Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题必背满分范文-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（沪教牛津版）

Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背 1．古今中外的杰出人物数不胜数，如伟大的文学家、政治家、科学家、军事家、艺术家等等。请你介绍一位你最喜欢的杰出人物。 1. 要点： ①该人物是谁； ②该人物的主要事迹； ③该人物对你的影响。 2. 要求： ①文中不要出现真实的校名和姓名； ②词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 There are countless great figures from ancient till now. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： There are countless great figures from ancient till now. Today I’d like to introduce a person who has a great influence on me. He is Zhong Nanshan, who is famous for his great contributions to defeating virus. He led the medical staff to fight against SARS in 2003 and COVID in 2019. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I can’t help being moved by him. What impressed me most was that although he was 84 years old, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area. Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID 19. With their efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control. Influenced by him, I have made up my mind to be a doctor in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头提示，介绍该人物是谁； 第二步，介绍该人物的主要事迹； 第三步，介绍该人物对你的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想做某事 ②have a great influence on对……有很大影响 ③be famous for因……而出名 ④can’t help doing sth.情不自禁做某事 ⑤day and night日日夜夜 [高分句型] ①Today I’d like to introduce a person who has a great influence on me.（who引导的定语从句） ②Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I can’t help being moved by him.（in which引导的定语从句） ③What impressed me most was that although he was 84 years old, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area.（although引导的让步状语从句） 2．时代呼唤英雄，英雄光耀时代。其实，英雄就在我们身边，这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、朋友、老师……他们把英雄精神体现在平凡的岗位中，普通的生活里。请根据下列提示，以“A Hero in My Heart”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向《英语广场》杂志投稿，分享你心中的英雄。 提示: 1. 你心中的英雄是谁； 2. 记述你印象深刻的一件事； 3. 对你的影响。 A Hero in My Heart _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： A Hero in My Heart Most people see a hero as someone they look up to. If you ask me who the hero is in my heart, my answer would be Li Lianjie. Li Lianjie is one of the most famous film stars in China. He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work he has made a lot of films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. As a Chinese he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well. He gave away much money to help the children in poor villages. From Li Lianjie I can learn a lot , such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己心目中的英雄； 第二步，具体阐述英雄事迹； 第三步，书写结语，表达对自己产生的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①look up to敬仰 ②try one’s best尽最大努力 ③gave away赠送 [高分句型] ①If you ask me who the hero is in my heart, my answer would be Li Lianjie. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. (so...that...句型) 3．在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点： 1. Who is your role model? 2. What meaningful things he/she did influence you most? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥； 3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb. When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most. When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样； 第二步，介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大； 第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①kept on doing sth继续做某事 ②give up放弃 ③think of想起 ④go ahead前进 [高分句型] ①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句) 4．假设你是Kitty，请你根据以下要点，用英语写一封信，向你的网友Lisa介绍你最喜欢的女演员奥黛丽·赫本（Audrey Hepburn）。词数在85左右。 要点： 1.奥黛丽·赫本（Audrey Hepburn）是世界上最伟大的女演员之一。 2.她出生于1929年，5月4日。自小她就热爱舞蹈，梦想成为一名成功的芭蕾舞蹈家。但她最终成为了一名演员。 3.1951年，她在电影《琪琪》（Gigi）里面扮演了主角，她的美丽与魅力吸引了人们的注意力，这标志着她成功事业的开端。 4.她的成就不仅限于电影行业，她致力于慈善工作很多年，帮助了很多贫困儿童。 5.我认为…… 注意： 1.第5点必须用1—2句话作适当的发挥。 2.短文必须包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 Dear Lisa, My favourite actress is Audrey Hepburn. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Kitty 【答案】例文： Dear Lisa, My favourite actress is Audrey Hepburn. She is one of the greatest actresses in the world though she has been dead for many years. She was born on May 4th, 1929. When she was young, she loved dancing and dreamed of becoming a successful ballet dancer. But she ended up becoming an actress. In 1951, she played the lead role in the film Gigi, attracting attention for her beauty and charm, which marked the beginning of her successful career. Her achievements are not limited to the film industry. She devoted herself to charity work and helped many underprivileged children. I think Audrey Hepburn is not only a talented and experienced actress but also a great humanitarian. Yours, Kitty 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要点，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最喜欢的女演员”来引出下文中对奥黛丽·赫本的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生平、成就和个人评价”三方面入手，重点介绍奥黛丽·赫本； ③第三步，书写结语。表达对奥黛丽·赫本的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①dream of 梦想 ②end up 最终 ③play role in...在……中扮演角色 ④not only...but also 不但……而且 [高分句型] ①She is one of the greatest actresses in the world though she has been dead for many years. （though引导的让步状语从句） ②When she was young, she loved dancing and dreamed of becoming a successful ballet dancer.