Week 15 祝信&优秀品行类读后续写-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 15 祝贺信&优秀品行类读后续写 Monday 如何写好祝贺信 ◆对接答案P236 表达得知对方的胜利并祝贺 祝贺信是指在日常学习和生活中，因对方取得某项荣誉或 者胜利，向对方表达祝贺的信件。写作结构为： 局谋篇 回顾对方的努力 ·再次表达祝贺并向对方学习 典题示例 (2024·山东省泰安市泰安中学高二期末)假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友Pter在中国象棋网络挑战赛 (Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition)中荣获一等奖。现在请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下： 1.表示祝贺：2.赞扬对方的付出：3.向对方学习。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Peter, Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般过去时为主 主题 祝贺信 人称 以第二人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题，说明写信目的：第二段：赞扬付出：第三段：再次祝贺 Step Two 词汇运用 1.赢得 7.奉献 2.一等奖 8.勤奋 3.竞赛 9.为某人树立榜样 4.迫不及待做某事 10.导致，由于 5.诚挚的祝贺 11.技巧 6.牺牲 OStep Three 句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)太棒了。 161 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (2)你以外国人的身份在中国象棋网络挑战赛中获得了第一名。 (3)我迫不及待地想写信。 (4)我要向你表示衷心的祝贺。 (5)俗话说得好。 (6)不劳无获。 (7)我记得在过去的几年里，你牺牲了你的业余时间来提高你的技能。 (8)你的奉献和勤奋是你不断进步的原因。 (9)你真的为我树立了榜样，推动我前进。 (10)作为一个象棋爱好者，我希望你能教我一些象棋技巧。 (11)我再次向你表示衷心的祝贺！ 2.句式升级 (1)用t作形式主语的用法合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 (2)用不定式作目的状语合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。 (3)用s引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 (4)用s0that引导的结果状语从句合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 (5)用省略主语和谓语的用法升级句子(1山)。 Step Four连句成篇 162 Week15祝贺信&优秀品行类读后续写 Tuesday 祝贺信满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 thrilling adj.激动人心的 win.赢得 the first prize一等奖 congratulation n.祝贺 competition n.比赛 express.表达 lucky adj.幸运的 admiration n.钦佩，赞美 effort n.努力 put in投入 succeed.成功，达成 champion m.冠军 opportunity n.时机，机会 honor n.荣誉 performance n.表演，演出 award n.奖，奖品 successful ad.成功的，如愿以偿的 be admitted into被…录取 talent m.天才 admission n.录取 key university重点大学 appreciate,感谢，感激 Chinese speech contest汉语演讲比赛 话题句式 想让你知道能分享你的骄做我有多幸运，我对你 的成功有多高兴。 引出话题先声夺人 6.We really appreciate your wonderful performance. 1.I'm happy to learn that you have been admitted into 我们非常欣赏你的精彩表演。 Oxford University.Congratulations！我很高兴得知7.I have been witnessing your progress with admiration 你被牛津大学录取了。恭喜你！ all the years,and I know more than anyone else how 2.I would like to express my congratulations to you on much effort you have put in.这些年以来，我一直怀 your receiving the first prize of"Chinese Bridge" 着钦佩之情见证你的进步，我比任何人都清楚你 Chinese speech contest..祝贺你在“汉语桥”中文演 付出了多少努力 讲比赛中获得一等奖。 8.You deserve to win this prize!你应该赢得这个奖！ 3.I am writing to tell you the thrilling news that you 首尾结合余音回味 have won the first prize in the National High School 9.With my English improved a lot,I hope you can Speech Contest.我写信是要告诉你一个激动人心 accept my gratitude.I will learn from you.因为我的 的消息，你获得了全国高中演讲比赛一等奖。 英语水平提高了很多，希望您能接受我的感谢。 4.I have learned with delight that you won first prize 我会向你学习的。 in the English Speech Contest and I'm writing to 10.Sincere congratulations to you again!I wish you express my deepest congratulations to you.我很高 greater success in the years ahead.再次向你表达 兴得知你在英语演讲比赛中获得第一名，我写信 真诚的祝贺。我祝愿你在未来的岁月中取得更 是向你传达最诚挚的祝贺。 大的成功。 主题部分 娓娓道来 11.At last,I hope to see you and communicate with 5.As your close friend.I just want you to know how you.最后，我希望能见到你，与你交流。 lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how l2.Sincere congratulations to you again！再次向您表 pleased I am at your success,作为你的密友，我只 示衷心的祝贺！ 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear John, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first 模板中黑体字部 prize of your group in the basketball competition. 分是写祝贺信时可以 There were several outstanding basketball teams competing in this basketball 通用的部分，其他部分 game,for which it's really hard to win this game.However,you made it at last. 