Week 16 推荐信&挑战自我类读后续写-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 16 推荐信&挑战自我类读后续写 Monday 如何写好推荐信 ◆对接答案P238 推荐人物、地点，或者做某件事 推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方或一件东西等，一 般提出推荐理由，介绍自己推荐的内容的优点等。 局谋篇 推荐的原因 。表达推荐得到采纳的希望 典题示例 (2024·山东省日照市第二中学高二月考)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Stve对中国美食很感兴趣， 他想让你推荐一种中国传统美食。请给他回信，内容包括：1，推荐的美食：2.推荐的理由：3.希望有机会来 中国品尝美食。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Steve, Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时为主 主题 推荐信 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题，说明写信目的：第二段：推荐理由：第三段：希望对方接受推荐建议 Step Two 词汇运用 1.对…感兴趣 7.可口的 2.推荐 8.与…有联系 3.理由 9.乡愁 4.如下 10.口味和馅料 5.被认为是 11.各不相同 6.传统食物 OStep Three 句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我知道您对中国菜感兴趣。 172 Week16推荐信&挑战自我类读后续写 (2)我想向您推荐饺子。 (3)我推荐的理由如下。 (4)饺子被认为是中国文化的象征。 (5)饺子是一种传统食品。 (6)这种传统食物几乎受到中国各地人们的喜爱。 (7)饺子很容易做。 (8)饺子吃起来很可口。 (9)饺子里面通常是白菜、猪肉或其他东西。 (10)最重要的是，家常饺子往往与乡愁联系在一起。 (11)不同家庭的饺子口味和馅料各不相同。 (12)如果您能考虑我的推荐，我会非常高兴。 (13)我希望有一天你能来中国品尝中国菜。 2.句式升级 (1)用现在分词作状语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 (2)用过去分词作状语，hat引导定语从句合并上题中的句子(4)、(5)和句子(6)。 (3)用not only..but also句式合并上题中的句子(7)和句子(8) (4)用s引导原因状语从句合并上题中的句子(10)和句子(11)。 Step Four连句成篇 8 言航英語 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Tuesday 推荐信满分词汇句式&模板晨通 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 4 recommend,.推荐 beginner n.初学者，新手 more than非常 pleased/delighted adj.高兴的 strongly ad.强烈地 recommendation n.建议 practical adj.实用的 provide with提供. effective adj.有效的 reason n.原因 as follows如下 the person of the year年度人物 focuse mostly on主要关注 deserve.,值得 rank.排名 encourage v.鼓励 theme m.主题 suggestion n.建议 helpful adj.有益的 be in need of需要 share with分享 introduce v.介绍 more importantly更重要的是 favorite n.受喜爱的人（或事物】 attractive adj.有吸引力的 consider v.考虑 话题句式 5.It is a good way to broaden your mind,through which you can learn different cultures of the world. 引出话题先声夺人 它是能开阁视野的好办法，通过它，你可以了解世 1.I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning 界不同的文化。 Chinese.I'd like to recommend www.edchinese. 6.To begin with,he studies hard and always gets good com to you..得知你正在学习汉语，我非常高兴 results,ranking first in our class.首先，他学习努 我想向您推荐www.edchinese.coma 力，总是取得好成绩，在我们班排名第一。 2.Having known that you are in need of a student首尾结合余音回味 assistant,I happily recommend Li Mei to you. 7.I do hope that you can consider my recommendation 您需要一位学生助理，我很乐意向您推荐李梅。 and it can be of great help for your decision.我真希 3.I strongly recommend you to travel to Northwestern 望你能考虑我的推荐，也希望我的推荐对你的决 China by the newly opened high-speed rail from 定有所帮助。 Chengdu to Xi'an.我强烈建议你乘坐新开通的成8.I'll be extremely delighted if you can take my 都至西安的高铁到中国西北地区旅游。 recommendation into consideration..如果你能考虑 主题部分娓娓道来 我的推荐，我会非常高兴。 4.If you introduce it to your friends,they are bound to9.I hope you will find this website attractive and get interested,too!如果你把它介绍给你的朋友， helpful..I wish you a happy learning time.我希望你会 他们一定也会感兴趣的！ 发现这个网站有吸引力和帮助。祝你学习愉快。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear Thomas, Knowing that our library is going to buy books.I'd like to give some 模板中黑体字部 suggestions. 