Unit 5 Section Ⅳ WRITING（Word教参）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅳ　WRITING 写一篇图画式作文 [对应学生用书P94] 图画式作文，即图片描述，是一种常见的高考题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。 [写作技巧] 此类题型的体裁比较广泛，可以是记叙文，将图画中所表达的信息完整地记录下来;也可以是说明文，根据图画从时间、过程、步骤等方面对之加以解释、说明;还可以是议论文，针对图画中所表现出来的一般现象，加以议论，得出结论，提出解决问题的最佳办法。 第一步:仔细审题，确定体裁、时态、人称等。要审清题意，看懂画面所表达的意思，紧扣主题。防止因对画面的错误理解而跑题。有些画面上附有提示，请仔细参阅，正确使用。 第二步：看图。议论文应该采用三段式的结构:第一段，描述图画内容以及图画所反映的问题;第二段，分析问题或现象产生的原因;第三段，从自己的观点出发，谈一下解决问题的措施。 [典例剖析] 根据下图信息写一篇短文。 [词块积累] 1.take part in 参加 2.one of my most unforgettable experiences 我最难忘的经历之一 3.on the way to 在去……的路上 4.with the help of 在……的帮助下 5.by the time 到……时候 6.put up 搭建 7.gain from 从……获得 [连词成句] 1.昨天我和李明参加了野外生存训练，这是我高中以来最难忘的经历之一。 Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of my most unforgettable experiences since high school. 2.在去营地的路上，我们爬了一座山，然后把背包放在在河边找到的一大块木头上，游过了一条河。 On the way to the campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swam across a river, pushing our backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river. 3.幸运的是，在指南针的帮助下我们找到了正确的方向。 Luckily, we found the right direction with the help of the compass. 4.当我们到达营地时，天已经黑了。 By the time we arrived at the campsite, it had already been dark. 5.这对我们来说是一次难忘的经历。 It was quite an unforgettable experience for us. 6.我将终生难忘。 I’ll never forget the experience for the rest of my life. [句式升级] 用强调句改写句6 It is the experience that I’ll never forget for the rest of my life. [连句成篇] 【参考范文】 Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of my most unforgettable experiences since high school. Early in the morning, we set out. On the way to the campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swam across a river, pushing our backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river. As we got into a forest, we lost our way. Luckily, we found the right direction with the help of the compass. By the time we arrived at the campsite, it had already been dark. Li Ming then put up the tent, and made a fire and started cooking. The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use the knowledge gained from the classroom training to solve problems. It was quite an unforgettable experience for us. It is the experience that I’ll never forget for the rest of my life. 凡事都有两面性。每个事物、每个人都有自己的优势与劣势。根据下图信息写一篇短文。 【参考范文】 As is vividly shown in the pictures, we can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. In the first picture, there is a small pencil, drawing a line with great effort. As is shown in the second picture, the compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes, even pictures, better than the compasses. It is safe to draw the conclusion that while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them. 读后续写——克服困难 [对应学生用书P95] 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My great-grandfather，my grandfather and my father were farmers.My father had a fixed idea that I would become a farmer too.Although I respected him and was indeed skilled at doing some farm work，I didn't agree that I should automatically follow in my father's footstep. When I was a teenager，my father happened to take me to an airport which belonged to one of his friends.It was the first time I had seen an aeroplane in real life.Knowing that I had never been on board，my father's friend Tom offered me an opportunity to fly with him in his small aeroplane，and I quickly accepted his offer! When we took off，I felt nervous but thrilled.Being up in the clouds and looking at the view below was unlike anything I had ever felt.I was just enjoying it. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： This time I would not hide my desire any more. Paragraph 2： At the graduation ceremony，with my father present，I，as “Best Pilot”，had to deliver a speech. 第一步：文章信息提取 时空线：时空线：When I was a teenager ... → It was the first time I had seen an aeroplane ... → When we took off ... → Being up in the clouds ... 情感线： 不同意完全追随父亲的脚步 (didn’t agree ... footstep) → 第一次乘坐飞机,既紧 张又兴奋 (felt nervous but thrilled) → 喜欢飞在天上的感觉 (was just enjoying it) 第二步：语篇要点审读 Who：the author’s greatgrandfather，the author's grandfather and his father，father's friend When：when the author was a teenager Where：in an airport What：The author was nervous and thrilled to fly with his father's friend at the first time. Why：The author had never been on board. 第三步：续写方向猜想 续写段首1：This time I would not hide my desire any more.(提示句表明“这一次我不会隐藏自己的欲望了。”第一段可描述作者将自己想成为飞行员的梦想告诉父亲，并得到了父亲的支持。) 猜想1：What did the author do? 猜想2：What did the author’s father do? ... 续写段首2：At the graduation ceremony，with my father present，I，as “Best Pilot”，had to deliver a speech.(提示句表明“在毕业典礼上，有父亲在场，我作为‘最佳飞行员’必须发表演讲。”第二段可描述作者是如何克服困难取得成功的，并把自己的成功归功于父亲的支持。) 猜想1：Why did the author thanks his father? 猜想2：How did the author feel? ... 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1： This time I would not hide my desire any more. Determined to follow my heart，I explained to my father how I felt.I told him that I wanted to go to college to learn to fly instead of being a farmer.After saying this，I waited nervously for his reaction.To my surprise，he approved my request，and told me he was moved by my perseverance.With his support and my efforts，I was admitted into my ideal college. Paragraph 2： At the graduation ceremony，with my father present，I，as “Best Pilot”，had to deliver a speech.In my speech，I shared with the audience about how I realized my dream.Faced with difficulties，I took a path that led me to do something that needed passion，training and practice.I also owed my success to my father's support.Without his understanding I couldn't have pursued my dream.At the end of my speech，I spotted my father's watery eyes，and said，“Dad，I made it!” His face lit up with pride. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$