02 全国甲& 乙卷（全国I&II& III卷） (2024-2020) 近五年高考真题满分作文汇编-2024年高考英语作文真题深度解读及五年优秀范文汇编

全国甲&乙卷 2024年高考英语作文真题 【甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling. Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility. In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 【详解】1.词汇激活 提供：offer→provide 极大地：dramatically→tremendously 减少：reduce→decrease 总之：in short→in a nutshell 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. 拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 【文本解读】 发言稿是指在公开场合发表讲话的文稿。发言人可以针对某个具体问题来交流思想和感情、表达见解和主张、宣传倡议某种精神或活动，如介绍自己的学习、工作、经验等等。发言的目的是为了引起听众的共鸣，并使其在思想上认同或信服发言人的观点。因此，发言稿通常论点鲜明，逻辑性强，具有针对性、条理性和激励性的特点，容易使读者信服并在思想上产生共鸣。发言稿主要由标题语、称谓语、问候语、说明语、主体正文、结束语及致谢语构成。 本题目要求考生根据提供的图片内容写一篇演讲稿，内容涵盖共享单车、高铁、新能源汽车三个方面，展现中国交通的发展。这一题目体现了高考作文贴近时代、关注社会热点的特点，同时也考查了考生的观察分析能力、语言组织能力和创新思维。 【思路点拨】 通过审题我们知道本题要求考生写一篇发言稿。发言稿具有说服和号召的功能，所以语言要有力度，有感染力。 第一段提出演讲主题——中国的交通发展； 第二段结合图片详细说明中国的交通发展状况，结尾可以发表感悟，如为国家的富强和民族的复兴感到自豪等； 第三段感谢聆听 【满分范文】 范文一 Good morning,everyone! Today, I'm greatly honored to address the topic "The Development of Transport in China". In our rapidly evolving society, just take shared bikes,high-speed rails, and new energy vehicles as examples.Shared bikes have truly brought great convenience to our short-distance travels. They enable us to move freely in the cities with such ease, minimizing the trouble of relying on public transportation or private cars.It is indeed a simple and eco-friendly way to get around.High-speed rails are an outstanding achievement in transportation.They connect cities at astonishing speeds, greatly shortening the travel time between distant locations. With their comfort and efficiency, they have revolutionized the way we travel long distances, making it more accessible and pleasant. New energy vehicles are also playing an increasingly crucial role. They represent a shift towards a more sustainable and environmentally friendly transportation alternative. These cars are reducing our dependence on fossil fuels and helping to create a cleaner and greener future. The changes in these transportation modes reflect the progress of technology and our pursuit of a better life. They not only enhance our travel experience but also have a profound impact on the economy environment, and social development. We are witnessing an exciting era of transportation innovation, and these changes will continue to shape our lives in the coming years. Thank you for listening! Development of Transport in China 范文二 Good morning, my dear teachers and fellow students, I feel so honored to stand here to talk about the remarkable development of transportation in China. As we dive into this topic, we will explore three specific advancements: shared bicycles, new energy vehicles, and high-speed trains. The development of transportation has profoundly changed our lives. The shared bicycles and the new energy vehicles have offered a convenient and eco-friendly mode of transportation, promoting a healthier and more sustainable urban environment. As for the high-speed trains, I have to say that they really have revolutionized travel within China, connecting cities and regions like never before, which not only boost economic growth but also foster cultural exchange and unity by bringing people closer together. So, my fellow students, let us take pride in our nation's achievements drawing inspiration from our past to fuel our journey towards a brighter future and contribute to the continued progress to shape a better tomorrow. Thank you. 范文三 It's a great honour to address you all! The topic I want to share with you today is "The Progress of Transport in China", illustrated through shared bikes, high-speed trains, and new energy vehicles. The past few decades have seen remarkable progress in the country's transport system, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling. Shared bikes now dot city streets, providing a green and convenient commuting option. Meanwhile, high-speed trains, especially the bullet train, have drastically reduced travel times across this expansive nation. Furthermore, with the emergence of new energy vehicles, China is stepping towards a more eco-friendly and sustainable future. These developments not only showcase China's technological progress but also its commitment to environmental sustainability. In short, China's transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness. 范文四 Dear fellow students, These three pictures encapsulate the remarkable transformation of China's transportation landscape. The first image, featuring rickshaws and horses, evokes a bygone era of slow-paced, agrarian life. The second image, showcasing bicycles, symbolizes China's entry into the modern era and its burgeoning urbanization. Finally, the third picture, brimming with cars and buses, vividly illustrates the country's economic growth and urban transformation. This transformation is not merely a quantitative change; it represents a qualitative leap in China's development and its pursuit of modernization. It reflects a shift from a dependence on human and animal labor to an era of mechanization and automation, a journey that has fundamentally altered the way we live and work. Thank you. 范文五 Dear friends, Today, I'd like to discuss the remarkable advancements in transportation technology in China. Three key developments stand out: shared bicycles, high-speed rail, and new energy vehicles. Firstly, shared bicycles revolutionize urban mobility, encouraging green and healthy travel. Secondly, our high-speed rail network has transformed intercity travel, connecting distant regions with unprecedented speed. Lastly, new energy vehicles represent a significant step towards reducing carbon emissions and promoting environmental sustainability. In conclusion, these innovations not only enhance our daily lives but also contribute to a greener and more efficient future. Let's celebrate these achievements and embrace the exciting possibilities ahead. Thank you. 2023年高考英语作文真题 【甲卷】 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 本试题要求考生以“一位中国历史人物”为题写一篇短文投稿，参加主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。内容有两个要点：人物简介及事迹，意义或启示。 