专题02 书面表达15篇(湖南省中考真题+名校模拟)-备战2025年中考英语常考语法点+题型练习(中考真题+名校模拟真题)(湖南专用)

专题02 书面表达15篇 (湖南省中考真题+名校模拟) 1．（2024·湖南·中考真题）英语课上老师要求以“Sports make us better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华，将代表小组在全班发言，请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括： 1. 介绍你们各自喜欢的运动； 2. 谈谈运动对你们的影响。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息； 2. 写作词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua from Group One. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua from Group One. Below, on behalf of our group, I will report on our discussion. Cindy’s favorite sport is volleyball. She often plays volleyball with her friends. By playing volleyball, she has become more confident and healthy. Frank loves riding a bicycle best. By riding a bicycle, his body has become stronger and stronger. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. Playing basketball has taught me the spirit of teamwork and never giving up. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题介绍组内交流结果； 第二步，细节介绍组员们喜爱的运动以及运动带来的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①on behalf of代表 ②stronger and stronger越来越强壮 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①If I have time, I will go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.（条件状语从句） 2．（2024·湖南娄底·二模）健康的饮食关系到青少年的身心健康成长。请你根据以下提示的内容，以“Healthy Eating”为题写一篇作文。 1．健康饮食的重要性和益处； 2．你身边的同学或朋友存在的不健康的饮食习惯； 3．你的建议； 要求： 1．可适当补充发挥。 2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。 3．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名等。 4．不少于80词。 Healthy Eating _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Healthy Eating Healthy eating is important for us in our daily life. Food can give us energy and help us build up our body. Some of my friends have healthy eating habits. They eat fruit and vegetables every day. They have meals on time and never miss any meal. However, some of my friends like junk food. And they often miss breakfast because they get up late. I think everyone should have healthy eating habits. First, we should have enough clean food each meal. Second, it’s important to keep a balanced diet. Different kinds of food provide us different nutrition we need every day. Third, we should hve a regular meal. In this way, we’ll be strong and healthy, and we’ll do well in our study. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍健康饮食，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍健康饮食的重要性和益处； 第二步，介绍你身边的同学或朋友存在的不健康的饮食习惯； 第三步，介绍你的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①on time按时 ②get up late起床晚 ③keep a balanced diet保持饮食平衡 [高分句型] ①I think everyone should have healthy eating habits. (宾语从句) ②Different kinds of food provide us different nutrition we need every day. (定语从句) 3．（2024·湖南衡阳·一模）许多城市正在进行创文创卫工作，作为中学生，我们每个人都应该为此尽一份力。请你根据以下提示写一篇倡议书，呼吁全校同学保护环境。 要点：1. 保护环境的重要性。 2. 措施：不坐小汽车，步行或乘坐公交车上学；离开教室时关灯；平时节约用水，购物时用可回收利用袋，不用塑料袋；不乱扔垃圾…… 3. 号召同学们积极参与到保护环境中来。 4. 词数：80词左右，文章开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。 关键词：environment, instead of, take an active part in, protect Hello, everyone, The earth is our only home _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone, The earth is our only home, so it is of great importance to protect the environment. As teenagers, there are a lot of things we can do to protect it. First, we can help clean the park or school once a week. Second, we should save water in our daily life. Third, we should take a bus, ride a bike or walk to school. Fourth, we should use paper bags instead of plastic bags when shopping. Let’s get together and take action to protect the environment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍保护环境的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍应该怎么做； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be of great importance 重要的 ②a lot of 许多 ③instead of 而不是 ④get together 一起 [高分句型] ①As teenagers, there are a lot of things we can do to protect it.（省略引导词的定语从句） ②Let’s get together and take action to protect the environment.（并列句） 4．（2024·湖南郴州·二模）你校英文报就“如何保护视力”这一话题征稿。请根据右边图示，以“How to Protect Our Eyesight (视力)”为题投稿。 注意： 1.须全面反映图文信息； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3.80词左右。 How to Protect Our Eyesight ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Protect Our Eyesight Eyes are very important to us. However, many students have poor eyesight. In order to protect our eyesight, we should follow these suggestions. In my opinion, it’s important to have good eyesight. We should develop good habits of using our eyes. For example, we’d better take a break after reading for 45 minutes. We can do eye exercises and do more sports. They are helpful to protect our eyesight. Besides, enough sleep is important, too. We also avoid reading and watching TV under the poor light. Follow these suggestions and I think we’ll have better eyesight. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍眼睛的重要性并引出下文关于如何保护眼睛的建议；   第二步，就如何保护眼睛提出了几点建议。   [亮点词汇]   ①in my opinion在我看来   ②do eye exercises做眼保健操   ③take a break休息   [高分句型]   ①In order to protect our eyesight, we should follow these suggestions.（动词不定式作目的状语）   ②In my opinion, it’s important to have good eyesight.（动词不定式作主语） 5．（2024·湖南怀化·一模）初三的生活已经开始了，假设你是李华，你对新学期的英语学习有什么规划呢？请你以“My Plan for English Learning”为题并根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。 待提升项目 新学期英语学习规划 发音、听力 多听、多读课文(texts)；关注英语新闻节目(news programs)；看英文电影 写作 写英文日记；养成英语思维(thinking in English) 语法 看语法书；请教老师 心态 保持轻松(stay relaxed)；满怀信心(be confident in ) 要求 1.参考表格提示内容；可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 3.词数：80~100词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) My Plan for English Learning As we all know, English is the most widely used language in the world. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Only in this way can I learn English well in the new term. 【答案】例文 My Plan for English Learning As we all know, English is the most widely used language in the world. I decide to try my best to learn it well. Here’s my plan for English learning. First, as for pronunciation and listening, I decide to listen to and read more texts, listen to more news programs and watch English movies. Second, keeping an English diary is good for my English writing. I will learn to think in English instead of translating everything into Chinese. Third, to learn English grammar well, I will read some grammar books and ask my English teacher for help. Fourth, I will stay relaxed and be confident about my English. Only in this way can I learn English well in the new term. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的英语学习计划，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己新学期的英语学习计划； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①try my best to do sth.尽我最大的努力做某事 ②listen to听 ③translate sth. into sth.把……翻译成…… [高分句型] ①keeping an English diary is good for my English writing. (动名词作主语) ②Third, to learn English grammar well, I will read some grammar books and ask my English teacher for help. (动词不定式作目的状语) 6．（2024·湖南常德·一模）你校对全体学生就“Where’s your free time gone?”进行了调查。假设你是校园记者，请根据本调查的结果(见下表)，用英语写一篇80—90词的报道，并结合自己的情况谈谈你的感受和想法。 注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Where’s your free time gone? Doing homework Going to after-school classes Doing sports Surfing the Internet 55% 20% 8% 17% ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One Possible Version: Recently, we’ve made a survey in our school about “Where’s your free time gone?” Here are the results. Students spend most of their free time on study, including doing homework and going to different kinds of after-school classes. Only 8% of them spend their free time doing sports. Surfing the Internet is the most popular activity for children. Just like the other students, I have much homework. It usually takes me about three hours to finish my homework every night. I’m tired and stressed. I really hope I’ll have more time to do what I like to do, such as doing sports, listening to music and so on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格介绍学生们的业余时间活动，并谈谈自己的感受和想法；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，指出要告诉调查的结果； 第二步，结合表格，具体介绍调查结果； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受和想法。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time on sth. 花时间在……上 ②different kinds of 不同种类的 ③such as 例如 [高分句型] ① It usually takes me about three hours to finish my homework every night.（it固定句型） ② I really hope I’ll have more time to do what I like to do, such as doing sports, listening to music and so on.（宾语从句） 7．（2024·湖南常德·二模）你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初三学生Angela的来信，她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，针对Angela的问题，提出你的建议并阐述理由。 Angela’s problems Your advice and reasons problems with parents 1. listen and communicate—know each other better 2. (请补充) 压力山大 1. live a healthy life—take care of your body 2. (请补充) 注意： 1.要点包括图表中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.词数：不少于 80词 (短文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人真实信息。 Dear Angela, I am sorry to hear that you are having a bad time now. In your letter you said that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with everything! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Angela, I am sorry to hear that you are having a bad time now. In your letter you said that you have problems with parents and much study stress. Here is some helpful advice for you. As for the problems with your parents, you should try to listen to them and communicate with them more often. In this way you may know each other better. It’s also a good idea to take a walk with them or help them with housework. As for your study, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. You should live a healthy life so that you can take care of your body, which is the most important thing to you. You’d better have a healthy diet, have enough sleep and keep exercising every day. What’s more, why don’t you listen to your favorite music to make yourself relaxed when you’re tired or unhappy? Good luck with everything!   Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头提示，明确对方的问题； 第二步，针对问题提出建议； 第三步，表达祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②try to do sth试着做某事 ③what’s more另外 [高分句型] ①It’s also a good idea to take a walk with them or help them with housework. (it固定句型) ②As for your study, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. (否定祈使句) 8．（2024·湖南岳阳·二模）在我们的成长过程中，德育教育起着很重要的作用。为了增强青少年的德育教育，某英语杂志社正在开展以“Moral Education (德育)”为主题的征文比赛。请你以Moral Education为题，写一篇英语短文参赛。 要点如下： ①在家里：参加家务劳动，与父母多理解沟通； ②在学校：遵守校规，与同学相处融洽； ③在社会上：志愿服务，保护环境； ④德育教育的意义……。 参考词汇：moral有道德的；communication交流 要求： 1. 书写认真规范，词数为80—100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Moral Education As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, we need to know how to improve our moral education. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Moral Education As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, we need to know how to improve our moral education. At home, we should do some housework. As for the relationship with our parents, we should have a good communication with them. At school, we should obey the school rules and get on well with our classmates. The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. What’s more, we can take part in some volunteer activities as long as we have free time. We can plant more trees to protect the environment. Moral education plays an important role in our life. It makes us better and happier. I believe that we can be excellent teenagers in the end. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据提示，从家里、学校以及社会上等三方面介绍如何如何提高德育； 第二步，介绍德育教育的意义。 [亮点词汇] ① as for至于 ② get on well with sb和某人相处好 ③ play an important role起重要作用 [高分句型] ①What’s more, we can take part in some volunteer activities as long as we have free time.（条件状语从句） ②I believe that we can be excellent teenagers in the end.（宾语从句） 9．（2024·湖南怀化·一模）假如你叫李华，是光明中学初三(1)班的一名学生，你校学生会(Student Union)正在招募学生干部，你很想加入，请根据下面提供的信息用英语给学生会主席(Chairman)写一封自荐信。 Abilities 1. be good at communicating 2. ... Hobbies 1. doing sports 2. ... Reasons 1. ... 提示： 1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，可适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 不能出现真实的人名和地名。 Dear Chairman, I am Li Hua, a student from class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School. I’d like to be a member of Student Union.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Chairman, I am Li Hua, a student from class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School. I’d like to be a member of Student Union. I like doing sports, so I am quite healthy and fit. I like studying very much and often help my classmates with their lessons. I get on well with others, so I have many friends. Communicating with others is one of my abilities. I think it’s very important as a member of Student Union. And I’d like to help others, too.   If I can be a member of Student Union, I’ll be able to make more friends. And I can do more for others.   I hope I can be received. Look forward to your answer.   Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据表格提示介绍自己爱好和能力； 第二步，介绍自己想加入的原因； 第三步，最后表达希望和期待。 [亮点词汇] ① help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 ② get on well with sb和某人相处很好 ③ be able to do sth能够做某事 [高分句型] If I can be a member of Student Union, I’ll be able to make more friends.（条件状语从句） 10．（2024·湖南怀化·二模）友谊总是弥足珍贵。假定你是李华，你因为未能遵守约定帮助你的好朋友Sandy进行英语学习从而使得你们之间产生隔阂，你通过留字条的方式和她沟通和好。现你校英文报正在开展以“An Unforgettable Thing about Communication”为题的征文活动，请你用英文投稿，讲述你的经历。 要求：词数80~100，且不得出现真实姓名与校名。 