内容正文:
Unit 1 Wise men in history
Writing & Study Skills
Period 5
1
T明确本课时教学内容。
句号(Full stop . )
用于陈述句后
eg: Hockey is a popular sport in Canada.
用于一些缩写语中
eg: B.C. is the province located on the West Coast.
问号(Question mark ? )
用于疑问句后
eg: How many provinces are there in Canada ?
Study Skills : Punctuation
2
What is a directory? (It is a book with information about a certain city or area. )
What does a directory usually have? (It usually has different categories.)
How is a directory arranged? (It is arranged in alphabetical order. )
What is the most common type of directory? (A list of phone numbers.)
感叹号(Exclamation Mark ! )
用于带有强烈情感的语句后或感叹句后
eg: We won the Stanley Cup !
What a nice trip !
逗号 (Comma , )
用于分隔句子成分
eg: Therefore, we should write a letter to the prime minister.
用于反意疑问句的疑问部分前
eg: You like reading, don’t you?
罗列三个或以上的单词或短语
eg: Ontario, Quebec, and B.C. are the three biggest provinces.
引出从句
eg: Emily Carr, who was born in 1871, was a great painter.
引号(Quotation Marks “ ”)
①用于直接引语中
eg: The prime minister said, “We will win the election.”
②表示特定称谓
eg: Mark Twain is often called the “father of American
literature”.
撇号 (Apostrophes ' )
①表示所有格
eg: This is David's computer.
②用于缩略词中
eg: I don't know how to fix it.
连字符(Hyphens -)
将两个或两个以上的单词连接成一个词
eg: sweet-smelling
anti-Canadian
one-quarter
冒号 (Colons : )
①介绍一组内容或要点
eg: There are three positions in hockey: goalie, defence, an
forward.
②引出一个较长的引语
eg: The prime minister said: "We will fight. We will not give up.
We will win the next election.“
A: Add punctuation marks to the following sentences.
1. “You like Chinese food, don’ t you?” asked Mary.
2. Since she’s your little sister, please take care of her.
I’ve passed these subjects: Chinese, Maths, English, History and Music.
4. This is a well-run hotel.
B: Underline the mistakes and write the correct punctuation marks above them.
One of the most famous wise
men in ancient Greece was
Diogenes, Diogenes lived a
simple life? He only owned
three things-the clothes he
wrote, a lantern and a bowl to
eat with.
Diogenes used to walk through the city with his lantern during the day. When people asked him why he was carrying the lantern, he would hold it up to their face, look at them, and say. “I,m looking for an honest man.’
When you have written
something, you should
check your work to
make sure the spelling,
grammar and
punctuation are all correct.
Writing
gr=grammar mistake
sp=spelling mistake
p=punctuation mistake
Discuss different kinds of mistakes in writing and know about their abbreviations below.
gr/sp
gr/p
gr
gr
sp/gr
p
gr
Find, underline and correct the mistakes in the following story.
Julius Caesar killed by freind
Julius Caesar was warn that someone wanted to kill him
and he should not speak on public? He was standing on
the steps of the Senate when he attacked. He said, “I
must speak to my poeple.” As he died, he see his oldest
friend Brutus. He was one of the killers, “You too,
Brutus?” He asked, and die.
a friend
warned
in
was attacked
people
saw
.
died
.
Writing a wise man of Benjamin Franklin.
根椐所给的要点提示,用英语向同学们
介绍著名的科学家和发明家
Benjamin Franklin
要点提示:
1. 1706年出生于美国。
2. 10岁时,他因家境贫穷而离开学校。
3. 在一间印刷所(a printing house)工作,在工作期间并没有放弃学习。
4. 他喜欢阅读,阅读了很多不同类型的书籍。
5. 发明了不少东西,如:避雷针(the lightening rod)。
6. 你的评价。
审题四连问:
1.分几段写?
2.分别写哪些要点?
3.每段的时态、人称?
4.可用哪些句型、词组?
Paragraph1:
Paragraph2:
写生平及事迹(要点1-5)
评价(要点6)
一般过去时,第三人称
一般过去时,一般现在时。第一&三人称。
be born in +年份+地点
at the age of,
because....
but...not give up learning
be interested in
invent
感叹句
Editing
Checklist
1.包含6个要点了吗? 自评 同伴评
2.分两段了吗?
3. 用过去时描述并评价已去世的人物了吗?
4. 用第三人称描述第三者了吗?
5. 标点符号用对了吗?
6. 有无拼写错误?
7. 有无语法错误?
Benjamin Franklin was a famous scientist and
inventor in the world. He was born in 1706 in
America. When he was 10 years old, he was too
poor to go to school. After he left school, he
worked in a printing house. However, he never
gave up learning. He worked hard and learnt a lot.
He was interested in reading different kinds of
books. What's more, he also invented a lot of
things, such as the lightening rod.
What a great person Benjamin Franklin was! I should
learn from him.
介绍人物生平及事迹
评价
范文分析:
结构&好词好句
根据老师批改情况写第二稿
Homework
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