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专题04 书面表达15篇 (常州中考真题+名校模拟) 1．（2024·江苏常州·中考真题）假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信，请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。 Dear Li Ping, These days I’m going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it? Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it? Please give me some advice as well. Yours, Peter 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter. I understand how you feel. I used to dislike sports too, but now I enjoy running. Running is very good for health. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic. When I started running, I found it difficult at first. But soon I started to feel stronger and happier. Moreover, running every morning helped me focus better during the day. My advice is to start slowly and set small goals. Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable. Give yourself a chance to try running, I’m sure you’ll love it. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据Peter的信谈谈自己对跑步的看法、跑步经历并给出建议；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，谈谈自己对运动/跑步的看法； 第二步，介绍自己的跑步经历； 第三步，给出关于跑步的一些建议； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ②not only...but also  不仅……而且…… ③think about 思考 [高分句型] ①When I started running, I found it difficult at first.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.（which引导的定语从句） 2．（2023·江苏常州·中考真题）当前，有些学生忽视倾听的作用，针对该情况，请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，阐述倾听的重要性。 要点： 1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由； 2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Listening carefully plays an important role in our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Listening carefully plays an important role in our life. In class, we should listen to teachers carefully. It can not only help us have a better understanding of what the teachers say, but also it can improve learning efficiency. What’s more, we should listen to our classmates carefully. It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship. We should be good listeners at home. We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other. In a word, listening to others carefully is important in our daily life, so we should learn to become good listeners. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍倾听的重要性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍在学校生活中要倾听及理由； 第三步，介绍在日常生活中要倾听及理由。 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also 不但……而且 ②care about 关心 ③in order to 为了 [高分句型] ①It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship. (that引导的宾语从句，以及so that引导的目的状语从句) ②We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other. (动词不定式作目的状语) 3．（2022·江苏常州·中考真题）某中学生英文报Your Voice栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。 It’s not very easy for teenagers to make true friends. Some of them make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic. 1. Is it wise to follow suit in order to make friends? 2. How can teenagers make true friends? Don’t forget to support your ideas with your experience as an example. 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 I want to share my ideas about the topic.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to share my ideas about the topic. In my opinion, making friends by following suit is not wise. Because everyone is an individual, with his own interests and personality. So don’t follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do. We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness. To make true friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you will get a smile in return. You can make friends with those who share the same interest with you or those who are totally different from you. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风是否是明智的；第三段介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 4．（2024·江苏常州·二模）劳动不仅创造美好生活，也有助于培养生活技能和情神品质。阳光英文报社正在开展以“劳动最光荣”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对劳动的看法，平时参加哪些劳动，有什么收获。 要点： 1. What do you think of labor education (劳动教育)? 2. What kind of labor do you often do at school, at home and in the community? 3. What have you learned from doing so? 注意: 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.要点齐全，语句通顺，表达清晰，书写规范； 3.词数不少于100。文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Labor plays a more and more important role in our daily life.