分是描写推荐信时可 Popular science books,our favourite,explain basic principles of nature in a 以通用的部分，其他部 simple and interesting way.They help us understand science subjects better and 分可以根据写作要求 arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.Besides,we read for fun and 灵活处理。 inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books. 第一、三段往往是 Classic works,written by masters,present great thoughts through fascinating stories 一般将来时，第二段作 and language.They not only offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to 为主体主要是一般现 think critically. 在时。 I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. 文章人称以第 Yours sincerely, 和第三人称为主。 Li Yue Week16推荐信&挑战自我类读后续写 Wednesday 推荐信写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P238 跟踪训练1◆推荐信 (2024·广东省江门市江门五中高二期末)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Charles正在学汉语，他发来 邮件请你推荐一部中国名著。请回信，内容包括：1.内容简介：2.推荐理由：3.表达期待。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Charles, Yours, Li Hua 跟踪训练2◆推荐信 (2024·湖北省宜昌市实验中学高二期末)假如你是李华，你校学生会要评选年度风云人物，现在请你 根据以下要点向你校学生会主席(Mak)写一封推荐信。1.被推荐人姓名：你班学生李明。2.推荐理由：a 学习刻苦，成绩优良：b.尊敬老师，团结同学：℃.乐于助人：上周在上学途中，他将一位突发重病的老人送往 医院。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 参考词汇年度风云人物the person of the year Dear Mark, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 07ò 言航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能16 ◆对接答案P239 如何提高续写中的环境描写 在续写中，环境描写往往可以衬托出人物心情4.sunlight阳光 和事件性质，如果是个人经历的话，环境变化一般都 5.wet and cloudy climate潮湿阴沉的气候 是用来衬托心情变化。比如，风和日丽、和风细雨能 (三)亮点句式 够衬托出人物快乐幸福的心情或美好的事物：漆黑 1.The sky was cloudless and a full moon hung in the 的夜晚，那主角一定是感到害怕：如果是写一个事件 sky 的话，环境变化也预示或者暗示事态变化。比如阴 天上没有一丝云彩，一轮满月挂在天空。 转晴，那么事态就是走向了一个好的方向，可能符合 2.The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering 主角利益或者符合道义等。总得来说，环境多次变 larks 化就是烘托气氛，为文章做铺垫、表示情节走向，还 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。 有对主角心理的衬托 3.The moon was a sharply defined crescent and the 一、天气的描写 sky was perfectly clear. (一)常用词汇 天空异常明净，一轮弯月挂在天上，轮廓十分 I.cloudless adj无云的，晴朗的 清晰。 2.wave n.水浪 4.The frost on the glass,frozen by the cold,changed 3.glitter.闪烁，闪耀 colors in the moonlight,and flickered faintly. 4.melt.融化 玻璃上因寒冷而凝结起的冰霜，在月光下变幻着 5.howl.嚎叫，咆哮 色彩，若隐若现地闪烁着。 6.cloudy adj.多云的 5.A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top. 7.rainy adj.多雨的 miles of trees spread out below us and birds chirped 8.windy adj.多云的 between branches. 9.foggy ad山.多雾的 清爽的微风拂过山顶，几英里长的树木在我们脚 10.snowy ad山.多雪的 下伸展开来，鸟儿在树枝间啁啾。 11,icy adj.冰冷的，冷淡的 二、季节描写 12.sunny adj.阳光明媚的，晴朗的 (一)常用词汇 13.frost n.&v.霜冻，结霜 1.autumn m.秋季 14.frosty adj.降霜的，冻寒的 2.fall n.秋季（美）》 I5.weather n.天气 3.spring n.春季 16.hurricane n.飓风，狂风 4.summer n.夏季 17.yphoon m.台风 5.winter n.冬季 18.windstorm n.暴风 6.season n.季节 19.storm n.暴风雨 7.monthly adj.&n.每月的，月刊 20.snowstorm m.暴风雪 8.seasonal adj.季节的 2l.sandstorm n.沙尘暴 9.yearly ad.&ad加.每年的 (二)高频词块 10.dot.点缀 1.a full moon一轮满月 1l.transparent ad山.透明的 2.on the side of the sun太阳的另一面 12.burm.炙烤 3.creep into飘进 13.frozen adj.冻僵的 Week16推荐信&挑战自我类读后续写 14.brown v.变褐色 三、日月星辰景色描写 15.overwhelming adj.势不可挡的，压倒一切的 (一)常用词汇 16.torrent n.奔流，急流 1.skyn.天空 17.heat n.热，热浪 2.heaven n.天空 18.atmosphere n.大气层，空气，氛围 3.moon n.月亮 19.uneasy ad.心神不安的，不稳定的 4.star n.星星 20.discomfort n.不舒适，不舒服 5.planet n.行星 (二)高频词块 6.universe n.字宙，万物 L,spring rains春雨 7.sunny adj.和煦的，照到阳光的 8.sunshine n.阳光 2.give out散发出 9.blink.眨眼，闪烁 3.a rainy season多雨的季节 10.dot.