109 Week 16 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能16（课件PPT）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

启航 英语 Week 16　 推荐信& 挑战自我类读后续写 Thursday——新作文基本功提高微技能16 如何提高续写中的环境描写 在续写中，环境描写往往可以衬托出人物心情和事件性质，如果是个人经历的话，环境变化一般都是用来衬托心情变化。比如，风和日丽、和风细雨能够衬托出人物快乐幸福的心情或美好的事物；漆黑的夜晚，那主角一定是感到害怕；如果是写一个事件的话，环境变化也预示或者暗示事态变化。比如阴转晴，那么事态就是走向了一个好的方向，可能符合主角利益或者符合道义等。总得来说，环境多次变化就是烘托气氛、为文章做铺垫、表示情节走向，还有对主角心理的衬托。 一、天气的描写 (一)常用词汇 1．cloudless adj.无云的，晴朗的 2．wave n．水浪 3．glitter v．闪烁，闪耀 4．melt v．融化 5．howl v．嚎叫，咆哮 6．cloudy adj.多云的 7．rainy adj.多雨的 8．windy adj.多云的 9．foggy adj.多雾的 10．snowy adj.多雪的 11．icy adj.冰冷的，冷淡的 12．sunny adj.阳光明媚的，晴朗的 13．frost n．& v．霜冻，结霜 14．frosty adj.降霜的，冻寒的 15．weather n．天气 16．hurricane n．飓风， 狂风 17．typhoon n．台风 18．windstorm n．暴风 19．storm n．暴风雨 20．snowstorm n．暴风雪 21．sandstorm n．沙尘暴 (二)高频词块 1．a full moon一轮满月 2．on the side of the sun太阳的另一面 3．creep into飘进 4．sunlight 阳光 5．wet and cloudy climate潮湿阴沉的气候 (三)亮点句式 1．The sky was cloudless and a full moon hung in the sky. 天上没有一丝云彩，一轮满月挂在天空。 2．The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。 3．The moon was a sharply defined crescent and the sky was perfectly clear. 天空异常明净，一轮弯月挂在天上，轮廓十分清晰。 4．The frost on the glass, frozen by the cold, changed colors in the moonlight, and flickered faintly. 玻璃上因寒冷而凝结起的冰霜，在月光下变幻着色彩，若隐若现地闪烁着。 5．A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top, miles of trees spread out below us and birds chirped between branches. 清爽的微风拂过山顶，几英里长的树木在我们脚下伸展开来，鸟儿在树枝间啁啾。 二、季节描写 (一)常用词汇 1．autumn n．秋季 2．fall n．秋季(美) 3．spring n．春季 4．summer n．夏季 5．winter n．冬季 6．season n．季节 7．monthly adj.& n．每月的，月刊 8．seasonal adj.季节的 9．yearly adj.& adv.每年的 10．dot v．点缀 11．transparent adj.透明的 12．burn v．炙烤 13．frozen adj.冻僵的 14．brown v．变褐色 15．overwhelming adj.势不可挡的，压倒一切的 16．torrent n．奔流，急流 17．heat n．热，热浪 18．atmosphere n．大气层，空气，氛围 19．uneasy adj.心神不安的，不稳定的 20．discomfort n．不舒适，不舒服 (二)高频词块 1．spring rains春雨 2．give out散发出 3．a rainy season多雨的季节 4．in the warm spring sunshine在春天温暖的阳光里 5．be buried in snow深埋在雪中 6．under the blazing/scorching/burning sun of midsummer在盛夏灼热的阳光下 7．year after year年复一年 8．year by year逐年 9．icy water冰冷的水 10．bright green绿意盎然 11．flow through涌动 12．be filled with充满着 13．fallen leaves落叶 (三)亮点句式 1．The spring rains quickened the earth. 春雨让大地复苏。 2．The lotus flowers are now in full bloom.The rose gives out a sweet smell. 荷花盛开了。玫瑰散发出甜美的气味。 3．The icy water pierced my skin with needle-like chill. 冰冷的水像针一样刺穿我的皮肤。 4．It was autumn, and the land was dotted with the gold and red and yellow of the changing leaves. 秋天到了，金色、红色和黄色的叶子点缀着大地。 5．Summer sees the mountains turn bright green with growing rice.During autumn, these same mountains are flash gold, and in winter they are covered in sheets of white frost. 夏天，水稻生长，群山绿意盎然。秋天漫山铺金，冬天银装素裹。 三、日月星辰景色描写 (一)常用词汇 1．sky n．天空 2．heaven n．天空 3．moon n．月亮 4．star n．星星 5．planet n．行星 6．universe n．宇宙，万物 7．sunny adj.和煦的，照到阳光的 8．sunshine n．阳光 9．blink v．眨眼，闪烁 10．dot v．散布于，遍布，点缀 11．dawn n．黎明 12．curtain n．幕布 13．rise v．升起 14．hang v．悬挂 15．sparkle v．闪耀，闪烁 16．diamond n．珍珠 17．sunset n．夕阳 18．moonlight n．月光 19．lighten v．使(某物)更明亮 20．romantic adj.浪漫(主义)的，有情调的，爱情的 21．reflect v．反射 (二)高频词块 1．shine brightly闪闪发光 2．