Unit 1-2人物介绍作文2024-2025学年牛津深圳版英语九年级上册

九上U1/2 请根据以下要点提示，向你的朋友 Peter 介绍中国“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平。 要点： 1.出生地：北京； 出生时间：1930 年 9 月 7 日 2.袁从小就对科学展现出浓厚的兴趣。1953年西南大学毕业后，他决定研究杂交水稻。 3.在 1964 年到 1969 年，袁隆平做了超过 3000 次实验，并且最终取得了成功。 4.因为他的研究，中国人不再担心饥饿。袁隆平也因为他的贡献而被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。 5.你的评价 提示词：杂交水稻 hybrid rice 要求： 1.词数 80 左右（开头结尾给出，不计总词数）； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【 审题】 1. 体裁： 人物介绍类 2. 主题： 袁隆平的介绍 3. 人称： 第三人称、第一人称 4. 时态： 一般过去时、一般现在时 5. 分段： Para1 (开头): 要点1+补充点 （总印象） Para2（正文）:要点2/3/4 (生平介绍) Para3 (结尾):总结(评价)+升华（学习他） 6. 注意事项：不规则动词、词汇，大小写、标点符号、字母规范，名词单复数，三单 【词汇短语积累】 1.出生在：was born in/on 2. 在1930 年 9 月 7 日 ：on September 7th,1930. / on the seventh of September ,1930. 2.从小:from an early age/when he was young/a kid. 3.展现出浓厚的兴趣:show great interest in 4.毕业后: After his graduation /graduating from .....university/he graduated... 5.研究: study/do research in/on 6.超过: more than /over 7.取得成功:succeed/managed to do 8.因为/由于:because of/thanks to/as a result of 9.不再担心饥饿:not worry about hunger/getting hungry any more/ no longer... 10.贡献： contributions 做贡献；make contributions to 11.被誉为: be called/named/regarded/known/considered/honored as 12.杂交水稻之父: Father of hybrid rice 【高分句型】 Para1：要点1+人物总印象； 基础版 Sb was born on ... Sb is one of the 形容词最高级+名词复数 in the world. 高阶版 Sb was born on ... Sb is one of the 形容词最高级+名词复数 that I have ever heard. Para2：要点2/3/4(生平介绍) 基础版 要点2: From an early age, sb. ... After graduating from Xinan University/he graduated... 要点3:From 1964 to 1969, Yuan did over ... and finally succeed . 要点4:Because of his research, Chinese people don’t worry about hunger any more. And Yuan was also named as.... 高阶版 要点2: When he was young/a kid, sb. ... After his graduation from Xinan University, sb. ... After he graduated from Xinan University, sb. ... 要点3: From 1964 to 1969, Yuan did more than ... and managed to ... 要点4:Thanks to/As a result of his research, Chinese people don’t worry about getting hungry any more. And Yuan was also honored as.... Para3：要点5(总结＋升华) 基础版 总结：In my opinion, Yuan Longping was a real hero. 升华：He has set a good example for us students and we /are supposed to learn from him. 高阶版 总结：From my point of view, Yuan Longping was a real giant. 升华：We should/ought to/are supposed to learn from his hard-working spirit and make contributions to our society. 【范文】 Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on September 7th,1930. He is one of the greatest scientists that I have ever heard. Yuan showed great interest in science from an early age. After graduating from Xinan University in 1930, he decided to do research on hybrid rice. From 1964 to 1969, Yuan did more than 3000 experiments and finally achieved success. As a result of his research, the Chinese people are no longer worried about getting hungry. Yuan is also named the “Father of Hybrid Rice” because of his contribution. From my point of view, Yuan Longping was a real giant. He worked most of his life growing better rice without asking for anything. We ought to learn from his hard-working spirit and make contributions to our society. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$