05 北京卷 (2024-2020) 近五年高考真题满分作文汇编-2024年高考英语作文真题深度解读及五年优秀范文汇编

北京卷 2024年高考英语作文真题 【北京卷】 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【文本解读】 2024年是中华人民共和国成立75周年，是实现“十四五”规划目标任务的关键一年，也是全面落实教育强国战略部署的重要一年。2024年高考英语（北京卷）试题（以下简称“2024年高考英语试题”）及时回应时代新呼唤，对标建设教育强国新要求，试题命制坚持“四个突出，四个考出来”的命题理念，以《普通高中英语课程标准（2017年版2020年修订）》和高校人才选拔要求为依据，结合中学英语教学实际，守正创新，稳中求进，全面落实立德树人根本任务，凸显价值引领，强化试题“培根铸魂”的育人功能；充分发挥试题的教学导向作用，彰显新课程理念，坚持“素养立意”，促进学生的全面发展。 此试题以情境为载体，依托人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题，创设了学习情境、生活情境、社会情境和学术情境，在突显时代感的情境中考查学生理解和表达意义、情感、观点的能力。 同时，试题突出语用，考查学生在真实场景中使用语言与交际对象进行交流的能力，实现在情境中认识问题、分析问题和解决问题的核心要求。 试题凸显真实性和任务性。试题在选材上把语言在现实生活中的使用情况作为一个重要质量控制指标，试卷中所用素材均来自外文期刊，语言地道，题材丰富，体裁多样。同时，试题设计依托情景和任务，尽可能接近现实生活中语言使用的实际情况。 【思路点拨】 本次高考英语北京卷的书面表达题目要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份，给外国好友Jim提供关于向校报Asia Today栏目投稿的建议。具体背景是，得知今年新中国成立75周年，Jim打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，并向李华询问相关建议。 第一步：审题 本题要求考生以李华的身份，针对Jim的投稿需求，给出关于介绍中国发展成就的建议，并解释为何选择这些内容。 第二步：写作提纲开头：简短问候并感谢Jim的询问。主体： 建议投稿内容：中国的经济增长，特别是近几十年的快速发展。科技进步，如高铁、移动支付、电子商务等领域的创新。环保成就，比如绿化工程、减少污染等。 理由阐述：经济增长显示了中国的强大活力和市场潜力。科技进步反映了中国的创新能力和对未来的投资。环保成就是中国对全球环境责任的体现。 结尾：表达对Jim投稿的期待，并希望他的文章能够引起广泛关注。 第三步：选词组句可能用到的词语及中文解释： Economic growth: 经济增长Technological advancements: 科技进步 Environmental protection achievements: 环保成就Rapid development: 快速发展 Innovation: 创新Global environmental responsibility: 全球环境责任 【满分范文】 范文一 Dear Jim,    Glad to hear from you. As you mentioned in the letter, it's a good choice writing the great achievements of China for the column, the Asia Today, of your school newspaper.    The past 75 years have witnessed the development of China. Instead of involving all the aspects, you'd better focus on the ones related to people's life. Transportation and technology are the suitable topics that your teachers and schoolmates may be concerned about. High-speed trains are the most persuading proof, combining the transportation and technology. Not only have they shortened the exact time between places when people travel, but they get people closer to one another. That's really worth introducing.    Hope your article will be a marvelous window for people around you to get insights into China. (127 words)  Yours,  Li Hua 范文二 Dear Jim, I hope you are doing well. Delighted to hear that you are writing an article for AsiaToday about the 75th anniversary of New China, I am writing to share my suggestions. It is a good option to write about China's fast economic growth. Over the past 75 years, China has changed from a farming country to the world's second-largest economy, showing how quickly China has developed. Another helpful strategy is focusing on China's amazing new technology, such as high-speed trains, space exploration, and renewable energy, all of which show that China is now a leader in technology and innovation. If I were you, I would discuss China's efforts to reduce poverty, which have lifted millions of people out of poverty and improved the lives of many people. These points not only highlight important achievements but also help readers understand how China has become such an important country.I hope these suggestions help! If you need more information, feel free to ask. Best regards, Li Hua 范文三 Dear Jim, I am glad to learn that you are scheduled to contribute to your school newspaper on the 75th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China. I suggest your focusing on China's economic growth, poverty alleviation and prosperity, and technological advancements to introduce China's development achievements. With the historic leap in economic power, the past two decades have seen China's rise and transformation into a global economic powerhouse. China's comprehensive victory in precise poverty alleviation has contributed Chinese wisdom and Chinese solutions to the global poverty reduction, writing a brilliant chapter in the history of human anti-poverty. China's remarkable achievements in scientific and technological innovation, such as AI and space exploration,have won worldwide attention. I hope my advice is of some help to you. Looking forward to your article! (131 words) Yours, Li Hua 范文四 Dear Jim, Hardly could I hide my excitement when hearing that your intend to contribute to "Asia Today" and showcase China's achievements. I can’t wait to share my my suggestion for your submission. First and foremost, focusing on the economic growth and technological advancements China has acquired over the past 75 years is a must. Additionally, it is also a fabulous idea to highlight the Belt and Road Initiative, which has fostered global trade and cooperation. Last but not least, don't miss out on the green development and poverty alleviation efforts China has made to significantly improve the lives of millions of Chinese people. Not only are these topics central to China's development but they also resonate with global themes of sustainability and progress. I am firmly convinced that they will provide a comprehensive view of China's journey and its impact on the world stage. Yours, Li Hua 范文五 Dear Jim, Thanks for reaching out about your Asia Today article.  