专题04 书面表达15篇(重庆中考真题+名校模拟)-备战2025年中考英语常考语法点+题型练习(中考真题+名校模拟真题)(重庆专用)

专题04 书面表达15篇 (重庆中考真题+名校模拟) 1．（2024·重庆·中考真题）雨天总让人烦恼，下雨了，愁眉苦脸的主人公又急又慌地赶往学校，哪知随后却有惊喜发生…… 发生了什么呢？请根据上述文字，并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。 要求： 1.80—120词； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： sad, upset, umbrella, rush to, hurry... close to nature: raindrop, ant, plant, soil, fresh air... outdoor activities: raincoat, puddle (水洼), jump like frogs... indoor activities: class talent show, reading and storytelling... art: painting, drawing pictures, movie day... others: hug, praise, present, party... natural thing, enjoy, cheer, joy, better manage, bright side, don’t trouble yourself... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·重庆·中考真题）以英语为母语的汉语初学者往往对含义丰富的汉语表达产生困惑，请你讲述一件这样的趣事；举例谈谈语言发展中的“词汇互借”；赞赏语言在促进交流（增进了解）中的积极作用或表达你的感悟。 要求： 1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： 加油 (jiayou): add oil (come on) 纸老虎 (zhilaohu): paper tiger (someone or something that is not as powerful as he/it looks) ... coffee→咖啡；sofa→沙发…… 豆腐→tofu；功夫→kung fu…… not a barrier but a carrier; pay attention to; the cultural meanings; understand better ... one day; a basketball game; Jiayou! Jiayou! look around; in surprise; no need to add oil... long history; communications between; take words from; be used by … ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2023·重庆·中考真题）团队协作是21世纪人才必备能力之一。信任、配合、包容、沟通、责任、倾听是团队协作中重要的品质。你校校刊英语专栏以“团队协作”为话题发起征文，请你讲述自己团队协作的经历，分享其中令你最受益的品质及你的感悟，以供他人借鉴和学习。 要求： 1. 80—120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2023·重庆·中考真题）“孝亲敬长”是中华民族的传统美德，家中老人尤其需要陪伴与关爱。校英语广播站正开展“孝敬祖辈，点滴做起”的好点子征集活动。请推荐一至两个切实可行的点子并讲述理由，以号召更多人孝敬祖辈，传承美德。 要求： 1.80—120词； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Hello, everyone. Caring for the older persons is the Chinese traditional virtue(美德). _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·重庆九龙坡·一模）  环保，一个看似简单却意义重大的主题，已经逐渐成为全人类共同关注的焦点。现你校校刊英语专栏以 “保护环境” 为话题面向全体学生征集主题海报宣传稿，请你用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义以及作为中学生应当如何保护环境。请你认真阅读海报，以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!” 为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。 要求： （1）80—120词； （2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part! The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·重庆渝中·二模）书籍是人生的导师，拥有改变我们命运的力量。2024年的世界读书日的主题为“阅读推动未来”。为了更深入地了解人们的阅读方式，学校英语社团在社区开展了以People’s Favorite Book-reading Ways为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。 内容包括： 1. 描述调查结果； 2. 陈述你的读书方式并说明理由； 3. …… 要求： 1. 80—120词； 2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Recently, the school’s English club did a survey in the community about people’s favorite book-reading ways. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·重庆綦江·一模）假如你是李华，上周末在网上某服装店购买了一件毛衣。收到货后你发现衣服有问题，与客服 (the customer service agent) 理论，其服务态度 (attitude) 不好，而且不予退换。因此你决定给经理写一封投诉信。 内容包括： 1.服装问题 (颜色，尺寸……)；2.服务问题；3.提出解决方案。 要求： 1.80—120词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear Sir, I’m writing to tell you about my experience in your clothing store._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Yours, Li Hua 8．（2024·重庆沙坪坝·一模）春天来临，万物复苏，人们纷纷来到户外感受春天的美好。学校为了缓解学生压力，也发起了周末“踏青”活动。假如你是学校英语杂志主编，请你用英文给同学们发出活动倡议，内容包括： 1.号召大家积极加入“踏青”并说明它的好处。 2.向大家推荐踏青中有意义的具体活动。 3.呼吁大家踏青时绿色出行，爱护环境，并提出可行的建议。 参考信息如下： 踏青：have a spring outing ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（23-24九年级下·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）习近平总书记在2024年新年贺词中说：“世事变迁，合作共赢始终是硬道理。”本月，凤鸣山中学英语社团正在开展以“Teamwork Makes the Dream Work(团队合作让梦想成真)”为主题的英语征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，分享一次团队合作的经历，如体育运动、小组合作学习、团队游戏等，谈谈你对团队合作的看法。参考要点： 1. 事情的起因、经过、结果； 2. 你的收获和感想。 写作要求： 1. 80~120 词，可适当发挥； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Teamwork Makes the Dream Work As an old saying goes “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat”, with great teamwork, we can achieve remarkable results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（23-24九年级下·重庆渝北·阶段练习）“与人为善”是中华民族的传统美德。与人为善就是以善意的态度对待他人, 帮助他人。善待他人，乐于助人也能让自己的心情保持愉悦。某英文网站正在开展以“与人为善”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对与人为善的看法，曾经与人为善的经历以及你的感受。 