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Unit 1 Period 4 主题写作（满分范文15篇） 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 一、书面表达 1．Your pen pal is coming to China on an exchange program. He/She is asking you about Chinese customs and what he/she is supposed to do or not. Please write a letter to your pen pal to give him/her advice and suggestions on how to behave properly in China. 1. What are you supposed to do when you are eating at the table? 2. What are you supposed to do in our house? 3. What are you supposed to do when you go out with people? 要求： 1.要包含以上问题提示，也可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 2.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 3.不少于60词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是Andrew，你想成为王林的笔友。下面表格中是有关你的信息，请根据提示给他写一封信。 Name Andrew Appearance Tall, medium build Hobbies Music, basketball, watch sports news Wants to be A reporter,… What he did last weekend In the morning: visit grandparents In the afternoon: do some reading 具体要求： 1.文章内容应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整； 3.词数为60词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Wang Lin, My name is Andrew. I want to be your pen pal. ___________________________________________________ 3．书面表达 “我和我的祖国一刻也不能分割……”还记得这首优美的歌曲么？假如你是李华, 作为一名中国人, 你对自己的祖国了解多少呢？请依据以下要点给你的美国笔友Tom写一封信, 向他介绍你的祖国。（词数：80词左右） ·中国是亚洲最大的国家, 和美国差不多大。 ·中国有世界上最多的人口, 我们中国人勤劳且善良。 ·长江是世界上最长河流之一, 黄河是中国第二长河流。 ·中国有超过5000年的历史, 比美国历史长多了。 ·…… 推荐词汇：Asia 亚洲, population 人口, the Yangtze River长江。 要求：1. 恰当运用比较级和最高级, 可适当拓展。 2. 不得在作文中出现学校及学生的真实名称。 3. 包含所有信息点, 语句连贯, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 4．为了学习英语，我在网上结识了一位来自澳大利亚(Australia)名叫Gina的笔友(pen pal)。下面是她的一些情况，请据此写一篇短文向大家介绍一下。 外貌 兴趣爱好 学校生活 交流体会 圆脸；大眼睛；高个子；长直发 擅长弹钢琴 学校每天下午开展课外活动；Gina去俱乐部练习汉语 常用英语给我写信；昨天她告诉我上周末她的海滩旅行很精彩；感谢她帮助我，我的英语取得了很大的进步 要求：不少于80词。 参考词汇：be good at (擅长)；practice (练习)；after­class activities (课外活动)；hear from (收到……的来信)；the trip to the beach (海滩之旅)；wonderful (精彩的)；make great progress in (在……方面取得很大的进步) 5．假定你是李平，在微博上发了交笔友的帖子，最近收到美国中学生Linda的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。 注意: 1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 回复须包括所有要点。可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Li Ping, I'm really happy to be your pen pal. I am interested in doing sports so I am really healthy. Do you love sports? How often do you exercise? I often play tennis with my best friend, Helen. She is more outgoing than me, but we have something in common. Both of us like traveling. We went to a beautiful small town last weekend and had a great time. Are you and your friend the same or different? Did you do anything interesting together? What did you do? Please write to me soon. Linda Dear Linda, I'm glad to receive your letter. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如Peter是你的笔友，请根据下列表格内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍一下介绍Peter。 name Peter age 14 country The US life style • 每天吃蔬菜水果，喝牛奶，从来不吃垃圾食品； • 喜欢烹饪，对中国美食感兴趣，最喜欢的电视节目是《舌尖上的中国》（A Bite of China）； • 喜欢运动，每周至少锻炼3次，每天骑车上学。 New Year’s Resolution • 更加努力地学习，取得更好的成绩； • 学习汉语，了解中国文化。 Dream • 成为厨师，到中国工作。 要求： 1. 书写认真，字迹工整，词数在60个左右； 2. 尽量使用表格信息，也可以适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及其他相关真实信息，否则不予评分。 Hi, everyone! I’m happy to tell you something about my pen pal Peter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是李华，请根据下列提示写一封信给Sarah，介绍自己，并表达愿意成为她的笔友的心愿。 内容提示： 1. How do you know her? 2. How old are you? 3. How is your school life? 4. What’s your hobby? 主题词：know; from; pen friend;  pen pal; want; years old; school; class;  subject; favorite; like 要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Sarah, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Your new friend, Li Hua 8．假如你是Li Ming，你第一次收到美国笔友Paul的来信，信中他提了一些问题想要了解你。请你仔细阅读下面的邮件，针对邮件中的问题进行回复。 要求：语言通畅得体，词数80左右。 Dear Li Ming, It’s so exciting to be your pen pal. We haven’t seen each other, would you like to share your life with me? What do you usually do in your free time? How often do you do them? Which activity do you like best and why? As I know, you had a 7-day holiday in October. What did you do and how was your holiday? Looking forward to your reply! Paul Dear Paul, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 9．Write a letter to your American pen-pal Tony in at least 60 words according to the given situation根据所给情景给你的美国笔友Tony写一封不少于60词的回答。要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。 