可以根据写作要求灵 You and your team members must have made great efforts to practise playing 活处理。 basketball.Your passion for basketball sometimes exceeds my imagination.You 第一、三段往往是 deserve to win this prize! 般现在时，人称以第 At last,I hope to have a talk with you so that we can exchange our 一人称为主：第二段主 understanding towards basketball.Look forward to your early reply. 要是一般过去时，人称 Yours, 为第二人称。 Li Hua 肩航英雷I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Wednesday 祝贺信写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P236 跟踪训练1◆祝贺信 (2024·浙江省舟山市第五中学高二期末)假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Petr获得了“汉语桥”世 界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信。要点如下：1.天天练习讲汉语，从 不会到流利，终于成功：2.继续努力，有机会来中国留学：3.希望见面和交流 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 参考词汇“汉语桥"世界大学生中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest Dear Peter, I would like to express my congratulations to you on... Yours, Li Hua 跟踪训练2◆祝贺信 (2024·湖南省常德市外国语学校高二期未)假定你是学生会主席李华，你校运动会于今日结束，交换 生Ja℃k在运动会上获得长跑比赛第一名，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：L.向他表达祝贺：2.通知他领 奖品。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Jack, Yours, Li Hua 164 Week15祝贺信&优秀品行类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能15 ◆对接答案P237 用好高级衔接提升应用文写作表达 衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实 She finally earned respect of them.who eventually 现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当 became confident as well as well-behaved. 地使用一些承上启下的衔接（过渡）性词语是非常必 她最后赢得了他们的尊重，最终变得自信，表现也 要的。中学阶段应该掌握的衔接（过渡）性词语可以 不错 归纳如下： 4.表示转折关系的过渡性词语 1,表示起始关系的过渡性词语 but,yet,however, while,otherwise,on the above all,to begin/start with,recently, contrary,in spite of,regardless of等。 nowadays,according to,with the development However,the film market may witness a slowdown of..等。 in the near future. To begin with,the final exam of this term is around 然而，电影市场在不久的将来或许会有所下滑。 the corner,so I am busy preparing for it. 5.表示因果关系的过渡性词语 首先，本学期的期末考试就要到了，因此我正忙着 because,as,since,for,thanks to,due to,as a 准备考试。 result of,so,therefore, as a result/ 2.表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 consequence等。 firstly,first of all,then,later,in the end, So would you please spare some time to review the finally,at last,after that,afterwards,since then, draft script attached to this email and make meanwhile等。 necessary changes? Using baskets and ladders,we first picked the ones 因此，您能抽出一些时间来审阅这封邮件所附带 that were most beautiful in colour,then those that 的草稿剧本，并进行必要的修改吗？ were ripe and soft. Therefore,we must make enough preparations 我们先用篮子和梯子挑选颜色最漂亮的，然后再 before the match. 挑选成熟柔软的。 因此，我们在比赛前要做好充足的准备。 At last,all the runners managed to arrive the finish6.表示递进关系的过渡性词语 line,receiving cheers from all the directions. besides,in addition,what's more,furthermore, 最后，所有赛跑者都成功到达了终点线，他们收到 moreover,what's worse,still less,to make 了来自四面八方的欢呼声 matters worse.worse still.on the one hand...on After that,you can go to Shanghai,where you can the other hand...,for one thing...for stay for a week. another..等 过后，你可以去上海，你可以在那里待一周。 3.表示并列关系的过渡性词语 Besides,my related knowledge will help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art and,or,as well as,not only...but also..., form. either... neither... 此外，我的相关知识能帮助观众更好地了解这种 but..等。 独特的中国艺术形式。 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 7.表示列举事实的过渡性词语 3.As a result,travelling will help you to relax yourself such as,for example/instance,take... (build up your body. for (相反)，smartphones not only example,that is to say,as follows,in other take up our valuable time,but also do great harm to words等。 