提示词语:virtue (美德), kind, important, help, improve, happy 提示问题: ●What do you think of being kind to others? ●What did you do? ●How did you feel? 要求： 1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 11．（23-24九年级下·重庆渝中·阶段练习）随着科技的日新月异，人类对太空的不断探索，未来人们的生活可能会发生翻天覆地的变化。或许人类会在火星上居住、拥有时光机、开发出全新能源等。请根据表格内容，发挥你的想象，写一篇畅想未来生活的文章。 未来的生活 衣服 可以调节温度 食物 机器人将会生产足够的食物 房子 新材料建成，防潮（moisture-proof）、防火（fireproof），抗震（earthquake-resistant） 交通 无人驾驶汽车成为主流 要求：1．包含表格中的要点；可酌情增加内容。 2．条理清晰，行文流畅，内容积极。 3．不少于80词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（23-24九年级下·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）近日来，校园霸凌问题备受社会关注，它严重影响着学生的身心健康和学习氛围，甚至造成了一些不可挽回的伤害。学校公众号正在开展《停止校园霸凌》英文征文活动，请根据以下提示，以“Stop Campus Bullying”为题投稿。 提示： 1. What should we do when we see campus bullying? 2. What should we do to keep away from campus bullying? 要求： 1.短文须包括提示的主要信息，可适当发挥； 2.要求80~120词，开头已给出，不记入总词数； 3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和班级名称。 Stop Campus Bullying Nowadays campus bullying happens in many schools. What should we do about campus bullying? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（23-24九年级下·重庆开州·阶段练习）作为一名中学生，我们应该有一颗感恩的心。请以“Learn to Express Thanks”为话题，根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。提示： 1．列举身边缺乏感恩的实例； 2．列举生活中我们主要的感恩对象和原因； 3．简述如何表达感恩之心。 要求： 1．语言表达准确，语意连贯； 2．词数90左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech is “Learn to Express Thanks”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（23-24九年级下·重庆渝中·阶段练习）运动安全的重要性 大多数的中学生都很喜欢做运动，即将迎来体育中考的初三孩子们更是如此。训练场上，大家都全力以赴，珍惜每一次机会认真锻炼。但是，在运动的同时，同学们也需要重视运动安全。 请同学们以“Do Sports Safely”为题，写一篇80—120字的书面表达。 参考要点： 1．运动安全的重要性（improve physical fitness and health, achieve the goals of sports, ...） 2．如何安全地运动（do enough warming-up activities, wear comfortable clothes, ...） 3．…… 注意： 1．标题已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和班级。 Do Sports Safely ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（2024·重庆沙坪坝·二模）粮食事关国运民生，是国家安全的重要基础。你校正在开展“节约粮食，杜绝浪费”的活动，学校English Corner 将以“Say ‘No’ to Food Waste”为题组织一次演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，简述节约粮食的重要性，提出2—3条杜绝粮食浪费的措施，并号召青少年厉行节约，反对浪费。 要求： 1. 80—120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Importance: a Chinese traditional virtue (美德) help stop hunger … Methods: Make a shopping list eat up the food take leftover (剩菜) home not order too much … take action … Say “No” to Food Waste Ladies and gentlemen, It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech themed “Say ‘No’ to Food Waste”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文： One rainy day, Mary was in a rush to school, feeling sad and upset. But on the way, she noticed raindrops hitting the ground, ants scurrying around, and plants looking fresh. Several students, wearing raincoats and carrying umbrellas, were playing in puddles in the rain. They jumped like frogs and had a lot of fun. Mary joined them and felt little better. When Mary reached school, there was a class talent show. She performed well and got hugs, praises, and even a present, which made her surprised and happy. She realized that instead of being troubled by the rain, she should see the bright side. Just like in a story or a painting, there are always different aspects. She learned not to let small things bother her and to enjoy every moment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据表格中的参考内容结合图片，完成故事的写作，注意语法正确，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出故事发生的时间、地点、人物，并介绍上学路上发生的事情，以及主人公的心情； 第二步，介绍到了学校后发生的事情，以及主人公的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①in a rush匆忙地 ②had a lot of fun玩得很开心 ③talent show才艺表演 [高分句型] ①When Mary reached school, there was a class talent show.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②She performed well and got hugs, praises, and even a present, which made her surprised and happy. （定语从句） ③She realized that instead of being troubled by the rain, she should see the bright side.（宾语从句） 2．例文 Chinese language is extensive and profound. Many Chinese beginners are confused by the rich Chinese expressions. Here is a funny thing. There was a basketball game at school. During the game, everyone shouted, “Jiayou! Jiayou!” But a foreign friend said in surprise, “There’s no need to add oil. Why are you saying ‘Jiayou!’