该题考查了考生的英语写作表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对中国历史人物的了解程度。这一命题旨在向世界展示中华文明，讲述体现中国精神的中国故事，引导学生传承和弘扬中华优秀传统文化，增强文化自信和价值观自信，厚植爱国主义情怀。 【思路点拨】 宏观思维：类型：短文-记叙文；主人称：第三人称+第一人称；主时态：过去+现在 写作思路分析： 第一段：who when what写谁，点题指出所写人物+介绍【生活的时期和身份等】 ， 第二段：why为什么写他：重要性-最为哦突出的事迹和重大社会影响【显示文化素养】 第三段：what对我有什么影响：你现在或者以后会怎么做 【满分范文】 范文一 Li Bai is a renowned poet in Chinese traditional culture. He was popular from his own day to the present as a genius and a romantic figure who took traditional poetic forms to new heights. He has the nickname “Shixian”, meaning “Immortal Poet”, which sets a high value on his works. Li is best known for the extraordinary imagination and striking Taoism in his poetry. Though considered to be a genius, he wouldn’t bother to sit for the Imperial Examination to become an official. He spent much of his life travelling around the country, enjoying wine and leading a carefree life, which is reflected in his poetry: places he visited, descriptions of nature, joys he felt when drinking and so on. Up to now, about a thousand poems composed by Li Bai have survived, thirty-four of which are included in the collection 300 Tang Poems published in the 18th century. In the same century translations of his poems began to appear in Europe. 范文二 In China's history with five thousand years, the stars are shining, such as Shen Nong, who tasted hundreds of herbs, Confucius, a teacher for all ages, and Li Bai, the Poetry Immortal, to name just a few. Of all those renowned ones, Zhuge Kongming is my favorite. Zhuge Kongming, a famous statesman, strategist and inventor in Chinese history, was the prime minister of Shu in The Three Kingdoms period. He assisted Lord Liu Bei and led the Battle of Red Cliff, which formed a situation where the country was divided mainly into three kingdoms. After the death of Liu Bei, he went on to assist his successor Liu Chan, fighting against Wei Kingdom for five times, in order to repay Liu Bei's kindness, and finally died of illness from overwork. Especially admirable are his outstanding talent and noble quality, from which I learn to be loyal to my cause, my pursuit as well as my commitment, and stick to it for life! (162 words) 范文三 Du Fu was considered to be the greatest of all time. Although he was little-known, his works came to be hugely influential in Chinese literary culture. He has been called the Sage of Poetry and a wide range of his works have been introduced to Western readers. His great ambition was to serve his country as a successful civil servant. But his life, like the country, was destroyed by the An Lushan Rebellion and his last fifteen years were a time of almost constant unrest. He wrote about the success and failure of the government, or the effects of the times in which he lived on himself and on the ordinary people. His lyrical comments are based on emotion and his works made him the central figure of Chinese poetic history. 范文四 In the distinguished Chinese history, many people make great contributions to the development of our country, among whom Zhang Qian stands out particularly. In the Western Han Dynasty, following the emperor’s command, Zhang Qian made his journey to the Western Regions. Selling traditional Chinese products like tea and silk and importing a variety of items, he opened the door to the friendship between China and many countries in Central Asia. Through his traveling, the Silk Road came into being and he greatly promoted the spread of Chinese culture. Nowadays, with more and more international exchange, it is a great time for us to learn from Zhang Qian to spread our brilliant culture to the whole world. 范文五 Li Qingzhao was born in Jinan, Shandong Province. Her father was an open-minded imperial court official, who offered his daughter the privilege of a very good education. Thanks to her exceptional talent, Li established herself early as a peerless writer of poems and particularly lyric poems.     Her life was a bittersweet story. At the beginning, Li led a carefree life. Most of her lyric poems described the lonely life and melancholy feelings of young women from the upper society. After the death of her husband, her life changed. Hardship and suffering made her poetic style widely different from earlier works. It turned to be melancholy and imposing, reflecting the hardship.    Li developed a distinctive Yi'an style of lyric poems, which features plain language, a delicate restraint, the blending of intense passion and literary images, and beautiful melodious rhythms. What’s more, her lyric poems are very easy to recite. 【2023全国乙卷】 学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括: 1. 简要概述;   2.体验和感受。 注意: 1. 字数100字左右;2.题目已为你写好。 Learning A New Skill ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。在高考英语写作中，记叙文的命题形式主要是提纲式，提示信息一般包括人物事迹及其对你的影响（写人）或活动时间、地点、目的、具体内容及活动感受（记事）等。这种写人、记事类半开放性记叙文，要按照记叙文的六要素（时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果）安排内容，有一定的灵活性，把事件、人物或场景交代清楚即可。另外，文章要言之有物，尊重事实，有中心，有重点，有逻辑。 【思路点拨】 本篇作文要求考生写一篇短文投稿。文章可分为三段，首段可以讲述在什么时候学到的新技能；第二段详细叙述新技能的内容；最后一段描述自己从中获得的体验和感受。 写作时可适当增加细节，并且选用恰当的连接成分使文章结构清晰、语言流畅，过渡自然。 模板： ✎篇首句 1. Last summer holiday was memorable because I learned a new skill, which was quite useful.去年暑假是难忘的，因为我学到了一项相当有用的新技能。 2. Last week, I helped my uncle to harvest tea in his garden, and I learned how to pick tea leaves, which was very meaningful.上周，我帮助叔叔在他的花园里采茶，我学会了如何采摘茶叶，这很有意义。3. Last month, my best friend invited me to join a swimming club, where I learned how to swim.上个月，我最好的朋友邀请我加入一个游泳俱乐部，在那里我学会了游泳。 ✎篇中句 1. First, he showed the moves, and then I tried to imitate what he did. At last, I mastered ...首先，他展示了动作，然后我试着模仿他的动作。最后，我掌握了…… 2. I tried my best to do it, but couldn’t learn how to keep the balance.我尽了最大的努力去做，但却无法学会如何保持平衡。 ✎篇尾句 1. This experience is quite valuable. Not only did I learn a new skill that can help me in emergency, but it also enriched my summer life.这次经历很有价值。我不仅学到了一项新技能，它可以在紧急情况下为我提供帮助，而且也丰富了我的暑假生活。 2. Through this experience, I realized the importance of mastering a new skill.通过这次经历，我认识到了掌握一项新技能的重要性。 