假设你是小明（Xiao Ming），是美国中学生Tony的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给Tony写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍上海良好的公共交通服务。 Dear Xiao Ming. I'm going to Shanghai next month because I have heard a lot about your city and would like to see it with my own eyes. I'm really interested in your convenient public transport. When I am in Shanghai, how can I travel around? Could you give me more information about it? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Yours Tony ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是李平，请你对你笔友的邮件进行回复，词数80左右。 To: Li Ping From: Jim Hi Li Ping, How are you? I’m very glad to be your pen pal. I’m really interested in Chinese tea but I know little about it. Could you please tell me when and how it is produced? Why do you like it so much? I’ll appreciate it if you tell me more besides these. Thanks a lot. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Jim. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．Suppose you are Li Ming. It is time to graduate. You will leave your lovely school. Your pen pal Lisa wants to know what you will do for your school. Please write her a letter to tell her according to the following chart. (假设你是Li Ming，你的笔友Lisa想了解在毕业之际，你将为母校做些什么有意义的事。根据下表所列内容，用英语给Lisa写一封电子邮件。) Do something for my school write to younger schoolmates (how to use time, …) give suggestions (organize more activities,…) make the school more beautiful (plant trees, …) 注意：1. 文中必须包括每个要点括号内的提示，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息； 3. 词数：90词左右； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello Lisa, How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ming 12．假设你是Wei Fen, 最近刚结交了一位美国笔友Mario。请根据下列表格的提示, 写一篇80词以上的短文, 向他介绍你的变化、校园生活及一些中国传统文化方面的信息。 要求：1.内容必须包含以上信息, 并可根据需要适当添加。 2.书写规范, 条理清楚, 行文连贯, 段落分明。 3.词数80词以上, 且不能透漏具体学校和真实姓名, 否则不予评分。 Dear Mario, How's it going? I'm very glad to be your pen pal. Now let me tell you something about myself. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your information about yourself. Yours Wei Fen 13．Suppose you are Li Hua, Peter is your American pen pal. Please write an e-mail with about 100 words to tell him about the following information: 1. Your favorite music, instrument and the reasons. 2. Chinese common customs. 参考词汇： shake hands, knock at the door, points at Dear Peter, How are things going? I’d like to tell you something about me and Chinese customs. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 14．和以英语为母语的同龄人交朋友，并用英文交流是学习英语的好办法。为了提高英语水平，你常与英国笔友Kate互发电子邮件。请你按下面表格内容写一篇短文，介绍你的笔友Kate。 写作要点 具体内容 1.Appearance（外貌） face, eyes. height, hair... 2.Personality trait（个性特点） 从阅读理解D篇选择其中一点（不得照搬原文） 3.Hobby playing the piano 4.Things in the last e-mail school life in the UK; the trip last weekend 5.... … 要求： 1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数80—120，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have a pen pal called Kate. She comes from the UK. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．Suppose you are Wei hua. Your pen pal Lisa in the US wants to know about your favorite Chinese festival. Please write a letter to tell her about it. 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右。 Dear Lisa, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 11 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 Period 4 主题写作（满分范文15篇） 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 一、书面表达 1．Your pen pal is coming to China on an exchange program. He/She is asking you about Chinese customs and what he/she is supposed to do or not. Please write a letter to your pen pal to give him/her advice and suggestions on how to behave properly in China. 1. What are you supposed to do when you are eating at the table? 2. What are you supposed to do in our house? 3. What are you supposed to do when you go out with people? 要求： 1.要包含以上问题提示，也可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 2.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 3.不少于60词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Dear Mike, I’m happy that you’ll come to China on an exchange program. Now let me tell you some customs in China. For table manners, you will probably use chopsticks to eat dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. When you’re at table, you are not supposed to start eating first if there are old people at the table. It’s impolite to do so. After dinner, you’d better say that the food is delicious and thank them for their treat. If you are invited to visit someone’s home, you are supposed to arrive on time or earlier. It is impolite to be late. It is also good to bring a small gift, such as some flowers or fruit. In addition, remember to take off your shoes before entering the house. When you go out to eat with others, you should take the initiative to pay the bill. I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，很高兴对方来中国，将给对方介绍一些礼仪习俗； 第二步，从就餐、做客和外出等三方面进行具体介绍； 第三步，希望自己的建议有用。 [亮点词汇] ①be supposed to do 应该做某事 ②in addition 此外 ③take off 脱掉 [高分句型] ①When you’re at table, you are not supposed to start eating first if there are old people at the table.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②If you are invited to visit someone’s home, you are supposed to arrive on time or earlier.（一般现在时的被动语态） 2．假如你是Andrew，你想成为王林的笔友。下面表格中是有关你的信息，请根据提示给他写一封信。 Name Andrew Appearance Tall, medium build Hobbies Music, basketball, watch sports news Wants to be A reporter,… What he did last weekend In the morning: visit grandparents In the afternoon: do some reading 具体要求： 1.文章内容应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整； 3.词数为60词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Wang Lin, My name is Andrew. I want to be your pen pal. ___________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Wang Lin, My name is Andrew. I want to be your pen pal. Let me tell you something about myself and my last weekend. I’m of medium build. I wear a pair of black glasses. I like listening to music. I like playing basketball and watching sports news. I want to be a reporter in the future, and what about you? It was sunny but a little windy last weekend. In the morning, I visited grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon, I did some reading and cleaning. I had a busy weekend, but I was very excited. Let's write to each other and be good pen friends. I hope to hear from you again soon. Yours sincerely, Andrew 【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据相关信息介绍自己。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；再根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅。 2.例文点评：本文时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：be of medium build，a pair of black glasses，like listening to music，do some reading，hear from you 句型：but连接表转折的并列句I had a busy weekend，but I was very excited. 3．书面表达 “我和我的祖国一刻也不能分割……”还记得这首优美的歌曲么？假如你是李华, 作为一名中国人, 你对自己的祖国了解多少呢？请依据以下要点给你的美国笔友Tom写一封信, 向他介绍你的祖国。（词数：80词左右） ·中国是亚洲最大的国家, 和美国差不多大。 ·中国有世界上最多的人口, 我们中国人勤劳且善良。 ·长江是世界上最长河流之一, 黄河是中国第二长河流。 ·中国有超过5000年的历史, 比美国历史长多了。 ·…… 推荐词汇：Asia 亚洲, population 人口, the Yangtze River长江。 要求：1. 恰当运用比较级和最高级, 可适当拓展。 2. 不得在作文中出现学校及学生的真实名称。 3. 包含所有信息点, 语句连贯, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China. China is the biggest country in Asia. It’s almost as big as the USA. China has the biggest population in the world. The people here are friendly and hard-working. The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world. China is over 5000 years old. It has a much longer history than the US. The Qomolangma is the highest mountain in the world. I love China very much. Welcome to China and play with me. Best wishes. Li Hua 【详解】题干解读：本题是提纲类写作，根据材料写一封电子邮件，向汤姆介绍自己的祖国。主要向汤姆介绍中国的土地面积、人口数量、主要河流以及悠久的历史等。 例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一段注明意图，第二段介绍中国，第三段表达情感，层次分明，条理清楚；文章以第一人称进行叙述，且以一般现在时为主要时态；文章应用了比较级和最高级且包含了题目所有的信息点，紧扣题目要求。 高分亮点： 短语：be glad to；would like to；as…as。 句型：主要用了形容词的比较级和最高级。例如：China is the biggest country in Asia；The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world；It has a much longer history than the US等。 4．为了学习英语，我在网上结识了一位来自澳大利亚(Australia)名叫Gina的笔友(pen pal)。下面是她的一些情况，请据此写一篇短文向大家介绍一下。 外貌 兴趣爱好 学校生活 交流体会 圆脸；大眼睛；高个子；长直发 擅长弹钢琴 学校每天下午开展课外活动；Gina去俱乐部练习汉语 常用英语给我写信；昨天她告诉我上周末她的海滩旅行很精彩；感谢她帮助我，我的英语取得了很大的进步 要求：不少于80词。 参考词汇：be good at (擅长)；practice (练习)；after­class activities (课外活动)；hear from (收到……的来信)；the trip to the beach (海滩之旅)；wonderful (精彩的)；make great progress in (在……方面取得很大的进步) 【答案】One possible version： I have a pen pal. She's from Australia. Her name's Gina. She is thirteen. She has a round face and two big eyes. She is tall and she has long straight hair. She is good at playing the piano. Every afternoon, there are some after­class activities in her school. Gina goes to practice Chinese in the club. She always writes to me in English. Yesterday I heard from her. She told me her trip to the beach last weekend. The trip was wonderful. Thank her for helping me make great progress in English. This is my pen friend.  Do you like her? 