?” When I heard this, I couldn’t help laughing and explained the reason to him. There are many examples of taking words from each other between communications, such as coffee, kung fu and so on. Language plays a positive role in promoting communication. When we pay attention to the cultural meanings behind the words, we understand them better. In fact, it’s not a barrier but a carrier. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时，一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出一件趣事； 第二步，具体介绍这件趣事； 第三步，介绍语言发展中的“词汇互借”以及对于语言的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①extensive and profound 博大精深 ②couldn’t help doing 忍不住做某事 ③each other 彼此 ④In fact 事实上 [高分句型] ①When I heard this, I couldn’t help laughing and explained the reason to him.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②There are many examples of taking words from each other between communications, such as coffee, kung fu and so on.（There be句型） ③When we pay attention to the cultural meanings behind the words, we understand them better.（when引导的时间状语从句） 3．例文 Working together is important for teenagers. Last term, Liz, Anne and I entered a science competition. Our task was to create a poster board with information about spaceships. After discussion, each of us got a job. Liz and Anne went to the library to look for more information about spaceships. I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet. The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board. After that, we spent three days making the poster board. Finally, we won second prize. When working as a team, I learned how to work well with my partners. I listened to them carefully and I respectfully and confidently expressed my ideas. My communication skills have improved a lot. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“从这次经历中学到什么”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，指出团队合作很重要； 第二步，具体阐述最难忘的一次团队合作经历； 第三步，书写结语，总结这次经历中的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①look for寻找 ②search for搜索 ③work as a team团队合作 [高分句型] ①The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board.（what引导的宾语从句） ②I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet.（省略that的定语从句） 4．例文 Hello, everyone. Caring for the older persons is the Chinese traditional virtue(美德). The elderly in the family especially need companionship and care. As children, we should honor our elders. First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. Second, we can take the elderly out regularly to promote physical activity, help them stay healthy, and help them to relieve psychological pressure. Third, we can teach the older persons some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state. Everyone will be old one day, so let’s take action. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，具体阐述可以孝敬老人的想法； 第二步，介绍这样做的原因； 第三步，最后让大家采取行动。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. （so that引导的目的状语从句） ②Third, we can teach the older persons some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 5．例文： Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part! The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. As middle school students, we have the power to make a difference and help save the earth! To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle wastes whenever it is possible. We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution. We should always throw trash into the proper bins. By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文； ②时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图示，文章应该包括7个方面的要点，可适当补充，使文章内容充实；尽量多使用短语，写作中要适当使用连接词，使行文连贯。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，点明主题，通过介绍地球的重要性来引出保护地球的措施； 第二步，介绍保护地球的具体措施； 第三步，书写结语，展望美好的未来。 ［亮点词汇］ ① make a difference 产生影响 ② instead of 而不是 ［高分句型］ ① To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees and reducing pollution. (动词不定式作目的状语) ② We can also save animals and recycle wastes whenever it is possible. (whenever引导让步状语从句) 6．参考范文1 Recently, the school’s English club did a survey in the community about people’s favorite book-reading ways. Different people have different views about them. Now here are the results. As smart phones become more and more popular, about 52% of people like reading on the phone. 