【满分范文】 范文一 Learning a New Skill Learning a New Skill It is important for us to master some basic living skills to prepare us for our future life. That is why I learned how to cook during the May Day holiday. Since my mother is skilled at cooking, I decided to learn from her. Early in the morning we bought some ingredients, including some vegetables, meat and a fish in the local market. Once we got back home, I began to wash and cut them carefully. Under the guidance of my mother, I turned on the gas cooker. I first stir-fried two vegetables. Then I cooked meat with potatoes. The most difficult task to do was cook fish with tomatoes. However, I finally did it. The moment I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbs-up. I felt so proud that I shared housework with my parents, which also showed I had grown up. 范文二 Learning a New Skill It is this winter vacation that has made a big difference to me. I have learned a new skill -- riding a bike. I used to make excuses to avoid learning to ride a bicycle. Now that I have grown up, I took the initiative to learn this skill. Every morning witnessed my practice in the park with the help of my father. Despite my falling off the bike frequently, I ended up acquiring this skill after many failed attempts. Not only has this experience given me a good understanding that success is achieved through hard work, it has also enhanced my awareness that only by looking at the world with a more open mind will I have a brilliant world. (121 words) 范文三 Learning a New Skill In order to seek pleasure and challenge, I learned a new skill - skateboarding in a local skateboarding club during the holiday. I was full of expectations, but also a little scared because I had never tried it before. I started with learning to balance on the board and gradually mastered the basic skills. Then, I began to try more challenging tricks such as ollies and kick flips. It was difficult, but I persisted and eventually learned these tricks. Now, I love skateboarding and try to practice every day. It’s a great way to stay active and challenge myself. Learning a new skill like skateboarding can be scary and challenging, but once you master it, it can be fun and rewarding. 范文四 Learning a New Skill   During my recent vocation, I gained a new skill - swimming and although the process proved to be quite challenging ,the sense of reward and accomplishment was really impressive.      Recognizing that swimming was crucial for safety in case of accident ,as well as an excellent form of exercise , I made the decision to acquire this skill with dedication and commitment. In  the beginning, I spent much time in the pool , getting familiar with the water and surroundings. Then ,with the guidance of a coach, I gradually learned the proper techniques for breathing, floating ,kicking and stroking in the pool.Through consistent practice, I eventually developed the ability to swim, even though i admitted that I’m not particularly skilled yet.     Learning how to swim was a valuable experience that taught me an essential lesson: where there is will ,there is a way. Additionally , no matter what you are doing, the more you practice , the more proficient you will become. 范文五 Learning a New Skill My long-awaited summer vacation finally arrived. Last weekend, it was very hot. My daughter and I came to the swimming class for training as usual. I was worried and with butterfly in my stomach, but my daughter encouraged me to be brave and determined. Once in the swimming pool, the green water made me feel calm. I jumped into the swimming pool. It was cool and comfortable. The coach taught me to breathe first. The coach said, "take a breath, and then breathe through your nose." I did it five or six times, and I learned it. Then the coach taught me to slap water. I grasped the railing, slapped the water with my legs and feet, and felt very tired after a few taps. In order to learn how to slap water, I still practiced, and finally learned how to swim in water. Simple!I learned freestyle. Swimming makes me confident and keep the good feeling and high spirit. I am positive and happy now, I will insist on this hobby all the time, which makes us cool in the hot summer days. Anyway, swimming is a joyful activity in the hot summer. 2022年高考英语作文真题 【甲卷】 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性； 2. 保护海洋的倡议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 试题要求考生根据所给的情境写一封100词左右的投稿。内容是关6月8日是世界海洋日。要求写出海洋的重要性以及保护海洋的倡议。试题有一个半开放性的特点。内容要紧扣这个世界海洋日的主题。要求考生对这个环保对于海洋的事情有所了解，并且，适当增加某种细节。从而明确写信目的，海洋日的海洋的重要性，这几个方面去展开描写。并且发出保护海洋的倡议，这点让保护环境这个主题得以升华。 【思路点拨】 【解题思路（分段落，列提纲）】 第一段：作用：开篇。 要求：开门见山，点名主题。 篇幅：2-3行：2句-3句。 Do you have idea about June 8? It is not only the college entrance examination to Chinese senior school students, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans. 第二段：作用：文章主体内容。 要求：层次分明，逻辑清晰，要点齐全。 篇幅：4-5行，4-5个句子。 The ocean is the cradle of all life on earth, rich in natural resources, and also our blue home for a happy life and happy growth. To care for the ocean is to care for our future. To begin with, protect the Marine ecological environment and advocate green environmental protection actions. What’s more, to strengthen the consciousness of the sea in accordance with the law, consciously protect the blue land and resources environment, start from me, start from now, start from around things, take an active part in green volunteer activities, and advocate green environmental protection. Finally, green initiative, green life, not to the ocean, sewage, hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, be a small guard to protect the blue land. 第三段： 作用：收尾，点题，补充其他细节等。 要求：概括，得体。 篇幅：2行左右，1-2个句子。 The theme of Ocean Day 2022 is "Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem". Hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, and inherit the Marine civilization from heart to heart. 【满分范文】 范文一 Our Oceans，Our Responsibility Do you know June 8, which is not only a day for the college entrance examination to Chinese youngsters, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans? The ocean is the cradle of all life on earth, rich in natural resources, and also our blue home for a happy life and happy growth. To begin with, protect the Marine ecological environment and advocate green environmental protection actions. What’s more, to strengthen the consciousness of the sea in accordance with the law, consciously protect the blue land and resources environment, start from me, start from now, start from around things, take an active part in green volunteer activities, and advocate green environmental protection. Do you agree with me? If so, let’s hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, and inherit the Marine civilization from heart to heart.