Unit 1 writing 写作课件2023-2024学年沪教牛津版（广州沈阳通用）九年级英语上册

牛津广州版九年级上册 Unit 1 Wise men in history Writing & Culture 1 What makes a good writing? for example； good structure … Brainstorming A good writing Good structure--- beginning, body, ending Clear topic(topic sentence+ supporting sentences) Fluent---with transitional words and phrases No mistakes Some wonderful sentences and phrases Please compare :Which one do you prefer? Why? When he was a child, he liked playing football. He also liked playing computer games. But later, he liked reading. Now, he likes watching basketball games very much. In his childhood, he was fond of football and computer games. As time went by, he became interested in reading. Now he has become a great fan of basketball. Can you think of other expressions to show that you “like” something? prefer/favour/be fond of/ be interested in/ have interest in / be keen on/ a lover of.../ be a great fan of..../ be crazy about/be attracted to.... Rule 1:use different words to express the same meaning in writing. When you have written something, you should check your work to make sure the spelling, grammar and punctuation are all correct. Rule 2:Improving your work 6 gr=grammar mistake sp=spelling mistake p=punctuation mistake Discuss different kinds of mistakes in writing and know about their abbreviations below. 7 Julius Caesar was warn that someone wanted to kill him and he should not speak on public? He was standing on the steps of the Senate when he attacked. He said, “I must speak to my poeple.” As he died, he see his oldest friend Brutus. He was one of the killers, “You too, Brutus?” He asked, and die. sp gr/p gr gr sp/gr p gr Julius Caesar killed by freind friend warned in was attacked people saw . died Find, underline and correct the mistakes in the story. . 8 Basic rules to follow in finding out mistakes: mistakes 主谓一致 句子结构 时态 拼写 标点符号 短语搭配 单 复数 please read : We should protect the environment. We should save water. We should save electricity. We should not throw rubbish onto the ground. We should also plant more trees. What do you think of the writing? Rule3: combine sentences to achieve sentence variety （句子多样性） 1.The movie was frightening. It made my hair stand on end. The movie was so frightening that it made my hair stand on end. 2.He left his office angrily. He didn’t say anything. He left his office angrily without saying anything. ※combine your sentences with conjunctions (连词) and phrases Rule 4: use proper transitions to make your writing more fluent 表示罗列增加、顺序 first of all， next, besides, what’s more, furthermore, in addition … 表示转折关系 but, however, on the contrary, on the other hand, while... 表示因果关系 because, because of, thanks to…, due to..., for the reason that... 表示举例 for example, such as…, take… for example… 表示概括归纳 in a word, on the whole, in conclusion, in short… 13 袁隆平 1.生卒年：1930年9月至2021年5月 2.职业：著名农业科学家（agricultural scientist） 3.主要经历和贡献： ①一生致力于研究水稻，目的是找一种更好种植水稻的方法以及帮助人们远离饥饿 ②大学期间学习农业科学，毕业后在农场里做研究 ③成功研发杂交水稻，提高水稻产量， 被称为杂交水稻之父 4.人物评价 本次作文常见问题 最明显问题：时态混乱 Yuan Longpin was borned on September 1930s/in 1930 year/ in 1930 and September. He spent all his life to develop the rice. He was successed in developing hybrid rice. Because of his hard-working, he got a success in develop hybrid rice. He is a famous people. He in order to find a better way to plant rice. And help people stay away from hungry. After graduate university, he was study/studyed the rice on the farm. In our lives, there is always someone who motivates us and fills us with hope. For me, Yuan Longping is such a person. Yuan was born in September 1930 in Beijing. As a famous agricultural scientist, he devoted his life to doing research on rice. His goal was to find a better way to grow rice and help people stay away from hunger. In order to achieve his goal, he studied farming science at university and after graduation, he spent a lot of time doing research on the farm.Thanks to his hard work, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice and increased the production of rice. He made such great achievements that he was called the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. Although Yuan passed away in May 2021, his legacy and his mission to end hunger lives on. In my opinion, Yuan was strong-minded, hard-working and creative. He made me realize the importance of dreams and hard work. I will keep working hard to make my dream come true! 16 ⭐可参考作业布置如下： Samples: 个人作业（可选） 小组作业（可选） 1.背诵本篇作文，将其抄入作文集锦中。 1.小组任务：完成《双语报》N4版第五课时writing部分。 2.找出作文中重点词组和句型，并模仿造句。 2.完成《阳光学业评价》Writing部分练习。 Homework 单击“同步练习题”字样，即可打开本课时同步练习题的Word文档。 17 $$