Unit 2 Colours （同步写作讲义）（人与自然：自然与环境）英语译林版九年级上册

Unit 2 Colours 单元写作指导与演练 【话题分析】 本单元的话题是颜色及其对我们的影响。写作内容是写一篇颜色及其对我们的影响的短文，阐明自己的观点和看法，说明颜色对我们生活的影响，以及在我们生活中的运用。在写作中运用宾语从句。 写作话题包括 1.我喜欢的颜色。（介绍颜色的重要性、不同的人对颜色有不同的爱好、我喜欢的颜色及原因等内容。） 2.颜色对我们生活的影响。（衣着，饮食，学习，审美，生活中的运用） 3.中国红。(传统中国文化) 【写作框架设计】 步骤一：文章开头点明颜色的地位； 步骤二：阐明颜色的含义； 步骤三：表明颜色的使用场所及表现形式； 步骤四：说明颜色的影响。 【单词短语句式积累】 1.... represents .../... is the colour of .../... symbolizes .../... stands for ... (颜色)代表... Blue is the colour of sky and it symbolizes peace and clam. Black— power and trust green— energy and nature orange— joy, warmth and creativity (创造力) red — heat, strength, good luck and passion (热情) white — purity and calm yellow— wisdom and success pink — softness and kindness 2. Of all the colours, I like ... best. 在所有颜色中，我最喜欢... 3.My favourite colour is ... because ... 我最喜欢的颜色是...，因为... 4.People are easily influenced/affected by the products that are in different colors. 人们很容易受到产品不同颜色的影响。 5.Light colours can often remind people of positive things, while dark ones may make people feel negative. 明亮的颜色能够让人们想起积极的事物，然而灰暗的颜色会让人们感到消极。 6.... can bring ... to my mind and body and that is why I prefer ... ...可以给我的身心带来...,这也是为什么我更喜欢... 7.I think that ... looks good on me. 我认为我穿...很好看。 8. When I feel stressed/unhappy/sleepy, I often choose...当我感到...时,我经常选择... 9. I hope that colours can be of some help, so I would rather wear ... when I hope for ... 我希望颜色能对我有帮助，因此当我渴望...的时候，我更喜欢穿 ... 10.The best colour in the whole world is the one that looks good on you. 全世界最好的颜色就是穿在你身好好看的颜色。 11.Understanding the effects of colors on our moods can help us live a better life. 了解颜色对我们情绪的影响可以帮助我们更好地生活。 12.Colors can have a deep influence on our moods. 颜色可以对我们的情绪产生深远影响。 【实战演练】 1 根据下面的要点提示，以"My favourite colour" 为题写一篇英语短文，不少于80词。 （1）我们生活在一个充满各种色彩的世界里。假设没有颜色，世界将会是什么样？你会产生一种什么感觉？ （2）不同的人对颜色有不同的爱好，有的喜欢红色，有的喜欢蓝色；有的喜欢深色，有的喜欢浅色。你最喜欢什么颜色？ （3）你喜欢这种颜色的理由是什么？ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。包括以下要点： 1. 颜色分为冷色和热色； 2. 两种颜色的作用； 3. 选择颜色的重要性。 词数：80左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3 请以Colours and Moods为题，选两种颜色，分别代表energetic colour和strong colour，适当介绍它们对情绪的影响，并谈谈你最喜欢的颜色。 要点如下: 1.绿色是活力之色，它能给你能量，因为它是自然之色，代表新生。所以当你疲惫或虚弱时，你应该穿绿色的衣服。 2.红色是强烈的颜色，它会使你看起来更加强大、有力。在中国红色还代表幸运，在过去许多女性都喜欢在结婚之日穿红色。 3.我最喜欢的颜色是白色，因为……(请用1-2、点理由阐述) 注意:80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Colours and Moods Do you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods? 4 学校要为初三学生订制新的校服，下面是工厂送来的图片，请你结合所学的关于颜色的知识，选择一 款校服加以评价。 要求： 1. 就校服的颜色以及款式加以评价； 2. 内容充实，语言流畅，书写工整； 3. 80词左右。 Style A：red and black sports clothes for girls； blue and black sports clothes for boys Style B：white shirt，dark blue skirt and red tie for girls；white shirt，dark blue trousers and red tie for boys ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5 我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。 写作要求： ( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。 ( 2)字数不少于 80词。 (3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。 参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6 在中国传统文化中，红色寓意丰富，它意味着好运和喜庆，也象征着奋斗与胜利。红包，红灯笼、红歌、红色之旅在中国都很受欢迎，请以“Chinese Red”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文，让外国朋友了解中国红。 注意：文本不可出现人名，标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Chinese Red _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7 威廉是一名初三学生，面对繁重的课业和升学压力，他常常感到焦虑不安，晚上总是失眠，考试成绩不好。请针对他的问题，运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。要点如下： 1.如果你常常感到压力，建议你穿蓝色或白色，它们会使你感到放松。2.如果睡眠不好，建议把卧室的墙漆成蓝色，因为睡在蓝色中的房间里会给你身心带来安宁。3.如果考试成绩不好，建议……，因为…… Dear William You told me that you had some problems with your study and life. I’d like to give you some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm sure you will feel much better if you follow my advice. Yours, John 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Colours 单元写作指导与演练 【话题分析】 本单元的话题是颜色及其对我们的影响。写作内容是写一篇颜色及其对我们的影响的短文，阐明自己的观点和看法，说明颜色对我们生活的影响，以及在我们生活中的运用。在写作中运用宾语从句。 写作话题包括 1.我喜欢的颜色。（介绍颜色的重要性、不同的人对颜色有不同的爱好、我喜欢的颜色及原因等内容。） 2.颜色对我们生活的影响。（衣着，饮食，学习，审美，生活中的运用） 3.中国红。(传统中国文化) 【写作框架设计】 步骤一：文章开头点明颜色的地位； 步骤二：阐明颜色的含义； 步骤三：表明颜色的使用场所及表现形式； 步骤四：说明颜色的影响。 