提示词：English learning, be angry with, give a hope for forgiveness (希望得到原谅), communicate, sincerely, get on well with An Unforgettable Thing about Communication __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Thing about Communication A misunderstanding between my friend and I left a deep impression on me. One Sunday evening, I promised to help my best friend, Sandy, with her English learning. But I didn’t show up because of something important. What’s worse, I forgot to tell her so that she waited for me for a long time and she was angry with me. Next morning, I walked up to her and gave her a note hoping for forgiveness. After reading my note, Sandy finally smiled at me. Then I told her that I felt really sorry. From then on, I believed that communicating sincerely is one of the best ways to get on well with others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“一段难忘的交流经历”来引出下文中对该经历的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“为何产生隔阂、怎么沟通、事件结果”三方面入手，重点介绍此次难忘的交流经历； ③第三步，书写结语。表达真诚交流的重要。 [亮点词汇] ①promise to do sth 承诺做某事 ②help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 ③show up 出现 ④because of 因为 ⑤what’s worse 更糟糕的是 ⑥wait for 等待 ⑦from then on 从那时起 ⑧get on well with sb 与某人相处融洽 [高分句型] ①Then I told her that I felt really sorry.（that引导的宾语从句） ②From then on, I believed that communicating sincerely is one of the best ways to get on well with others.（that引导的宾语从句） 11．（2024·湖南岳阳·一模）假如你是李华，你制作的关于家乡岳阳的变化的海报在某英文网站被公开展示并获得好评。请你结合下面内容要点和图示信息，以“My Experience of Making a Poster”为题，写一篇发言稿向学校的英语广播站投稿，简述你的制作经历。 内容要点如下：（1）介绍获奖海报的内容；（2）具体讲述制作海报的过程；（3）讲述你的收获或者感悟。 注意： （1）词数80-100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数； （2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 （3）发言稿中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear teachers and friends, I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share my experience of making a poster with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 【答案】例文： My Experience of Making a Poster Dear teachers and friends, I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share my experience of making a poster with you. Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions. Then, I collected some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown and I sorted the information that I had learned. Finally, I designed a poster with relevant pictures attached and posted them online. This experience helps me know better about my hometown. With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. As a member of this town, I will contribute my own efforts to its development. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态主要以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的； 第二步：具体阐述制作海报的过程； 第三步：表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①the rapid development of… ……的快速发展 ②ask sb. about sth. 询问某人关于某事 ③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ④lead a better life过上更好的生活 [高分句型] ①Then, I collected some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown and I sorted the information that I had learned. (and引导并列句；that引导的定语从句) ②With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. (介词短语；现在完成时的主动语态及被动语态，and引导并列句) 12．（2024·湖南衡阳·一模）假如你是李华，你的表妹 Lucy 写邮件询问你如何缓解学习压力，请根据表格内容，回一封英文邮件给她。 听音乐 在上学前和放学后经常听一些舒缓的音乐 看电影 在周末的时候看一些有意思的电影 和朋友聊天 和朋友聊天并且说出你的烦恼 要求： 1.参考表格内容，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 3.词数：不少于80~100词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Lucy, How are you these days? You said that you felt stressed in your study and wanted me to give you some advice in your last email.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文 Dear Lucy, How are you these days? You said that you felt stressed in your study and wanted me to give you some advice in your last email. First, listening to light and soft music before and after school may be helpful. Music gives you a sense of relaxation and makes you happy. Second, it’s good for you to watch some interesting movies on weekends. When I finish watching an interesting movie, I will be happy for a long time. Last but not least, communicate with your good friends and talk about your trouble. It can not only help your friends have a better understanding of you, but also make you feel less stressed and happier. I hope my advice will help you. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据表格的信息提示给出对方建议； 第二步，表达希望并期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ① a sense of一种……感觉 ② finish doing sth完成做某事 ③ communicate with sb和某人交流 [高分句型] ①When I finish watching an interesting movie, I will be happy for a long time.