our health. In my free time,I'll continue to take regular 5. (因此)，I suggest we should be exercise,such as swimming,running and various given more time for sports and sleep. ball games. (况且)，listening to 在我的业余时间，我将继续做常规训练，诸如游 some soft music does relax your mood and give you 泳、跑步和各种各样的球类活动。 a new start. 8.表示观点的过渡性词语 7.We have many subjects, (例 l)Chinese,math,English,music and art. in my opinion,in my view,from my point of 8 (就我而言)，I love view,as far as I am concerned,as for me, wealth,but I value health more. personally等。 9 (总的来说)，the As for me,my father is the person I respect most. more you practise,the more skillfully you can write 对于我来说，我的爸爸是我最尊敬的人。 in English. Ⅱ，阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空 In my opinion,we can share information with each above all,recently,besides,meanwhile,for one other to make a better understanding. 按照我的观点，我们可以互相分享信息，以便更好 thing,for another,personally,in a word 地相互理解。 1. it has been a great public concern 9.表示总结的过渡性词语 that the students lack self-protection awareness. There is a lack of social experience among in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a/one word students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves to sum up,all in all,on the whole,in general, is of great significance to us all.2. _security generally speaking等。 comes first.Without security,we can achieve nothing In conclusion,more and more people fall in love and cannot live up to parents'expectations.3. with Chinese language and culture. protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students,which is associated with 综上所述，越来越多的人喜爱中国的语言和文化 the happiness of every family.4. ，it also 跟踪练习 helps to build a more harmonious society. 5 in order to protect us students, 【.根据括号内的提示完成句子 we should strengthen our security 1 (随着…的发展) awareness.7. when accidents occur,we the Internet,computers play an important role in should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for people's life. help.The government also plays a leading role in 2 (首先)，the most protecting students.8. only by the significant thing is to set a goal,work out a plan and combined efforts of every side involved can we live carry out your plan step by step. and study in harmony. Week15祝贺信&优秀品行类读后续写 Friday 读后续写示例指导15 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·辽宁省盘锦市高级中学高二期末)It was Christmas Eve and I was feeling sad because there was not enough money to buy the dress I wanted.After supper I sat by the fire place and waited for Dad to read as usual.I was still feeling sorry for myself and,to be honest,wasn't in much of a mood to listen to him.But Pa didn't.Instead,he put on his coat and went outside. It was a cold,clear night,and there was ice in Pa's beard when he came back in."Come on,Elizabeth, he said."Put on your coat.It's cold out." I was upset.Not only wasn't I getting the dress,but now Pa was dragging me out in the cold.I followed him and Ma gave me a mysterious smile as I opened the door. Outside,I became even sadder.There,in front of the house,was the old tractor-whatever we were going to do wasn't going to be a quick job.I reluctantly climbed up beside Dad,the cold already biting at me. We pulled in front of the woodshed and started to load the wood. Confused,I asked Dad,"What are you doing?" "Have you been by the Clarks lately?"he asked. Mrs.Clark lived about two miles from us.Her husband had passed away the year before,leaving her with three children to raise on her own. “Yeah,”I said.