内容正文:
新人教版高中英语应用文写作指导一一建议信
(学生版)
例题:
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能健康生活。请你根据
下列要点写封回信。
1.注意饮食均衡。
2.保持运动
3.得到足够休息
注意:1.词数80左右。
2.可适当增加细节。
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to live healthily.
Best wishes,
LiHua
写作指导
一、审题
1.审体裁:这是一篇
2.审时态:文章以
时态为主。
3.审人称:由于是给别人提出建议,所以文章应以第
人称为主。
4.审要点:①
②
③
二、列提纲
引出建议:
要点1:
+扩展句
提出建议:
要点2:
+扩展句
要点3:
+扩展句
结尾:
注意:1.提出建议的句型:
2.表示原因的句型或连词:
3.列举建议的过渡词:
三、定稿
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to live healthily.
Best wishes,
LiHua
新人教版高中英语应用文写作指导——建议信 (教师版)
例题:
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能健康生活。请你根据下列要点写封回信。
1. 注意饮食均衡。
2. 保持运动
3. 得到足够休息
注意:1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节。
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to live healthily.
_________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作指导
一、审题
1. 审体裁:这是一篇_应用文,书信体。
2. 审时态:文章以_一般现在时/一般将来时时态为主。
3. 审人称:由于是给别人提出建议,所以文章应以第__二、一人称为主。
4. 审要点:① ___注意饮食均衡 ② ____保持运动 ③ _得到足够休息
二、列提纲
引出建议:1、Here are my suggestions.
2、Suggestions (on how to ...) can be listed as follows.
3. The ways for you to … can be suggested as follows.
要点1:It would be a good idea to pay attention to a balanced diet.
+ 扩展句 You'd better eat more fruit and vegetables than meat.提出建议: 要点2:take exercise
+ 扩展句 keep your body healthy and engergetic
要点3:take enough rest
+ 扩展句 Staying up late really does harm to your health.
结尾:1. 我希望你会觉得这些主意对你有帮助。
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
2. 我相信如果你听从我的建议,你会……
I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll …
注意:1. 提出建议的句型:
I suggest you should …
It would be a good idea to …
My advice is that you should ...
You’d better …
2. 表示原因的句型或连词:
If you do this, you will ...
In this way, you can ...
... as / because ...
... so that ...
3. 列举建议的过渡词:
first of all / first / to begin with;
second/ besides / in addition / what’s more;
finally / lastly / last but not least
3、 定稿
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to live healthily.
_Here are my suggestions.
First, it would be a good idea to pay much attention to a balanced diet as we are what we eat. You'd better focus on vegetables and fruits so that you won't become fat. Besides, I suggest you should take exercise. For example, playing basketball after school or running before breakfast. If you do this regularly, you will find yourself always energetic. My last advice is that you should get enough rest. Staying up late really does harm to your health. Remember that early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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$$新人教版高中英语应用文写作指导
——建议信
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能健康生活。请你根据下列要点写封回信。
1. 注意饮食均衡。
2. 保持运动
3. 得到足够休息
注意:1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节。
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to live healthily.
_________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作指导:
一、审题
二、列提纲
三、定稿
一、审题
1. 审体裁:这是一篇_________________。
2. 审时态:文章以________________________时态为主。
3. 审人称:由于是给别人提出建议,所以文章应以第
_________人称为主。
4. 审要点:① _________________
② _________________
③ _________________
应用文,书信体
一般现在时/一般将来时
二、一
注意饮食均衡。
保持运动
得到足够休息
二、列提纲
引出建议:
要点1:
+ 扩展句
提出建议: 要点2:
+ 扩展句
要点3:
+ 扩展句
结尾:
引出建议:
Here are my suggestions.
Suggestions (on how to ...) can be listed as
follows.
3. The ways for you to … can be suggested as
follows.
二、列提纲
二、列提纲
要点1:
+ 扩展句
提出建议:
要点2:
+ 扩展句
要点3:
+ 扩展句
重复要点“注意饮食均衡”
pay attention to a balanced diet
使用表示建议的句型
It would be a good idea to pay attention to a balanced diet.
方法1:举例
more fruit and vegetables, less meat.
使用表示建议的句型
You'd better eat more fruit and vegetables than meat.
方法2:阐述原因
won't become fat
使用句型或连词
In this way, you won't become fat easily.
take exercise
重复要点“保持运动”
方法1:举例
方法2:阐述原因
running, swimming, playing basketball and so on
keep your body healthy and engergetic
?
常用结尾句型
1. 我希望你会觉得这些主意对你有帮助。
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
2. 我相信如果你听从我的建议,你会……
I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll …
二、列提纲
1. 提出建议的句型:
I suggest you should …
It would be a good idea to …
My advice is that you should ...
You’d better …
注意:
2. 表示原因的句型或连词:
If you do this, you will ...
In this way, you can ...
... as / because ...
... so that ...
3. 列举建议的过渡词:
first of all / first / to begin with;
second/ besides / in addition / what’s more;
finally / lastly / last but not least
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn how to live healthily. Here are my suggestions.
First, it would be a good idea to pay much attention to a balanced diet as we are what we eat. You'd better focus on vegetables and fruits so that you won't become fat. Besides, I suggest you should take exercise. For example, playing basketball after school or running before breakfast. If you do this regularly, you will find yourself always energetic. My last advice is that you should get enough rest. Staying up late really does harm to your health. Remember that early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
$$