第三部分 专题四 书面表达-【走好高中第1步】2024年初高中教材衔接英语

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(you) what you want every 专题四 书面表达 考点二 应用文 ■初中知识再现 题型解读 考点一 话题作文 通知、便条、日记、贺卡、电话留言、值日报告、 题型解读 发言稿、E-mail,书信、请假条等都是应用文。近年 话题作文也叫提示作文,它要求根据汉语意思 来中考应用作文主要是根据中文或者英文提示写 和英语提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英语 书信、日记等。 短文。话题作文要求学生根据所给的提示,展开合 写作技法 理的想象,运用一定的语言逻辑,使用正确的语法 1.确定格式 和句法,将整篇文字用英语表达出来。 应用文的格式一般比较固定。如发言稿通常 写作技法 开头都会出现 Good morning/afternoon evening. mydearfriends!接下来是正文,最后是结束语。 1.认真审题,看清要求 2.确定内容 做书面表达题要认真仔细地阅读有关的提示,弄 根据提示内容,列出写作要点,不能缺少提示 清试题提供的所有信息,它包含哪些情景、内容和要 词或者参考词汇。不同的文体用语也要适当把握。 求,要明确题目有哪些要点,且要点必须齐备。要考 比如发言稿要求语言简洁、条理清晰 虑用哪种体裁,是记叙文、说明文,还是应用文;用第 3.确定人称和时态 几人称来表述;选择什么时态。这样,思路才能清晰。 应用文通常用第一人称的形式,并且时态通常 2.列出要点,准确表达 是一般现在时。 话题作文通常会给出一些汉语提示(有时也会 考点三 看图作文 给出一些英语参考词汇)。首先,应认真阅读提示 题型解读 内容,依次列出写作要点,注意不要漏掉所给出的 看图作文也是中考常考的一种题型,旨在考查考 提示内容;其次,所给的参考词汇也要全部用上。 生的观察分析能力和语言的综合运用能力。看图作 对以表格、图表出现的描述文进行写作时,要读懂 文是通过对图片的观察来获取语言素材的,即根据图 所隐含的信息,分析文章难点,确定如何去写。在 片呈现的内容,结合所给的汉语提示或英语提示来措 理解好中(英)文提示的基础上,认真选词,用准确 述图画的内容,使意思连贯、通顺,并符合图意。 写作技法 的英文句子把文章的意思完整地表达出来。有时 一个句子可能会有几种表达方式,要根据实际情况 1.仔细审题,弄清题目要求,明确写作的中心思想 应将所给的全部图画或图表连贯起来看,明确 选用最有把握的一种。遇到自己不是十分确定的 所给图画展示的是何种情景,并结合汉语或英语的 词句,可采用变通的方法,切忌使用难词、难句。 提示,明确图画所要表达的中心内容。 3.注意过渡,流畅成文 2.仔细观察图画,确定具体细节要素,列出写 依据写作提纲,完成短文。在写作的过程中,要 作提纲 注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用 通常图画表达的是一个完整的故事情节,如故 表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过 事发生的时间、地点、主人公、事情、结局等。根据 渡平稳、自然流畅。 图画及提示内容列出写作要点,再根据列出的要点 第三部分 高中题型 确定使用哪些词汇、句型或惯用表达法。 3.明确时态,理顺思路,完成表达 根据图画和提示的内容,确定表达应需用哪种 时态;依据写作提纲,进一步理顺写作思路,将图与 图之间的内在联系,运用一定的语言逻辑连接起 Now the environment around us becomes 来,把形象生动的图像信息转化为相应的文字进行 better and better. Welcome to my hometown 表达,并注意写作过程应详略得当 one day. ■过渡练习 Yours. Li Hua Passage 1 Passage 3 假如你是高一学生李华,你昨天收到好友 假如你是李华,你的朋友Tom跟他最好的朋 Tom的来信,他说自己上了高中以后遇到诸多学 友因观念不同吵架了,所以他现在非常沮丧。请给 习和生活问题:很郁闷、孤独;学习压力大;作业完 他写一篇建议信。内容如下: 不成:上课听不懂等想辍学。请你给他提些建议提 1.表明写信目的。 供帮助。 2.修复友谊的方法。 要点: 注意: 1.和同学友好相处,多交友,多参加课外活动。 1.词数80左右。 2.找到适当的放松方式 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3.努力学习,课前做好准备。 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 注意: Dear Tom. 1.字数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.可紧扣主题适当发挥。 辍学drop out of school Yours. Li Hua 高中知识对接 高中英语中的书面表达是一种指导式作文,它 不允许我们自主立意,漫无边际地发挥,而是有着 一定的设限。这类题目主要考查我们的交际能力 Passage 2 和语言综合运用能力。新高考书面表达考查形式 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike得知你们 主要有三种:应用文、读后续写和概要写作。应用 开展了“做生态小公民,建设美丽家乡”的活动,他 文涉及的范围比较广,包括广告、通知、演讲稿、新 来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节,请给Mike 闻报道、书信等。读后续写是提供一篇350词以内 写一封回信向他描述你(们)曾经做过的一件事或 的语言材料,原文多是情节丰富的记叙文,要求考 参与的一次活动。 生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写(15( 要求: 词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接。 1.内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你 情节和结构完整的短文。概要写作是一种“阅读十 的感受; 写作”的复合型任务,测试学生的阅读理解、概括归 2.词数80~100。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 纳和书面表达方面的综合能力。选材上,提供一篇 Dear Mike. 350词以内的短文,一般以说明文、议论文和记叙 I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our 文为主,要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。 environment protection activities. To be an 书面表达应用文是历年高考英语的重点主观 ecological eitizen(生态公民),we didagoodjob. 测试题之一,它有利于考查学生运用英语语言知识 Last 的综合能力,这种综合能力包括从单词拼写、词语 英语 初高中教材衔接 搭配、词法结构到语法,从遗词造句、把握要领、谋 自主训练 篇布局到修辞风格等。该题在英语卷中占40分, 约占全卷分值30%,是重要题型。这就需要我们在 Passage 1 平时多积累的同时,还要掌握以下解题技巧。 假如你是李华,你收到朋友Tom的来信,他告 1.审题 诉你他不适应高一英语老师的课,在学习高中英语 动笔之前,必须认真审题,分析命题意图。有 方面有些困难,以至于跟不上其他同学,感到非常 的考生唯恐时间不够,急于成文,不认真审题,结果 着急。请给他写一封电子邮件,给他提一些建议。 写出的文章抓不住重点,杂乱无章,缺乏逻辑性。 注意: 其实审题的过程是一个思考加工的过程,并不是浪 1.词数80左右; 费时间。在审题的过程中,考生可以根据题目确定 2.