20% of people like reading on the computer. 18% of people like listening to e-books. However, only 10% of them like reading a paper book. In my opinion, both e-books and paper books have advantages and disadvantages. I prefer e-books, because I can read books on the phone or e-readers no matter where I am. We can get information from the libraries easily. And I think what we should do is to use e-books wisely. All in all, everyone has their own way of enjoying books. No matter what way of reading we choose, we should stick to reading and enjoy reading. 参考范文2 Recently, the school’s English club did a survey in the community about people’s favorite book-reading ways. Different people have different views about them. Now here are the results. As the e-books become more and more popular, about 52% people like reading on the phone while 20% take interest in reading on computers. In addition, the number of people who choose to listen to e-books is also large, which reaches 18%. Only 10% of them prefer to read paper books. Personally, I still enjoy the traditional way of reading paper books. I love the feel of the pages between my fingers and the smell of the ink. It allows me to focus better and immerse myself in the story. Moreover, I can easily take notes on the pages, which is very helpful for my study. In conclusion, while different people have different preferences when it comes to reading, we should all realize the importance of reading in our lives and make it a good habit. Let’s embrace reading and let it shape our promising/bright future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：应用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述并评价调查结果； 第二步，陈述你的选择并说明理由； 第三步，结尾总结。 [亮点词汇] ①In my opinion按我的观点 ②no matter where无论在哪里 ③stick to doing坚持做 ④take interest in doing对做……感兴趣 ⑤more and more越来越 ⑥prefer to do宁愿做 [高分句型] ①Now here are the results.（倒装句） ②I prefer e-books, because I can read books on the phone no matter where I am.（because引导原因状语从句） 7．例文 Dear Sir, I’m writing to tell you about my experience in your clothing store. I bought a sweater there last weekend. When I received the sweater, I found that there was something wrong with it. First, its color isn’t right. I bought a purple one, but the one I received is black. Second, I ordered a medium size but received a large size instead. Third, the sweater is even broken in some places. I talked to the customer service agent about the problems. But to my surprise, not only was she impolite, but she refused to change it, and she even said it was my fault. I was deeply hurt by her attitude. So, I’d like to give you some advice. First of all, you’d better improve your service to your customers. Then, you should change my sweater. At the same time, I hope you can say sorry to me. I’m looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“投诉商品质量问题，以及与客服沟通却未得到妥善处理”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍写这封信的意图； 第二步，根据题干的要点，描述商品的问题，与客服沟通未能解决问题等信息； 第三步，期待这次不好的购物体验得到妥善解决。 [亮点词汇] ①talk to与某人说 ②first of all首先 [高分句型] ①When I received the sweater, I found that there was something wrong with it.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②At the same time, I hope you can say sorry to me.（宾语从句） 8．例文 Spring is coming, and all flowers are in full bloom. It’s the best time to have a spring outing. We can not only enjoy the beauty of nature but also breathe fresh air. At the same time, it can also relieve our study stress. So let’s go to have a spring outing. During the trip, there are many interesting activities, such as flying a kite, going for a picnic, going camping and so on. However, we should take the trip in environmentally-friendly ways. Don’t pick the flowers on the side of the road. We should protect public facilities. We should pick up the rubbish when we see it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，号召大家加入“踏青”，并说明它的好处； 第二步，介绍踏青可进行的一些活动； 第三步，呼吁大家绿色出行，并提出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①in full bloom盛开 ②at the same time同时 ③and so on等等 [高分句型] ①We can not only enjoy the beauty of nature but also breathe fresh air. (not only ... but also连接的并列句) ②We should pick up the rubbish when we see it. (when引导的时间状语从句) 9．