“Why?" "I rode by just today,"Dad said."Little Jake was out around in the woodpile,trying to find a few chips. They're out of wood."That was all he said.We piled the wood so high that I began to wonder whether we could pull it. Dad then took out a big bag from the tractor."What's in it?"I asked."Shoes.They're out of shoes.Little Jake was out on bare feet."I could not understand why it was our concern when the Clarks had closer neighbors than us. After a long while,we unloaded the wood behind the Clark's house and knocked on the door. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 As the door opened,there came a trembling voice Dad comforted me on the way home. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者度过的一次难忘的圣诞节。作者因为设有得到想要的裙子而难 过，而父亲却带着作者拉了一车木头来到了邻近的邻居那儿。作者看到邻居窘迫的境况，终于明白了父亲 的心意。 「写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:My father,Jake and me. When:Christmas Eve. Where:Behind the Clark's house. What:Mrs.Clark's house is out of wood. Why:Confused,I asked Dad,"What are you doing?" (2)Details: DIt was Christmas Eve and I was feeling sad because there was not enough money to buy the dress I wanted. 那是平安夜，我感到很难过，因为没有足够的钱买我想要的裙子。 67 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 本句为人物和心理描写，运用了and引导的并列句、because引导的原因从句、省略了关系代词的定语从 句来表达因为没有足够的钱买我想要的裙子，在平安夜这一晚我很难过。 2It was a cold,clear night,and there was ice in Pa's beard when he came back in. 那是一个寒冷而晴朗的夜晚，爸爸回来的时候，胡子上结了冰。 本句为环境描写，运用了两个形容词cold、clear,一个名词ice及when引导的时间状语从句表达了夜晚 的寒冷。 (3)We piled the wood so high that I began to wonder whether we could pull it. 我们把木头堆得那么高，以至于我开始怀疑我们能否把它拉出来。 本句为动作描写，运用了piled the wood,wonder和pull这一系列动词，表现了我们堆积的木头很多，有可 能用拖拉机拉不出来。 4"What's in it?"I asked."Shoes.They're out of shoes.Little Jake was out on bare feet." “里面有什么？”我问。“鞋子。他们没有鞋了。小Jake光着脚出来了。” 这两句为对话描写，父亲的回答比较仔细，体现了希望女儿理解他的良苦用心，去帮助那遭受困难的小 Jake一家人。 2.找线索 (I)根据第十段中的“Little Jake was out around in the woodpile,trying to find a few chips."和第十一段中 的“Little Jake was out on bare feet.."可知，Jake的家里已经没有木头了，小Jake光着脚，在续写的第一段 中可呈现出这些。 (2)根据第一段中的“It was Christmas Eve and I was feeling sad because there was not enough money to buy the dress I wanted."和第十一段中的“I could not understand why it was our concern when the Clarks had closer neighbors than us.."可知，作者迫切需要一件新衣服，也不理解父亲为什么去帮助小Jake一家，在续 写的第二段中可呈现出作者最终理解了父亲，也觉得我们的帮助比我得到新衣服更高兴，来突出主题。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第一段首句内容“当门打开时，传来一个颤抖的声音。”以及续写第二段首句内容“爸爸在回家 的路上安慰我。”可知，第一段可描写作者和爸爸如何帮助Clak一家。 (2)由续写第二段首句内容“爸爸在回家的路上安慰我。”可知，第二段可描写作者在父亲的解释下明白 了父亲的良苦用心。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 As the door opened,there came a trembling voice."Who's there?"It was Little lake,his eyes wide and face pale with fear."It's only us,sweetheart,"said Dad as he picked the little boy up and carried him inside."Don't be afraid."Little Jake was shivering with cold and fear.So Dad brought in the wood and made a fire in the fireplace to warm him up.“We'∥get you m.ore shoes and clothes.”I promised,as l understood why dad was so determined to help.As we left the house.Mrs.Clark gave me a hug and said."Thank you for helping my family."Having withessed everything.I was close to tears. Dad comforted me on the way home."You see,Elizabeth,"he said."there are some people who need our help.Tonight,we helped them."I nodded,feeling proud of my father's kindness and understanding. At the same time,I was much happier than getting a new dress.It was a lesson in humanity that i would never forget. 