（160） 点评： 文章用了中规中矩的手法，和读者用疑问句进行交流，倡议书内容交代的比较自然流畅。 范文二 Our Oceans，Our Responsibility Today is June 8, World Oceans Day, whose theme of 2022 is "Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem". The world is developing too fast to care for its health. It is our pity to sacrifice the harmony of ocean to achieve economic development：the polluted oceans, the dying marine creatures, the destroyed undersea resources, etc, are all crying for our help. It is high time that we strengthen the study of Marine knowledge and enhance the awareness of Marine protection. Deepen the understanding and understanding of Marine mothers, effectively enhance the awareness and responsibility of protecting the blue land, and strive to be a small expert in protecting the Marine ecological environment. Let’s return the mermaid to a clean ocean, and make their life more happy. (145) 点评： 文章用了比喻类比的手法，采用了现实生活中破坏海洋的危害为例子，说明海洋保护的重要性。最后以还给美人鱼一个美丽的家园为比喻，表达美好期盼。 范文三 Our Oceans，Our Responsibility There is comprehensive evidence that we humans are not taking good care of the ocean, posing a lot of problems, such as plastic pollution, oil leak, rising sea levels as well as extreme weathers. As a consequence, great importance should be attached to protect our ocean. Admittedly, intense attention should be paid and tireless efforts be made by people all over the world. Initially, governments need to consider making policies and taking proper measures to to conserve our ocean. In addition, what is of utmost importance is that we individuals should raise our awareness of environment protection, reducing our footprint and living a green lifestyle. Hopefully, with our joint efforts, we are bound to build an environmental-friendly plant shared by we human being. 范文四 Our Oceans, Our Responsibility June 8 was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Ocean Day. It’s a day to stress the importance of ocean and remind people to protect it. It’s generally acknowledged that ocean plays an important role in many aspects. First of all, with rich biological resources, ocean provides samples for biological science research in terms of the diversity of global biological resources. In addition, its abundant food resources and energy in the ocean make it possible for living things to survive. Equally importantly, the abundant water resources in the ocean bear the operation of the global water circulation system, which affect or even determine the global climate change. So many benefits does ocean bring to human beings that great importance can’t be attached enough to protect it. Of course, it’s everybody’s duty to shoulder this responsibility. For one thing, it’s a good idea to widely study knowledge concerning ocean and think of effective approaches to protect it. For another, let’s stop our bad behaviors which may indirectly pollute ocean. Small things make a big difference. I believe, with our joint effort, a truly green will always surround us. 范文五 Our Oceans，Our Responsibility As is known to all, the World Ocean Day falls on June 8th annually. Ocean plays an indispensable role in water circulation, carbon storage as well as climate adjustment. It is also home to a large variety of marine species such as fish, coral and algae, all of which constitute a big part in the ocean biological chain. Therefore, it is no exaggeration to say that hardly can we human go about our lives should ocean be eliminated from our planet. Considering the above merits of ocean, I appeal to everyone to do our bit in preserving our communal treasure house as well as the origin of all life forms-the deep blue sea.(113) 【2022年全国乙卷】 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 学习活动状况描述： 2. 简单评论; 3. 你的建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 【文本解读】 本试题设置了读图表、写短文的形式，特别突显了高中英语课标中所增添的“看”的考查，强调了读图能力。设置的写作情境是校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论，要求考生阅读有关学生英语学习活动调查结果情况的图表，使用图表中的调查结果信息写一篇带有个人思考的、有记叙有说明有议论的小短文。 这精心设计的试题情境使写作形式更加灵活，内容更加开放。这封信中会涉及到考生“我”、 参与英语学习活动情况调查的“学生们”，因此第一、三人称都可能会用到；表达学习活动状况描述和简单评论，主要用一般现在时；关于建议，为将来的事情，因此时态会用一般将来时，或者用情态动词来表达建议。写作时要根据主要内容的顺序来写，适当增加细节，并且选用恰当的连接词使文章通顺、语言流畅。 【思路点拨】 【写前四审】 1. 审题材：投稿 2. 审时态：一般现在时为主 3. 审人称：第一、三人称为主 4. 审要点：构思文章是否符合题目要求，主旨突出，内容要点齐全，写作对象明确，语言的选用得当，符合要求等。 【整体思路】 1. 叙述并说明英语学习活动调查的原因及目的。 2. 分两方面阐述：英语学习活动调查结果柱状图描述，并加以简单评论。 3. 你实用的建议。 【满分范文】 范文一 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. A recent survey suggests that the majority of students being interviewed, about 65%, tend to learn English by listening to English songs. 50% of the students choose to watch English movies as a way of learning. Reading English books and visiting English learning sites prove to be the less popular ways accounting for 18% and 12% respectively. Overall, the results are quite interesting, indicating that language learning can be integrated with personal hobbies and entertainment. In the future,I think our school could provide some activities such as book clubs or English corners to further inspire students interest in learning English. 范文二 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. A recent survey on students' English learning activities revealed that 18% of students read English books, 65% listen to English songs, 50% watch English movies, and 12% browse English learning websites. These findings reflect active involvement in English learning beyond the classroom. Reading and exploring websites enhance vocabulary and comprehension, while movies and songs improve pronunciation and listening skills. In my opinion, a balanced approach is crucial to maximize the benefits of these activities. Combining reading, listening, and speaking practice leads to more comprehensive language development. Moreover, students should seek opportunities to interact with native speakers to hone their speaking skills. By doing so, they can achieve greater success in their language learning journey. 