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。为了学习英语，你在网上结识了一位来自澳大利亚(Australia)名叫Gina的笔友(pen pal)。要求根据提示内容，介绍一下她的一些情况。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.写作指导：本文采用第一、第三人称来展开写作，时态用一般现在时。文章要紧扣题目的要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 5．假定你是李平，在微博上发了交笔友的帖子，最近收到美国中学生Linda的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。 注意: 1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 回复须包括所有要点。可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Li Ping, I'm really happy to be your pen pal. I am interested in doing sports so I am really healthy. Do you love sports? How often do you exercise? I often play tennis with my best friend, Helen. She is more outgoing than me, but we have something in common. Both of us like traveling. We went to a beautiful small town last weekend and had a great time. Are you and your friend the same or different? Did you do anything interesting together? What did you do? Please write to me soon. Linda Dear Linda, I'm glad to receive your letter. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Linda, I'm glad to receive your letter. I love sports because they are good for my health. I think exercise such as basketball is fun. I run every morning and I play basketball three times a week. I have a good friend called Wang Lei. He is a thin and tall boy. In learning, he studies better than me, but I am better at sports than him. We all love watching movies. Last week, I went to the cinema with him. I bought movie tickets, he bought snacks. The trip to the movie really made us feel relaxed. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，要求根据邮件内容，以李平的名义给琳达回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：是否喜欢运动；锻炼的频率；与好友的相同或不同之处；与好友一起做得有趣的事情等。 2.写作指导：文章在描写运动及与好友的相同或不同之处时应用一般现在时态，叙述和好友做的有趣的事情时用一般过去时态；文章以第一人称和第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意涵盖邮件中的全部要点，保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。 6．假如Peter是你的笔友，请根据下列表格内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍一下介绍Peter。 name Peter age 14 country The US life style • 每天吃蔬菜水果，喝牛奶，从来不吃垃圾食品； • 喜欢烹饪，对中国美食感兴趣，最喜欢的电视节目是《舌尖上的中国》（A Bite of China）； • 喜欢运动，每周至少锻炼3次，每天骑车上学。 New Year’s Resolution • 更加努力地学习，取得更好的成绩； • 学习汉语，了解中国文化。 Dream • 成为厨师，到中国工作。 要求： 1. 书写认真，字迹工整，词数在60个左右； 2. 尽量使用表格信息，也可以适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及其他相关真实信息，否则不予评分。 Hi, everyone! I’m happy to tell you something about my pen pal Peter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hi, everyone! I’m happy to tell you something about my pen pal Peter. Peter is from the US. He is 14 years old. He likes eating vegetables and fruit every day. He never eats junk food. He loves cooking, and he is interested in Chinese food. He enjoys watching A Bite of China on TV. This program is his favorite. He is energetic and loves doing sports. He exercises three times a week. He rides a bike to school every morning. His New Year’s resolution is to study harder and get better grades. What’s more, he wants to learn Chinese, and know much about Chinese culture. He wants to be a cook and work in China in the future. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍皮特的基本信息，他的生活方式，新年计划和梦想。 2. 写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，介绍关于皮特的个人生活方式，新年计划和梦想，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 7．假如你是李华，请根据下列提示写一封信给Sarah，介绍自己，并表达愿意成为她的笔友的心愿。 内容提示： 1. How do you know her? 2. How old are you? 3. How is your school life? 4. What’s your hobby? 主题词：know; from; pen friend;  pen pal; want; years old; school; class;  subject; favorite; like 要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Sarah, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Your new friend, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Sarah, My name is Li Hua and I found your name and e-mail address in a newspaper. I am from China and I am very interested in becoming your pen pal. I am 14 years old and in Grade 8. I like my classmates and teachers. We have a lot of fun together. My favorite subject is science. I have it on Monday and Wednesday. I like playing ping-pong a lot. I play it with my friends after school every day. I want to become a ping-pong player when I grow up. I am looking forward to hearing from you and becoming your friend. Your new friend, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容提示写信给Sarah，介绍自己并表示想要成为她的笔友。要包含所有提示内容（如何知道她、自己的年龄、学校生活、爱好等），可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。