168 Week15祝贺信&优秀品行类读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 ◆对接答案P237 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·河北省沧州市第三中学高二期中)It was a very cold morning as it had been raining very heavily the previous night.As my mother was feeling a little under the weather,my sister volunteered to drive me to school.I had overslept and as a result,was running a bit late for school.We got into the car hurriedly.The road was already crowded with traffic.It appeared that everyone was late as well. My sister was a careful driver and despite the fact I was already late,she refused to drive fast on the slippery road.I was lucky she was such a determined and careful person because a few hundred meters away from the school,we witnessed a tragic accident.It all happened very quickly. A car had made a left turning without signaling and as a result,a school bus crashed into it.A few cars behind the school bus rammed into the bus as they could not brake in time and soon it became a pile-up. The already crowded road became jammed with vehicles that came to a crawl. I told my sister that I wanted to help the victims and she nodded silently.She parked the car not too far from the accident spot. The scene that greeted us was something I would never forget.It left an unforgettable impression in my mind to date.The passengers on the school bus were injured.I rushed into the bus and saw the driver laid slumped on the wheel.He had injuries on the head.My sister helped him down from the bus. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 I told the injured school children to stay calm. Minutes later,two ambulances arrived. 169 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 ◆对接答案P237 第一节◆应用文写作 (2024·浙江省镇海中学高二月考)假定你是李华，正在跟你的英国笔友Tom学习英语，近日获悉他被 英国牛津大学(Oxford University)录取。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：l.表示祝贺：2.请他介绍学 习经验：3.希望他继续帮你学英语。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Tom, Yours, Li Hua 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·安徽省铜陵市第二中学高二期末)My first ever movie is being shown in Mrs.Yang's coffee shop.I had always dreamed about showing my video to my neighborhood.I bet you can't imagine how I got this chance to play my movie there.The story begins on an unusual afternoon two weeks ago: “Cut,cut,cut!”I shouted,one hand holding the phone,the other grabbing the leash(牵狗的皮带).I complained this was not how I pictured the big chase scene of my movie playing out.What kind of Hollywood star dog wears a leash?It was Dad's one rule,though.Because Chewy was only a puppy,I had to keep him on the leash whenever we filmed outside.If I followed that rule,I could use Dad's old cell phone to shoot my movie. I decided to try again.I held on to his leash,hit the big red record button on the phone's screen,and yelled,"Action!"With the leash on,though,he didn't exactly appear to be in any real hurry to catch anyone. The only way to make this look real would be to take off the leash.But that would break the promise made with Dad. 170启航英语Ⅲ 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 dreamed of with her daughter and her son-in-law.as a foreigner.I can't wait to write to express my She never found out who was sending the flowers, sincere congratulations to you. and Ron is still keeping that secret. As the old saying goes,“no pains,,no gains.”I 高分亮点 remember that in the past few years you have 高分词汇：①grocery n.食品杂货店②snack n,零食，点心 sacrificed your spare time to improve your skills. ③in delight高兴地④determined adj.下定决心的，坚定的 Your devotion and diligence account for your 5 recover以.恢复（健康，精神，体力）⑥passion n.热情，酷爱 constant progress so that you really set an example 高分句型：（句型1）Then he decided to visit his grandma to for me and push me to move forward. see if the flowers would help and to see if his hard work was worth it.(由连接词if引导的宾语从句作see的宾语) As a Chinese chess lover,I hope you can teach (2)And she was planning the trip to France she always me some chess techniques.Sincere congratulations dreamed of with her daughter and her son-in-law,(省略关系 to you again! 