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Labor plays a more and more important role in our daily life. Labor is the most glorious. I think it’s good for our health. We can relax ourselves. At the same time, we can learn some important life skills from labor. At home I often do some chores, such as cleaning the floor, washing the dishes, making the bed, cooking meals and so on. At school, I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides these, I still take some activities in the community. By doing so, I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge. The most important thing is that I can improve my life skills for my future. Labor makes me feel very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，谈谈自己对劳动教育的看法； 第二步，具体介绍自己经常做的劳动； 第三步，书写结语，介绍自己在劳动中的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①be good for对……有好处 ②at the same time同时 ③such as例如 [高分句型] ①I think it’s good for our health. (省略that的宾语从句) ②The most important thing is that I can improve my life skills for my future. (that引导的表语从句) 5．（2024·江苏常州·一模）在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现校刊英文专栏以“Learning to learn”为题征稿。请你根据要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Dear students, Learning to learn is more important than learning itself. What good methods do you have when you learn some subjects? Please share your learning methods with us? The following questions may help you. 1. What subject do you want to talk about? 2. What good learning methods do you have about the subject? 3. What are your feelings when you learn the subject? We are looking forward to your sharing. 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.表达清楚，语言通顺，书写规范； 3.词数不少于100。文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Learning to learn Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. My name is Lily. Here are my methods of English learning. First, I usually watch English movies and listen to English songs. I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions. Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words. In this way, the new words can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s more, it’s a good habit to keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and improve my writing skills as well. Hope my methods can be helpful. But please remember, find the ways that are best for you. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍自己想谈的科目； 第二步，具体介绍你学习这门学科的方法； 第三步，表达你的感受以及你从中学到什么。 ①listen to听 ②in this way以这种方式 ③what’s more而且 【高分句型】①I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions.（宾语从句） ②Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words.（动名词短语作主语） 6．（2024·江苏常州·二模）很多家长喜欢给孩子挑选衣服，至少会建议孩子该穿什么。随着年龄的增长，孩子们对此会有不同的看法，有的孩子赞同，有的孩子不赞同，对此你有什么看法？ 请用英语写一篇短文表达你的观点。 内容包括： 1. Should parents choose your clothes? 2. Why do you think so? 注意： 1. 词数 100左右; 2.开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Should parents choose your clothes? Many parents choose their children's clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. Is it right for them to do so? In my opinion, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Many parents choose their children’s clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. ls it right for them to do so? In my opinion, parents should choose children’s clothes. Their advice is helpful. Parents can help us choose the right clothes because they have more experience. It is part of their job just like making sure we can cat a healthy diet. As they are usually paying, it makes sense that parents should offer advice.If parents don't help us choose clothes, we may not wear things wisely, like a pair of shorts in the cold day. Besides, parents can teach us to dress properly to show respect at some special events.Choosing clothes can be a two-way effort. Children say what they prefer but parents have the final decision. It’s not just about what you wear but how you wear it. 例文 Many parents choose their children’s clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. ls it right for them to do so? In my opinion, parents shouldn’t choose children’s clothes. It's your own decision.You should decide because you're the one wearing the clothes. Parents don’t always understand what children like or how to follow the fashion. What’s more, choosing your own clothes is an important step towards becoming independent and self-confident. Choosing clothes can be fun and creative, and allows you to express yourself and develop your own style. For some people, clothing is a way of showing you belong to a certain group. In addition, if children choose their clothes, they are more likely to wear them, It means less wasted money. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；   ②时态：时态为一般现在时；   ③提示：在写作时注意阅读题目要求，把要点和个人观点写进去，并注意衔接，保证条理清晰。 [写作步骤]   第一步，引出话题，介绍很多家长喜欢给孩子挑选衣服，至少会建议孩子该穿什么； 第二步，表达赞同或不赞同的原因；   第三步，书写结语。   [亮点词汇]   ①at least至少 ②What’s more更重要的是 ③be likely to可能 [高分句型] ①Parents can help us choose the right clothes because they have more experience. (原因状语从句)   ②Choosing clothes can be fun and creative. (动名词作主语) 7．（2024·江苏常州·一模）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德，劳动建设美丽校园，劳动营造和谐家庭，劳动创建文明社区。作为一名中学生，要积极参加劳动实践。