专题08 书面表达15篇(长沙中考真题+名校模拟)-备战2025年中考英语常考语法点+题型练习(中考真题+名校模拟真题)(湖南长沙专用)

专题08 书面表达15篇 (湖南长沙中考真题+名校模拟) 1．（2024·湖南长沙·中考真题）学校英文校刊主编读了第一节（回答问题）中David Smith的故事后，深受触动，发起主题为“What does Music Bring to Me?”的征文。你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容，并作适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： （1）80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 What does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2023·湖南长沙·中考真题）学校英文报正在以“Amazing Hunan”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： (1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； (3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word bank: transport 交通；convenient 方便的 Amazing Hunan Hunan is a lovable and livable place. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2022·湖南长沙·中考真题）新学期来了，学生社团又要招新啦！假如你是社团招新工作负责人，请根据以下内容和要求写一篇短文，为同学们介绍社团的情况（包括名称、活动及目的）。 要求： （1）介绍下表中第1和第2两个社团，并联系实际或发挥想象，补充介绍第3个社团； （2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 1. Public SpeakersActivities: practice speaking in public and give speeches; … Purposes: to voice opinions clearly and confidently; to overcome fear and shyness; … 2. Cool Cooks Activities: design（设计）healthy menus and learn how to cook; … Purposes: to have balanced（均衡的）and healthy eating; to enjoy life; … 3. ____Sports____Activities: choose your own favourite sports and do exercise with friends;… Purposes: to keep fit and lose weight; to make more friends;… Clubs Are Calling! The new term is here. Are you ready for an interesting and colorful school life? Now I’d like to introduce some of our clubs. In the club of Public Speakers, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）假如你是李华，你校校刊以“How often do you help do chores at home?”为主题对学生在家做家务情况进行了调查。请根据下列图表简要描述学生在家做家务的调查结果，并分析原因，最后谈谈你对做家务的看法。 Reasons: 1. don’t have enough time; 2. ... Opinion: 1. develop one’s independence; 2. ... 要求： 1. 文章需包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Doing chores is important for students and we learn a lot from it. According to a survey from our school,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）在这个快速变化的世界中，青少年是未来的建设者和领导者，你们的责任感将对国家的发展产生深远影响。作为一名青少年，你该如何成为一个有责任感的人呢？请你根据思维导图提示，用英文写一篇演讲稿。 Word Bank：responsible有责任的； responsibility责任；society社会 要求： (1) 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数）； (2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 Ladies and gentlemen, Nowadays, responsibility is one of the most important qualities that a person should have. 6．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）南雅中学即将再次和新加坡思源中学开启交流之旅，现需要选拔一批优秀学生赴新加坡参加交流访问。假如你是LiHua，打算参加选拔，请给负责人Mr.Zhang写一封自荐信。 要求： 1.信件必须包含表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Dear Mr. Zhang, My name is Li Hua. I’d like to join you to pay a visit to Si Yuan Middle School in Singapore. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·湖南长沙·三模）繁忙而充实的初三生活即将结束。在过去的三年中，你的老师或朋友关心、帮助过你。请你选择一个老师或者朋友，向他(她)表达感激之情，并谈一谈你的高中生活和学习的规划。 内容包括： 1、表达感激之情； 2、回顾他(她)对你的帮助与关心； 3、谈谈高中生活和学习的规划； 4、表达对老师或朋友的祝福。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实人名和校名)。 It is time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I am here to say thanks to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·湖南长沙·三模）为了增强同学们的安全意识，你校英语报正在以“Keep Safety in Mind”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： 1. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 文章必须包括表格中所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Keep Safety in Mind Safety is very important in our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）初中生活即将结束，回顾过去的三年，我们一直在努力学习英语，在这条漫长的道路上，我们有过迷茫与挣扎，汗水与泪水，拼搏与希望，最终是什么原因使你坚持到了现在？某英语网站以“What do I study English for?”为题，发起征文活动，请跟你的同龄人分享你学习英语的原因、方法和感悟，以激励更多年轻人学好英语。 要求： （1）短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总字数）； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 What do I study English for? As we all know, English has become a world-wide language. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·湖南长沙·三模）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信，告诉你他最近经常学习到很晚，睡眠不好，成绩也没提高，学习压力较大。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封信，帮助他解决问题。 要求： 1. 请结合生活实际，自行补充第三点建议； 2. 要涵盖表格中的要点，可适当增加细节； 3. 字数80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4. 文中不能出现本人真实姓名和班级。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you have much stress these days.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 11．（2024·湖南长沙·三模）歌曲中唱到 “不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹。” 在成长过程中，我们在很多方面都会经历困难和挑战，比如：学习方面，运动方面，才艺提升方面，人际交往方面等。请以 “Challenge Myself” 为题，写一篇英语短文，分享一个你的成长故事。 