专题04 书面表达(苏州中考真题+名校模拟)-备战2025年中考英语常考语法点+题型练习(中考真题+名校模拟真题)(江苏扬州专用)

专题04 书面表达 (苏州中考真题+名校模拟) 1．（2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。 选择一：以Sometimes people surprise us为题，内容包括： 1．你对这句话的理解； 2．结合实际生活举例说明； 3．你得到的启发。 选择二：以Trouble is a friend为题，内容包括： 1．你对这句话的理解； 2．结合实际生活举例说明； 3．你得到的启发。 注意： 1．词数：100左右； 2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章； 3．照抄阅读语篇不得分； 4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Title: ____________ After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Title: Trouble is a friend After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend. The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend. In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly. In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解； 第二步，结合实际生活举例说明； 第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。 [亮点词汇] ① thanks to多亏 ② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③ in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句） ②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句） 2．（2023·江苏苏州·中考真题）Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”，你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括： 1. 触动你的一件事情； 2. 这件事给你的启示； 3. 你的倡议。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右。 2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分） 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Starting from me and now ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Starting from me and now Last weekend, I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we should try our best to keep the city clean. First of all, we should protect our environment. Don’t throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Don’t ride too fast or play on the street. Last but not least, remember to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time. As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示； 第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of 各种各样的 ②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事 ③remember to do sth. 记得做某事 ④in time 及时 [高分句型] ①When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground.（when引导时间状语从句） ②We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. （“sb. had better do sth.”表建议的句型） ③I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.（宾语从句） 3．（2022·江苏苏州·中考真题）《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 你对该谚语的理解； 2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）； 3. 你的感悟， 注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Practice makes perfect Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Practice makes perfect Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly. The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 4．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）为创造美好的生活，学习基本的生活技能 (swimming, cooking, fixing, cleaning...) 在青少年的成长过程中十分必要。为鼓励青少年争做积极的生活者，校园广播“西附之声”特举办征文活动。请根据流程图的提示，围绕你选择的某项技能,以“A Little Life Skill Is A Big Help”为题写一篇征文。 注意事项： 1.观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名或校名等信息； 3.100词左右，已给部分不计入总词数。 A Little Life Skill Is A Big Help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now. 【答案】例文： Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills. As for me, I would like to choose cooking which is a basic skill in our daily life. It’s wonderful to create my own dishes. I hope I can take care of myself when my parents are not at home. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. There are many short videos about cooking on the Internet. Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料提示写作要点不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出话题； 第二步，阐述自己想学习的生活技能、原因以及学习方式； 第三步，书写结语，发出号召。 [亮点词汇] ①be supposed to应该 ②as for me对我来说 ③look after照顾 [高分句型] ①As for me, I would like to choose cooking which is a basic skill in our daily life.（定语从句） ②I hope I can take care of myself when my parents are not at home. （宾语从句；时间状语从句） 5．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）学生更喜欢纸质书还是电子书？学生最喜欢什么类型的书籍？假如你是李华，就相关问题在班里做了调查，结果见下图。学校英语社团将举办“Reading Habits”主题活动，请你准备一份英文交流稿，包含以下内容： 1. 基于以下图表，简要叙述你的调查结果； 2. 陈述你自己的阅读喜好及原因； 3. 分享一本你最喜欢的书籍。 注意事项： 1. 词数 100 左右，交流稿开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new world. 【答案】参考例文 Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. Here are my findings. Most students like reading paper books. Only 24.4% students use e-Books to read articles. They like reading novels best. Next comes the history books, taking up 22%. About 14% students like reading science books. As far as I’m concerned, I like reading magazines. There are many kinds of article types in magazines, and I can choose whatever I like to read. It can satisfy my desire to explore the world. My favourite magazine is Newboy. It is published every month. It’s really a good book to read. Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new world. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意仔细观察图表内容并合理描述，需包含所有要点，可适当发挥使行文更连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己，引出主题； 第二步，分析图表，简述调查结果； 第三步，陈述自己的阅读喜好及原因，并分享最喜欢的书籍。 [亮点词汇] ① take up占据 ② as far as I’m concerned就我而言 [高分句型] ① There are many kinds of article types in magazines, and I can choose whatever I like to read.（并列句+宾语从句） ② It is published every month.（被动语态） 6．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）现在社会上存在过度溺爱孩子的现象，导致孩子们不懂关爱，不懂如何与人交往。请根据下图和提示以“Too Much Care Spoils (宠坏) a Child”为题写一篇100词左右的文章。 要点： 1. 简要描写图片内容； 2. 说明图片含义； 3. 表达你的观点。 参考词汇：blooming adj.盛开的      destroy v.摧毁 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文   As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over­watering. Often people do things with good intentions, but the result may be quite different. Such can also be the case with us while we grow up.   To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood, our parents tend to offer us too much care, for example, making beds, washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us. They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us. As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities. 【详解】总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图片和参考词汇，围绕话题完成写作，注意语句通顺连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描写图片内容，说明图片含义； 第二步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be destroyed by被……破坏 ②intention意图 ③hardship困难 ④tend to do sth倾向于做…… ⑤offer sb sth为某人提供某物 ⑥spoil溺爱 ⑦independent独立的 ⑧shoulder one’s due responsibilities承担某人应有的责任 [高分句型] ①As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over­watering. (被动语态) ②As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. (what引导主语从句，so that引导目的状语从句) ③Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities. (部分倒装) 7．