74 Week 11 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能11（课件PPT）-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

启航 英语 Week 11 人物介绍& 生活故事类读后续写 Thursday——新作文基本功提高微技能11 用好高级语言　提升应用文写作表达 英语的书面表达题是高考的重要组成部分，是对英语学习综合运用能力进行考查的题目，在高考中占有相当大的比重，而许多学生，在此方面失分很多，以致影响了最后总分。高考英语书面表达要求内容充实，句式丰富，用词准确，行文连贯，思路清晰，过渡自然。要想达到这一目的，语言的正确运用和表达是至关重要的。为此，我们可以从以下三个方面进行训练： 一、加强词汇学习，夯实英语基础 英语词汇是英语最基本的单位，离开了单词，学英语就成了无本之木，无源之水。词汇是写作的基础，记忆和背诵是我们扩大词汇量最传统、最简单的方法。首先我们要背诵高考词汇表；其次，要在老师的帮助下将单词、词组归纳整理，进行比较，强化记忆。 二、从基本词汇的运用着手，强化基本句型的训练 在掌握了基本词汇的基础上，反复训练，熟悉并掌握五个基本句型。 1．主语＋系动词＋表语：The farm looks like a large beautiful garden. 2．主语＋谓语(不及物)(＋状语)：After visiting some places, we were singing and dancing in an open area./Now great changes have taken place in our school. 3．主语＋谓语(及物)＋宾语(＋其他)：I want to borrow some books from the library./I found (that) the driver was a woman. 4．主语＋谓语(及物)＋双宾语(＋其他)：My English teacher offered me some books on English study./Because Mother's Day is coming, I want to buy my mother a present. 5．主语＋谓语(及物)＋宾语＋宾语补足语：The teacher let me have a try./He asked me to support him up./We made Li Ming our monitor./Who had the windows broken? 三、掌握几种表达优美的高级句式，优化句子结构 1．改变句子的开头方式， 使句子开头多样化 句子不是一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词作状语等。 【经典句型1】Of all my teachers, Mr.Moore is the one who impresses me most. 【经典句型2】It is reported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2024 Olympic Games in Paris. 【经典句型3】As we all know, we are what we eat.Therefore, it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits. 2．在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式 要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。 (1)强调句 The dog has saved my little sister bravely.→It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely. (2)主从复合句 【经典句型1】When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects.此处用一个状语从句显然要比两个并列句效果要好。 【经典句型2】Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. (3)分词短语、不定式短语、由with或without引导的短语 【经典句型1】The next morning on his way home Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky. 【经典句型2】Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. 【经典句型3】To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets. 【经典句型4】With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems. (4)倒装句 【经典句型】Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better. (5)省略句 While you are crossing the street, you should be careful.→While crossing the street, you should be careful. 3．通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力 【经典句型1】Now you are telling Jim how you understand this piece of art and what makes you think so. 【经典句型2】Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. 4．注意连接词与句子的运用 在回信的开头我们可以这样用：Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.这句话起承上启下的作用，使文章过渡自然。 5．使用过渡词语 写好了每个句子，并不一定就是一篇好文章，因为作为一篇文章，还必须行文连贯。那么，如何使行文连贯呢？这就要求我们在组成篇章时，要用好过渡性词语。过渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂一样，起着润滑的作用。常用的过渡词语主要有： 并列递进：and, also, as well as, besides, what's more, furthermore, moreover, etc. 转折：but, yet, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc. 因果：because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc. 对比：or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc. 总结：in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc. 6．多用词组表达单个词义 The dog was killed in the accident.→ The dog lost his life in the accident. 7．避免用相同词汇 My father likes reading and my mother likes cooking, but I like playing games. → My father likes reading and my mother enjoys cooking, but I am fond of playing games. Ⅰ.下面是一篇学生习作，通篇使用there be 句式，让人感到单调乏味，易产疲劳感。 There is a new classroom building on one side of the road.There used to be a playground on the other side before.But there is a library now.There are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines in the library.There is a new playground in front of the school.There are a lot of trees in and around the school. 请运用多样化句式试着修改： _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [范文] On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another building—our library, in which you can find all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines.The playground is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. Ⅱ.请仔细体会下面几组句子，试用高级句式改造句子 1．We had to stand there to catch the offender. ___________________________________________________________ 2．The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very much. ________________________________________________________ 3．We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. ___________________________________________________________ All we could do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. 4．I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told stories.Some played chess. ______________________________________________________________________________________________ The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess. 6．My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him. ___________________________________________________________ 7．My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It had saved my little sister bravely. __________________________________________________________________________________________ My brother was riding the bike with me sitting on the seat behind. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. 谢谢观看 Thank you for watching $$