散布于，遍布，点缀 4.in the warm spring sunshine在春天温暖的阳光里 11.dawn n.黎明 5.be buried in snow深埋在雪中 12.curtain n.幕布 6.under the blazing/scorching/burning sun of midsummer 13.isev.升起 在盛夏灼热的阳光下 14.hang.悬挂 7.year after year年复-年 15.sparkle.闪耀，闪烁 8.year by year逐年 16.diamond n.珍珠 9.icy water冰冷的水 17.sunset n.夕阳 10.bright green绿意盎然 18.moonlight n.月光 1l.f1 ow through涌动 l9.lighten.使（某物）更明亮 12.be filled with充满着 20.romantic adj.浪漫（主义）的，有情凋的，爱情的 13.fallen leaves落叶 2L.reflectv.反射 (三)亮点句式 (二)高频词块 1.The spring rains quickened the earth. l.shine brightly闪闪发光 春雨让大地复苏 2.golden glow金色光芒 2.The lotus flowers are now in full bloom.The rose 3.full moon圆月 gives out a sweet smell. 4.night sky夜空 荷花盛开了。玫瑰散发出甜美的气味。 5.beyond expression难以言表 3.The icy water pierced my skin with needle-like 6.the Milky Way银河 7.orange light橙色的光 chill. 8.blue sky晴空 冰冷的水像针一样刺穿我的皮肤」 9.light up照亮 4.It was autumn,and the land was dotted with the (三)亮点句式 gold and red and yellow of the changing leaves. 1.The moon was shining brightly on the snow,and 秋天到了，金色、红色和黄色的叶子点缀着大地。 in the cold still air not a leaf moved on the trees. 5.Summer sees the mountains turn bright green with 月亮在雪地上闪闪发光，在寒冷的空气中，树上没 growing rice.During autumn,these same mountains 有叶子在动。 are flash gold,and in winter they are covered in2.Tom lay in the warm sunshine,which cast a warm sheets of white frost. golden glow on his face. 夏天，水稻生长，群山绿意盎然。秋天漫山铺金， 汤姆躺在温暖的阳光中，阳光在他的脸上投射出 冬天银装素裹。 温暖的金色光芒。 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 3.Sparkling stars dotted in the sky blinked at us. 太阳升起，像一个金色的天篷，在蓝色的天空中闪 星星点缀在空中，对着我们眨眼睛。 闪发光，让星星们休息。随着黑暗的消退，每一种 4.The lingering sunlight was swept by the rapidly 颜色都从木炭色变得充满活力。 falling night,resembling a pitch-black curtain Ⅱ.句式升级 covering the sky. 1.在早晨的阳光里，薄雾涣然消散了。 逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦 The mist melted rapidly in the morning sun. 除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。 the mist melted rapidly.(with复合结构)】 跟踪练习 2.日落时分，一道红霞笼罩在西山上。 I.完成句子 At sunset,a red glow hung over the western 1.It was beautiful spring weather. mountains. the plants were growing,and there the forest animals were waking from their winter was a bar of red over the western hills.(as引导时 sleep. 间状语从句) 这是美丽的春季，雪冰融化，植物生长，森林动物 3.随着时间的流逝，春草迅速生长 从冬天的睡眠中醒来。 The new spring grass shot up as time itself had sped for a wet up. and cloudy climate here. the new 对这儿潮湿阴沉的气候来说，今天的天气已够 spring grass shot up.(with复合结构) 好了。 4.落叶在中秋凉爽的空气中翩翩起舞，告别甜蜜的 3.The moor is lovely in spring and summer when there 夏天，迎接秋天的到来。 are flowers.It always .The Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air's so fresh,and the birds air so that they bade farewell to sweet summer and 这片荒野，春天和夏天都开满了花，可爱极了，连 welcomed the autumn in. 空气都是甜的。那儿的空气新鲜极了，鸟也叫得 -.Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid- 那么动听。 autumn air. 4.An overwhelming torrent of heat flew through the (现在分词作状语) atmosphere, 5.晴空万里，火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫。 一股势不可挡的热浪在大气中涌动，充满了令人 Blue sky stood tall and far,and the sun was searing 不安的不适。 my back 5.The moon hung in the sky,smiling, Blue sky stood tall and far blinking. 月亮斜挂在天空，笑盈盈的，星星挤满了银河，眨 (s0hat引导结果状语从句) 6.夕阳反射在窗户上，花同看起米很美。 巴着眼睛。 