In celebration of the 75th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China, I recommend highlighting China's rapid economic development, technological innovations such as e-commerce and mobile payments, and our notable environmental conservation efforts. These topics not only reflect China's growth but also demonstrate our global environmental responsibility.  Your article is sure to captivate readers. Good luck with your writing! Warm regards, Li Hua 2023年高考英语作文真题 【北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【文本解读】 立足北京，讲好“中国故事”。2023年高考英语试题立足北京、放眼中国、展望全球，有利于把学生培养成具有中国情怀和国际视野的社会主义建设者和接班人。例如，书面表达第二节以“绿色北京”为主题创设情境，引导考生关注北京的绿色发展，关注中国的生态文明建设，认同“绿水青山就是金山银山”的发展理念，激发考生热爱首都、热爱祖国的真挚情怀，帮助考生坚定“四个自信”，用英语讲好“美丽中国”的故事。 “绿色北京”的活动可以选择节能家电、重复利用纸箱、坚持绿色出行……这些绿色生活新选择正在成为潮流新风尚。之前为促进绿色消费，引导首都市民践行绿色低碳生活方式，北京市节能环保中心主办了“2022北京绿色生活季”活动。活动以“绿色消费，低碳生活”为主题，包含绿享生活、绿动京城、绿畅出行、绿唤未来、绿游山水、绿助光盘、绿色金融和绿碳积分等八个板块。这要求我们时刻关注北京当地的重大时事活动，对于我们扩展绿色北京的社团活动提供素材。 【思路点拨】 1、首先，我们需要考虑活动形式。可以建议组织一次绿色环保主题的社区清洁活动，邀请志愿者一起清理公园、街道或者河流等公共场所。可以提供相关的清洁工具和垃圾袋，让参与者亲身体验环保的重要性。 2、其次，关于活动内容，可以提议进行一次绿色生活讲座或者展览，邀请专家学者或者环保组织代表来分享绿色生活的理念和实践。可以涵盖节能减排、垃圾分类、植树造林等方面的内容，让参与者了解和学习如何在日常生活中实践绿色环保。 3、此外，还可以建议组织一次绿色旅游活动，带领参与者去参观北京的自然景点或者生态农场，让他们亲身感受大自然的美丽与脆弱，增强环保意识。 【满分范文】 范文一 Dear Jim, I hope this email finds you well. It’s great to hear about your plan for a “Green Beijing” themed club activity. I’d be happy to give you some suggestions. For the activity format, I recommend organizing a “Green Beijing” campaign. This can include a series of events such as tree planting, clean-up drives, and educational sessions on environmental conservation. Additionally, you could consider organizing a “Green Fair” where local businesses and organizations can showcase eco-friendly products and services. In terms of the activity content, it would be beneficial to collaborate with local environmental organizations and experts to deliver informative presentations on topics like recycling, sustainable energy, and reducing carbon footprint. You could also arrange visits to eco-friendly sites in Beijing, such as parks and gardens, to raise awareness about the importance of preserving green spaces. I hope these suggestions will be helpful for your club activity. Best of luck with your planning! Yours, Li Hua 范文二 Dear Jim,     I’m thrilled to hear that you’re organizing the “Green Beijing” event, and I’d like to offer some suggestions for the activity content, which includes promoting green travel and garbage classification.     To highlight the importance of green travel, you can organize an event of riding shared bikes together. With the same clothes and banners “Green Beijing”, the event is sure to attract citizens’ attention and raise their awareness of green travel. Regarding garbage classification, If I were you, I would organize an educational workshop, where relevant experts can be invited to discuss the impact of improper waste disposal on the environment and enlighten us how to better classify garbage.     I hope these suggestions help you to plan your event more effectively and increase environmental awareness in Beijing. Please feel free to let me know if you need any further support. Best regards, Li Hua 范文三 Dear Jim, Your "Green Beijing" event is an exciting prospect! I applaud your endeavor to promote environmental consciousness. As a Beijinger, I've observed our city's commitment to sustainability, particularly within our educational institutions. The crux of my suggestion is a 'Green Campus Visit' at a renowned Beijing university, such as Tsinghua or Peking University. Participants could engage in an educational tour around the campus, learning about their ongoing green projects such as energy-efficient buildings and solar power systems. This can be followed by an interactive session with students who lead these initiatives, providing insights and sparking intellectual conversations on sustainability. Looking forward to witnessing our combined effort in promoting "Green Beijing". Yours,  Li Hua 范文四 Dear Jim, I am glad to learn that you are planning a club activity themed with "Green Beijing". Here are my suggestions. It always comes first to invite a celebrated expert for a lecture on environmental protection. To act, after all, we should think first. Activities like garbage picking and waste classification in famous scenic spots in Beijing are also preferable, which will promote the ecological concept of health and environmental protection to tourists with practical actions. Plus why not choose green travel so that you can contribute to Beijing's environmental protection? I hope my advice is helpful to you. (98 words) Yours, Li Hua 范文五 Dear Jim, I am very delighted to learn that you are planning a club activity themed “ Green Beijing” and seeking some advice from me. I am writing in response to your inquiry. As we all know, green life styles have deeply rooted in Beijing recently, so in campus, I would like to suggest a green way of “clear your plate campaign” in canteen to save food. Outside campus, it is highly recommended that green transportation to and from campus by walking or by bike or by public transportation instead of driving. Besides, some campaigns like adopting recycling bags, planting more trees to lead a low carbon life, choosing the more energy saving electric facilities are also part of this community activity. I believe you can successfully host this activity and achieve your intended purpose of promoting green way of life. I would like to offer my tips at any time if needed. And hope one day you can drop in Beijing again to experience the green life in person. Yours, Li Hua 2022年高考英语作文真题 【北京卷】 【2022年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因； 2．交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【文本解读】 主题语境：人与社会---人际沟通（良好的人际关系） 话题选择：邀请朋友在线分享英语写作经验 语篇类型：邀请信 邀请信是邀请对方参与某种活动或邀请对方做某事。邀请信最重要的就是自然流畅，对象不同，信中的表达方式也不同。比如你邀请某位老师组织活动，如果是不认识的老师，就要说下自己是谁，有什么事情，要显得很尊敬对方。再比如你邀请朋友参加某个活动，你已经知道对方是谁了，那自然没必要自我介绍，语气可以显得活泼一些。 【思路点拨】 （1）首段：开门见山说明写作目的。 （2）主体： a. 具体交代邀请原因； b. 邀请内容：活动性质、时间、地点、日期； c. 有关要求和希望。 （3）尾段： a. 再次盛情邀请； b. 希望尽快答复。 【满分范文】 范文一 Dear Jim， I hope you're well. I'd like to invite you for an online English writing exchange with my high school classmates. We're eager to improve our English writing skills, and your native English perspective would be invaluable. The specific content of this exchange would involve two aspects. In the first place, you could share insights on effective writing techniques, grammar, and style, which would be incredibly enriching and beneficial for us.  Besides, we'd love for you to review our essays and give constructive feedback, which will enable us to learn from our mistakes and make necessary improvements, helping us become more proficient writers in English. The exchange is scheduled for next Wednesday at 8:00 PM via video. I'm looking forward to your response and the opportunity to learn from your expertise. Thank you for considering this invitation! Yours Li Hua 范文二 Dear Jim, Knowing that you have got a good grade in the writing, I’m writing to invite you to do a online experience sharing about the English composition. The experience sharing is to be held on the Monday morning and it will last for an hour. In the sharing procedure, you can introduce how to organize the structure of a composition better, because some of us can’t do it well. Besides, you can also give some suggestions about how to connect the sentences logically, which will lead students to express their thoughts better. At last, you should tell me which platform you will choose to give the sharing ahead of time and we should leave some time to answer the questions from my classmates. Sincerely hope you can accept the invitation and give us a impressive experience sharing. Yours Li Hua 范文三 Dear Jim, How's it going？I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing because our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically，how to develop a paragraph，and how to structure an essay?The talk will last about an hour， and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 范文四 Dear Jim, I’m writing to invite you to an internet-based talk about how to improve English writing. The talk is thought important for us Chinese students, of whom most are poor in writing a composition in English. Therefore, we hope you, a native speaker, would like to give us some advice on what we can do well with our English compositions. The online talk is scheduled to take place between 5:00 pm and 6:30 pm this Saturday, and if you will, I will send you the link to Tencent Meeting, an video app comparable to Zoom. I would appreciate it so much if we could have you in the talk. Yours, Li