例文 Teamwork Makes the Dream Work As an old saying goes “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat”, with great teamwork, we can achieve remarkable results. It shows us how important the teamwork is. I also learn this from an unforgettable experience. Last Friday afternoon, we had a basketball match against Class Three. At the beginning, we all tried to show each other to be the best player. We just ran around and didn’t pass the ball to others. Soon we fell behind. During the break, our coach advised us to work together as a team. “You have to learn that soccer is a team sport,” he said. We followed his advice. In the end, we won the game and each of us felt happy. This experience made me understand that a team sport award was not just about “me”, it was about “us”. I realize deeply that in a team, we can’t achieve success no matter how excellent each one is. The key to success is great teamwork. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题。 第二步，详细介绍自己和团队的一次合作经历。 第三步，书写结语，写出自己的收获和感想。 [亮点词汇] ① At the beginning在开始时 ②advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事 ③In the end最后 [高分句型] ①It shows us how important the teamwork is.(宾语从句) ②At the beginning, we all tried to show each other to be the best player.(try to do sth 尝试做某事) 10．例文: Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think we should be kind to others and it is very important for us. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the math exam. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together and I helped him when he was in trouble. With my help, he improved a lot. I was very happy and proud for what I did. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示问题”中所列出的问题并且需要回答，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开篇引出“与人为善”的主题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。主要从“我的观点”以及“我如何做”具体阐述与人为善的主题； 第三步，书写总结。写出作者自己帮助别人之后愉悦的心情。 [亮点词汇] ① be kind to 对……友善 ② give up 放弃 ③ in trouble 处于不幸中 [高分句型] ①When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice.（when引导时间状语从句） ②He was so sad that he wanted to give up.（so…that引导结果状语从句） ③Every day we did homework together and I helped him when he was in trouble.（and并列句） 11．例文 The life in the future Our life may have great changes in the future. In the future, we will wear clothes that can regulate the temperature according to the weather so that we don’t need to buy so many clothes. As population grows, we will need more food. The robot will produce enough food for us. The houses in the future will be different. They will be built with new materials. They are moisture-proof, fireproof and earthquake-resistant. In the future, driverless car will become popular, which makes it easier for us to travel around the world. I hope all of these can come true in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容畅想未来的生活，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍未来的生活； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①according to根据 ②come true实现 [高分句型] ①In the future, we will wear clothes that can regulate the temperature according to the weather so that we don’t need to buy so many clothes. (so that引导的目的状语从句) ②In the future, driverless car will become popular, which makes it easier for us to travel around the world. (which引导的定语从句) 12．例文 Stop Campus Bullying Nowadays campus bullying happens in many schools. What should we do about campus bullying? In my opinion, when we know or see any campus bullying, we should tell our teachers about it as soon as possible so that they can deal with it properly. Then, we can also advise other students to stay away from the students who are fighting. At the same time, we can try to be friendly and help the students who are being bullied. In order to keep away from campus bullying, we should follow the school rules and try to be good students. Besides, we should not only study hard but also be kind and friendly to others. What’s more, when someone wants to hurt us, we should tell our teachers and parents instead of keeping it to ourselves. Hope there will be no more campus bullying and everyone can be safe and happy at school. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意仔细阅读所给内容，先阐述如果遇见校园霸凌应该怎么做，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故具体阐述如果遇见校园霸凌应该怎么做； 第二步，具体说明应该怎么做才能远离校园霸凌； 第三步，书写结语。表达不再有校园霸凌的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s opinion在某人看来 ②as soon as possible尽快 ③deal with处理 ④stay away from远离 ⑤not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ⑥instead of代替，而不是 [高分句型] ①In my opinion, when we know or see any campus bullying, we should tell our teachers about it as soon as possible so that they can deal with it properly.（when引导的时间状语从句，so that引导的目的状语从句） ②Then, we can also advise other students to stay away from the students who are fighting. At the same time, we can try to be friendly and help the students who are being bullied.（who引导的定语从句） 13．例文 Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech is “Learn to Express Thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they show no gratitude. I don’t think this behavior is correct. As students, we should learn to express our gratitude. Because of the society, we can have the opportunity to receive a good education. Our parents also support us in school. Our teachers have taught us a lot of knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends for their courage and support. In the future, we should not forget our society, parents, teachers, etc. At present, we should study harder to make our country more beautiful. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”，以“Learn to Express Thanks”为题，列举身边缺乏感恩的实例，列举生活中我们主要的感恩对象和原因，并简述如何表达感恩之心。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引言，导入正文，列举身边缺乏感恩的实例； 第二步，列举生活中我们主要的感恩对象和原因； 第三步，简述如何表达感恩之心。 [亮点词汇] ①learn to do sth.学习做某事 ②because of 由于 [高分句型] ①When they leave school and enter society, they show no gratitude.（使用时间状语从句） ② Our teachers have taught us a lot of knowledge, so we should thank them. （so连接的并列句） 14．例文： Do Sports Safely Doing sports safely is of great importance. It helps us not only improve physical fitness and health but also achieve the goals of sports. It also makes us full of energy. To do sports safely, we should do enough warming-up activities to move all our body parts. Besides, we should wear comfortable clothes and shoes. What’s more, don’t do sports for too long. Don’t get too tired or hurt ourselves. All in all, as the physical education entrance examination is coming, we should do sports harder than before. At the same time, we should do sports safely. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，需要补充内容，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍运动安全的重要性； 第二步，介绍如何安全地运动； 第三步，总结，点题。 [亮点词汇] ①of great importance 非常重要的 ②makes us full of energy 使我们充满活力 ③all in all 总之 [高分句型] ① It helps us not only improve physical fitness and health but also achieve the goals of sports. (“not only...but also”结构) ② To do sports safely, we should do enough warming-up activities to move all our body parts. (不定式作目的状语) 15． Say “No” to Food Waste Ladies and gentlemen, It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech themed “Say ‘No’ to Food Waste”. It’s shocking to know that while many from hunger, we waste a lot of food daily. Saving food is a Chinese traditional virtue. It’s not only a way to help stop hunger, but also a way to protect our planet. Everyone can do his part. Make a shopping list, buy only what you need, and eat up the food on your plate. When you eat out, you’d better not order too many dishes. And remember to take leftover home if there’s something left. Small changes can make a big difference. Let’s take action now, be smart with our food choices, and say ‘No’ to food waste. Together, we can make a positive influence. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。 ③提示：根据提供表格的内容完成写作，可适当发挥；注意上下文的逻辑关系，标点符号和大小写问题。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍节约粮食、杜绝浪费的重要意义； 第二步 ，列举节约粮食的方法； 第三步，号召大家开始行动起来，开始节约粮食。 [亮点词汇] ①deliver a speech发表演说 ②virtue美德 ③positive influence积极影响 ④make a big difference产生很大影响 [高分句型] ①It’s shocking to know that while many from hunger, we waste a lot of food daily. (时间状语从句) ②It’s not only a way to help stop hunger, but also a way to protect our planet. (并列句) ③ A nd remember to take leftover home if there’s something left. (条件状语从句) 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$