范文三 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently a survey about how to learn English beyond the classroom has been conducted. As can be clearly seen from the statistics, appreciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50% who choose to watch movies as a way of English learning. Reading English books prove to be the less popular ways making up 18%, together with visiting English learning websites, taking up 12% . It turns out that students attach greater importance to interest and entertainment instead of traditional approaches such as reading books when learning English. However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it is one of the best ways to increase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding of grammar. Therefore, students become best English learners quickly. 范文四 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. To make it clear that we can improve our English in various ways, our school newspaper held a heated discussion about Learning English beyond the Classroom. According to the bar chart that shows the popularity of English learning activities, we know that listening to English songs (65%) and watching English movies (50%) account for the larger proportion, while reading English books making up 18% and browsing English learning websites 12%. It indicates that students prefer visual and auditory activities, compared to using their mental effort – reading, probably because songs and movies are more interesting and authentic. I suggest that we’d try different approaches which suit us best to learn English. Only in that way can we enhance our English effectively. 范文五 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently, an investigation is being carried out by our school’s English newspaper about English learning status outside the classroom.According to the bar chart, there are mainly four types of after-class English study. As is shown, more and more students pay attention to English songs, the percent of whom have increased to 65%, and furthermore, the number of those who are into English movies accounts for 50%. The rest two types, reading English originals or browsing English learning websites, account for no more than 18% and 12% respectively.This phenomenon shows that the top two combine entertainment and relaxation as well as easy access for English learners compared with much more boring and dull atmosphere in English class. However, since both are fast-food culture, the rest two choices mean much harder and more toil although it is more fruitful and influential.From the analysis we can safely draw the conclusion that we need to think about how to make full use of our spare time to learn English. It is possible that in the future the tendency will change with our awareness improved. （187） 2021年高考英语作文真题 【2021年全国甲卷】 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括： 1.阐明写信事由； 2.征求建议； 3.表示感谢。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 本试题要求写一篇求助信。求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。注意语气委婉真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。 【思路点拨】 【写前四审】 审体裁：求助信，书信格式。 审时态：要点1用一般现在时、一般将来时为主；要点1用一般现在时；要点3用一般将来时。 审人称：第一、三人称。（写信人和收信人之间是朋友关系，那么信中的语言既要体现对收信人的尊重，又要体现与对方的友好关系。所以在征求建议时，要保证语言的得体性。) 审内容：要点1“阐明写信事由”，明确写信背景“学校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示”。要点2“征求建议”为主要内容，应详写。可以用举例子的方式，如民乐、武术、剪纸、中国结等。要点3简写，“表达感谢”的口吻要真挚，以体现你的感谢和期望。 【思路点拨】 段落要点 首段 写信目的 正文 咨询详情 结尾 表达谢意，期盼回复 【满分范文】 范文一 Dear Chris, Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice. As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help. Yours, Li Hua 范文二 Dear Chris, How is everything going with you lately? A class meeting will be helld in my school about Chinese traditional cultural and it will be displayed on the English website. I am writing to ask some advice from you on what kind of Chinese conventional cultural attracts the foreigners like you most. As we all know, Chinese traditional culture includes calligraphy, Chinese knots, martial arts, Chinese paintings, ancient painted pottery, paper cutting, terracotta warriors and horses and so on. Besides. Chinese cultural also includes various cultural thoughts and spiritual concepts in the national history, which is mainly composed of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism. How much do you want to know about each part, and would you please tell me which part you are curious about. What type of introduction will help foreigners to have a much clearer knowledge of their interested section? Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated and thank you for your help.You can also collect some tips from your friends there. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Lihua 范文三 Dear Chris, Word came that ours school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice. As far as we know,there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help. Yours, Lihua 范文四 Dear Chris, How are you doing these days? A class meeting under the theme of Chinese cultures will be held by our school, and I'm writing to ask for your suggestions on the topic. Since the content of this class meeting is to be posted on an English website that has numerous foreign visitors, I couldn't decide which aspects of our culture are more popular among foreign readers. Currently, we have been considering a wide range of choices which include local cuisine, ancient costumes, festival traditions and folk music, but we haven't reached any agreement yet. From your perspective, which topic interests you the most? Do you have any suggestions or can you just put forward another alternative if possible？ I would highly appreciate it if you could generously share with me your opinion. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Lihua 范文五 Dear Chris， How is everything going? To introduce Chinese traditional culture, our school will hold a theme class meeting, which will be exhibited on the English website.I am writing to ask for your valuable advice on the aspects of Chinese traditional culture which are extremely appealing to foreign friends.       