Unit 1 Wise men in history 单元话题满分范文必背-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（沪教牛津版）

Unit 1 Wise men in history 单元话题满分范文必背 1．假如你是Steve，请你根据下面的信息介绍一下孔子、莎士比亚、马克吐温三位作家，据可适当发挥，写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： Confucius 中国；思想家、教育家；睿智；思想影响。 Shakespeare 英国；剧作有意义。 Mark Twain 美国；十九世纪；不如前两者出名。 注意：1.词数：80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实的学校及学生名字。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The reason why writers are famous is that their books are still being read and their books deeply affect people. Confucius is a thinker and educator in ancient China. He is a man of great wisdom. His thoughts have far-reaching influence. Shakespeare is a famous British dramatist. His creation has influenced many dramatists and made great contributions to later literature. Mark Twain was a famous American writer in the 19th century. Although he was not as famous as the first two, he also contributed to the development of world literature. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息介绍三位作家，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出对三位作家的介绍； 第二步，具体介绍孔子、莎士比亚、马克吐温的情况。 [亮点词汇] ①a man of great wisdom一个才智超群的人 ②made great contributions to为……做出了巨大的贡献 ③as famous as和……一样有名 ④the development of……的发展 [高分句型] ①The reason why writers are famous is that their books are still being read and their books deeply affect people.（定语从句和表语从句） ②Although he was not as famous as the first two, he also contributed to the development of world literature.（状语从句） 2．假设你昨天读了一则关于司马光的故事，请根据以下内容写一篇读后感。 故事梗概 ·司马光和朋友在花园里玩耍 ·突然一个男孩爬上树并掉入树下的水缸 ·水缸装满了水，男孩在内不能呼吸 ·司马光捡起石头砸缸 ·水缸破了，水流出来，男孩得救 你对司马光的评价 …… Yesterday, I read a story about Sima Guang. One day, he and his friends were playing happily in the garden._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Yesterday, I read a story about Sima Guang. One day, he and his friends were playing happily in the garden. They were having great fun. In the garden, there was a big vat filled with water. A boy climbed up a tree to play. Suddenly, the boy fell into the vat by accident. Another child noticed this and shouted, “Help! Help! He has fallen into the vat!” The other children were scared. They didn’t know what to do. Some of the children ran out of the yard to get help. But the vat was filled with water and the boy could not breathe in it. So Sima Guang did not run out to ask for help. He picked up a big stone and hit the vat. The vat broke and water flowed out. The boy was finally saved. I think Sima Guang was very smart and kind through this incident, and from this story, we should learn that when we are in danger, we must calm down and find a solution. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对“司马光砸缸”的故事进行概括； 第二步，表达自己对司马光的看法； 第三步，总结对这则故事的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① have great fun 玩得开心 ② by accident 意外地，偶然 ③ ask for help 请求帮助 [高分句型] ① The boy was finally saved.（一般过去时的被动语态） ② We should learn that when we are in danger, we must calm down and find a solution.（that引导的宾语从句） 3．“花木兰代父从军”的故事家喻户晓。请你根据下列汉语提示写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。 从前，有一个女孩儿叫花木兰。她女扮男装，代替父亲参军。在军队里没有人发现她是个女孩儿。她作战非常英勇。战争结束后，她回到了家乡，直到那时她的伙伴们才知道她是女儿身！ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Once upon a time, there was a girl called Hua Mulan. Her father was too old to go out to the battle, so she joined the army instead of her father. In the army, no one noticed that she was a girl. She fought very bravely. After the war, she returned to her hometown and until then her partners knew she was a girl. What a nice girl! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据汉语提示进行写作，注意语句连贯，表达清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍曾经有一个女孩叫花木兰； 第二步，具体介绍花木兰的事迹； 第三步，书写结语，表达对花木兰的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①once upon a time从前 ②instead of代替 ③until then直到那时 [高分句型] ①Her father was too old to go out to the battle, so she joined the army instead of her father.（so连接的并列句） ②In the army, no one noticed that she was a girl.（that引导宾语从句） ③What a nice girl!（感叹句） 4．没有共产党，就没有新中国。七十多年前，为建立新中国，在党的领导下，中国人民浴血奋战，涌现出许许多多的英雄人物。今天我们来用英语讲述小英雄王二小的故事吧！ 要点： 1. 1929年出生于河北省，11岁时父母去世。 2. 后来成为儿童团成员，聪明勇敢。 3. 1942年10月25日早晨，为保护村民，被敌人杀害，年仅13岁。 4. 你的两点感悟…… 要求： 1.故事必须包含所提供的四个要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 2.80词左右。故事开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：儿童团the Children’s League The Story of Wang Erxiao A long time ago, there was a young hero, who was Wang Erxiao. Please follow me to recall his story. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Story of Wang Erxiao A long time ago, there was a young hero, who was Wang Erxiao. Please follow me to recall his story. Wang Erxiao was born in 1929. When he was eleven years old, his parents passed away. Then he became a member of the Children’s League. Wang was clever and brave. On the morning of October 25, 1942, he was killed by enemies for protecting villagers. He was just thirteen years old. We live in times of peace and maybe we don’t need to sacrifice ourselves. But we should remember the heroes who once fought for their country. At the same time, we should study hard to build a better society. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据给出信息，介绍英雄王二小的故事。并写出自己的感悟，注意要点齐全，行文流畅。 2.写作指导：本文主要是介绍英雄王二小的故事，所以时态上应以一般过去时为主，注意第三人称单数做主语时谓语动词的变化；写感悟时，时态主要以一般现在时为主。书写时，注意句子的表述要符合英文表达习惯。 5．假定你是李辉，你校英语社团正在策划一次以“中国古代杰出人物”为主题的活动周，你和同学看完通知后想参加该活动。请你认真阅读该通知，并按要求写一篇英语短文。 NoticeDear students, The English Club in our school plans to organize a week-length event about Historic Figures in ancient China. You and your friends should work together to introduce one of the Chinese historic figures. ★Who is the figure that you want to introduce? ★Why do you want to introduce the person? ★How will you display the person? (By making a poster? By creating a video? Or by…) ★How will you work together to finish the task? Looking forward to your passage. School English ClubWord Bank: figure (n. 人物); display (v. 展示) 注意：1.词数80—100 左右；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I’m Li Hui from Class One. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Li Hui from Class One. I will introduce Confucius to you. As you know, China is greatly influenced by Confucianism. Confucius was a great Chinese thinker, educator and philosopher. He had many famous works. Confucius’ thoughts have been developed into a system of philosophy known as Confucianism. He has made a great difference in our education. We will create a video to introduce him. I will search for some information about Confucius, and some of students will turn the information into English dialogues. And others will create the video. I think we will finish the work successfully. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时、现在完成时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍一个古代杰出人物，并介绍会如何合作完成任务，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你们要介绍哪个古代杰出人物以及原因； 第二步，介绍你们要如何展示这个人以及会如何合作完成任务； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①search for寻找 ②turn...into把……变成 [高分句型] ①Confucius’ thoughts have been developed into a system of philosophy known as Confucianism. (过去分词作定语) ②I think we will finish the work successfully. (宾语从句) 6．假设你准备参加学校“英语角”开展的“用英语讲故事”活动，你选取了“曹冲称象”这个大家熟悉的故事。请你根据下面图片的内容，用英语写一篇80词以上的小短文。 注意：标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighed Cao Cao was very glad to have received an elephant as a present. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Add up all the numbers and we will know the weight of the elephant,’’ Cao Chong said to his father with kind of pride. 【答案】One possible version: How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighed Cao Cao was very glad to have received an elephant as a present. He wanted to know how heavy the elephant was, but there was not a scale big enough to weigh the elephant. One day, Cao Chong said to his father, “I’ve found a way to weigh the elephant.” Cao Chong asked a man to lead the elephant onto a boat. When the boat stopped sinking, the man drew a line on the boat side. After the elephant was taken off the boat, Cao Chong had some men put stones into the boat until the water reached the line. Cao Chong asked the men to weigh each stone and put down the number. “Add up all the numbers and we will know the weight of the elephant,” Cao Chong said to his father with kind of pride. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据图片提示和自身知识储备，介绍“曹冲称象”这个故事发生的原因、经过和结果等；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍故事发生的原因/背景； 第二步，介绍故事的经过； 第三步，介绍故事的结果。 [亮点词汇] ① stop doing sth. 停止做某事 ② put down 放下 [高分句型] ① He wanted to know how heavy the elephant was, but there was not a scale big enough to weigh the elephant.（how引导的宾语从句；there be句型） ② After the elephant was taken off the boat, Cao Chong had some men put stones into the boat until the water reached the line.（被动语态；until引导的时间状语从句） 7．你的班级打算进行历史人物故事演讲比赛，请根据以下要点，介绍历史人物岳飞。内容包括以下要点： 1. 岳飞出生在一个贫穷的家庭。 2. 他从小非常喜欢看书，从书中学到了很多知识。 3. 多年以后，岳飞参军。由于他在军队中表现很优秀，他成为了一名将军。岳飞领兵作战，赢得了很多战争。 4. 你的感想…… 参考词汇：general将军，army军队 要求： 1. 词数：80词—100词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2, 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, I would like to introduce a Chinese hero today. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear classmates, I would like to introduce a Chinese hero today. Yue Fei, a famous general in ancient China, was born in a poor family. He enjoyed reading books very much when he was very young. He read a lot of different kinds of books and learned a lot from the book. Many years later, Yue Fei joined the army and became a soldier. As a soldier, he was excellent in the army, so he became the general of the army. Yue Fei led the soldiers to fight with enemies bravely. They won many wars. Yue Fei was a great hero. We should learn from him and devote ourselves to our motherland. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍岳飞的出生及爱好； 第二步，介绍岳飞参军及在军队的表现； 第三步，评价岳飞并表达自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in 出生于 ②different kinds of 不同种类的 ③devote oneself to 献身于 [高分句型] He enjoyed reading books very much when he was very young.（enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事；when引导的时间状语从句） 8．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom来信说想了解中国历史上的著名人物（famous persons）。请你根据下面图片的提示，选择一位著名人物，给Tom写一封回信，介绍一下该人物，内容包括： 1. 他的个人情况； 2. 他的成就； 3. 你对他的评价。 注意: 1.词数80-100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括所给内容信息可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Zheng He （1371—143） Cai Lun （61—121） Confucius （551—479BC） Laozi （the 6th century BC） Dear Tom, I am happy to know that you are interested in famous persons in Chinese history. Let me introduce one to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the information can help you and I am looking forward to your letter. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考例文： Dear Tom, I am happy to know that you are interested in famous persons in Chinese history. Let me introduce one to you. As you know, China is greatly influenced by Confucianism. So, today I will tell you something about Confucius. According to tradition, Confucius was born in 551 BC. He was a great Chinese thinker, educator and philosopher. He was the founder of Confucianism, one of the world’s most famous cultural figures. He had many famous works. Confucius’ thoughts have been developed into a system of philosophy known as Confucianism. His teachings may be found in the Analects of Confucius, such as “Keep what you say and carry out what you do.”, “Study hard and never feel contented, and never be tired of teaching others.” and so on. He has made a great difference in our education. I hope the information can help you and I am looking forward to your letter. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求从所给的图示中选择一位著名人物，从三方面：个人情况，成就及你对他的评价，给Tom写信介绍一下该人物。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：文章已给出开头和结尾，中间部分主要用第三人称来介绍，介绍该人物的个人情况时，时态以一般过去时为主；关于成就和评价方面，时态用现在时。注意上下文衔接自然，语句通顺、逻辑合理，完成后，要反复检查，保证无单词和语法错误。 9．文彦博是北宋杰出的政治家,他自小聪明过人。“文彦博灌水浮球”的故事在我国人民群众中广为流传,脍炙人口。请你根据以下的内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍“文彦博灌水浮球”的故事。 【内容提示】 文彦博 1. 文彦博与朋友踢球时,球被踢进了树洞里。 2. 孩子们尝试取球,可是树洞太深,摸不到底。 3. 文彦博想出办法后,叫朋友们提来几桶水。 4. … 注意: (1)参考词汇:桶 bucket浮foat; (2)词数80左右 (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Wen Yanbo lived in ancient China. One day, he was playing a ball with his friends on the grass near a big tree. Suddenly, the ball was kicked into the hole of the tree. The children tried to get the ball by hand. But the hole was so deep that they couldn’t touch the bottom of it. Wen Yanbo thought for a while and said, "I have an idea. Let’s have a try. ” He asked his friends to carry some buckets of water and fill the tree hole with the water. When some water ran over, the ball floated. They got the ball finally. How clever Wen Yanbo was! 【详解】1.    题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，文中给出了人物和事件，按照要求写一篇介绍文彦博的短文。内容提示给出了事情的开头，之后的过程及结果，要求作者自己发挥。全文讲述文彦博过去的故事，时态用一般过去时。 2.    例文点评：本例文以记叙文的方式记录了文彦博的故事，时态是一般过去时，人称是第三人称。讲述故事，注意句与句之间的衔接，使文章流畅、通顺。最后以总结性的语言结束全文。 3.    高分亮点：Suddenly；被动语态；try to do sth；so…that句型；fill with；run over；感叹句。 10．根据下面提示写一篇关于我国古代诗人(poet)屈原的短文(词数40左右)。 1.擅长写诗，作品很多。 2.给楚王(King Chu)提了很多建议，反而被投入监狱(prison)。 3.最后对国家失望，投江而死。 4.人们每年过端午节来纪念屈原。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Qu Yuan was a famous poet who wrote many famous poems. He gave the King Chu a lot of good advice, but was put into prison. He was so disappointed that he threw himself into the river. In memory of Qu Yuan, people have the Dragon Boat Festival every year. 【详解】本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。a lot of、put into、throw into、in memory of和every year等固定短语的运用使得文章很生动。同时，结果状语从句He was so disappointed that he threw himself into the river.的使用，丰富了短文的句式结构，亮点突出，是一篇优秀的习作。 【点睛】本文要求用英文写一篇关于我国古代诗人(poet)屈原的短文，属于记叙文。考生要以提示信息为主要内容，注意时态的运用，做到表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，符合逻辑关系，不要出现单词拼写错误。 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$