第三部分 概要写作-【学霸训练】2025年高考英语完形填空阅读理解七选五（七合一）专项训练

第三部分 概要写作 概要写作是新高考写作新题型,它和读后续写在不同考次不定期交替使用。概要写作是一种 限制性的作文形式,要求考生高度浓缩原文,即用创造性的语言表述主要内容、基本观点或事实。 一、题型特点 1.要求考生基于提供的一篇350词以内的短文,写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。 2.短文以说明文和议论文为主,也可能选取记叙文 3.说明文和议论文的段落结构通常是:提出问题/描述现象→分析利弊→提出解决方法→提 供例证/回归主题/深化主题/应该注意的事项 二、考查特点 概要写作要求考生在忠于原文的前提下,用简洁的语言来概括文章的主旨和关键信息,有助 于培养英语学科核心素养,能有效检测高阶思维品质和学习能力,主要表现在 1.区分主要信息和次要信息的能力 2.对句群之间的逻辑关系和段落结构的把握能力。 3.分析推断逻辑关系、梳理及概括细节信息的能力。 4.运用同义替换、调整句式和整合衔接句的能力。 三、评分依据 考试说明指出,该题总分为25分,按档次给分。评分时,先根据写作的内容和语言初步确定 其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。词数过少或过多要减分 概要写作评分时,主要从以下四个方面考虑:对原文要点的理解和呈现情况:应用语法结构和 词汇的准确性;上下文的连贯性;对各要点表达的独立性情况。 四、写作步骤 部文明确主旨 确定体裁和主旨,分析篇章结构和段落层次,落实要点数量。 剪存提取主题 删除细节及例证,提取要点关键词和段落主题句. 写作 归纳概括要点,进行同义转换,正确使用衔接词汇,根据行文逻辑 转换达连句成篇 连句篇。 润色优化修改定稿 用高级词汇,句式进行润色优化,检查要点是否齐全等。 . 30. PasSage 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 A teen who thinks he is being spied or snooped(窥探) on will just refuse to tell you some dangerous and harmless information. An open environment, however, will qo a lot further in making you get along well with your child in a healthy way. Therefore, as a parent of a teenager, you are supposed to try your best to keep a balance between letting your child have independence and keeping a close eye on him. Anyhow, a teenager deserves a little privacy and you should give him some ln fact there are many ideas that can prevent your children feeling you're always snooping on them. The key is for both of you to be on the same page about what privacy your teen has the right to have and what information and activities you'll regularly want to know. Also. let him know that if "private" material is left out in the open. it is possible that everyone in the family can see or read it. The common reason for snooping is that you think that there is something going on with your teen that he doesn't want you to know about it. Rather than spying, though, start a conversation with your child. Be prepared for the fact that your child may refuse to tell you about it, but at least the dialogue has begun. What's more, give your children moderate privacy with friends. You can set rules based on your values, such as dates(约会) are welcome in your home, but any closed doors are not allowed. With friends, be a little more relaxed. You should allow them to enjoy themselves toqether without qetting in too often to interrupt them ln just a few years, your teen will be an adult, and this is the time that they are learning how to make appropriate decisions on their own. Give them the privacy to do so, but encourage them to come to you if they want any guidance . 31 Passage2 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 lmagine being a crew member, hundreds of years aao, sailing in southern waters. Your captain is searching for food while exploring unfamiliar waters. Your job is to watch the sea off the ship's side for ice. The wind is cold on your face. Alongside the ship, a fish darts(猛冲) past. Another slows to a stop and raises its head above the water to look at you. How could a fish do that? Did the sailors see fish with feathers or swimming birds? Today, we know that the sailors saw birds that developed the ability to swim. Their wings became flippers(状肢),and they could“fly" through the water with amazing speed. They are penguins There are many types of penguins. Only two kinds raise their young on the continent of Antarctica(南极洲). Adelie penguins grow up to 29 inches tall and have a white ring around each eye. Emperor penguins have yellow orange color near their necks. Standing about 35 inches tall. they are the tallest penguins living today Emperor penguins have nests on top of their feet. Father Emperor penguins keep the egg on top of their feet for more than two months,until the egg is ready to hatch. The mother penguin goes out for food during that time. lmagine holding an egg on your feet for two months until someone returns with food Male and female penauins are both good parents. Once the chicks hatch, both parents travel long distances to find food for them in the sea. lt may be days before the parents return and the chicks eat aaain. When they return with food. the fun really begins. Chicks chase their parents, begging for food. Penguin chicks eat huge amounts at one time. Eventually, the adult penguins stop feeding the chicks. This is nature's way of forcing children to grow up. When the penguin chicks are hungry enough, they find their way to the sea. Without any swimming lessons, they make their way into the icy waters and swim as only penguins do. . 