题干已给出信件开头和收尾，正文可分为四段式：第一段介绍自己如何知道Sarah并表达想成为对方的笔友的意愿；第二段介绍自己的年龄、学校生活；第三段介绍自己的爱好；最后一段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 8．假如你是Li Ming，你第一次收到美国笔友Paul的来信，信中他提了一些问题想要了解你。请你仔细阅读下面的邮件，针对邮件中的问题进行回复。 要求：语言通畅得体，词数80左右。 Dear Li Ming, It’s so exciting to be your pen pal. We haven’t seen each other, would you like to share your life with me? What do you usually do in your free time? How often do you do them? Which activity do you like best and why? As I know, you had a 7-day holiday in October. What did you do and how was your holiday? Looking forward to your reply! Paul Dear Paul, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Paul,     I am so glad to hear from you. I will share my life with you.     In my free time, I usually play computer games with my friends. I think it is so relaxing. I often play them once a week. Playing too many games may be bad for my study. Besides, I like climbing the mountains with my classmates best, because it can build my body. In October, I went to the Mount Hua with my parents, because I had a 7-day holiday in October. This trip was so exciting. When we reached the top of the mountain, I felt so happy. You couldn’t imagine how comfortable I was. Fresh air and beautiful scenery made me fascinated.     I hope you can come here and I will show you around. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括和对方分享自己的生活，空闲时间做的事情，最喜欢哪个活动以及原因，同时叙述十一假期7天的情况。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己收到对方来信的心情和想要分享自己生活的意愿； 第二步，具体阐述自己的日常生活情况，以及十一假期7天的情况； 第三步，最后是叙述自己希望对方到来。 [亮点词汇] ① be bad for对……有害 ② once a week一周一次 ③ make sb adj使某人…… [高分句型] ① Playing too many games may be bad for my study.（动名词作主语） ② When we reached the top of the mountain, I felt so happy.（when引导的时间状语从句） 9．Write a letter to your American pen-pal Tony in at least 60 words according to the given situation根据所给情景给你的美国笔友Tony写一封不少于60词的回答。要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。 假设你是小明（Xiao Ming），是美国中学生Tony的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给Tony写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍上海良好的公共交通服务。 Dear Xiao Ming. I'm going to Shanghai next month because I have heard a lot about your city and would like to see it with my own eyes. I'm really interested in your convenient public transport. When I am in Shanghai, how can I travel around? Could you give me more information about it? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Yours Tony ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I have learned from you that you will come to my city next month．Welcome to Shanghai．（欢迎） In Shanghai，there're mainly four means of transportation，the  underground，taxis，buses  and  electric  bikes．（四种主要交通方式）The underground is much faster than taxis and buses．【高分句型一】Buses are the cheapest but the slowest of the four．（最便宜的）Taxis run more quickly than buses，but they are more expensive．（最贵的）Now，more and more people choose to use electric bikes．【高分句型二】The electric bike is both clean and mobile．It also saves money．It is the most convenient means of transportation．（选择电动车的原因） Looking forward to your arrival． Yours， Xiao Ming 【详解】１.题干解读：该题目属于书信类，写作时要按邮件格式写。时态应以一般现在时为主。 ２.例文点评：例文开头首先表示对于对方即将到来的欢迎之情；然后开始正文介绍上海的交通，本文主要介绍了四种交通方式，还点明了每种交通方式的利弊；最后再次表示祝愿。 ３.高分亮点： 短语：learned from从……学习；Looking forward to期待；the most convenient最方便的；more expensive更贵；saves money省钱。 句型：句型一：The underground is much faster than taxis and buses．地铁比出租车和公共汽车快很多。be faster than比…更快；句型二：Now，more and more people choose to use electric bikes．现在，越来越多的人选择使用电动自行车。more and more 越来越多；choose to do 选择去做某事。 10．假设你是李平，请你对你笔友的邮件进行回复，词数80左右。 To: Li Ping From: Jim Hi Li Ping, How are you? I’m very glad to be your pen pal. I’m really interested in Chinese tea but I know little about it. Could you please tell me when and how it is produced? Why do you like it so much? I’ll appreciate it if you tell me more besides these. Thanks a lot. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Jim. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 To: Jim From: Li Ping Hi Jim, I’m glad to tell you something about Chinese tea. It has several thousand years of history and can be traced back to the ancient times. Then it was flourished in the Tang dynasty and the Song dynasty. Chinese people often make tea by boiling them again and again, because the tea will taste better in this way. Tea not only has a good flavor but also benefits to our body, and that’s why it is loved by many people both at home and abroad. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你以李平的身份给笔友回复邮件。