代词的定语从句) Yours, (3)She never found out who was sending the flowers. Li Hua and Ron is still keeping that secret,(由连接代词who引导的 宾语从句作found out的宾语) Wednesday 祝贺信写作跟踪训练 Week 15 祝贺信&优秀品行类读后续写 Q跟踪训练1 [范文] Dear Peter, Monday 如何写好祝贺信 I would like to express my congratulations to you on your Step Two词汇运用 receiving the first prize of "Chinese Bridge"Chinese I.win 2.the first prize 3.competition 4.can't wait to do speech contest. 5.sincere congratulations 6.sacrifice 7.devotion I know that you were not good at Chinese at 8.diligence 9.set an example for sb.10.account for 11.technique first.However,you practiced speaking Chinese every Step Three句式表达 day.As the saying goes,"Everything comes to him .完成句子 who waits."Finally,you succeeded!In my mind,this (1)It's amazing. match is very difficult for a foreign student.So I'm (2)You have won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network so surprised that you become champion of this Challenge Competition as a foreigner. competition.If you go on studying Chinese harder, (3)I can't wait to write. (4)I want to express my sincere congratulations to you. you will have the opportunity to study in China.I (5)The old saying goes. hope to see you and communicate with you. (6)No pains,no gains. Sincere congratulations to you again! (7)I remember in the past few years you have sacrificed your Yours. spare time to improve your skills. Li Hua (8)Your devotion and diligence account for your constant 高分亮点 progress. 高分词汇：①congratulation m.恭喜，祝贺②Chinese speech (9)You really set an example for me and push me to move contest汉语演讲比赛③succeed v.成功，达成 forward. ④champion m.冠军⑤opportunity n,时机，机会 (10)As a Chinese chess lover.I hope you can teach me some 高分句型：（句型1）As the saying goes,“Everything comes chess techniques. to him who waits."(运用了s引导的非很制性定语从句) (11)I will give my sincere congratulations to you again! (2)If you go on studying Chinese harder,you will have 2.句式升级 the opportunity to study in China.(运用了if引导的条件秋 (1)It's amazing that you have won the first prize in the 语从句) Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. Q跟踪训练2 (2)I can't wait to write to express my sincere congratulations [范文] to you. Dear Jack. (3)As the old saying goes,"No pains,no gains." Congratulations on your winning the first place (4)Your devotion and diligence account for your constant progress so that you really set an example for me and push me in the long-distance running race at the school's to move forward. sports meeting! (5)Sincere congratulations to you again! You're the first exchange student to win this Step Four连句成篇 honor.We really appreciate your wonderful performance. Dear Peter, Following the successful conclusion of the sports meeting It's amazing that you have won the first prize is the excitement of collecting prizes.All winners of in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition:the event are expected to claim their awards at the 36 答案全解全析 Students'Union.Yours,I am happy to say.is a 高分亮点 smart watch,which I believe you'll like. 高分词汇：①minor adj.较小的，次要的，轻微的 ②scream Please come to the Students'Union before this .(因伤痛、害怕、激动等)尖叫③take down记下 weekend.Congratulations again! ④be rushed to被迅速送往⑤gave an account描述 Yours 高分句型：（句型1）It was really fortunate that nobody was Li Hua badly hurt..(运用了it作形式主语且由that引导的主语从句) 2)My sister and I later gave an account to the police 高分亮点 about what had happened..(运用了what引导的宾语从句) 高分词汇：①honor n.荣誉2 performance m.表演，演出 ③successful adj.成功的，如愿以偿的④award n.奖，奖品 (3)I informed my teacher of the accident and felt that it 高分句型：（句型I)Following the successful conclusion of the could have been prevented if the drivers had been more sports meeting is the excitement of collecting prizes.