32. Passage 3 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Free keyboarding qames for kids are an excellent way to pass time while also obtaining ar extremely-beneficial skill in today's IT-enabled society. Touch typing(盲打) is an extremely- important skill in any of today's computer-powered societies. so it comes as no surprise that a larger number of people are opting to teach their kids touch typing at a much younger age Because of kids' phenomenal abilities to learn new things, it is immensely(极大地) easier to teach your kids touch typing at a young age than it would be for them to acquire this skill later in life. It is becoming more and more commonplace to use computers inside the classroom. so you can give your child an enormous competitive edge by teaching them to touch type. Another excellent aspect about kids' typing games is that they allow your child to take part in online communities in a constructive manner. Rather than just surfing the lnternet to comment on small matters, your child can compare their scores with those of other kids participating in the touch typing games, thus improving themselves in the friendly and constructive competition ln addition. keyboarding games for kids also encouraae a yariety of different motor skills to develop and flourish within your child. Scientific studies have been conducted which show that teaching touch tvping to kids at a young age enhances their hand-and-eye coordination a great deal further than that of their peers who did not undergo such training. These invaluable motor reflex skills can enhance the chance of your child to participate in other constructive activities in society such as sports. As the role of pen and paper diminishes, keyboarding is becoming a far more essential skil than it was just a few years aao. Many schools have caught on to this importance and have started to integrate courses in touch typing into their curriculum. By integrating free keyboarding games for kids into your child's recreational time, you can drastically increase their chances of success in this cyber society, effectively giving them a competitive edge over their peers .33. PasSage 1 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Canadian student Raymond Wang, 17, won the world's largest high school science competition, taking home the top prize of $75,ooo for inventing a new way to keep germs from spreading in airplane cabins. "lt's very exciting. ! absolutely did not expect it," Wang said by telephone from Pittsburgh, the host city for the finals of the lntel lnternational Science and Engineering Fair (Intel lSEF)."lt's really the happiest day of my life." Wang started thinking about the problem of disease spread on airplanes after a steady stream of news about the Ebola outbreak in West Africa. Ebola is not spread through the air he learned. but other infectious diseases-including the H1N1 swine flu virus and SABS virus-are spread throuah the air And that's a problem in airplane cabins, where everyone is breathing others' air."When someone sneezes, there's a mess everywhere."he explained Wang said he made up his mind to solve the problem when he discovered that few people in the airline industry were actively working on ways to improve the auality of airplane air He designed fin-shaped devices(形装置) that fit into the airplane's existing air inlets(入 口). The fins redirect the airflow, creating walls of air around each passenger. Each person gets a personalized zone of fresh air, and sneezes are pushed out of the cabin before they can spread. His invention would improve the availability of fresh air in the cabin by 19o percent, he said. and would reduce the concentration of airborne germs by 55 times. Wang believed that it would cost $1.ooo per airplane and could be put in overnight. And he's already filed an application for a patent Wang is clearly not your average high school student. He did his project not for class but on the side, and he learned what he needed to know pretty much on his own."This year I had to pick up fluid dynamics(流体动力学),"he said.“1 kept going with it,watching some videos and looking at some papers." .34.at how fast I can go in this thing！”