要求： (1) 短文必须包含图示中所有要点，可适当发挥； (2) 80词左右 (标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)； (3) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Challenge Myself Life is full of challenges. Some are small and easy to overcome, while others are big and difficult. But it is these challenges that make us grow and learn. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）假设你叫李浩，你校英文校刊正开展以“关爱自我，减缓压力”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，写一篇短文进行投稿。 要求： (1) 短文必须包含图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； (2) 80词左右 (标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词)； (3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 How to Reduce Stress in Life As teenagers, we all experience different levels of stress. In fact, stress is part of growing up. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）随着科技的飞速发展，人类对太空不断地探索，未来人们的生活可能会发生翻天覆地的变化。或许人类可以在火星居住，拥有时光机、开发出全新能源等。请你根据表格内容，以 “Life in the future” 为题写一篇畅想未来生活的文章。 要求： (1) 80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (2) 短文必须包括所有要点，并作适当补充； (3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 参考词汇：防火fire-proof         抗震earthquake-resistant 太阳能solar energy    无人驾驶车driverless cars 未来的生活 衣服 可以调节温度…… 食物 机器人将会生产足够的食物…… 房子 新材料建成，防火、抗震…… 交通 无人驾驶汽车成为主流…… Life in the future With the rapid development of science and technology, we continue to explore the outer space. And our life in the future may change a lot. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（2024·湖南长沙·模拟预测）假如你叫李华，你们班将在今年暑假参加以“亲近大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营。其中包括小组自由活动。请根据下面你设计的小组活动方案写一封电子邮件，发给交换生Mike，告知Mike你所设计的计划。 Morning climb mountains Noon picnic singing, dancing, tell stories Afternoon pick fruits 要求： （1）电子邮件包含计划中所有的活动，并给出理由； （2）邮件不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； （3）词数80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Hi Mike, We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time. Li Hua 15．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）三年的初中学习生活即将结束，你想进入一所什么样的高中？为了让同学们更明确自己将来的学习和生活目标，学校英文报正在以“My Dream High School Life”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求：( 1 ) 短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； ( 2 ) 80 词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； ( 3 ) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word bank: campus 校园 My Dream High School Life My senior high school life is just around the corner. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1. 例文 What does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life’s challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free. Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：综合使用“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求以“What does Music Bring to Me?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍自己的经历； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take up 开始从事 ②deal with 处理 ③broaden my horizons 开阔眼界 ④deepen my understanding 加深我的理解 [高分句型] ①Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life’s challenges.（定语从句） ②I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.（省略that的宾语从句） 2．例文： Amazing Hunan Hunan is a lovable and livable place. Let me tell you something about Hunan. First, there are lots of places of interest, such as Zhangjiajie. Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature. Second, the high-speed train is convenient and user-friendly, so you can go to Hunan by high-speed train. Third, Hunan cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway. If you like noodles, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering rice noodles in Hunan. What’s more, the people in Hunan are helpful and warm-hearted. You will feel at home here. Welcome to Hunan. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：要求以“Amazing Hunan”为题，结合所给要点进行写作，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，突出写作内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单介绍湖南，引出下文重点； 第二步，介绍湖南的名胜古迹、交通工具、美食和人等； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① lots of 许多 ② such as 比如 ③ consist of 由……组成 ④ what’s more 此外 ⑤ feel at home 感到自在 [高分句型] ① Let me tell you something about Hunan.（祈使句） ② Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature.（where引导非限制性定语从句） ③ Third, Hunan cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway.（that引导定语从句） ④ If you like noodles, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering rice noodles in Hunan.（if引导条件状语从句） 3．