要经历 要点1：介绍科学家的早期生平 [头脑风暴]　有哪些词块可以表达科学家的生平？ 1．出生在　　　　　　__________ 2．主修……专业 _________ 3．致力于研究…… ______________________ be born in major in be devoted to studying ... [连词成句]　Yuan Longping . He________ at college. After graduating in 1953, he ________________ . 袁隆平1930年生于北京。他在大学里主修农学。1953年毕业后，他致力于研究杂交水稻。 was born in 1930 in Beijing majored in agriculture was devoted to studying hybrid rice 要点2：介绍科学家的研究过程和结果 [从教材中学]　 1．The reason why this was difficult was that the team had limited resources. 2．It was only due to the ongoing support of his wife, parents and friends that he eventually found the will to live again. 3．He also flew the flags of China and the United Nations, symbolising China's wish to explore and use space peacefully. [到写作中用]　 1．他这样做的原因是他看到许多人遭受饥饿。 The reason why he did so was that he saw many people suffer from hunger. 2．正是通过他的不断努力，他最终培育出了第一种杂交水稻， 使水稻的产量大大提高，为世界做出了巨大贡献。______________ __________________________________________________________ , which greatly increased the output of rice, ______________________ . It was through his constant efforts that he eventually developed the first hybrid rice making great contributions to the world 第三部分　对人物的评价 [从教材中学]　Sadly, on 10 October, 2004, Christopher Reeve passed away. He will always be remembered as a superhero — in more ways than one. [到写作中用]　遗憾的是，袁隆平在2021年去世了，但他仍然作为一位伟大的科学家被人们铭记。 Sadly, Yuan Longping passed away in 2021, but he is still remembered as a great scientist. [衔接与逻辑成篇] 运用补加、过渡与衔接，将上述语句连接成篇 A famous scientist in China Among the admirable scientists in China, Yuan Longping is the one that deserves my respect. Yuan Longping was born in 1930 in Beijing. He majored in agriculture at college. After graduating in 1953, he was devoted to studying hybrid rice. The reason why he did so was that he saw many people suffer from hunger. It was through his constant efforts that he eventually developed the first hybrid rice, which greatly increased the output of rice, making great contributions to the world. Sadly, Yuan Longping passed away in 2021, but he is still remembered as a great scientist. $$