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③In 1951, she played the lead role in the film Gigi, attracting attention for her beauty and charm, which marked the beginning of her successful career.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ④I think Audrey Hepburn is not only a talented and experienced actress but also a great humanitarian. （宾语从句） 5．假如你是李华，本期你校英文报中的Famous People栏目将要介绍我国著名的短跑运动员苏炳添，现面向广大学生征稿。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。 1. 1989年8月29日出生于广东省中山市。 2. 小时候喜欢跑步，于2009年加入国家队。 3. 在2018年雅加达亚运会男子100米比赛中夺得金牌。 4. 在2020年东京奥运会上，成为首位进入奥运百米决赛的中国人。 5. 你认为…… 参考词汇：2018年雅加达亚运会 the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games 2020年东京奥运会 the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games 奥运100米决赛 Olympic 100-metre final 要求： 1. 词数：80—100。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country. He__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文 Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country. He was born on 29th August, 1989, in Zhongshan, Guangdong. When he was a boy, he liked running very much and practiced running every day. In 2009, he joined the national team. And after that, he won lots of competitions. He won a gold medal in the men’s 100-metre race at the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games. At the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, he ran so fast that he became the first Chinese to reach the Olympic 100-metre final. I think he is a sports hero. Although he is over 30, he still continues running. I should learn from him and work hard so that I can do something for our country in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点提示，适当增加细节，行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍苏炳添的基本信息； 第二步，具体阐述苏炳添的参赛经历及所获奖项； 第三步，表达自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①practice doing sth.练习做某事 ②so... that如此……以致于 ③learn from向……学习 ④so that以便于 [高分句型] ①When he was a boy, he liked running very much and practiced running every day.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②At the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, he ran so fast that he became the first Chinese to reach the Olympic 100-metre final.（so... that引导的结果状语从句） ③Although he is over 30, he still continues running.（although引导的让步状语从句） ④I should learn from him and work hard so that I can do something for our country in the future.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 6．世界上有许多伟大的人，他们在某个领域有着突出的成就，他们的精神值得我们学习。在众多拥有杰出贡献的人中，谁是对你影响最大的人？为什么？请你根据以下提示，以The person who has influenced me most为题写一篇短文。 写作提示： 1. Who is the person? 2. What’s his/her achievement? 3. What have you learnt from him/her? 要求： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 100词左右。 The person who has influenced me most _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The person who has influenced me most Yao Ming is the person who has influenced me most. Yao Ming was a Chinese basketball player. He played it so well that he was accepted by the NBA. Later, he became one of the best players in the NBA. After he retired from the NBA, he made great contributions to charity work. I admire Yao Ming because he is not only a great sportsman, but also a man full of love. He cares about children’s education and makes efforts to protect wild animals. From him, I have learnt that people should try their best to make their dreams come true. And, after achieving their dreams, people should do something meaningful to make the world a better place. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作提示”中任何一个要点，可适当添加细节，但要突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单介绍对你影响最大的这个人是谁； 第二步，具体介绍这个人有哪些成就； 第三步，进一步介绍你从这个人身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ① make great contributions to 为……作出巨大贡献 ② not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… ③ try one’s best 尽某人最大的努力 [高分句型] ① He played it so well that he was accepted by the NBA.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句） ② From him, I have learnt that people should try their best to make their dreams come true.（that引导的宾语从句） 7．爱迪生在发明电灯泡的时候，失败了八千多次，但是他没有放弃。很多朋友嘲笑他，但是他认为他能从这些失败当中找到改进的办法。终于，在一次一次的尝试之后，爱迪生成功地发明了电灯泡。请你以“Failure Is the Mother of Success”为题目写一篇短文。 提示内容：1. 讲述爱迪生发明电灯泡的过程； 2. 结合自己的学习和生活实际，谈谈受到的启发。 写作要求：1. 字迹工整，语言准确，内容完整连贯，适当使用复合句； 2. 80词以上，已给出词汇不计入总词数。 参考词汇：爱迪生Edison   灯泡bulb Failure Is the Mother of Success ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Failure Is the Mother of Success I’d like to tell you a story. Before Edison invented bulbs, he failed over and over again, up to more than eight thousand times. But he didn’t give up trying. At the same time, all his friends laughed at what he did. However, he thought he could find ways to improve from these failures. Finally, he succeeded in inventing the first bulb in the world. In my opinion, we should all learn from Edison. We may meet lots of difficulties in our life, but just like the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success.” If we keep on working and never give up, we will surely succeed. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且在写作过程中要注意适当使用复合句。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述爱迪生发明电灯泡的过程； 第二步，结合学习和生活实际，讲述自己受到的启发。 [亮点词汇] ① over and over again反复地 ② give up doing sth.放弃做某事 ③ laugh at嘲笑 ④ succeed in doing sth.