例文：                                                                                          Clubs Are Calling! The new term is here. Are you ready for an interesting and colorful school life? Now I’d like to introduce some of our clubs. In the club of Public Speakers, you will practice speaking in public and give speeches. The purpose is to voice opinions clearly and confidently. By joining this club, you can overcome your fear and shyness and become more out-going. The Cool Cooks club is really cool. It holds activities such as designing healthy menus and learning how to cook. You can taste different food and develop a balanced and healthy eating habit. It will make your life more enjoyable. If you want to lose weight or just keep fit, the Sports Club is your best choice. There are many kinds of sports in this club. You can choose your own favourite sports and do exercise with friends and other students. So you will make more friends at the same time. You can choose more than one club, depending on your interest and time. I believe these clubs will make your school life full of surprises. Join us now! 【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求根据表格中所给的两个社团的信息，并补充第三个社团信息，介绍这三个社团，包括它们的名称、活动内容和目的。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现时和一般将来时，以第三人称介绍俱乐部。写作时承接所给开头，对三个俱乐部的活动和目的分别进行描述，最后另起一段表达期望并呼吁同学们加入。注意保持主谓的一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。 4．例文 Doing chores is important for students and we learn a lot from it. According to a survey from our school, most of the students do chores 3—4 times a week. 25% of students do chores twice a week. 20% of the students do chores every day. However, we find that 15% of students never do chores. Students may think they are too tired on weekdays to do chores. Some even think it’s their parents’ job. Others think they don’t have enough time. But I think everyone should share the work and sometimes we can take some break from schoolwork by doing chores. Also, it can develop our independence. So I suggest we should do some basic housework every day, like making our own bed or sweeping the floor. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给图表提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学生在家做家务的调查结果； 第二步，分析调查结果的原因； 第三步，最后谈谈自己对做家务的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① too...to... 太……而不能…… ② take some break 休息 ③ do some basic housework 做一些基本的家务 [高分句型] However, we find that 15% of students never do chores.（宾语从句） 5．例文： Ladies and gentlemen, Nowadays, responsibility is one of the most important qualities that a person should have. As teenagers, it’s important to be responsible. At school, finish your homework on time and follow the school rules to set a good example. At home, care for your parents and help them do something that you can do. In society, we should respect others and follow the social rules. By doing so, we can lead to a better world. Remember, being responsible is the key to success. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏思维导图中的要点。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出写作内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学校、家庭、社会等几个方面展开描写如何成为一名有责任感的青少年； 第三步，书写结语。提出倡议，呼吁大家采取行动。 [亮点词汇] ①lead to导致，通向 ②care for 照顾 ③set a good example 树立好榜样 [高分句型] Remember, being responsible is the key to success.（动名词作主语） 6．例文 Dear Mr. Zhang, My name is Li Hua. I’d like to join you to pay a visit to Si Yuan Middle School in Singapore. I will introduce myself. I am very active. I often take part in different kinds of activities. I am friendly and warm-hearted. When I see people in need, I always try my best to help them. I am good at English, which enables me to communicate with other foreign students without any difficulty. What’s more, I am talented in making speeches. Once I took part in a speech competition and I won the first place. Hope you can give me a chance. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容写一封自荐信，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍自己的个性、特长和荣誉； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②try my best to do sth.尽我自己最大的努力做某事 ③communicate with和……交流 [高分句型] ①When I see people in need, I always try my best to help them. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I am good at English, which enables me to communicate with other foreign students without any difficulty. (which引导的定语从句) 7．例文 It is time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I am here to say thanks to my English teacher Mrs. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I will take part in more activities to make my life more colorful. I hope she will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍要感谢的人以及你的高中生活和学习的规划，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达感激之情； 第二步，回顾他(她)对你的帮助与关心； 第三步，谈谈高中生活和学习的规划并表达对老师或朋友的祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth.过去常常做某事 ②fail to do sth.未能做某事 ③cheer up使振奋精神 ④make great progress取得进步 [高分句型] ①She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. (since引导的时间状语从句) ②I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. (so...that引导的结果状语从句) 8．