一切都好吗?为了介绍中国传统文化，我们学校将举办一次主题班会，并在英文网站上展出。我写信是想就中国传统文化哪些方面对外国朋友极具吸引力的问题征求您的宝贵意见。 As far as I know, Chinese traditional culture, including paper cutting, guzheng and so on, has its unique characteristics. For example, Chinese knots are a symbol of good luck and best wishes. Furthermore, guzheng is of great significance to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music. Eventually, I am strongly eager to know which aspects of Chinese traditional culture arouse your curiosity most.       据我所知，中国的传统文化，包括剪纸、古筝等，都有其独特的特点。例如，中国结是好运和美好祝愿的象征。此外，古筝对中国民间音乐有着重要的意义，引领你进入一个美妙的音乐世界。最后，我非常想知道中国传统文化的哪些方面最能引起你的好奇心。 With your assistance, I will make full preparations for the meeting. Thanks again for your help. Looking forward to your reply.    在你的协助下，我将为会议做充分准备。再次感谢您的帮助。期待您的回复。 【2021年全国乙卷】 你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 分析优势与不足； 2. 提出学习建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 【文本解读】 本试题书面表达继续延续2020年的命题思路，以学生的实际活动即英语演讲比赛为情景载体，以内容要点为写作引导，要求学生完成一篇命题演讲稿：Be smart online learners。就文体而言，这是应用文，有一定的格式要求，内容上这也是一篇小议论文，中心内容恰好是新课标要求的体现，即考查学生的语言能力和思维品质。21世纪的今天，学生使用网络愈加频繁，当下疫情形势依然严峻，网上学习越来越受到广大学生的欢迎，在这种大背景下，引导学生探讨网络学习的利弊尤为重要。学生经过思辨，可以明理明事。所以整篇文章应该是学生社会主义核心价值观的具体体现，是立德树人根本任务的落实。总体来说，这类型书面表达属于新课程高考理念。虽然我们依然使用的是旧教材，但继去年高考作文思路发生变化后，老师同学们在写作方面打开了思路，训练也不再局限于各种应用文体，因此就整体布局，学生应该有一定的把握，但想要成为高考高分作文，当然要看学生的思维能否在较高的语言能力下体现。         【思路点拨】 【写前四审】 审体裁：演讲稿，（演讲有聆听者，须有开头语及套句Good morning, everyone.It is an honour to deliver a speech here和结束语That’s all ! Thank you for listening. ） 审人称：第三人称为主(需特别注意行文人称一致！） 审时态：一般现在时为主 审内容：考试应用文写3段为宜，注意段落篇幅合理，有主有次—— Para 1: 问候听众，说明发言（/演讲）主题。 Para 2: 主体段，要点1与要点2，根据演讲题目可知应以第2个要点为主，写2-3点为宜。 Para 3: 结束段，提出希望。 【满分范文】 范文一 Be smart online learners Online learning is an important way to study recently. Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages. First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit. Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected. In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient. 范文二 Be smart online learners Online learning is an important way to study recently. It’s a great honor for me to stand here to deliver a speech titled Be smart online learners. At present, with the rapid development of the Internet, we are taking advantage of online programs to further our study, which offered numerous benefits, including flexibility and convenience. Meanwhile, online learning presents challenges, the biggest of which is low efficiency caused by a lack of self-discipline. Therefore, I would like to recommend ways to be smart online learners. Advanced planning always comes first. Besides, good time management will contribute to our productivity. Most importantly, full commitment is a must. I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will become smart online learners and take out the study to the next level. That’s all! Thank you! 范文三 Be smart online learners Online learning has become an important way to study recently. It has rapidly gained popularity among us students due to its convenience and flexibility. Not only does it allow us to learn whenever and wherever it works best for us, but also offers a variety of learning materials tailored to us. However, it sometimes can be boring and ineffective, for lack of face-to-face interaction and self-discipline. How can we be a smart online learner? It is acknowledged that active participation is of great help. We should take advantage of every opportunity to interact with classmates and teachers and don’t be afraid of sharing our opinions. Besides, turn off our cell phones and close irrelevant web browser windows to avoid distractions and increase productivity. All in all, develop a good habit of online learning, and chances are that we will be smart online learners. Thank you for listening. 范文四 Be smart online learners Online learning is an important way to study recently. No doubt it enjoys a great popularity nowadays. To begin with, it’s obvious that abundant online learning resources which offer a variety of options for learners can satisfy multiple needs of learners. Additionally, online learning features convenience, flexibility and low cost. However, every coin has two sides. It also has some disadvantages. Without teachers around, learners are easy to get distracted, and too much screen time may do harm to their eyes. So here I’d like to offer some suggestions. First, good time management will lead to high efficiency. Second, resisting temptation and self-discipline are of significance. Third, a short rest every 40 minutes is quite necessary. In this way, we can be smart online learners. That's all. Thank you. 范文五 Be smart online learners I feel extremely privileged to deliver a speech titled Be Smart Online Learners.  With the development of network and electronic devices such as smartphones and tablets, the Internet has become an essential tool for not only entertainment, but also study. Therefore, online learning has been an appealing topic. What makes it gain great popularity is that we may acquire almost whatever information we want without delay as long as we have access to the Internet. Moreover, it frees us from piles of books, which means it is both time-saving and money-saving. However, what must be acknowledged are its disadvantages. For instance, we teenagers may encounter mountains of information, making it hard for us to distinguish between right and wrong. Thus, in order to make the most of online learning and be smart online learners, students should be mindful of how to use it wisely. A great deal of concentration and strict self-discipline and a positive outlook as well as correct moral values are what we should pay special attention to. Only in this way can we become smart online learners in the near future. Thank you very much for listening. 2020年高考英语作文真题 【2020·新课标Ⅰ卷】 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 本试题改变了近年来常用的应用文书信或邮件形式，而是以命题作文的形式结合更灵活的语言情境要求学生介绍值得尊重的一个人。这样的作文是在引导学生关注身边的人和事，发现他们的优秀品质，渗透对学生语言知识，思维品质，文化意识和学习能力等学科素养的考查，落实立德树人的根本任务。   审题思路   1. 从the person可以看出，所写的主体应该是一个人，而不是一个群体。    2. 从题目中的I respect可以推断出此人身上有优秀的品质，或者对“我”个人有积极的影响，或者为社会做出巨大的贡献等。  3. 