内容正文:
假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校将于下周开展以“Labor is the Most Beautiful”为主题的劳动周活动,请你以学生会的名义发起倡议,内容包括:
1. 学生目前对劳动的态度; 2.劳动的意义; 3.呼吁参加
问题:
1.不是倡议书的格式,结构混乱
2.卷面不整洁
3. labor用作动词(struggle/do hard physical work/move with difficulty)
4.“以……为主题”结构错误
5.短句偏多,无非v./定从/主从/动名词作主语
写作思路与步骤
Para1:倡议的原因/目的/背景+发出倡议
范文:
In a bid to raise labor awareness among us(目的), the annual Labor Week (themed “Labor is the Most Beautiful”) is scheduled to be held next week(背景) and we are appealing to everyone to actively engage in the activities(发出倡议).
描述现象:
· Recently, there exists a disturbing problem/phenomenon that+现象的具体内容(同位语从句), which gives rise to(导致)+导致的后果
最近,存在着一个令人不安的问题/现象……,这导致了……
· In the past few years, an increasing number of people have done sth, which sparks(引发) the problem that+问题内容
在过去几年里,越来越多的人……,这引发了……问题。
发出倡议:
· As a result, I firmly call on everyone to do sth.
· Thus, I’m here to arouse people’s concern and appeal to everyone to take effective measures before things get worse.
现象:学生目前对劳动的态度(不重视劳动)
· 对劳动的态度
范文:
Currently, many of us might perceive labor as(将...视作) a chore(琐事) or something time-consuming. However, it’s time for us to recognize the significance of labor and take actions.
(1) Recently, there exists a disturbing phenomenon that _______________________, which gives rise to people’s concern.
(2) In the past few years, an increasing number of students _______________________, which arouses people’s concern.
发出倡议:
如何表达“以...为主题”
①As a result, I firmly call on everyone to actively engage in the Labor Week_______________(介词短语)“Labor is the Most Beautiful” , which will be held in our school next week.
②As a result, I firmly call on everyone to actively engage in the Labor Week_______________(定语从句)“Labor is the Most Beautiful” , which will be held in our school next week.
③As a result, I firmly call on everyone to actively engage in the Labor Week_______________(非谓语动词作定语)“Labor is the Most Beautiful” , which will be held in our school next week.
Para 2 倡议的具体内容
· 劳动的意义
培养基本的生活技能 _______________________
使我们配备有必要的知识和技能______________________
提高身体素质____________________
丰富课外生活____________________
获得成就感 _____________________
范文:
Labor carries great significance as it not only boosts personal growth(促进个人成长) but also contributes to the progress of our communities(为我们社区的进步作出贡献). By getting involved, we can build up our body(锻炼身体) and cultivate virtues of strong willpower, perseverance, and teamwork(培养意志力、毅力和团队合作的美德).
Para3 表达倡议者的决心和希望
1. Let’s join hands and swing into action(立即行动) immediately!
2. Every effort matters. Only by doing... can we.... Let’s spare no effort to take action.
3. Every small act makes a difference! Your cooperation/participation will be much appreciated.
范文:
Join us for Labor Week! Let’s make it a memorable and fulfilling(令人满足的) memory.
The Student Union
总结倡议书结构:
Para1 陈述现象/背景+发出倡议(两句话)
Para2 倡议的具体内容(做法/意义)
Para3 再次呼吁
培养基本的生活技能 cultivate fundamental life skills
使我们配备有必要的知识和技能equip us with essential skills and knowledge
提高身体素质improve physical fitness
丰富课外生活 enrich our extracurricular life
获得成就感 obtain a sense of achievement
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