首先要注意邮件格式；其次要注意先阅读笔友的邮件，明确回复的要点与内容。 例文点评：本文主要采用第三人称展开介绍，时态以一般现在时为主；文章主要介绍了茶的悠久历史、起源时间、人们怎么沏茶以及人们为什么喜欢喝茶。文章层次分明，逻辑清晰，语言精炼。 高分亮点： 短语：be glad to do；be traced back to；make tea；again and again；in this way；not only…but also…；benefit to。 句型：because引导的原因状语从句；why引导的表语从句。 11．Suppose you are Li Ming. It is time to graduate. You will leave your lovely school. Your pen pal Lisa wants to know what you will do for your school. Please write her a letter to tell her according to the following chart. (假设你是Li Ming，你的笔友Lisa想了解在毕业之际，你将为母校做些什么有意义的事。根据下表所列内容，用英语给Lisa写一封电子邮件。) Do something for my school write to younger schoolmates (how to use time, …) give suggestions (organize more activities,…) make the school more beautiful (plant trees, …) 注意：1. 文中必须包括每个要点括号内的提示，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息； 3. 词数：90词左右； 4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello Lisa, How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ming 【答案】范文： Hello Lisa,    How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. Here are my plans that l would like to share with you. First of all, I will write to younger schoolmates to tell them how to use time. I’ll also give some suggestions on organizing more activities. Besides, to make the school more beautiful, we will ask our schoolmates to plan more trees and not to litter at school. I will give away my favorite books to the school library so that our younger schoolmates can read more good books. And I will call on more schoolmates to do so.    It’s really hard for me to say goodbye. I wish my school to have a better future.                                                                                       Yours,                                                                                     Li Ming 【详解】1题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式来写。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据英语提示的内容，叙述自己在毕业之际为母校做些有意义的事情。 2.本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在叙述内容时，力求语言正确，语句通顺，保证行文连贯，保证条理清晰。 12．假设你是Wei Fen, 最近刚结交了一位美国笔友Mario。请根据下列表格的提示, 写一篇80词以上的短文, 向他介绍你的变化、校园生活及一些中国传统文化方面的信息。 要求：1.内容必须包含以上信息, 并可根据需要适当添加。 2.书写规范, 条理清楚, 行文连贯, 段落分明。 3.词数80词以上, 且不能透漏具体学校和真实姓名, 否则不予评分。 Dear Mario, How's it going? I'm very glad to be your pen pal. Now let me tell you something about myself. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your information about yourself. Yours Wei Fen 【答案】例文： Dear Mario, How's it going? I’m very glad to be your pen pal. Now let me tell you something about myself. I am a 16-year-old girl from the countryside. I am outgoing and active at school. I like making friends with others. But two years ago, that was different. I used to be shy and never brave enough to ask and answer questions. I had no friends at school and felt lonely and unhappy. With the teacher's help, I have changed a lot and I study harder than before. Now I study English by keeping diaries and taking notes. I find it useful to learn English in this way. Our school has some strict rules. We are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school, but we are allowed to make a telephone to our parents in the teacher's offices. We have to wear school uniforms at school, although we don't like them. China is a great country with rich culture. There are many traditional festivals and art forms. Of all the Chinese traditional festivals, I like Spring Festival best. At the Spring Festival, people get together and have a happy new year, children can get money from their relatives and wear new clothes. As for Chinese traditional art forms, my favorite form is paper cutting. Because people can put them on our windows, doors, walls and make our houses more beautiful. What's more, they are the symbols of wishes for good luck and a happy new year at the Spring Festival. I am looking forward to your information about yourself. Yours, Wei Fen 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一封书信，开头已给出。要求根据表格信息提示，向Mario介绍Wei Fen的变化、校园生活及一些中国传统文化方面的信息，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来介绍Wei Fen的变化和校园生活，用第三人称介绍中国传统文化方面的信息；描述Wei Fen的变化时，时态要随着时间的变化而变化，描述传统文化时，时态采用一般现在时为主；描述变化时，过去和现在的对比应描写细致；信件需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 13．Suppose you are Li Hua, Peter is your American pen pal. Please write an e-mail with about 100 words to tell him about the following information: 1. Your favorite music, instrument and the reasons. 2. Chinese common customs. 