Hua 范文五 Dear Jim, I am writing to invite you to give us an online lecture on English writing. Since the final examination is coming, some students are still struggling with writing an English essay. Things expected to be covered are as follows. First, you may give some general guidance on how to write English essays. Then, you could use some real examples to give some specific guidance on organizing structures as well as wording and phrasing. Additionally, it would be great if you could give us some practical tips on how to improve writing in our day-to-day learning. As for the time, I'm wondering if you are available at 3 pm this Friday afternoon. If so, I will send the link to the online meeting to you in advance. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 2021年高考英语作文真题 【北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【文本解读】 这封电子邮件属于个人道歉及建议类书信文体。在这类文体中，作者需要以一种真诚、礼貌且直接的方式向收件人表达歉意，并由于某种原因无法履行先前的约定。同时，为了维护双方的关系和计划的延续性，作者还需要提出一个或多个合理的替代方案，并解释这些方案为何是可行的或更合适的。 【思路点拨】 【满分范文】 范文一 Dear Jim, I am writing to make a sincere apology to you that I will not be able to attend the photographic exhibition which is scheduled to take place this Saturday. I do feel bad about informing you on such a short notice,but I need to have a physical checkup this Saturday afternoon and I almost forgot. To visit the exhibition, first you need to take the bus and then change subway lines twice. It is kind of complicated. Considering that you have only been in Beijing for a week and are likely to have a problem getting around, I could ask my cousin, who was born and bred in Beijing, to go with you to the exhibition venue. Not only is he familiar with Beijing, he is fluent in English as well. In other words, he could be your perfect tour guide. If my cousin is not available on Saturday, as a last resort, we might go to the photographic exhibition some other time. I hear that it will be held again next month. Anyway, I am sorry again for not being able to go with you this time, but do not hesitate to1contact me if I can be of any further help. Yours, Li Hua 范文二 Dear Jim, I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to join you this weekend as planned. Unfortunately,I've encountered an unexpected family matter due to my grandfather falling ill, which requires my immediate presence at home. I hope you can understand the situation. As an alternative, I suggest that we reschedule our outing to the following weekend. This way, I'll be able to fulfill my commitments and ensure we have a more enjoyable time together without any distractions.  I value our friendship and would really appreciate your understanding. Looking forward to your response, and once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused. Yours, Li Hua 范文三 Dear Jim, I’m writing the letter to show my sincere apology to you for not being able to go out with you together at this weekend. I knew that we’ve made the plan but unfortunately, there are something unexpected happened and I had to change the plan. I began to cough yesterday morning, and I went to see a doctor. She told me that it was a so bad cold that I would have to stay at home for a few days. Hope you will accept my apology and we can make another appointment. How about go shopping next weekend because I really like to spend some time with you. I’m sorry about the inconvenience again. Yours, Li Hua 范文四 Dear Jim, I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble. How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend. In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 范文五 Dear Jim, I am terribly sorry to inform you that I will fail to go out with you as scheduled this weekend because I sprained my ankle while playing basketball yesterday. The doctor advised me not to walk as much as possible to avoid swelling and pain in my injury. Now I have to attend the class with the help of my father or classmates, and cannot but rest in bed on weekends. My apologies again, I promise to go outing with you after my recovery, preferably doing something with little physical activity. Looking forward to your reply. (96 words) Yours, Li Hua 2020年高考英语作文真题 【北京卷】 【2020年北京卷】 第一节 应用文 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括： 1. 条件及要求； 2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【文本解读】 书面表达继续保持选择性和开放性的特点，为考生展示个性、思维的多样性提供了广阔空间。 应用文题目要求中涉及外籍指导教师的条件和要求，但是具体的内容并未罗列，这需要考生展开积极的、合理的、有逻辑的思考完成写作任务，为考生提供了展示自我能力的机会。情景作文需要考生不仅具备较扎实的语言功底和表达能力，也需要考生展开想象，提供合理的细节内容。 【思路点拨】 应用文首段，需要我们做到：打招呼+描述题干+写信目的。这样写的话，才能将写信的背景和目的交待清楚，有助于下一步的展开。 次段：进入正文，开门见山地，客气地提出条件，并尽量表明为什么提这样的条件，这是细节补充，是很有必要的安排，这种方法会在后面的学习中反复提到的。 