As the setting sun was reflected in the windows,the 6.The sun rises as a canopy of gold,bright amid the blue, garden looked so beautiful As darkness -The garden looked so beautiful surrenders,every color changes from tinges of charcoal to the vibrancy. (with复合结构) 78 Week16推荐信&挑战自我类读后续写 Friday读后续写示例指导16 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·浙江省绍兴市第二中学高二期末)Jenny lived in a small village,When she was a child,what she liked to do most was watch the blue sky and enjoy birds flying freely in the sky.She always imagined that some day she could also fly in the sky like a bird. When Jane was in the fourth grade,one day,her teacher asked them to write a report on what they wanted to be when they grew up.She poured her heart into her report and wrote that she dreamed to become an airline pilot in the future.She thought that she did a great job because she expressed her real idea successfully. However,to her surprise,her paper came back with an "F"on it.The teacher told her it was nothing but a "fairy tale",which could never become true.Jenny felt completely disappointed and sad.In her heart,she didn't want to accept that a girl couldn't become a pilot.But as the years went by,Jenny was beaten down by the discouragement again and again from people around her."Girls can't become airline pilots;never have,never will.You're crazy."Finally,Jenny gave up her dream. However,when Jenny studied in her senior year of high school,she met an English teacher called Marsha, who was a strict teacher with high standards but very kind.She often inspired her students to do something meaningful in the future.One day,Mrs.Marsha asked all the students to think about the question:"What will you do in the future?"At that time,Jenny hesitated for a while.She was worried that she would be laughed at again.But soon she felt a rush of the old enthusiasm,and with excitement she wrote down the very old dream of becoming a pilot right away. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The next day,Marsha came into the classroom with a bright smile on her face. The hurt and fear of years of discouragement disappeared. g 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jenny在报告中写“梦想是将来成为一名航空公司飞行员”，但是老师 却给了她“F”,告诉她那不过是一个“童话”，不可能成为现实。结果在高中，Jenny遇到了一个叫Marsha的 英语老师，她再次表达了自已想成为飞行员的梦想，却得到了老师的鼓励，最终Jeny实现了自己的梦想。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Jenny and her English teacher,Marsha Where:In the school. When:In Jenny's senior year of high school. What:Jenny's teacher encouraged her to become a pilot. Why:Finally,Jenny gave up her dream. (2)Details: DWhen she was a child,what she liked to do most was watch the blue sky and enjoy birds flying freely in the sky. 当她还是个孩子的时候，她最喜欢做的事情就是看蓝天，欣赏鸟儿在天空中白由飞翔。 本句为人物和动作描写，运用了when引导的时间状语从句、what引导的主语从句、并列动作watch the blue sky和enjoy birds flying等来表达Jenny非常喜欢蓝天和观察鸟儿飞翔，从小就怀有飞翔蓝天的 梦想。 2Jenny felt completely disappointed and sad. Jenny感到非常失望和伤心。 本句为心理描写，运用了两个并列的形容词，并且前面有副词completely修饰，呈现出了Jenny在听到老 师的话语后，内心非常难过。 3However,when Jenny studied in her senior year of high school,she met an English teacher called Marsha, who was a strict teacher with high standards but very kind. 然而，当Jenny在高中高年级学习时，她遇到了一位名叫Marsha的英语老师，她是一位严格的老师，要求 很高，但非常善良。 