81 Week 12 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能12（课件PPT）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

启航 英语 Week 12　 现象评论& 体育运动类读后续写 Thursday——新作文基本功提高微技能12 如何提高续写中的心理活动描述 一、开心 平庸版：He was happy. 升阶例句 ①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 ②Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。 解读：①句中shone like a diamond和②中 lit up the whole room形象地表现了高兴的程度，用这种比喻取得了良好的表达效果。 二、伤心 平庸版：He was sad. 升阶例句 ①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 ②Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地借酒消愁。 解读：①句中tears rolling down his cheeks和②中 drowned sadness in wine更加突出了那种伤心无语和悲痛欲绝的心情。 三、紧张 平庸版：He was nervous. 升阶例句 ①Standing in the classroom, I became increasingly nervous and could feel my heart beating wildly.站在教室里，我越来越紧张，我能听见自己心跳加速的声音。 ②Before the competition, his palms were sweaty and knees were soft.比赛前，他手心出汗，膝盖发软。 解读：①句中feel my heart beating wildly和②中knees were soft深刻地刻画了当时的紧张表现，有力地突出了人物内心那种窒息的紧张不安。 四、尴尬/羞愧 平庸版：He was embarrassed/ashamed. 升阶例句 ①His face burned with embarrassment/shame.他因尴尬而满脸通红。/他窘得脸都红了。 ②She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。 解读：①句中burned with embarrassment/shame和②中feel her face burning中burn用得很是巧妙，形象地表达了人物当时那种羞愧难当、无地自容的窘境。 五、愤怒 平庸版：He was angry. 升阶例句 ①His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。 ②He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。 解读：①句中 face clouded和②中burning eyes真正刻画了人物的生气程度和即将带来的后果，为下面的续写埋下了伏笔。 六、绝望 平庸版：He felt hopeless/desperate. 升阶例句 ①Upon hearing the bad news, he was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.听到这个坏消息，他突然被投入黑暗世界，陷入绝望。 ②He felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness.他感觉被遗弃了，孤独使他感到绝望。 解读：①句中thrown into a world of darkness和②中felt left out让读者一下就体会到了那种真正的绝望，欲哭无泪，生无可恋。 七、感谢 平庸版：I thanked my father. 升阶例句 ①I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and embraced him tightly.我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。 ②With grateful tears hanging in his eyes, he kept extending(表达)his gratitude, “Thank you so much！” 他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！” 解读：①句中embraced him tightly和②中 tears hanging in his eyes这两个动作，形象地抓住了那种用语言无法表达，而只能用肢体动作来体现的那种来自内心的感激。 把下列句子进行表达升级： 1．当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very scared. →①At the sight of the fierce wolf, I _____________________________ _____________________________________.(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软) →②At the sight of the fierce wolf, I _____________________________ _____________.(吓呆了，不敢动弹) →③At the sight of the fierce wolf, I ____________________________ ______________________________.(被深深的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗) felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak froze with terror, too scared to move an inch was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating 2．当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。 When the host announced that she won the prize, she was very excited. →①When the host announced that she won the prize, ________________ _____________________.(她激动得两眼放光) →②When the host announced that she won the prize, _______________ ___________________________.(她激动得心怦怦跳) →③When the host announced that she won the prize, ________________ ______________________.(她兴奋不能自已) her eyes twinkled with excitement her heart was thumping with excitement a wide excitement took hold of her 3．一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。 Upon hearing the bad news, she felt very sad. →①Upon hearing the bad news, ________________________________ _____________.(她心痛，眼泪直流) →②Upon hearing the bad news, she, __________________，had trouble speaking.(悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话) →③Upon hearing the bad news, ________________________________ ___________________________________.(她被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣) her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks numb with grief she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly 4．当妈妈亲吻他时，小婴儿开心极了。 When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was very happy. →①When his mother kissed him on the cheek, ____________________ ______________________________.(小婴儿好像在世界之巅，非常开心) →②When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, _________________ _________________________________.(他眉开眼笑，笑容照亮房间) →③When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, he _____________ ____________________.(欢欣雀跃) it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world he beamed and his bright smile lit up the room danced with joy and sweetness 5．她感到非常羞愧。 She felt ashamed. →① She felt _________________________________________.(如此羞愧，脸上滚烫) →②So ashamed was she that she could ________________________.(感到血液涌上脸颊) →③So ashamed did she feel that __________________________.(她快哭了) so ashamed that she could feel her face burning feel the blood rush to her face she was close to tears 6．Sheldon感到非常生气。 Sheldon felt very angry. →①Sheldon felt _____________________________________________ _______________________________________.(如此生气以至于他冲出房间，狠狠摔门) →②__________________,Sheldon shook his fist at me.(怒火中烧) →③Filled with anger/fury, Sheldon was unable to _______________.(说不出话) so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door violently behind him Boiling with rage utter a single word 7．Tony感到很绝望。 Tony felt hopeless/desperate. →①As the result of an accident, Tony ____________________________ _______________________________________________.(被投入黑暗之中，陷入绝望) →②Tony _______________________________________________.(感觉被遗忘，忽视) was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness 谢谢观看 Thank you for watching $$