第三段： 提醒对方注意防护，并提出一些建议，这也是交际的一个具体体现，可以结合我们的实际情况，结出一些中肯的建议。 结尾：提出感谢（对方是外教老师身份，一定要更客气，有礼貌） 【满分范文】 范文一 Dear Jim, How is everything going with you these days? We’re very worried about you due to the severe epidemic situation, for which you are trapped in the UK and couldn’t return to China as planned. Considering that our school is going to resume soon, I, on behalf of our English Play Club, sincerely ask you to recommend an excellent foreign instructor like you. Here are some basic qualifications. If possible, an English native speaker would be better, which makes sure of a more standard pronunciation in the play. Besides, we are expecting a teacher who is as professional as you, with rich experience in English play. At last, what matters is that he or she must be responsible and patient so that we can make smooth communication, making sure of a healthy development for our club. During such a special period, nothing is more important than a health body. Please take care of yourself and do some precautions to keep away from the virus, like wearing masks when you have to go out, washing your hands frequently, working out regularly to keep fit and so on. All of our club members are looking forward to your return. At last, please allow me to say thanks again. I hope our requirement would not cause you any trouble. Look forward to your good news. yours, Li Hua 范文二 Dear Jim, How are you doing? I’m sorry to hear that you can’t make it back to China due to the pandemic in your country. However, we still need a foreign teacher for our club. Consequently, I am writing to turn to you for help. First and foremost, there is no doubt that he or she must come from an English-spoken country, so that he or she can speak English with a perfect accent, considering that pronunciation has always been a headache for us Chinese students. Additionally, he or she must have a certificate as an English teacher, which is required in our country. Last but certainly not least, needless to say, he or she must be available and currently in Beijing. I would appreciate it if you can find such a person for us. If so, I wonder if it’s convenient for you to tell me his or her name and Email. Thank you for reading my letter and doing me such a favor. Please take good care of yourself against the virus. Best wishes! Li Hua 范文三 Dear Jim, I hope you are doing well. Due to the ongoing pandemic, we understand that you cannot return to guide the English Drama Club in the new school year. Therefore, we kindly request your assistance in recommending a qualified foreign teacher. We are looking for an ideal candidate who possesses a robust background in drama education and shares a genuine passion for working with students. Additionally, proficiency in English is essential. We appreciate your continuous support and guidance. Please take precautions against the virus and take care of your health. Yours, Li Hua 范文四 Dear Jim, I am very sorry to hear that you have to stay in Britain because of the coronavirus. As we are about to return to school,our English drama club needs a teacher to direct us temporarily. We need a teacher who is a native English speaker and has experience in English drama. Could you recommend a teacher to us? I’d appreciate it if you can do me this favor. At last, please do remember to take protective measures take care of yourself during the coronavirus. Yours, Li hua 范文五 Dear .Jim, How are you doing? I hope everything 's OK with you. Our school's drama chub plans to start practising. Since you 're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place, would you please recommend one for us? He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself, Remember to wear a mask when necessary. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 第二节 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。 注意：词数不少于60。 提示词：自律 self-discipline ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 此试题紧扣时代脉搏，与疫情有关，讲述的是在家上课期间，李华的班上做了一个学生调研，调查结果表明学生自律情况堪忧，李华向父母征求建议，父母建议他征求大家意见。李华召开了一个在线班会，大家出谋划策，想提高自律的办法。三个月后自律情况明显改善，李华向老师做了汇报，老师很欣慰，李华也很有成就感。情景作文对人物情感心理的把握及细节的拓展，是作文高下的关键。词汇积累储备是平时备考的关键。 【思路点拨】 描题干+议论 看图作文，最重要的几个要点： 要点齐全，细节到位，也就是图片中的细节要处理好。比如每幅图片中，李华的表情，文字叙述等。 图片与图片之间的过渡要通顺，要有合理的连接词或连接句。 图片描述时，要注意高级写作句型的运用，比如定语从句，非谓语动词，强调句型等。词汇也要注意丰富和多样性，比如写了chance,下一个就要用oppotunity来替换。happy也不要再过多使用，可以用delighted, joyful等词来替换。 如果有必要，需要有一个积极向上的结尾，像语文作文一样，升华主题。 【满分范文】 范文一 Due to the severe epidemic situation, all of our students had to finish our schoolwork at home, during which our class held a on line research on the theme of self-discipline to enhance our self-learning ability. 