题目中说是“以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题”，且文章给出的首句也是many respectable people around us，表明我们写的尊敬的人应该是我们生活中现实存在的，不是古人，也不是想象的任何人，是真实的语言表述和情感表达。 4. 经考后了解，由于疫情的影响，同学们马上想到值得尊敬的人很多是白衣天使，比如钟南山、张文宏等；但也有许多同学突出身边人物，选择了写父母或者老师。这样的选择可以说是非常明智的，而且贴近生活，取材方便，情感真实。 【思路点拨】 第一段：根据所给开头引出自己所尊敬的人，并给出简单的介绍。当然，如何衔接自然无痕也是要重点考虑的问题。 第二段：罗列出自己尊敬和爱戴的两三条原因；或者讲述一件事或他/她的具体事迹来衬托他/她的形象。 第三段：个性结尾。可以总结陈词，也可以希望自己成为那样的人，或倡议大家以他/她为榜样，向他/她学习。 【满分范文】 范文一 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. Take my neighbor Uncle Li for example. He is a volunteer who works as a gate guard in our community during the epidemic of COVID-19, and his main duty is to measure body temperature and check the passes for exit and entry. Regardless of the risk of getting infected, Uncle Li is responsible and devoted to his job. Even in terrible weather, he still sticks to his post and leaves no one unchecked. Thanks to his efforts in epidemic prevention and control, our neighborhood has been in a good state. Actually, there are many selfless people like Uncle Li around us, and they well deserve our respect. 范文二 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. And the person I respect most is my physics teacher. She is of medium height, with long and blonde hair. She is so patient with each student that we all like her. It is her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement. She teaches us not only gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect. 范文三 The person I respect There are many respectable people around me. My maths teacher, Mr. Wang, who has a pair of big shiny eyes, straight nose, and small mouth, is the person I respect most in my life. During my senior school days, I did not often get good marks for maths, but Mr. Wang never scolded me. Instead, he always asked me to raise questions whenever I need help. In particular, he was very patient though sometimes I had no way to solve some difficult maths problems. He always said to me, "So long as you keep working hard, you are certain to get success in the future. And with his considerate help, I successfully got high marks for the national college entrance examination. 范文四 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. For me, the most respectable person round me is my best friend, Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in my class, who is crazy about reading, learning and helping other people.There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him. First and foremost, needless to say, he is good at English, for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student. Additionally, no one can deny he gets along well with all our classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience, considering that he has been serving as vice monitor for many years.Hopefully, I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better. Possible version seven 范文五 The person I respect There are many respectable people around me. One of them is my English teacher. The door opened, and in came the English teacher Ms. Cai, who is not tall but pretty①. She said we had made remarkable progress in the last exam, with a certain boy being the top②. I again couldn't help bursting into tears of joy③. Three months before, on a similar occasion④, Ms. Cai seriously declared that the results of the final exam were disappointing, with a certain boy being at the bottom. Suddenly I found all the eyes were fixed upon me⑤ . Class over, Ms. Cai advised me to catch up with the others by having extra lessons⑥. I made it, so I am sincerely grateful to my English teacher. 教师点评： ①in came the English teacher Ms. Cai是典型的全部倒装句。介词in放于句首，谓语动词came放在其后，外貌特征的简单描述精准到位。足见习作者倒装句式的运用娴熟干练。 ②remarkable progress即可理解为“优异成绩，显著进步”，而with a certain boy being the top则被视为“with复合结构”，即“with+宾语+宾补”结构，用于此处生动、准确。 ③couldn't help bursting into tears of joy意为“忍不住流下高兴的眼泪”。 can't/couldn't help doing 即“忍不住做....，burst into tears...即“突然哭起来....”。.词汇运用娴熟准确。 ④on a similar occasion即为“类似的场面、相似的场景”。 ⑤be fixed upon sb.即含“盯着某人、聚焦在某人身上”之意。 ⑥Class over是“名词+副词”构成的独立主格结构，catch up with意为“赶上”，刻画得准确到位。 ⑦呼应了主题，提升了文章的立意。 【2020·新课标Ⅱ】 上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括: 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 题目:My Weekend ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 本试题要求写经历感受。经历感受就是把已经发生的事情叙述出来并加上个人的感想。常考的话题有参加某场活动的记录或某次经历的叙述。以一般过去时为主，按事情发展的先后顺序来进行讲述。 【思路点拨】 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。 人称：第一人称。 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅，并且适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。 包括三部分内容： 开篇（第一段）：事情发生的时间和地点 正文（第二段）：发生的经过和结果 结尾（第三段）：对事物的看法或个人感受 【满分范文】 范文一 My weekend 提纲：开头句： ①Last weekend, my classmates and I took part in an activity—apple picking, to help the farmers in a nearby farm to pick apples.②Last weekend, our class participated in an activity—apple picking. We had a memorable experience working together. 文章主体： 要点一： ①When we arrived at the farmland, the farmers gave us a warm welcome. Rows of fruit trees weighed down the branches. Then the leader introduced the farmland, which covers an area of about 50 mu and currently has 350 apple trees, including four varieties. Then he divided us into four groups and we did different jobs.②On arriving at the farmland, we were given a warm welcome by the farmers. Seeing the apples on the rows of trees, we were very excited. Soon the leader told us something about the farm, which is about 50 mu and there are 350 apple tress. Then he assigned us different tasks. 要点二： ①After that, our work got started. Some of us stood on the chairs, some climbed the trees, and some helped to support the chairs, and others put apples into the boxes. In order to encourage ourselves to work harder, we also spent some fun time together singing, dancing and playing.②After the introduction, we began to pick apples. Some climbed the trees, some supported the chairs. And others carried the apples to the boxes. We also did some other kind of things which made us more excited and happier, such as singing and dancing. 结尾句： ①Through the experience, I was keenly aware of the hardships of the peasants and I was very proud of the efforts we made.