(运用了 careful.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和if引导的状语从句) 倒装句) Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 (2)Yours,I am happy to say,is a smart watch,which I believe you'll like..(运用了which引导的非限制性定语 0第一节 从句) [范文] Dear Tom, Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能15 I'm happy to learn that you have been [跟踪练习] admitted into Oxford University.Congratulations! I.1.With the development of 2.First of all 3.as well as As is known to all.Oxford University is one of 4.On the contrary 5.Therefore 6.Besides/In addition the most famous universities in the world,where What's more/Moreover 7.such as 8.As far as I am concered 9.Generally speaking there are a great number of young talents.Now that Il.1.Recently 2.For one thing 3.For another 4.Meanwhile you have gained the admission to the university.you 5.Personally 6.above all 7.Besides 8.In a word are certain to hove special learning methods of your Saturday 读后续写话题训练 own.Would you like to share some with me? My dream is to go to a key university in China. [语篇解读]本文以故事的发展为线素展开，讲述了在一个 冷的早上，姐姐送作者上学虽然要迟到了，但姐姐仍然拒绝 Without your help.I would have more difficulty 在湿滑路土开快车，避免发生意外。就在去学校的路上，地们 realizing it.Therefore,I would appreciate it if you 亲眼看见了一场交通事故，作者和姐组帮助营教事故中的 could give me more help with my English. 伤员。 Yours, [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“我告诉受伤的儿童 Li Hua 保持平静。”可知，第一段可描写孩子们的情况。②由续写第 高分亮点 二段首句内容“几分钟后，两辆数护车到了。”可知，第二段可 高分词汇：①be admitted into被…录取②alent n.天才 描写救护人员处理伤员的情况，交通事故发生后交警对事故 ③admission n.录取④key university重点大学 的测查情况和作者去学校后的情况。 5 appreciate.感谢，感激 「范文] 高分句型：（句型I)As is known to all,Oxford University is I told the injured school children to stay calm.Most of one of the most famous universities in the world,where there them appeared to suffer from minor cuts and are a great number of young talents..(使用了as引导的非展 bruises on their arms and bodies.It was really 制性定语从句) fortunate that nobody was badly hurt.By then a 2)Now that you have gained the admission to the few adults had entered the bus and together we university,you are certain to have special learning methods of instructed the children to come out of the bus your own.(使用了now that引导的原因状语从句) slowly.The children were crying and screaming for 0第二节 their parents and we had to hug them to keep them [语篇解读]本文以事情发展顺序为线索，讲述了作者想要 和自己的小狗拍摄小电彩，爸爸要求必须给小狗控上皮带」 quiet. 为了真实，作老松开了皮带，结果小狗弄坏了杨女士的食品杂 Minutes later,two ambulances arrived.A traffic police 货袋子。作者很燃尬，想要道数，但是想到这样爸爸就会知道 car was there too.Two policemen were taking down 自己解开了小狗的皮蒂，作者犹豫了，抓起小狗跑进了房子。 statements from eye-witnesses.The injured were [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“那天晚上爸爸回到 rushed to the hospital.My sister and I later gave an 家，我低下头，把他的手机递给他。”可知，第一段可描写作者 account to the police about what had happened../告诉了爸爸直相，爸爸原谅了作者，很高兴作者讲真话，答应 was late for school.In fact,many drivers were also 再拍一部好视频，并建议作者向杨女士道歉。②由续写第二 段首句内容“爸爸站在人行道上，抱着Chewy,我走到杨太太 late for their work.I informed my teacher of the 的前门。”可知，第二段可描写作者向杨女士道歉，得到了原 accident and felt that it could have been prevented if谅，并被提供咖啡馆来展示自已的电影给邻居们。作者很高 the drivers had been more careful. 