时间状语入图+ 长短句描图+ 议论（细节：表格现状，李华的心情和变化） When I got the results of the statistics, I was totally astonished by the awful grades. None of my classmates showed a qualified self-learning ability in all sorts of aspects, which aroused my great concern. As a monitor, I had the complete responsibility to solve this worrying situation, especially when the College Entrance Examination was just around the corner. Obviously, it was time to do something to change this terrible situation. 时间状语入图+长短句描图+ 议论 （细节：可以用非谓语做状语来入图，用which引导的非限制性定语从句来议论结尾） Having made the determination, I turn to my parents for help without delay. Hearing my concern, both of them helped to analyze the main problems and offered some practical methods, which enlightened me a lot. 时间状语入图+长短句描图+议论（细节：1. 可以用it wasn’t long before…来入图；2. 图片中，李华头上方的“我们应该…”表明了同学们在对问题进行商量，可以最后对一些方法进行具体呈现） It wasn’t long before I organized an online class meeting, discussing how to boost our awareness of self-discipline, twist our present situation and finally optimize our online learning effect. With many good solutions heatedly discussed, we finally agree on some rules, like mutual supervision, making strict timetables and so on. Everyone had a great expectation for our change. 时间状语入图+ 长短句描图+议论（细节：接到电话时李华的心情；议论一下这件事情的感受） During the following 3 months, every student carried out what we had promised. You could imagine how excited I was when I received the call from our headteacher, informing me of our amazing improvement in self-discipline. Seeing the almost full marks on the research chart, I had a sense of achievement. Owing to everyone’s spirit of self-discipline, all our effort paid off, which was a good signal for an ideal achievements in the upcoming Big Exam. 结尾：一句话，有始有终，积极向上 This special experience would never fade away from my mind, through which I not only helped my classmates to be better, but I also had a great growth in my spirit.  范文二 With the unexpected COID－19 threatening our health and safety continuously,staying indoors and working online is a must-take defensive measure.We senior 3 students are just among those, who have no other choice but to manage ourselves at home by learning on the Internet.However, one day ,a survey came ,which showed an awful result that most of us had not made full use of this kind of resources,wasting much time playing online games or paying no carefulness to the required lessons.Immediately,being the monitor of our class, I frowned with endless anxiety.At dinner,a talk took place in my family,where my considerate father and mother put forward practical suggestions.With the purpose of strengthening self-discipline awareness together,I organized an online class meeting，stating a series of advice ,calling on everyone to improve our self-discipline and ending up with a regular rule.Finally came the time when three months flew away.A new survey showing our progress excited me greatly,with the result that I called my headteacher,telling him our long-expected achievements.Meanwhile,delight mixed with bits of satisfaction surged into his heart and mine. It is owing to this special period that we have grown up rapidly.Nothing is impossible if we are determined enough to control ourselves and build self-discipline in any situation. 范文三 I am Li Hua, the monitor of class one,grade twelve. During the pandemic, students in our class carried out a research about self-discipline. From the research, we found that the learning efficiency of the students was very low. To solve this problem, some of my classmates and I met offline for a brainstorm meeting. After coming up with some solutions, all of my classmates had an online meeting during which we decided on a detailed plan.After three months’ effort, we made great progress in our study, which made our teacher smile happily. 范文四 I am Li Hua, the class leader of class one, grade twelve. During the pandemic, students in our class carried out a research about self-discipline. At first, the efficiency of the students were very low, and greatly affect the learning outcomes of students. To solve this problem, me and some of the students met offline for a brainstorm meeting. After coming up with possible solutions, all classmates had an online meeting during which we decided on a specific plan. After carrying out the plan, the study results of all classmates saw obvious increase, and our teacher was happy with the result. This unusual term witnessed a swift heart-shaking growth in our self-discipline,which was, is and will always be leaving a significant influence on our development. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$