②After a day's work, the farmers thanked us for our support. Eating big and sweet apples, we felt extremely proud that our small act could send warm to the farmers. 范文二 My Weekend Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals. On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat. I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness! 范文三 My weekend Last weekend, I took part in a picking activity in a remarkable modern farm with several classmates, which has impressed and inspired all of us. With green vegetables and fruits, the farm covers an area of 2,000 acres, where advanced technology is used for efficient farming. After a short instruction of the staff, we were divided into two groups to do the picking work separately. Not only did we collect vegetables and fruits, but we also ate some fresh fruits there. Through this activity, I felt it personally how hard the farmers work and treasuring everything we own shouldn't just a slogan! Besides, I really appreciate this opportunity to get close to nature. What a meaningful day it is. 范文四 My Weekend Last weekend, my classmates and I went strawberry-picking in an orchard, which enjoys high popularity with locals. Early in the morning, we set out from the school and biked to the orchard with excitement. In a flash, there we were, because the destination was just within walking distance. Upon arrival, I was overwhelmed by a sea of fresh berries. They were so inviting that I couldn’t resist making a dart for them. Along with my classmates, I engaged in the battle for the biggest and prettiest strawberry. The moment we spotted something giant, we just popped up and grabbed it. Bathed in the gentle sunshine, we could have a bite of any berries we liked, only leaving “The Big One”. You can picture how thrilled we were! This awesome activity not only helped us gain hands-on experience, but also made us well aware of the significance of labor. I just love it! 范文五 My Weekend Last weekend, my class went to Xishan Farm to pick fruits and experience the labor life. The farm is located in a nature reserve. When we reached there, we were divided into different teams and had a picking contest. According to the rule, the group to pick the most fruits with the best quality will win. We started the contest with excitement. Since the best fruits were always high on the tree, we needed cooperation throughout the contest. The picking lasted all morning. Tired though we were, all our efforts paid off. Through this activity, we realize the value of teamwork and that it is the process rather than the result that really counts! What a meaningful experience! 【2020·新课标III卷】 假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括: 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 结束语已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 该书面表达本篇书面表达属于应用文--求助信。要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steamboat》改编短剧的支持。根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。 【思路点拨】 结构：总分总法 第一段说明写这封邮件目的； 第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题； 第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。 【满分范文】 范文一 Dear Miss Evans, Our play based on the text "Drawing a horse" tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to draw him a beautiful horse. The king waited for more than a year before getting it, and misunderstood the artist, and in the end forgave him because of his effort to spend over a year drawing it better. We struggle with the lines of the play, and we tumble over some pronunciations. I hope you can come to a rehearsal next Wednesday afternoon in the school hall and give us some advice. I’m looking forward to your reply. Sincerely Yours, Li Hua 范文二 Dear Miss Evans: I am Li Hua, and I'm writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play. Our play will be based on an ancient Chinese story "Be there just to make up the number". In the play, the old king treated his musician very well. A man named Nanguo managed to become a member of the king's band. During the band played together, Nanguo just pretended to play and made no sound. Nobody realized. After the old king died, his son, the new ruler, preferred solo so that he ordered the musicians to play one by one. Therefore, Nanguo had to run out of the palace. We will have a rehearsal next Friday afternoon in the school hall, and we hope you can come and give us some advice. Please consider our request. I look forward to your reply. Sincerely Li Hua 范文三 Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards! Yours truly, Li Hua 范文四 Dear Miss Evans, I was wondering if you could help me revise a short play adapted from our English textbook. The plot of the tragic story is about Lady Meng jiang and her husband, who lived more than 2000 years ago in ancient China.At their wedding,her husband was taken away forcefully to bulid the Great wall.Meng jiang went to look for her husband, only to learn of his death. Then she cried at the Great Wall，causing it to fall apart. Could you kindly give me guidance on two aspects? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, if you could please give us some direction on our acting and use of tone? If possible, could I meet you in your office at 10 am? We are looking forward to your reply. Yours, 范文五 Dear Miss Evans, I’m writing to ask for your guidance on how to adapt an English fiction into a stage play. As you know, “Drama Night” is upon us, for which we have chosen the text entitled The Lord of the Rings. This fantasy story we favor is set in the fictional world of Middle Earth, where the Dark Lord Sauron seeks to consolidate his already immense power by reclaiming the One Ring that he has lost. After a series of fierce fights, the One Ring is finally destroyed, which triggers the death of Sauron. Despite a ton of script revision, we are now still in a dilemma about balancing the limited show time against the relatively complicated plots of the original. Could you please set aside some time and give us explicit instruction? We wonder if you are available at your office at 2pm this Wednesday. If not, please set a time and a place that suit you well. We are looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$