例文 Keep Safety in Mind Safety is very important in our life. We should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some suggestions. First, we should go along the right side when we walk or ride a bike on the street. Second, we should be careful when making friends and don’t meet net-friends alone. Third, never eat the food that has gone bad. The bad food is bad for our bodies. Finally, make sure you are safe when you are doing sports. In a word, we should always keep safety in mind and keep us safe. I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety and keep safety in mind. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明安全意识的重要性； 第二步，具体从四个方面介绍如何保持安全，交通安全，交友安全，食品安全以及补充一条安全事项； 第三步，最后再次呼吁同学们要保持安全。 [亮点词汇] ①keep sth in mind把某事记在心里 ②be bad for对……有坏处 ③pay attention to关注 [高分句型] ①Finally, make sure you are safe when you are doing sports.（时间状语从句） ②I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety and keep safety in mind.（宾语从句） 9．例文： What do I study English for? As we all know, English has become a world-wide language. I work hard to learn English, because English is a window to the world and it is helpful to my future development. I have some ways to learn English. I often listen to English songs and watch English movies to develop interest in English. I practice reading and writing English more, in this way, I can grasp more English expressions. I think that learning English is a lifelong journey and that I will never give up learning it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你学习英语的原因、方法和感悟的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请跟你的同龄人分享你学习英语的原因、方法和感悟，以激励更多年轻人学好英语”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“原因、方法、感受等”几个方面重点介绍你学习英语的原因、方法和感悟的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我认为学习英语是一个终身的旅程，我永远不会放弃学习它”的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be helpful to对……有帮助； ②practice doing sth练习做某事； ③in this way用这种方法； ④give up doing sth放弃做某事。 [高分句型] ①I have some ways to learn English. (动词不定式作定语) ②I think that learning English is a lifelong journey and that I will never give up learning it. (that引导宾语从句) 10．例文 Dear Tom,   I’m sorry to hear that you have much stress these days. It is normal to have a lot of pressure for teenagers. I would like to share some ways to lower stress with you. First of all, you had better make a good study plan. A good plan can make you study efficiently. Besides, you should get enough sleep so that you have much enenrgy to learn knowledge in class. Remember that you shouldn’t play games or your phone before bedtime. Last but not least, do some exercise to relax yourself every day. Hopefully, my suggestions are of great help to you. Please let me know if you have any problems. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对别人的问题表达同情，并引出主题； 第二步，从要点提示的三个方面具体介绍自己给出的建议； 第三步，总结全文，希望自己的建议有用。 [亮点词汇] ①make sb do sth让某人做某事 ②be of great help to sb对某人非常有用 [高分句型] ①Besides, you should get enough sleep so that you have much enenrgy to learn knowledge in class. （目的状语从句） ②Remember that you shouldn’t play games or your phone before bedtime.（宾语从句） 11．例文： Challenge Myself         Life is full of challenges. Some are small and easy to overcome, while others are big and difficult. But it is these challenges that make us grow and learn.          Last September, I was asked to give a speech at the opening ceremony. It was my first time giving a speech in front of the whole school. At first, I was nervous about it. But I regarded it as a chance to improve myself, and I started to practice speaking in front of my classmates. In addition, I also asked my teachers and some experienced students for help. At last, the speech was a great success.            From this experience, I realized the importance of facing challenges bravely. As long as we focus on doing something, we will achieve our goals in the end. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态： 时态以一般过去时为主； ③提示：以“Challenge Myself” 为题，写一篇英语短文，分享一个你的成长故事。短文必须包含图示中所有要点，可适当发挥，但行文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 [写作步骤] 第一步， 引出话题，介绍生活中的挑战以及它们对个人成长和学习的重要性； 第二步， 描述作者面临的挑战，即在全校开幕式上做演讲，并表达最初的紧张和恐惧； 第三步，描述作者如何克服挑战，包括练习演讲、向老师和有经验的学生寻求帮助，以及最终取得成功。 第四步，总结作者从这次经历中学到的教训，即勇敢面对挑战的重要性，并强调专注和坚持可以实现目标。 [亮点词汇] ① in front of在……前面 ② regard... as... 把……当做 ③ ask sb. for help向某人求助 ④ as long as只要 [高分句型] ① I realized the importance of facing challenges bravely.(宾语从句) ②As long as we focus on doing something, we will achieve our goals in the end.(as long as引导的条件状语从句) 12．