成功做某事 [高分句型] ① At the same time, all his friends laughed at what he did.（what引导的宾语从句） ② However, he thought he could find ways to improve from these failures.（省略了that的宾语从句） ③ If we keep on working and never give up, we will surely succeed.（if引导的条件状语从句） 8．假设你是李明，你校英文社团正在举办主题为“Hero”的征文活动。请你根据下面表格提示写一篇短文，介绍中国药理学家——屠呦呦。 简况 1．1930年12月30日出生于浙江宁波 2．中国药理学家 主要经历 1．1955年毕业于北京大学 2．毕业后接受中医培训两年半，并一直在中国中医研究院工作 3．1972年成功发现青蒿素 4．2015年10月5日被授予诺贝尔医学奖 你学到了什么 …… 要求：必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯。100词左右。 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：药理学家pharmaceutical chemist；青蒿素artemisinin；中国中医研究院China Academy of Chinese Medicine；诺贝尔医学奖Nobel Prize in medicine；坚持不懈perseverance Hi, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hi, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce a famous scientist—Tu Youyou. Now, I will give you a brief introduction to her. Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province on December 30th, 1930, Tu Youyou, a famous female pharmaceutical chemist, showed great interest in traditional Chinese medicine when she was young. In 1955, she graduated from Peking University. After that, she was trained in traditional Chinese medicine for two years and a half and has been working in China Academy of Chinese Medicine. In 1972, she succeeded in discovering and developing artemisinin. To our excitement and delight, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in medicine on October 5th, 2015, becoming the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize. From her, I learn some valuable spirit like hard-working and modest. We should learn from her and devote ourselves to scientific research. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文主题； 第二步，介绍屠呦呦的情况； 第三步，从她身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①born in出生于 ②show great interest in对……表现出极大的兴趣 ③succeed in doing sth成功做某事 [高分句型] ①Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province on December 30th, 1930, Tu Youyou, a famous female pharmaceutical chemist, showed great interest in traditional Chinese medicine when she was young.（when引导时间状语从句） 9．“铁榔头”郎平曾经是中国女排的主教练，她的优秀事迹和为中国女排所做的贡献值得我们传颂和学习。假设你的偶像是郎平，请你根据下面表格的提示，写一篇关于她的文章，发表在学校英文报刊上。 个人信息 1960年12月10日出生于中国天津 受父亲的影响，从小就对排球感兴趣 职业生涯 作为运动员，刻苦训练，参加国家队的选拔，成功地赢得了许多奖牌，证明了…… 作为教练，高标准严要求，队员处于困境时……带领中国女排多次夺冠，我们以她为骄傲…… 你的感受 作为青少年，我从她身上学到了…… 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； （3）词数：100词左右； （4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 中国女排：Chinese women’s volleyball team 夺冠：win the championship The Hero in My Heart ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Hero in My Heart Do you know the “Iron Hammer”? She is a hero to Chinese sports fans. Her real name is Lang Ping. Lang Ping was born in Tianjin on 10th Dec. 1960. Influenced by her father, she has been interested in volleyball since she was young. As a volleyball player, she practised hard and tried out for the national team. She succeeded in winning many prizes. She proved that Chinese women could play volleyball well. As a coach, she was very strict and worked to high standards. She always cheered her team members up when they were in trouble. She thinks the whole team should fight for the last minute. Through hard work, the Chinese women’s volleyball team has won many games. We are proud of her. The spirit of never giving up has impressed me a lot. From her story, I realize that I should never give up when I am in trouble. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍郎平的个人信息，职业生涯； 第二步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③succeed in doing sth成功做某事 [高分句型] ①Influenced by her father, she has been interested in volleyball since she was young.（since引导时间状语从句） ②She always cheered her team members up when they were in trouble. （when引导时间状语从句） 10．南丁格尔是一个心地善良、乐于助人的人，她终身奉献于护士事业，为纪念她，人们把她的生日5月12日定为国际护士节（International Nurses’ Day）。请你根据下面的信息，写一篇短文简要介绍她的生平。 要求：文章词数在80—100之间，可根据要点进行适当发挥。 1820 be born, in a rich family 1851 be trained During the war save soldiers’ lives, the front hospitals After the war become a national hero, open the world’s first nurse school 1910 die 1974 become, International Nurses’ Day A famous British nurse—Florence Nightingale ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A famous British nurse—Florence Nightingale Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse. She was born in a rich family on 12th May, 1820. She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others, especially the sick. In 1851, she was trained as a nurse. During the war, she went to help in the front hospitals and saved many soldiers’ lives. When she came back after the war, she became a national hero. Later, Florence Nightingale opened the world’s first nurse school. Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910. In 1974, her birthday became International Nurses Day because of the great love and help she gave to people. Nightingale is my hero. I’ve learnt a lot from her. I want to be a good nurse like her in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Florence Nightingale的生平； 第二步，讲述自己从她身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②be ready to do sth乐于做某事 ③because of因为 [高分句型] ①When she came back after the war, she became a national hero.（when引导时间状语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$