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）时间如白驹过隙，三年初中的学习生活即将过去，回顾你的这段学习生涯，你最想对自己说的一句话是什么？请你以这句话为标题，写一篇英语作文，内容包括： 1.你最想对自己说的一句话； 2.什么经历让你想对自己说这句话； 3.你的感受。 注意： 1.词数：100左右。 2.内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）。 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Learn to Smile Though many words are encouraging, what I would like to say to myself is “learn to smile”. As the saying goes, attitude decides everything. Since smiling is a positive attitude, I often smile to myself to become confident and happy. In my daily life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, I don’t do well in all the subjects, or I’m misunderstood by friends. Then I say to myself, “Learn to smile.” Smiling to myself can really bring confidence back to me and beat the unhappy feelings. In a word, smiling is a language which can make me understood by others. I believe the more I smile, the happier life I will live. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图：最想对自己说的话是什么； 第二步，介绍自己的经历，为什么想对自己说这句话； 第三步，书写结语。描述自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①For example例如 ②learn to smile学会微笑 ③In a word总之 ④do well in擅长 [高分句型] ①Since smiling is a positive attitude, I often smile to myself to become confident and happy. (原因状语从句) ②In a word, smiling is a language which can make me understood by others. (定语从句) 8．（2024·江苏苏州·一模） 亲爱的十年后的自己： 你好！当你打开这封信的时候，我们已经相隔了整整十年的时光。 现在的我，正坐在考场里，提笔给未来的你写这封信，心中充满了感慨。 …… 内容要求：在这封信中，你可以谈谈自己现在的生活状态、学习情况，分享你的梦想和追求，也可以向未来的自己提出期望和建议。请充分发挥你的想象力，用英文书写这封跨越时空的信件。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右； 2. 内容完整（照抄试卷内容不得分）； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Dear future me, How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Love, Present me 【答案】例文 Dear future me, How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed. As I write to you from the past, I can’t quite imagine what kind of person you’ve become. Right now, I’m a teenager who loves trying new things. I dream of exploring new places, where each step takes me closer to understanding the world. I want to be someone who makes the world a better place. I know the years ahead will be filled with ups and downs, but each experience is a valuable lesson, isn’t it? Dear future me, wherever you are and whatever you’re doing, I hope you’ve learned to love yourself. Remember, I am always here with you. Love, Present me 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据内容要求进行写作，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，注意无单词及语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达此刻正在给十年后的自己写信； 第二步，介绍自己现在的状况，并分享自己的梦想和追求； 第三步，对未来的自己提出期望及建议。 [亮点词汇] ①dream of doing sth梦想做某事 ②be filled with充满 ③ups and downs起伏 [高分句型] ①As I write to you from the past, I can’t quite imagine what kind of person you’ve become. (what引导宾语从句) ②Right now, I’m a teenager who loves trying new things. (who引导定语从句) 9．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）从生物的解构、科幻小说的涌现、太极奥秘的探索、“嫦娥四号与玉兔”的中国式太空浪漫再到智能家居的日益普及。从古至今，人类对科学的追求从未止步。科学的不断发展给你的生活带来了怎样的影响？请以“Science Shapes Our Life”为题写一篇英语文章。内容应包括： 1.你对该问题的理解； 2.你的一次亲身经历； 3.你对未来科学的畅想。 注意： 1.词数100； 2.内容涵盖要点，照抄本卷语篇不得分； 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Science Shapes Our Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Science Shapes Our Life In the last few decades, science has developed at high speed, and played an important role in our daily lives. It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better. Recently, my family decided to embrace the future of transportation by purchasing a new energy vehicle. I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car. Furthermore, new energy vehicles use electric energy as a power source. Electricity can be obtained through a variety of ways, including renewable energy such as solar and wind energy, so the popularity of electric vehicles has a positive impact on the environment. Looking ahead, the future of science appears promising, with endless possibilities waiting to be explored and discovered. Advances in fields such as artificial intelligence, biotechnology, and space exploration hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍科学发展带给生活什么样的影响； 第二步，讲述科学发展影响自身生活的经历； 第三步，表达对未来科学的畅想。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中起重要作用 ②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ③compared with与……相比 ④have a positive impact on对……有积极的影响 [高分句型] ①It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.（强调句） ②I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car.（省略that的宾语从句） ③…hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.（省略that的定语从句） 10．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）中考将至，不同的同学在面对中考时有不同的情绪表现，因此你校将举行一次以“调节情绪，迎战中考”为主题的班会课，来探讨如何调节自己的情绪，请你为这次的班会课准备一份演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 简述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现； 2. 提出调节情绪的方法（至少三点）； 3. 鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。 注意事项： 1. 词数：100左右（首尾不计入总字数）。 2. 围绕主题，表达内容积极向上（照抄阅读语篇不得分）。 3. 作文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. 【答案】例文     Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently.     Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exam?     First, it is important for us to be in a good mood. Second, we should have proper aims. Third, we should have enough sleep instead of staying up late. Fourth, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. Last but not least, we should face the High School Entrance Exam positively and optimistically.     Thank you for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现，比如有些同学感到自信和兴奋，而有些同学感到紧张、压力过大，这导致他们吃不好也睡不好； 第二步，具体提出调节情绪的方法，例如保持心情愉悦、制定合适的目标、保证充足的睡眠、多和父母、老师、同学们沟通交流等； 第三步，书写结束语，鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。 [亮点词汇] ①try their best to 尽他们最大的努力 ②stressed out 极度焦虑的 ③in order to 为了 ④be in a good mood 心情愉悦 ⑤instead of 代替，而不是 ⑥stay up late 熬夜 ⑦Last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点 ⑧positively and optimistically 积极乐观地 [高分句型] ①Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. （and连接的并列句） ②While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$