兴，并感悟到这是诚实的作用 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文】 (4)Dumplings are considered as a Chinese cultural symbol. When Dad arrived home that evening,I handed him his cell (5)Dumplings are a kind of traditional food. phone.lowering my head.Dad sensed there was (6)The kind of traditional food is loved by people almost something wrong and asked how my film day was everywhere in China. in a soft voice.I shook my head.Overwhelmed by (7)Dumplings are easy to make. (8)Dumplings are also delicious to cat. feelings of guilt,I told him everything that had (9)What usually goes inside dumplings is cabbage and pork happened.Dad was happy to be told the truth and or something else generously gave me more time to figure out how to (10)Most importantly.homemade dumplings are often stick to our rule and still make a good movie.As for associated with homesickness. Mrs.Yang,I admitted that I owed her an apology.so (11)Flavors and fillings vary from family to family. Dad suggested that I show my regret to her. (12)I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Dad stood on the sidewalk holding Chewy while I walked (13)I hope you can come to China to taste Chinese food some up to Mrs.Yang's front door.I knocked at the door with day. my heart hammering in my chest.Thankfully,she 2句式升级 (I)Knowing that you're interested in Chinese food,I'd like to accepted my apology.When hearing I was making a recommend you dumplings. movie and my dream was to show it to everyone I (2)Considered as a Chinese cultural symbol,dumplings are a knew,she was quite interested and kindly offered kind of traditional food that is loved by people almost me her coffee shop nearby to show it to the everywhere in China. neighborhood,which was beyond my wildest dream. (3)Dumplings are not only easy to make but also delicious to I jumped with delight and hugged her tightly.That's cat. how I got the chance to play my movie.I owe this to (4)Most importantly,homemade dumplings are often associated with homesickness,as flavors and fillings vary from family to honesty. family. 高分亮点 Step Four连句成篇 高分词汇：①overwhelm,(感情上)使受不了，使不知所措 Dear Steve, ②generous小yad.慷慨地，宽大地③figure out弄清楚，弄 明白④owe sb,an apology向某人道歉⑤thankfullyadv. Knowing that you're interested in Chinese food. 感谢地，感激地⑥ightly ad.紧紧地，牢周地 I'd like to recommend you dumplings. 高分句型：（句型I)Overwhelmed by feelings of guilt,I told The factors for my recommendation are as him everything that had happened..(运用了形客词作伴随扶 follows.Considered as a Chinese cultural symbol. 语，hat引导的定语从句) dumplings are a kind of traditional food that is loved 2)As for Mrs.Yang,I admitted that I owed her an apology,so Dad suggested that I show my regret to her. by people almost everywhere China.Dumplings are 用了tht引导的宾语从句，虚叔语气) not only easy to make but also delicious to eat. (3)When hearing I was making a movie and my dream What usually goes inside dumplings is cabbage and was to show it to everyone I knew,she was quite interested pork or something else.Most importantly,homemade and kindly offered me her coffee shop nearby to show it to the dumplings are often associated with homesickness, neighborhood.which was beyond my wildest dream.(运用了 状语从句的省略，不定式作表语和状语，whih引导的非限 as flavors and fillings vary from family to family. 制性定语从句) I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. I hope you can come to China to taste Chinese food Week 16推荐信&挑战 some day! 自我类读后续写 Yours, Monday 如何写好推荐信 Li Hua Step Two词汇运用 Wednesday 推荐信写作跟踪训练 I.be interested in 2.recommend 3.factor 4.as follows 0跟踪训练1 5.be considered as 6.traditional food 7.delicious [范文] 8.be associated with 9.homesickness 10.flavors and fillings Dear Charles, 11.vary from Learning you are interested in Chinese novels, OStep Three 句式表达 【,完成句子 I'm glad to share with you one of my favorites. (1)I know that you're interested in Chinese food. Ordinary World,written by the late Chinese author (2)I'd like to recommend you dumplings. Lu Yao,won the Maodun Literature Prize,one of the (3)The factors for my recommendation are as follows most influential literary owards in China. 38