【单词短语句式积累】 1.... represents .../... is the colour of .../... symbolizes .../... stands for ... (颜色)代表... Blue is the colour of sky and it symbolizes peace and clam. Black— power and trust green— energy and nature orange— joy, warmth and creativity (创造力) red — heat, strength, good luck and passion (热情) white — purity and calm yellow— wisdom and success pink — softness and kindness 2. Of all the colours, I like ... best. 在所有颜色中，我最喜欢... 3.My favourite colour is ... because ... 我最喜欢的颜色是...，因为... 4.People are easily influenced/affected by the products that are in different colors. 人们很容易受到产品不同颜色的影响。 5.Light colours can often remind people of positive things, while dark ones may make people feel negative. 明亮的颜色能够让人们想起积极的事物，然而灰暗的颜色会让人们感到消极。 6.... can bring ... to my mind and body and that is why I prefer ... ...可以给我的身心带来...,这也是为什么我更喜欢... 7.I think that ... looks good on me. 我认为我穿...很好看。 8. When I feel stressed/unhappy/sleepy, I often choose...当我感到...时,我经常选择... 9. I hope that colours can be of some help, so I would rather wear ... when I hope for ... 我希望颜色能对我有帮助，因此当我渴望...的时候，我更喜欢穿 ... 10.The best colour in the whole world is the one that looks good on you. 全世界最好的颜色就是穿在你身好好看的颜色。 11.Understanding the effects of colors on our moods can help us live a better life. 了解颜色对我们情绪的影响可以帮助我们更好地生活。 12.Colors can have a deep influence on our moods. 颜色可以对我们的情绪产生深远影响。 【实战演练】 1 根据下面的要点提示，以"My favourite colour" 为题写一篇英语短文，不少于80词。 （1）我们生活在一个充满各种色彩的世界里。假设没有颜色，世界将会是什么样？你会产生一种什么感觉？ （2）不同的人对颜色有不同的爱好，有的喜欢红色，有的喜欢蓝色；有的喜欢深色，有的喜欢浅色。你最喜欢什么颜色？ （3）你喜欢这种颜色的理由是什么？ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favourite colour We live in a world full of colours. Without them, our world will be a dull one. Different people have different ideas about colours. Some like red. Some like blue. And others like dark colours or light ones. I like red. It is my favourite. I think red is the colour of heart and it represents power and strong feelings. Wearing red can make it easier for me to take action. It can help me when I have difficulty making a decision. So I like red better than any other colour. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“我最喜欢的颜色”为题写一篇文章，根据题干中内容介绍颜色的重要性、不同的人对颜色有不同的爱好、我喜欢的颜色及原因等内容。 2.写作指导：本文主题为“最喜欢的颜色”；文章以第三人称、一般现在时为主介绍颜色的重要性，以第一人称阐述“我”最喜欢的颜色及个人感受等，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意要点齐全，语句通顺，使读者一目了然。 2 写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。包括以下要点： 1. 颜色分为冷色和热色； 2. 两种颜色的作用； 3. 选择颜色的重要性。 词数：80左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Color may decide the feelings of the people. People usually talk about two group of colors: warm colors and cool colors. The warm colors are red, orange and yellow. The cool colors are green, blue and grey. The warm colors make people active and excited. And the cool colors can make people relaxed and calm. Because different colors have different effects on the people. So it is important for us to choose different colors to suit different situation. 【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。 【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People usually talk about…..., The warm colors are……., The warm colors make……, So it is important for us to…..等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 3 请以Colours and Moods为题，选两种颜色，分别代表energetic colour和strong colour，适当介绍它们对情绪的影响，并谈谈你最喜欢的颜色。 要点如下: 1.绿色是活力之色，它能给你能量，因为它是自然之色，代表新生。所以当你疲惫或虚弱时，你应该穿绿色的衣服。 2.红色是强烈的颜色，它会使你看起来更加强大、有力。在中国红色还代表幸运，在过去许多女性都喜欢在结婚之日穿红色。 3.我最喜欢的颜色是白色，因为……(请用1-2、点理由阐述) 注意:80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Colours and Moods Do you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods? 【答案】Colours and Moods Do you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods? Green is an energetic colour.  It can give you energy, as it is the colour of nature and represents new life. So when you are tired or weak, you should wear green clothes. Red is a strong colour. It can make you look more powerful. It also represents luck in China and many women preferred to wear red on their wedding day in the past. My favourite colour is white because it is the colour of purity and it can help me calm down when I feel nervous. All the colours make our world colourful and wonderful. 【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍颜色对情绪的影响以及自己最喜爱的颜色。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意要表达出提纲所列内容，防止漏写。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；要灵活运用自己熟悉的高级词句，以提高文章的档次。