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 文章体裁,考虑文章结构,内容。把与题目有关的 参考词汇:适应adaptto 材料分析、整理加以取舍,这样初步形成这篇文章 Dear Tom. 的大致框架,这在很大程度上关系到整篇文章的 I have got your letter 成败。 2.拟提纲抓要点,列提纲。依据格式要求和内 容提示,分清主次,理顺关系,抓住要点,列出提纲 因考试时间有限,宜用简易英文提纲。 Yours. (1)文章的主要要点要有逻辑地结合起来,使 LiHua 其结构严谨,内容连贯,层次分明,分好段落,设计 Passage 2 好文章的开头和结尾。同时要有意在句子之间使 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Iack正在为即 用一些过渡性词语(比如表示因果、条件、时间等逻 将到来的考试焦虑不已,严重影响了生活和学习, 辑关系的词汇或结构)。高考高分作文的共性就是 为此写信向你求助。根据以下要点,用英语给他回 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧 一封信,提出一些建议。 凑,意思连贯,给人以一气呵成之感。恰当地使用 1.制定复习计划,树立信心。 过渡词可以使文章结构紧凑,过渡自然,避负脱节 2.多与老师和同学谈心。 现象。 3.坚持锻炼身体 (2)语言表达。新的评分标准鼓励学生尽量使 4.保持良好睡眠。 用较复杂的结构和高级词汇。语言要准确,长短句 注意:写作词数80词左右;可适当增加细节 结合。学着使用一些高级词汇,为文章增色。评价 以使行文连贯; 一篇文章的好坏,一条重要的原则就是“上下文连 Dear Jack. 贯”,要让评卷者有一种通篇流畅、一气呵成的感 觉。可采用下列策略: ①使用高级语法与句型,如:名词性从句,分词 作状语和定语,还有如不定式、强调句、感叹句、倒 装句。 常见词的复合结构,如“with十复合宾语结构” 等等,这些形式来提高文章的档次,写出亮点句子。 ②使用过渡性词汇,增加文章的逻辑性与连贯 性。因为过度词可使文章结构更紧凑,上下文更连 Yours. 贯,逻辑性、可读性更强。比如常见的过渡性词语 Li Hua 有表列举的first,second,third,next,then等等;表 Passage 3 因果的because of,thanks to等。 假设你是高一学生李华,应学生会的邀请,写 ③为了避免重复和连接上下文,多用指代词 一篇文章向同学们推荐一项在校的课外体育运动, 对于出现过的非关键次和短语,常用指代词来代 旨在激发同学们的运动热情,内容包括; 替,保持文章的简洁,使文章跟紧凑 1.运动的名称; 第三部分 高中题型 2.推荐的理由; Dear Tony, 3.温馨的提示。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Passage 6 假定你是李华,你的英国笔友David最近总是 失眠,为此他感到非常苦恼,特发来邮件向你寻求 建议。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括: Passage 4 1.养成良好的睡前习惯; 假设你是李华,得知你的美国笔友Peter暑假 2.保持健康的饮食和进行适当的锻炼; 要来中国旅游并在北京停留一天。有两条游览路 3.保持乐观的心态。 线让他犹豫不决:(1)长城一日游;(2)天安门广场 参考词汇:insomnia失眠 故官一日游。Peter想征询你的意见。请你根据以 注意: 下内容,给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括:(1)欢迎 1.词数80左右 他来北京旅游;(2)推荐路线并说明理由;(3)提出 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 可以陪他游览一天。 Dear David. 注意: 1.词数80左右,已给出部分不记人总词数; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, How are things going? Yours. Lihua Passage 7 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行读写,使之 构成一个完整的故事。 Several years ago I had given some cash to a girl I met by chance because she needed some work Yours. done to her car, About a month later she sent me a Li Hua card thanking me for helping out and repaid me. Passage 5 which I had never expected from her. The $ 200 假定你是李华,最近你的美国朋友Tony在与 she gave me was nice to have, but honestly was 父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题,他心 not needed. 情不佳,来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要 About a week after I had been given this 点给他写一封回信,内容包括; cash, I ate out. Then I noticed a homeless man 1.安慰朋友; sitting at a table next to me. He was taking shelter 2.提出改善家庭关系的建议; from the terrible weather we were having at the 3.表达祝愿。 time, but was warned by the waitress that he 注意: couldn't be there if he didn't order anything. He 1.词数80左右; asked how much a cup of coffee was, counted the 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; few dollars he had in his pocket, and unwillingly 3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数 ordered coffee so that he could stay inside. 英语 初高中教材衔接 Hearing all of this, I thought of the $ 200 and could not go out to work, and their little boy. cash and felt this could be someone I could help. I The little boy-his name was Bernard-had interested went up to sit beside him and told him that if he her very much. felt comfortable accepting my offer, I would buy “I wish you could see him," she said to her him whatever food on the menu he wanted. He own children, John, Harry, and Clara. "He is refused because he didn't want to trouble me and such a help to his mother. He wants very much to put me out of money. earn some money, but I don't see what he 注意: cando.” 