本句为人物描写，运用了when引导的时间状语从句、who引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰人物的词汇 strict,with high standards、kind等来表达Jenny在高中遇到了她人生的一位重要的引领者一高中英语 老师Marsha. 4But soon she felt a rush of the old enthusiasm,and with excitement she wrote down the very old dream of becoming a pilot right away. 但很快，她又感受到一股往日的热情，马上兴奋地写下了成为一名飞行员的旧日梦想。 本句为心理描写，运用了and引导的并列句，a rush of the old enthusiasm,excitement、very old dream表达 了Jenny对往日梦想的坚持，她的内心并没有真正放弃。 2.找线索 (I)根据第二段中的“Finally,Jenny gave up her dream.”和第三段中的“She often inspired her students to do something meaningful in the future.."可知，Jenny之前已经放弃了她的飞行员的梦想，而她的高中英语 老师经常鼓励学生做一些有意义的事情。这些线索在续写的第一段中可呈现出来。 Week16推荐信&挑战自我类读后续写 (2)根据第一段中的“She always imagined that some day she could also fly in the sky like a bird.."和第二段 中的“Girls can't become airline pilots;never have,never will.You're crazy.”可知，Jenny总是幻想有一天 她也能像鸟一样在天空飞翔，但是别人总是告诉她女孩永远不能成为飞行员。这些线索在续写的第二段 中可呈现出来。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第一段首句内容“第二天，Marsha脸上带着灿烂的笑容走进了数室。”和续写第二段首句内容 “多年的挫折带来的伤害和恐惧消失了。”可知，第一段可描写Marsha老师如何鼓励Jenny以及Jenny的 内心感受，决定要实现自己的梦想。 (2)由续写第二段首句内容“多年的挫折带来的伤害和恐惧消失了。”可知，第二段可描写Jeny受到鼓 舞，开始全力以赴地追求自己的梦想，最终实现了梦想。第二段要注意首尾相接，回应主题，进行必要恰 当的主题升华。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 The next day,Marsha came into the classroom with a bright smile on her face.She praised all the students for what they had finished.including Jenny.Mrs.Marsha told Jenny that her dream was wonderful and she was sure that Jenny would have the abilities and talents to make it come true if she tried her best.Besides,she also encouraged Jenny to keep on trying without worrying about others' opinions.Hearing the words,Jenny felt a relief from her heart and made up her mind to study hard to realize her dream. The hurt and fear of years of discouragement disappeared. Encouraged and full of passion,Jenny began to pursue her dream with all her effort.In the following ten years,she studied hard and never gave up even when she was faced with all kinds of difficulties. Eventually.Jenny became a pilot of a famous airline company. realizing her dream of flying in the sky like a bird.All of us may meet different difficulties on our way to success,but if we keep on trying without giving up,we will make it come true.高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文】 (4)Dumplings are considered as a Chinese cultural symbol. When Dad arrived home that evening,I handed him his cell (5)Dumplings are a kind of traditional food. phone.lowering my head.Dad sensed there was (6)The kind of traditional food is loved by people almost something wrong and asked how my film day was everywhere in China. in a soft voice.I shook my head.Overwhelmed by (7)Dumplings are easy to make. (8)Dumplings are also delicious to cat. feelings of guilt,I told him everything that had (9)What usually goes inside dumplings is cabbage and pork happened.Dad was happy to be told the truth and or something else generously gave me more time to figure out how to (10)Most importantly.homemade dumplings are often stick to our rule and still make a good movie.As for associated with homesickness. Mrs.Yang,I admitted that I owed her an apology.so (11)Flavors and fillings vary from family to family. Dad suggested that I show my regret