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 4 学校要为初三学生订制新的校服，下面是工厂送来的图片，请你结合所学的关于颜色的知识，选择一 款校服加以评价。 要求： 1. 就校服的颜色以及款式加以评价； 2. 内容充实，语言流畅，书写工整； 3. 80词左右。 Style A：red and black sports clothes for girls； blue and black sports clothes for boys Style B：white shirt，dark blue skirt and red tie for girls；white shirt，dark blue trousers and red tie for boys ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I like style A very much. I think wearing such school uniforms can make us look not only smart but also sporty. And we may feel energetic when we wear them. I like the colours as well. It’s good for boys to wear blue and black. They are a good match. They can make us feel less stressed. And red is also a good colour for girls. Red makes us feel full of energy. It can make us take actions easily. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头写出我选择的校服类型；接下来介绍我的理由以及对校服的评价。 2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，对校服的颜色以及款式加以评价，叙述完整且条理清晰。 3.高分亮点： 短语：not only, but also； be good for；make sb do sth；take actions。 句型：I think后面接宾语从句；句型It’s+形容词+for sb to do sth；They are……。 5 我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。 写作要求： ( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。 ( 2)字数不少于 80词。 (3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。 参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck．   People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China. I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文主题； 第二步，介绍红色所代表的意义； 第三步，介绍红色的应用； 第四步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be popular with受欢迎 ③what’s more并且 [高分句型] ①People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.（such…that引导结果状语从句） ②I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.（宾语从句） 6 在中国传统文化中，红色寓意丰富，它意味着好运和喜庆，也象征着奋斗与胜利。红包，红灯笼、红歌、红色之旅在中国都很受欢迎，请以“Chinese Red”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文，让外国朋友了解中国红。 注意：文本不可出现人名，标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Chinese Red _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Chinese Red     In China, red is a traditional colour that can be found almost everywhere. It means a lot to every Chinese. It is a symbol of good luck and happiness. We can see red on some big days, such as the Spring Festival or wedding days. To express our great joy and wishes, we often put up red lanterns, give hongbao or prepare other red items. Chinese red also stands for hard work and success. It is chosen as the colour of Chinese national flag, reminding us of how Chinese people fought for our country before. Today more of us take red tours and sing red songs, which fill us with pride and strength to work harder. In conclusion, Chinese red plays a significant role in our traditional culture. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，主要是描写红色在中国传统文化中的寓意以及象征等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 7 威廉是一名初三学生，面对繁重的课业和升学压力，他常常感到焦虑不安，晚上总是失眠，考试成绩不好。请针对他的问题，运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。要点如下： 1.如果你常常感到压力，建议你穿蓝色或白色，它们会使你感到放松。2.如果睡眠不好，建议把卧室的墙漆成蓝色，因为睡在蓝色中的房间里会给你身心带来安宁。3.如果考试成绩不好，建议……，因为…… Dear William You told me that you had some problems with your study and life. I’d like to give you some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm sure you will feel much better if you follow my advice. Yours, John 【答案】Dear William You told me that you had some problems with your study and life. I’d like to give you some advice. If you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. They will make you feel relaxed. If you can’t sleep well at night, you'd better paint the walls of your bedroom blue, as sleeping in a blue room will bring peace to both your mind and body. If you can't get good marks in exams, I think it's good for you to use yellow pens. Yellow is the colour of wisdom. Some people prefer this colour when they hope for success. I'm sure you will feel much better if you follow my advice. Yours, John 【分析】本题是写一封书信。格式给出，注意要素完整。 【详解】本短文从不同方面分析了颜色各种精神疾病的影响和治疗方法。多用条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时表达，在描述科学事实时，则运用一般现在时。提出建议用短语had better do sth.最好做某事。If you can't get good marks in exams, I think it's good for you to use yellow pens.通过和蓝色进行比较，得出黄色有助于考试得高分，因为黄色代表智慧。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$