Right; wishes.They said that they had not only then,she moved the wheelchair across the gained knowledge,but also learned a lot of room,turning around,back and forth.Maya truth.They learned what was right and what didn't detect any pity or embarrassment from was wrong.They also learned to always be her.Then Maya looked up and found Joan grateful.What's more,they make progress was smiling,eyes purposefully resting on in happiness. her brace.It was then that a spark of power Para.2 was lit up deep inside Maya.That afternoon, I stood alone outside my classroom with the three of them had a pleasant talk over the roses,thinking about their touching lots of things until it was dusk. words on the cards.Calming the mood,I Para.2 went into the classroom and gave the last Deeply impressed by Joan,Maya lesson to those lovely children,sending good offered to sit beside Samir on the bus ride wishes.Later,I continued to work as a back home."Joan is great.I like her," teacher and engaged in education.That Samir admired.Maya nodded,and said, special day reminded me of my "The brace keeps my toe up so I can walk responsibilities.I should also do this and set better..”“Really?”Samir reached out and a good example for students.(150 words) touched it gently.“That's super cool！”His words were so sincere that Maya felt warm 第三部分 概要写作 and moved.It was a reaction that she had expected deep inside her heart.A little green Passage 1 bud was bursting-she and her brace looked 0 参考答案1 cool,beautiful and dynamic in her and Children need privacy.Parents should others'eyes.(167 words) keep a close eye on kids without robbing Passage 18 their independence.Make it clear what ·参考答案 privacy your teen can have and what you Para.1 should be told.You can start a conversation I sighed and then observed them with your child instead of spying.Meanwhile, coming peacefully towards me with allow your children to date with their friends something in their hands.When they got at home but forbid them to keep the door closer,I saw that they were holding a bunch closed.Let them make decisions alone and of roses and some colored cards in their give them necessary help.(72 words) hands.They all said in chorus,"Teacher, 参考答案2 this is our gift to you!Thank you for your Children need privacy.Parents need to education and guidance."I accepted the monitor them and let them have some flowers and read the words on the cards. independence as well.First,tell them what There were some fond memories and good are privacy and what are not and remember 47 to talk about their privacy.Also,talk openly chances of success.(69 words) with your teen about the privacy he wants to 口参考答案2 keep.Last but not the least,give your Kids can benefit a lot from free children the privacy to make decisions alone, keyboarding games.First,teaching kids to without forgetting to help if necessary.(72 touch type at a young age gives them a head words) start.Besides,kids can compete in online Passage 2 communities with other kids.Last but not the least,varieties of different motor skills can 参考答案1 be developed with touch typing training.It is Penguins can“fiy”in the water with an essential skill to use computer.It fast speed and Emperor penguin is one kind increases the chance to succeed.(69 of penguins.After the chicks are hatched, words) both parents travel long distances to search Passage 4 for food for them.Parents stop feeding them when it's time to force children to grow up. 参考答案1 When young penguins are hungry,they have 17 year-old Raymond Wang won the to go into the icy waters and swim.(60 world's largest high school science words) competition for inventing a new way to keep 口参考答案2 germs from spreading in airplane cabins.He designed fin-shaped devices which redirect Penguins are the animals that can "fly" the airflow,creating walls of air around each in the water.There are many kinds of passenger.Everyone gets his own zone of penguins,among which Emperor penguins fresh air and sneezes are pushed out of the can raise children well.In order to raise cabin before spreading.His invention reduces chicks,both parents have to travel long the concentration of airborne germs greatly. distances to search for food.Parents stop (66 words) feeding the chicks to force them to grow up. (57 words) ◇参考答案2 Raymond Wang won the world's largest Passage 3 high school science competition for the 口参考答案1 invention of a new way to keep germs from It is an excellent way to pass time and spreading in plane cabins.He began obtain an extremely-beneficial skill for kids to considering this problem after a stream news play keyboarding games.It can give them a about the Ebola outbreak and decided to competitive edge over their peers.Kids can design fin-shaped devices.Everyone gets his take part in online communities.It can own zone of fresh air and sneezes are increase motor skills of kids.As a much pushed out of the cabin before spreading.His more essential skill,keyboarding enables invention has improved the availability of kids to get a head start,increasing their fresh air in the plane well.(64 words) 48