1.续写词数应为150左右; After their mother left the room, the children 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 sat thinking about Bernard. "I wish we could help I strongly suggested he accept my offer. him to earn money,"said Clara. "His family is suffering so much." “So do I." said Harry."We really should do something to assist them." For some moments, John said nothing, but. suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried,"I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help When I stood up to leave, he thanked me for accomplish(完成).” the meal and the conversation. The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one."I tell you what we can do," said John."You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花). and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it." Passage 8 Paragraph 1: 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she 构成一个完整的故事。 thought it was a good one, too. The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline. some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs, Meredith was a most kind and Paragraph 2 thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time With everything ready, Bernard started out visiting the poor. She knew they had problems on his new business. and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him参考答案☒ 一般过去时，由by可知，用被动语态，且为一般过去时，主语 And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school I是单数，图此空格处是was accepted,故填was accepted. activities.That can make you happy.Secondly,why not 答案：was accepted choose some proper ways to relax?In my opinion.taking l0.解析：考查介词。句意：我将永远感谢梅根。be thankful exercise.watching TV or playing computer games can help t0s,是圆定短语，意为“对某人表示感谢”，因此空格处 you relax yourself.Thirdly,I agree that you should study 是介词t0,故填t0. hard and have a good preparation for every class so that you 答案：to can understand the teacher. Passage 8 I hope that you will find these tips useful. 【语篇解读】这是一篇说明文，主要讲述了梦想之于我们 人生的重要意义，并阐明了实现梦想的方法。 Yours. Li Hua 1,解析：考查非谓语动诃。句意：这些梦想可以是非常宏大 的，比如莪得诺贝尔奖。根据空格前的介词s可知，城处 Passage 2 应填写动名词形式，作实语，故填winning 【参考范文】 答案：winning Dear Mike. 2.解析：考查名词单复数。句意：梦想也可以很小，比如威为班 I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our 级里的最优秀的学生之一。根据空格前的修饰性短语oeo environment protection activities.To be an ecological 可知，该处应填写名词复数形式，作表语，故填students5。 citizen,we did a good job.Last Sunday,I went to our 答案：students community with my friends to give the people there a 3,解析：考查冠词。句意：溴大利亚作家安德鲁·马修斯 speech.It was about how to protect our environment.After 诉我们，实现梦想是生活中最大的挑战。此处为Andrew the speech,they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike Matthews的同位语，用于补充说明Andrew Matthews是 instead of driving to cut down air pollution.To cut down 一位作家，故为泛指，且Australian的发音以元音音素 waste pollution.they should take bags to go shopping.And [o:]开头，故填an。 they also knew to put litter in different bins.Finally,we 答案：an called them up.'called on them to make a difference to our 4.解析：考查形容词最高级。句意：溴大利亚作家安德鲁· environment together.We were tired but happy that day. 马修断告诉我们，实现梦想是生活中最大的挑战。根据 Now the environment around us becomes better and 句意可知，此处表示：实现梦想是一平子当中“最大的”挑 better.Welcome to my hometown one day. 战，故填biggest。 Yours. 答案：biggest Li Hus 5,解析：考查介词。句意：你可能会认为自己不擅长某些学 Passage 3 科。be good at为周定搭配，意为“撞长某事”。故填at。 【参考范文】 答案：t 6,解析：考查形容词否定前镫。句意：你可能会认为自己不 Dear Tom, 擅长某些学科，这样你是不可能成功的。此处应使用形 Learning that you are having an argument with your 容词作表语，且此处表示“对自己没有信心，是不可能成 best friend because of different opinions,and you are upset 功的”，故填impossible。 about it.I'm writing to give you some suggestions on how 答案：impossible to settle the conflicts with our friends. 