内容正文:
选择性必修第一册
Unit 3 Faster,higher stronger
Period 5 Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
描写一个运动时刻
描写运动时刻类文章属于记叙文的范畴。文章要将自己所看到的场面按比赛前、比赛中和比赛后的顺序进行写作,结尾要写出自己的感受。在叙述时人称可以用第一人称或第三人称。在时态方面,叙述事件用过去时,评论或发表看法可用一般现在时。具体写作结构为:
1.开头部分:介绍比赛项目举行的时间、地点及参与人物;
2.主体部分:详细介绍比赛过程;
3.结尾部分:抒发自己的感受。
一、开头常用语句
1.I watched the final of the 4×100-metre relay at our sports meeting held on Monday.
我观看了周一举行的运动会上的4×100米接力赛决赛。
2.A sports meeting was held in my school on September 15th.Some joined in the competitions while some just watched them.
9月15日,我校举行了一场运动会。一些人参加了比赛,一些人只是观看了比赛。
3.It was an exciting experience which I would never forget.
这是一次激动人心、令我难以忘记的经历。
4.It is one of the unforgettable moments that I have ever experienced.
这是我所经历过的难以忘记的时刻之一。
5.What impressed me most is...
让我印象最深刻的是……
二、主体常用语句
1.Before the race, every competitor was quiet and still.I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense.
比赛前,每个参赛者都保持安静、静止不动。我从未想到体育赛事的气氛会如此紧张。
2.He stood at the start line, looking relaxed and confident.
他站在起跑线上,看上去轻松、自信。
3.When the runners set off, everyone went wild!
当赛跑运动员们开始起跑,人们都疯狂了起来!
4.We all stood up and started cheering and shouting.
我们都站起来,开始欢呼喝彩。
5.I could see the runners running as fast as they could.
我看到赛跑运动员们都在尽可能快地奔跑。
6.Unfortunately, he fell down and his left foot was badly hurt.
不幸的是,他摔倒了,左脚严重受伤。
三、结尾常用语句
1.I believe this moment will remain a precious memory for all of us.
我相信这一时刻将会是我们所有人的珍贵记忆。
2.It was such a wonderful moment that I enjoyed its speed and passion.
这是一个如此精彩的时刻,我享受着它的速度和激情。
3.Though he didn't win the race, he won our admiration.
他虽然没有赢得比赛,但赢得了我们的赞赏。
4.The sports meeting is successfully completed. Not only do we have fun, but we learn to take pride in our partners, cheer for them and help them when they are in need.
运动会圆满结束。我们不仅玩得开心,而且学会了以我们的伙伴为荣,为他们欢呼,并在他们需要帮助时帮助他们。
[写作要求]
你校近期举行了一次篮球比赛。假如你是学校英语报的记者,请写一篇短文,报道这场比赛的决赛。内容包括:
1.比赛的时间、地点,参与人物;
2.赛前的准备情况、比赛的过程及结果;
3.你对这次比赛的评价。
注意:1.词数 80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
体裁 记叙文
话题 描述一场篮球比赛
时态 一般过去时
人称 第一、三人称
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①为……做准备________________
②落后________________
③抓住每一个机会_______________________
④爆发出欢呼声________________
⑤超出每个人的预期_______________________________
prepare for
fall behind
seize every opportunity
burst into cheers
beyond everyone's expectations
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①起初,二班在比赛中落后于一班。
At first, ________________________ in the game.
②他们没有放弃,抓住每一次机会进攻。
They didn't give up and ________________________________.
Class 2 fell behind Class 1
seized every opportunity to attack
③最后,听到二班赢得了这场比赛,大家爆发出欢呼声。
In the end, everyone ________________ when hearing that Class 2 won the game.
④结果超出了每个人的预期。
The result ________________________________.
burst into cheers
went beyond everyone's expectations
(2)句式升级
⑤用让步状语从句合并句①和句②。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑥用定语从句合并句③和句④。
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Though at first Class 2 fell behind Class 1 in the game, they didn't give up and seized every opportunity to attack.
In the end, everyone burst into cheers when hearing that Class 2 won the game, which went beyond everyone's expectations.
[妙笔成篇]
On April 10,the basketball final between Class 1 and Class 2 began on the basketball court.
Students spent a lot of time preparing for the basketball game before the sports event. Though at first Class 2 fell behind Class 1 in the game, they didn't give up and seized every opportunity to attack. In the end, everyone burst into cheers when hearing that Class 2 won the game, which went beyond everyone's expectations. Class 2 won the game due to the cooperation between teammates and their dream came true.
As far as I am concerned, the team spirit is the key to their remarkable performances and self-belief also contributes to their success.
假如你是李华,你校在上周举行了校运动会,请为校刊投稿,描写这次运动会中难忘的精彩瞬间。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.文章的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Sports Meet
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[参考范文]
An Unforgettable Sports Meet
Last week our school had a sports meet lasting two days. The weather was sunny and the whole playground was quite exciting.
The last event of the sports meet was 3,000-metre race. My classmate John took part in it. As soon as the race began, everyone was too excited to stop cheering. He fell behind at first, but he caught up with others little by little. At the last lap of the race, we said “Come on” to cheer him up. Finally he was the first person to get to the
finishing line and broke the record of our school. He was happy that he won a prize for our class.
This is the most unforgettable sports meet that I have ever had.
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