to her. (12)I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Dad stood on the sidewalk holding Chewy while I walked (13)I hope you can come to China to taste Chinese food some up to Mrs.Yang's front door.I knocked at the door with day. my heart hammering in my chest.Thankfully,she 2句式升级 (I)Knowing that you're interested in Chinese food,I'd like to accepted my apology.When hearing I was making a recommend you dumplings. movie and my dream was to show it to everyone I (2)Considered as a Chinese cultural symbol,dumplings are a knew,she was quite interested and kindly offered kind of traditional food that is loved by people almost me her coffee shop nearby to show it to the everywhere in China. neighborhood,which was beyond my wildest dream. (3)Dumplings are not only easy to make but also delicious to I jumped with delight and hugged her tightly.That's cat. how I got the chance to play my movie.I owe this to (4)Most importantly,homemade dumplings are often associated with homesickness,as flavors and fillings vary from family to honesty. family. 高分亮点 Step Four连句成篇 高分词汇：①overwhelm,(感情上)使受不了，使不知所措 Dear Steve, ②generous小yad.慷慨地，宽大地③figure out弄清楚，弄 明白④owe sb,an apology向某人道歉⑤thankfullyadv. Knowing that you're interested in Chinese food. 感谢地，感激地⑥ightly ad.紧紧地，牢周地 I'd like to recommend you dumplings. 高分句型：（句型I)Overwhelmed by feelings of guilt,I told The factors for my recommendation are as him everything that had happened..(运用了形客词作伴随扶 follows.Considered as a Chinese cultural symbol. 语，hat引导的定语从句) dumplings are a kind of traditional food that is loved 2)As for Mrs.Yang,I admitted that I owed her an apology,so Dad suggested that I show my regret to her. by people almost everywhere China.Dumplings are 用了tht引导的宾语从句，虚叔语气) not only easy to make but also delicious to eat. (3)When hearing I was making a movie and my dream What usually goes inside dumplings is cabbage and was to show it to everyone I knew,she was quite interested pork or something else.Most importantly,homemade and kindly offered me her coffee shop nearby to show it to the dumplings are often associated with homesickness, neighborhood.which was beyond my wildest dream.(运用了 状语从句的省略，不定式作表语和状语，whih引导的非限 as flavors and fillings vary from family to family. 制性定语从句) I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. I hope you can come to China to taste Chinese food Week 16推荐信&挑战 some day! 自我类读后续写 Yours, Monday 如何写好推荐信 Li Hua Step Two词汇运用 Wednesday 推荐信写作跟踪训练 I.be interested in 2.recommend 3.factor 4.as follows 0跟踪训练1 5.be considered as 6.traditional food 7.delicious [范文] 8.be associated with 9.homesickness 10.flavors and fillings Dear Charles, 11.vary from Learning you are interested in Chinese novels, OStep Three 句式表达 【,完成句子 I'm glad to share with you one of my favorites. (1)I know that you're interested in Chinese food. Ordinary World,written by the late Chinese author (2)I'd like to recommend you dumplings. Lu Yao,won the Maodun Literature Prize,one of the (3)The factors for my recommendation are as follows most influential literary owards in China. 