例文 How to Reduce Stress in Life As teenagers, we all experience different levels of stress. In fact, stress is part of growing up. It’s necessary to reflect on how we can care for ourselves and try to reduce stress of daily life. Personally, I face stress from my parents’ high expectations, too much schoolwork, and occasional tension with classmates. To deal with the stress, I find listening to my favorite music is an effective way. Moreover, doing exercise regularly really helps a lot. For example, running for half an hour every day can not only improve my energy but also make me happier. Last but not least, keeping a balanced diet can release stress in the long run. However, stress also has its positive sides. It can improve my creativity, learning ability and problem-solving skills. Let’s embrace the art of positive management and take more care of ourselves. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“如何减轻生活中的压力”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍青少年常有很大压力以及减轻压力的必要性； 第二步，根据题干思维导图中的要点，介绍自己的压力，自己如何处理压力； 第三步，介绍压力也有积极的作用，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①too much太多 ②for example例如 [高分句型] ①To deal with the stress, I find listening to my favorite music is an effective way.（宾语从句） ②Let’s embrace the art of positive management and take more care of ourselves.（祈使句） 13．例文 Life in the Future With the rapid development of science and technology, we continue to explore the outer space. And our life in the future may change a lot. People might live to be 120 years old with better health care. Clothes can regulate the temperature. The robots will produce enough food for people. Houses will be made of new materials so that they are safer and smarter, being fire-proof and earthquake-resistant. They will use solar energy, which is good for the Earth. Driverless cars are becoming mainstream, so we can do homework while traveling. School might be through virtual classes, making learning possible from anywhere, even space! I am excited about the future and all the new technologies, but I also hope we will still play outside because it’s fun and healthy! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，畅想未来生活各方面的变化； 第二步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of由……制成 ②so that因此，以便于 ③be good for对……有好处 [高分句型] ①They will use solar energy, which is good for the Earth.（which引导的定语从句） ②Driverless cars are becoming mainstream, so we can do homework while traveling.（so引导的结果状语从句） 14．例文 Hi Mike, We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group. First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. It’s also a great way to improve our physical fitness. At noon, we’ll have a picnic. We can share our food. We can enjoy ourselves by singing, dancing and telling stories. We can develop our English speaking and communication skills. In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better. We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，从上午、中午和下午三个时间段来详述夏令营活动计划。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍暑期夏令营计划； 第二步，详述自己的计划； 第三步，表达自己的期待并且相信会玩得愉快。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all 首先 ②enjoy oneself 玩得愉快 ③each other 彼此，相互 [高分句型] ①First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.（so that引导目的状语从句） ②In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.（which引导非限制性定语从句） 15．例文： My Dream High School Life My senior high school life is just around the corner. I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’m working hard in order to enter my dream high school. My dream school is very big and beautiful. There will be fresh air and many green trees. It is clean and picturesque. I can do different things in different buildings. I can play basketball because I think it is meaningful. It can make me strong. I hope the lessons there will be lively and make me eye-opening. I can do more experiments in my lessons. They will be inspiring. After class, I can take part in different kinds of activities in different clubs to develop my hobbies. Moreover, I hope I can make more friends in the new school and study together. I hope I can go to my dream high school, live healthily and study happily. I hope my dream will come true someday. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己梦想中的高中，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍想进入梦想的高中； 第二步，介绍梦想的高中的具体情况，包括校园、各种活动以及课堂等； 第三步，表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to为了 ②different kinds of各种各样的 ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①I can play basketball because I think it is meaningful. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②I hope I can make more friends in the new school and study together. (省略that的宾语从句) 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$