你校英语报发起了“Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life”主题征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你在不同的场合可以做哪些劳动，在劳动中你收获了什么，并发起倡议，呼吁更多的青少年热爱劳动，热爱生活。 要点如下： 1. What kind of labor can you do at school, at home or in the community? 2. What can you learn from labor? 3. What advice will you give to the teenagers? 注意： 1.词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love. However, some students are rarely given the opportunity to enjoy labor, while others are too busy with their studies to labor. There are also some students who are unwilling to labor because they are lazy. As a middle school student, I often do some labor activities in everyday life. For example, I clean the classroom and playground with my classmates at school. I do some cooking, cook dishes, wash clothes and tidy rooms at home. And in the community, I do volunteer work to help the old or disabled. By doing these, I’ve learnt some basic life skills to take care of myself. Besides, I have not only got the strong feeling of satisfaction but also become more and more independent and responsible. All in all, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all the teenagers to actively engage in labor activities. Let’s take an active part in doing the daily labor. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示要点进行写作，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据介绍一些自己在学校、家中和社区的劳动实践； 第三步，介绍从劳动中的收获； 第四步，书写结语，给青少年一些建议。 [亮点词汇] ①help the old or disabled帮助老人或残疾人 ②all in all总的来说 ③take an active part in积极参加 ④not only...but also...不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①And in the community, I do volunteer work to help the old or disabled. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②All in all, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all the teenagers to actively engage in labor activities. (and引导的并列句) 8．（2024·江苏常州·二模）学会交流沟通是成长过程的一部分，有效的沟通可以帮助我们解决遇到的困难，增进人与人之间的感情。请你根据要点提示，以沟通为话题，用英语写一篇短文，向校英文报投稿。 要点： 1. 学习和生活中需要交流沟通的方面； 2. 自身有效交流沟通的经历以及它给你带来的影响。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Communication is of great importance to our growth. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Communication is of great importance to our growth. It’s a basic skill for us teenagers in study and life. As we know, it’s common that people sometimes disagree with each other and communication may be the best choice to solve the disagreement. Also, when having difficulty dealing with some problems, we can get help and creative ideas by communicating with others. Take me as an example. Last Friday I failed an important exam, which made me very sad and stressed. I was in such a low mood that I couldn’t pay attention to what the teacher taught in class. That made him very angry. Realizing my fault, I communicated with my teacher and explained to him what happened after class. Finally he forgave me and offered me many useful suggestions as well. This experience has a great influence on me. It is communication that helps me get along well with others. It is also a good way to get more knowledge and broaden our mind. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出沟通非常重要的话题及讲述了学习和生活中需要交流沟通的方面； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述上周五一次有效沟通的经历； 第三步，书写结语。总结有效沟通对作者的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①be important to对……很重要 ②As we know正如我们所知 ③communicate with与……沟通 ④get along well with sb.与……相处融洽 ⑤have a great influence on sb.对某人有很大影响 [高分句型] ①As we know, it’s common that people sometimes disagree with each other and communication may be the best choice to solve the disagreement. (主语从句) ②It is communication that helps me get along well with others. (定语从句) ③It is also a good way to get more knowledge and broaden our mind. (it作形式主语） 9．（2024·江苏常州·一模）现在越来越多的学生有久坐的习惯。假定你是李华，请你以“Do not sit for a long time”为题给你校英文报写一篇短文，说明久坐的危害并提出解决这一问题的建议。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称： 2. 词数100左右。 Do not sit for a long time ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Do not sit for a long time Nowadays, more and more students have the habit of sitting for a long time. Not only can this habit make our neck and back ache, but it may make us fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. To prevent these problems from happening, we should form good living habits. First, we can go to school on foot or by bike so that we can exercise. Second, we should keep a correct sitting posture when we are in class. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to stand up and take some exercise during break time at school. All in all, sitting for a long time has a bad effect on us, and we should develop good living habits. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求介绍久坐的危害并给出解决问题的建议，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍久坐的危害； 第二步，给出解决问题的建议； 第三步，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①form good living habits养成良好的生活习惯 ②all in all总而言之 ③have a bad effect on对……有不良影响 [高分句型] ①Not only can this habit make our neck and back ache, but it may make us fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. (倒装句) ②To prevent these problems from happening, we should form good living habits. (动词不定式作目的状语) 10．（2024·江苏常州·一模）常州历史文化底蕴深厚、经济实力雄厚、自然风光秀丽、人文景观丰富。某报社正在征集主题为“你眼中的常州”的文章，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的看法。 You shoud share your ideas about the topic: 1. What was Changzhou like 10 years ago? 2. What is Changzhou like now? 3. What do you think of the changes? 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 要点齐全，语句通顺，表达清晰，书写规范； 3. 词数不少于100。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Changzhou, my hometown, has changed a lot over the past ten years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible version: Changzhou, my hometown, has changed a lot over the past ten years. Ten years ago, Changzhou was a quiet and small city with fewer shops and cars. When going outside, people didn’t have many choices but to take a bus and it took them much time. There were only a few parks and people needed to pay for visiting them. Life was a little boring and hard. Nowadays, Changzhou has become a modern place. More wide roads and undergrounds make it convenient/easy for us to go everywhere. Besides, so many different open parks have been built and we can enjoy different views freely. More importantly, people here have become richer, and we are devoting ourselves to making the city more beautiful and the life better. What great changes! As we know, changes mean not only power but also chances. I hope more changes will take place in Changzhou. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描写十年前的样子用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍常州十年前的样子； 第二步，介绍常州现在的样子； 第三步，谈谈你对变化的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①devote oneself to doing致力于做某事 ②not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ③take place发生 [高分句型] ①What great changes! (感叹句) ②I hope more changes will take place in Changzhou. (宾语从句) 11．（2024·江苏常州·一模）中考临近，很多同学为了能取得好成绩，经常熬夜复习，这对身体健康产生了较大的影响。请你就“Staying up late”这一话题发表你的看法，内容需包括： （1）除了影响健康，熬夜会对学习带来怎样的影响？ （2）你认为应如何取得好成绩？ 注意：1．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2．词数100左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot. Besides, it accounts for the fact that we cannot concentrate in class, thus decreasing efficiency. Furthermore, people who suffer from lack of sleep get angry and impatient easily. So serious is the problem that we have to find effective solutions to it. In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late. Finally, I wish the students get good grades in the high school entrance examination. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：针对“熬夜”这一话题发表看法，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。要涵盖材料中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单描述情况； 第二步，介绍熬夜会对学习带来的影响以及关于如何取得好成绩； 第三步，表达自己的祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①lack of sleep缺少睡眠 ②as soon as possible尽快 [高分句型] In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late.(it句型以及非限制性定语从句) 12．（2024·江苏常州·一模）假定你是李华，最近你的朋友Tony在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1、安慰你的朋友； 2、提出改善关系的建议； 注意： 1、词数100左右； 2、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. I wish you all the best. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tony, I’m sorry to hear about your communication problems with your parents, but I know how you feel since I’ve had similar problems before. Here are my suggestions and I hope things can get better soon. First, let’s put ourselves into their shoes. Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes, so understanding each other matters a lot in improving a family relationship. Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart instead of a method to solve problems. Therefore, what you need to do is telling them about this honestly and trust them. I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. I wish you all the best. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作内容已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的要点，务必写全，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，安慰朋友以及表明写信目的； 第二步，提出改善关系的建议； 第三步，总结全文，祝福对方。 [亮点词汇] ①put oneself into one’s shoes设身处地 ②look for寻找 ③instead of代替 [高分句型] ①Therefore, what you need to do is telling them about this honestly and trust them. （what引导主语从句） ②Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart instead of a method to solve problems.（when引导时间状语从句） 13．（2024·江苏常州·一模）假如你叫李华，作为九年级毕业生学业很忙，你发现有时在某门学科上花的功夫与考试成绩不成正比，所以你想给你的某学科老师写一封信表达你的想法。 要点： （1）你对该学科学习的认识（重要性以及作用……）； （2）你目前在该学科上的现状以及主要问题； （3）你希望老师在哪些方面给予你帮助。 