38 答案全解全析 The novel focuses mostly on young people from Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能16 his hometown Shanbei striving to change their lives, a theme that has resonated with Chinese ever since. [跟踪练习] Not only will you learn about everyday hardships at I.I.The snow and ice were melting that time,but also you will be uplifted by an 2.It is lovely weather today ultimate optimism to challenge and rise above 3.smells so sweet:sing so beautifully whatever trials we face in life."Work hard and be 4.filled with uneasy discomfort kind,and someday you will be there,"says the 5.stars filling the Milky Way 6.bidding the stars to take their nightly rest novel. I strongly recommend you to read the book II.1.With the morning sun shining and exchange your ideas with me. 2.As the sun went down gently Yours. 3.With time itself speeding up Li Hua 4.bidding farewell to sweet summer and welcoming the autumn in 高分亮点 5.so that the sun was searing my back 高分词汇：①influential adj.有影响力的②strive v,努力 ③resonate比.产生共鸣④ultimate ad.最终的，最后的 6.with the setting sun reflected in the windows ⑤optimism n.乐观，乐观主义6 trial n,考验，磨练 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 高分句型：（句型I)L.carning you are interested in Chinese novels,I'm glad to share with you one of my favorites. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线素展开，讲述了作者患有唐氏 that的宾语从句) 综合征的女儿决定参加篮球比赛的故事。看到了女儿务力的 (2)Not only will you learn about everyday hardships at 过程，作者既藏动又感动。 that time.but also you will be uplifted by an ultimate [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“Lauren仍然兴致勃 optimism to challenge and rise above whatever trials we face 勃，在场下为Lady Tigers欢呼。”以及续写第二段首句“然后 in life.(not only开头的倒装句) 一个队友把球传给了Lauren。"可知，第一段可描写Lauren在 O跟踪训练2 场下为自己的队友加油以及教练让Laur心n上场比赛。②由续 [范文] 写第二段首句内容“然后一个队友把球传给了Laur心n。”可知， Dear Mark 第二段可描写Lauren在场上的表现，以及队友给她的帮助。 Learning the Students'Union will choose the [范文] person of the year,I can't wait to recommend Li Still in high spirits,Lauren cheered for Lady Tigers off the Ming.a student in our class.The reasons are as coun.Just at thot time,Coach called a time-out.He follows. walked over to Lauren and said something to her. To begin with,he studies hard and always gets good results,ranking first in our class.Besides,he then something to her teammates.In a minute. shows respect for teachers and it is so easy to get Lauren was in the game.My heart doubled its beat. along with him that all the students find it pleasant watching wide-eyed.Just then,all across the stands, to work with him.Most importantly.he is always fans were on their feet clapping for Lauren.Our ready to help those in need.Last week,he sent an Lauren!Lauren kept pace with the others fairly well. old man who fell on the road with a sudden illness The visitors scored again.With less than a minute to hospital on his way to school. left,Lady Tigers was controlling the ball.I saw the In short,Li Ming deserves the title and I do hope point guard shout and flash a signal to her teammates. he will be named "the Person of the Year". Yours sincerely. 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[范文] In the story.the author praises and stresses I then suddenly became nervous about this."Maybe Crusoe's courage and perseverance to overcome should back off,"I told myself.And my legs began difficulties when faced with hardships 40