参考词汇： shake hands, knock at the door, points at Dear Peter, How are things going? I’d like to tell you something about me and Chinese customs. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How are things going? I’d like to tell you something about me and Chinese customs. My favorite music is folk music. Chinese folk music is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history. There are many different kinds of instruments, such as dizi. When we talk about folk songs, we have to mention The Jasmine Flower. It is a world-famous song, which is very beautiful. If you come to China, you can learn more about Chinese customs. When we meet for the first time, we always shake hands. Before you enter the room, you should knock at the door. What’s more, when you talk with others, don’t point at them with your fingers. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示问题介绍自己喜欢的音乐、乐器以及中国的风俗习惯等，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，表示要介绍自己和中国风俗习惯； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢的音乐、乐器以及原因； 第三步，介绍中国的一些风俗习惯； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②what’s more而且 ③shake hands握手 [高分句型] ①When we talk about folk songs, we have to mention The Jasmine Flower. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If you come to China, you can learn more about Chinese customs.(if引导的条件状语从句) 14．和以英语为母语的同龄人交朋友，并用英文交流是学习英语的好办法。为了提高英语水平，你常与英国笔友Kate互发电子邮件。请你按下面表格内容写一篇短文，介绍你的笔友Kate。 写作要点 具体内容 1.Appearance（外貌） face, eyes. height, hair... 2.Personality trait（个性特点） 从阅读理解D篇选择其中一点（不得照搬原文） 3.Hobby playing the piano 4.Things in the last e-mail school life in the UK; the trip last weekend 5.... … 要求： 1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数80—120，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have a pen pal called Kate. She comes from the UK. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One Possible Version: I have a pen pal called Kate. She comes from the UK. We are the same age. She has a round face and two big eyes. She is of medium height and has short curly hair. She likes playing the piano and she is good at it. Kate is always helpful. Whenever I have problems in English, she would help me out. She often tells me about her school life. Yesterday I heard from her. She told me about her school trip to a farm last weekend. She said she rode a horse and fed some chickens. How wonderful! With her help, my English is getting better and better. I am thankful to her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中Kate的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。重点介绍自己的笔友Kate； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌、个性特点、爱好、上封邮件内容等”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达对Kate的感谢之情。 [亮点词汇] ①come from来自 ②be good at擅长 ③hear from收到某人来信 ④better and better越来越好 [高分句型] ①Whenever I have problems in English, she would help me out.（whenever引导的时间状语从句） ②She said she rode a horse and fed some chickens.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） 15．Suppose you are Wei hua. Your pen pal Lisa in the US wants to know about your favorite Chinese festival. Please write a letter to tell her about it. 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右。 Dear Lisa, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Lisa,     You said you wanted to know about my favorite Chinese festival in the last letter. Now let me introduce something about it. My favorite festival is the Spring festival. The Spring festival is the most important festival in China. It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar. It’s China’s New year’s Day. So usually a month before the festival, people begin to buy food, clothes and decorations for houses. On New Year Eve, each family will gather together eating, talking and watching TV for almost the whole night. The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from their parents or grand-parents. When they meet their neighbors or friends, they’ll say: “Happy New Year”! The New Year celebrating activities will last about half a month. What about your favorite festival? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的节日； 第二步，介绍这个节日的情况； 第三步，询问对方最喜欢的节日。 [亮点词汇] ①according to根据 ②gather together聚在一起 ③the whole night整晚 [高分句型] ①Now let me introduce something about it.（祈使句） ②The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from their parents or grand-parents.（原因状语从句） 14 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 13 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$