golden glow金色光芒 3．full moon圆月 4．night sky夜空 5．beyond expression难以言表 6．the Milky Way银河 7．orange light橙色的光 8．blue sky晴空 9．light up照亮 (三)亮点句式 1．The moon was shining brightly on the snow, and in the cold still air not a leaf moved on the trees. 月亮在雪地上闪闪发光，在寒冷的空气中，树上没有叶子在动。 2．Tom lay in the warm sunshine, which cast a warm golden glow on his face. 汤姆躺在温暖的阳光中，阳光在他的脸上投射出温暖的金色光芒。 3．Sparkling stars dotted in the sky blinked at us. 星星点缀在空中，对着我们眨眼睛。 4．The lingering sunlight was swept by the rapidly falling night, resembling a pitch-black curtain covering the sky. 逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。 Ⅰ.完成句子 1．It was beautiful spring weather.___________________________;the plants were growing，and the forest animals were waking from their winter sleep. 这是美丽的春季，雪冰融化，植物生长，森林动物从冬天的睡眠中醒来。 2．__________________________ for a wet and cloudy climate here. 对这儿潮湿阴沉的气候来说，今天的天气已够好了。 The snow and ice were melting It is lovely weather today 3．The moor is lovely in spring and summer when there are flowers.It always _______________.The air's so fresh, and the birds ________________. 这片荒野，春天和夏天都开满了花，可爱极了，连空气都是甜的。那儿的空气新鲜极了，鸟也叫得那么动听。 4．An overwhelming torrent of heat flew through the atmosphere, _________________________________. 一股势不可挡的热浪在大气中涌动，充满了令人不安的不适。 5．The moon hung in the sky, smiling, __________________________, blinking. 月亮斜挂在天空，笑盈盈的，星星挤满了银河，眨巴着眼睛。 smells so sweet sing so beautifully filled with uneasy discomfort stars filling the Milky Way 6．The sun rises as a canopy of gold, bright amid the blue, ___________ ______________________________.As darkness surrenders, every color changes from tinges of charcoal to the vibrancy. 太阳升起，像一个金色的天篷，在蓝色的天空中闪闪发光，让星星们休息。随着黑暗的消退，每一种颜色都从木炭色变得充满活力。 bidding the stars to take their nightly rest Ⅱ.句式升级 1．在早晨的阳光里，薄雾涣然消散了。 The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun. →__________________________________,the mist melted rapidly.(with复合结构) 2．日落时分，一道红霞笼罩在西山上。 At sunset, a red glow hung over the western mountains. →______________________________,there was a bar of red over the western hills.(as引导时间状语从句) With the morning sun shining As the sun went down gently 3．随着时间的流逝，春草迅速生长。 The new spring grass shot up as time itself had sped up. →___________________________,the new spring grass shot up.(with复合结构) 4．落叶在中秋凉爽的空气中翩翩起舞，告别甜蜜的夏天，迎接秋天的到来。 Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air so that they bade farewell to sweet summer and welcomed the autumn in. →Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air, _____________ _______________________________________________.(现在分词作状语) With time itself speeding up bidding farewell to sweet summer and welcoming the autumn in 5．晴空万里，火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫。 Blue sky stood tall and far, and the sun was searing my back. →Blue sky stood tall and far _________________________________.(so that引导结果状语从句) 6．夕阳反射在窗户上，花园看起来很美。 As the setting sun was reflected in the windows, the garden looked so beautiful. →The garden looked so beautiful _______________________________ ______________.(with复合结构) so that the sun was 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