（时间状语从句） ②I hope my advice will help you.（宾语从句） 13．（2024·湖南湘西·二模）假如你是李华，你想给你在美国的好朋友Mary分享最近发生的一件出乎意料的事情。请根据以下表格内容，用英语写一封邮件给她。 起因 上周六我们班同学准备给Karen过生日 过程 我们自己做了生日蛋糕，但生日蛋糕被一只野猫给吃了，来不及重新做，只能如实告诉Karen。 结局 我们感觉很遗憾，但是Karen却很高兴。 要求： 1.参考表格内容，可适当发挥； 2.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 3.词数：80~100词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Mary, How are you these days? I want to tell you an unexpected thing that happened around me.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mary, How are you these days? I want to tell you an unexpected thing that happened around me. Last Saturday, our classmate Karen had her birthday. We decided to make a cake by ourselves for her. At 5 p.m., the cake was ready. All of us thought the cake was perfect. But when we were about to pack the cake, suddenly, a wild cat rushed in and ate the cake. We were upset because we had no time to make another one. At last, we had to tell the truth to Karen. We felt very sorry but she was very happy because she thought it was interesting and knew what we had done for her. Do you have anything unexpected that has happened recently? Look forward to your sharing. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“分享最近发生的一件出乎意料的事情”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己有要分享的经历； 第二步，根据题干所给要点，详细描述这次经历的过程； 第三步，描述事情的结局。 [亮点词汇] ①by oneself靠某人自己 ②at last最后 [高分句型] ①We were upset because we had no time to make another one.（because引导原因状语从句） ②We felt very sorry but she was very happy because she thought it was interesting and knew what we had done for her.（but连接并列句，宾语从句） 14．（2024·湖南怀化·一模）（A）话题作文：学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“One Thing I will Do for ________ ”的征文比赛。请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文参赛，分享你将为朋友、家人、学校或社会做的一件事。 提示：（1）What will you do? （2）How will you do it? （3）Why do you choose to do it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： One Thing I will Do for My Parents I have made great progress in the past three years. Now I want to do one thing for my parents. I want to make a delicious breakfast for my parents. I’m going to the supermarket on Saturday afternoon to buy what I need for breakfast. Then, the next morning I will get up early and quietly so as not to wake my parents up. I will make my mother’s favorite sandwiches and coffee. My father likes to eat beef and tomato noodles for breakfast. I will learn how to cook online. I will make sure they can have a delicious breakfast after getting up. I have had this idea in my heart for many years, but I never get the chance to do it. In the past, my parents always got up early to prepare breakfast for me. It is their love and support that make me better, so I want to return them with the same love. I love them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作题目需自行补充完整，材料所给内容不得遗漏。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题说明“自己想为父母做一件事”； 第二步，详细阐述事情的执行过程； 第三步，写出选择做这件事的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①make great progress取得巨大进步 ②so as not to以免 ③in the past在过去 ④prepare for准备 [高分句型] ①I’m going to the supermarket on Saturday afternoon to buy what I need for breakfast.（what引导的宾语从句） ②It is their love and support that make me better, so I want to return them with the same love.（强调句） 15．（2024·湖南株洲·一模）我们正处于一个飞速发展的时代，我们的生活无时无刻不受到科技的影响。哪个科技的产物对你的生活影响最大？请根据下面的要点和要求写一篇短文。 要点： 1.是什么影响了你的生活； 2.它是如何影响你的生活的； 3.你对此有哪些感受。 要求： 1.参考要点内容，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 3.词数：80~100词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Internet has influenced my life    Many inventions have changed our life. As far as I am concerned, the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most.     Every day I surf the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my friends and family. Besides, I can buy goods from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens up my eyes. It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax.     All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more convenient than ever. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。首先提出互联网对自己的影响很大； 第二步，具体阐述互联网怎样影响自己的生活； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①as far as I am concerned就我个人而言 ②keep in touch with保持联系 ③all over the world世界各地 ④all in all总之 [高分句型] ①As far as I am concerned, the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most. (and连接并列句) ②It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax. (not only…but also结构) 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$