7.解析：考查宾语从句连词。句意：你要做的第一件事，就 First of all,if I were you.I would calm down to get 是铭记你的梦想。结合语境可知，此处引导宾语从句，从 the disagreements settled.Besides,communicating with him 句缺少表语，应使用连接代词what。故填what face to face is a great way to clear up the misunderstanding 答案：what between you.Finally.It is of great importance for you to 8解析：考查代词。句意：每天告诉自己你想要实现的目 put yourself in his shoes.which can help you have a better 标。此处宾语指代“你”，和新使句主语“你”为同一人，应 understanding of him.I'm sure if you take my advice,you 用反身代词，故填yourself。. will win real friendship.Best wishes! 答案：yourself Yours. 9,解析：考查连词。句意：通向梦想的道路并不会一帆风 Li Hua 顺，但最大的因难来自你的内心。结合语境可知，上文提 自主训练 到“实现梦想，外部的围难有很多”，结合空格后“最大的 Passage I 挑战来自于你自身”可知，此处前后句为转折关系，应 【参考范文】 用but。 Dear Tom. 答案：but 10.解析：考查非谓语动词。句意：这一点是好的，因为你有 I have got your letter.I have known you have some difficulty in learning English because you can not adapt to 机会学习到更有用的东西，并且发现新的爱好，解读句 子结构及句意可知，在句中应用非谓语形式作后置定 what your English teacher teaches and you can't catch up 语。被修饰的名词是chance时，惯常用动词不定式作后 with others in your class.Don't worry about it.I think the 置定语，意为“学习新东西的机会”，故填to learn. following may be of help to you. 答案：to learn Firstly,you'd better listen to the teacher carefully in 专题四书面表达 class.You can ask your English teacher to explain what you 过渡练习 can not understand after class.Secondly,confidence is very Passage I important.You should be confident and have faith in 【参考范文】 yourself.Finally,it is a good way for you to communicate Dear Tom. with your classmates and get some advice on English.Just I am very sorry to hear that you are having trouble with as a saying goes,"Nothing is difficult if you put your heart your middle school life.However.the situation is very easy to into it".I hope you will make progress in it. change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you. Best wishes! First of all.you should be friendly to anyone who you Yours. meet at the new school and try to make friends with them. Li Hua 83 )英语 初高中教材衔接 Passage 2 I hope these suggestions will help.Looking forward to 【参考范文】 your reply. Dear Jack. Yours. I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous Li Hua before an important exam.I'd like to give you some advice. Passage 6 Firstly,make careful plans before exams to master 【参考范文】 what you have learned completely.It will help you build up Dear David, your confidence.Secondly,take proper exercise regularly. I'm sorry to hear that you are suffering from insomnia. which will help you keep healthy and energetic.What's I'd like to give you some advice to help you get over it. more,you can talk with your teachers or classmates after First of all,I suggest you develop some good habits, class.Last but not least.don't stay up late studying.It is such as drinking a glass of warm milk and listening to light very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to musie before going to bed.Secondly,you should keep a be energetic during the day. balanced diet and eat more fresh fruit and vegetables,which I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions can contribute to better health and better sleep.Besides. into consideration. You'd better take some physical exercise regularly.Last but Yours. not least,it is very important to have an optimistic and Li Hua peaceful state of mind. Passage 3 I hope my advice is of some help to you and you'll get 【参考范文】 well soon. Regular exercise is part of a healthy life.It's my honor Yours. to recommend long-distance running to you.which has a lot Li Hua of benefits. Passage 7 Running will help you get fit and prevent diseases.Like 【参考范文】 any exereise,it increases