注意： （1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名字； （2）词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, As a Grade 9 student, I am so busy with my schoolwork that I would like to share my worries with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Sir/Madam, As a Grade 9 student, I am so busy with my schoolwork that I would like to share my worries with you. The importance of English cannot be overstated. As a global language, it bridges cultural gaps and facilitates communication. In today’s interconnected world, English is the key to accessing international opportunities, expanding knowledge, and building professional careers. So we should learn it well. But currently my English grades are not very good, especially in terms of vocabulary. I have memorized them many times, but I just can’t remember them. Also, my spoken English is not very good. I hope you can give me some suggestions from these two aspects to help me learn English well. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；写作过程注意书信格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题说明写作意图； 第二步，介绍自己对英语学科的认识； 第三步，详细阐述自己学习中遇到的问题以及需要得到的帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①the importance of……的重要性 ②in terms of在……方面 ③look forward to盼望 [高分句型] ①I have memorized them many times, but I just can’t remember them. （转折并列句） ②I hope you can give me some suggestions from these two aspects to help me learn English well. （宾语从句） 14．（2024·江苏常州·一模）在春节热播电影《热辣滚烫》中，贾玲通过坚持不懈的努力，实现了自己的人生价值，过上了“热辣滚烫”的人生。作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气。全力坚持做好每一件小事，成就更好的自己。请以“We Only Live Once”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 要点： 1. 最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事及理由； 2. 它给你的学习和生活带来了怎样的影响。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右。文章的开头已为你写好、不计入总词数。 We Only Live Once Dear classmates, It’s my honor to make a speech here. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】例文 Dear classmates, It’s my honor to make a speech here. Have you ever tried your best to do one thing? Have you ever lived your life to the fullest? Today I want to share the thing I keep doing these years it you. When I was in Grade 7, I couldn’t speak English well because of my poor pronunciation, so I was always laughed at by others. I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time. These years I get up at 5 o’clock every morning so that I can spend at least half an hour practising speaking English. To correct my pronunciation, I also read English aloud after the tape every day. Now my English has greatly improved. This leaning experience has made a great difference to my life. I am not as shy as I used to be. Besides, when facing difficulties in study. I will never give up. I'm ready to take on any challenge in the future. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明演讲主题，说明最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事； 第二步，详细说明为这件事做出的努力； 第三步，点出这件事对自己产生的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①make up my mind to do sth.下定决心去做某事 ②make a great difference to对……产生巨大影响 ③as…as和……一样 [高分句型] ①I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time.（no matter how引导让步状语从句） ②These years I get up at 5 o’clock every morning so that I can spend at least half an hour practising speaking English.（so that引导目的状语从句） 15．（2023·江苏常州·一模）你校“英语之声”栏目正在举办“A new try”征文活动。请根据征文要求，谈谈你的一次尝试。 Shakespeare once said, “Was hopeless, bold attempt, often can succeed.”（本来无望的事，大胆尝试，往往能成功。） Do you have many trials（尝试） in your life or study? Did you try to learn a new skill or did you try a new kind of sport? Write a passage about one of your trials. （1） What did you try to do? （2） How did you do it? （3） What do you think of the experience? Every time we try something new, we will learn something and improve ourselves. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Every time we try something new, we will learn something and improve ourselves. Last Sunday, I took part in a 1500-meter race which was a new try for me. It was also the first time for me to compete with others in front of so many people. I felt very nervous at first and fell behind others at the beginning. Though it seemed impossible to catch up, I tried my best to run fast and never thought of giving up. To my surprise, I won first prize. I felt so happy. I successfully challenged myself. It was such an amazing experience which has made me more confident. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据写作要求谈谈你的第一次尝试，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己的第一次尝试是什么，以及怎么做的； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事 ③give up放弃 ④to one’s surprise令某人吃惊的是 [高分句型] ①Though it seemed impossible to catch up, I tried my best to run fast and never thought of giving up.（though引导让步状语从句） ②It was such an amazing experience which has made me more confident.（which引导定语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$