the flow of blood and oxygen to Paragraph 1: your brain.At the same time,it's good for your eyes after a I strongly suggested he accept my offer.I told him whole day of study.It also strengthens your immune system everyone deserves a warm meal.He eventually accepted it and reduces the risk of health problems.What's more,if but just ordered something simple.During the meal,we had you feel down,going for a run can cheer yourself up. a conversation-I learned he was 45 and had previously If you're new to running,here are some tips for you worked as a driver.Unfortunately,about a year earlier he a pair of good running shoes is necessary.It's important to fell while working and badly hurt his back.He was no warm up and cool down properly before and after running. longer able to work until his back recovered. Passage 4 Paragraph 2: 【参考范文】 When I stoud up to leave.he thanked me for the meal Dear Peter. and the conversation.I shook his hand,looked him in the How are things going? eye,and handed him the 200.I told him he was a good I'm so excited to hear that you are coming to Beijing man who had had some terrible luck and nothing more.He this winter vacation.I just can't wait to see you. burst into tears and asked for my address or phone number Regarding your two choices of how to spend the day. so he could repay me some day.I told him that I was once in I'd like to recommend the second,a one-day tour of the a bad spot and someone helped me.and that if he wanted to Forbidden City and the Tian'anmen Square.As the largest repay me,just try to do as much as possible to help museum of culture and art in China.and the centre of the someone else who needed help. Beijing city,the two scenic spots have been regarded as Passage 8 must-see attractions.especially for those who will visit 【参考范文】 Beijing for only one day.Don't worry about the tour guide.I When Mrs.Meredith heard of John's idea,she can accompany you throughout the day.We're sure to have thought it uus a good one,tou.So.they went to the local a good time. supermarket together.They bought a bag of corn and some I hope my suggestion will be of some help to you.If you special bags for popcorn.When they got home.they made a have any other questions.just write to me. Yours. lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.With the popcorn.they went to Bernard's home.They told Bernard Li Hua how to sell the popcorn.Bernard and his parents were very Passage 5 【参考范文】 grateful.And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family. Dear Tony. I am sorry to hear about your communication problems With everything ready.Bernard started out on his nete business.He took the popcorn around to the houses and with your parents,but I know how you feel since I've had similar problems before.Here are my suggestions and I sold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then,he wanted to be self-dependent.Therefore.he asked Mrs. hope things can get better soon. First,let's put ourselves in their shoes.Parents love us Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn.After that, and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem not only did he sell popcorn,but he also added cream and obvious to them.Besides,when we share our problems with salt to the popcorn to make it taste better.Bernard grew up them,we often look for a listening ear and an open heart, to be a remarkable man.He did not forget the help of not a solution.So.what you need to do is tell them about Meredith's family,and he also did what he could to help this difference and put trust in them. those in need.