Week 14 通知&优秀品行类读后续写-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 14 通知&优秀品行类读后续写 Monday 如何写好通知 ◆对接答案P233 通知分为书面通知和口头通知。通知一般用于公布即将 点明通知的主题，目的 发生的事情，如宜布举行比赛，举办讲座、画展、晚会，召开研讨 布 告知必要信息（时间、地点」 会等。写通知的关键是明确地告知读者活动的必要信息，如时 报名方式及藏止日期等) 间、地点、活动内容、报名方式及其他细节等。 号召大家积极参与 典题示例 (2024·安徽省池州市实验中学高二月考)假定你是李华，本周末你校英语俱乐部将组织果园采摘活 动。请你用英文写则通知，内容包括：1.活动信息：2.准备事项：3.表达期待。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Notice English Club 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般将来时 主题 通知 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题：第二段：具体内容：第三段：提出希望 OStep Two 词汇运用 1.通知 6.持续 2.采摘葡萄 7.参加 3.体验大自然 8.积极地 4.目的地 9.户外活动 5.入场费 OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)本周末我校英语俱乐部将组织果园采摘活动。 (2)这个活动将使我们都体验大自然。 150 Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 (3)我们需要在这个星期六六点钟在校门口集合。 (4)集合结束后，我们将乘公共汽车。 (5)我们到达目的地大约需要半个小时。 (6)入场费是每人10元。 (7)每人可以买到5磅橙子。 (8)采摘时间为2小时。 (9)你可以带一个帽子和足够的水。 (10)我们希望大家都能积极参与！ 2.句式升级 (1)用which引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 (2)用after引导时间状语从句的省略形式升级上题中的句子(4)。 (3)用it作形式主语的用法升级句子(5)。 (4)用and引导的并列句合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。 (5)用so that引导的结果状语从句合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 (6)用省略主语的形式升级句子(10)。 Step Four连句成篇 6 言航英 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Tuesday 通知满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 inform.通知 announcement n.通知 recruit.招聘，招收 arouse.引起，激起 passion n.激情，热情 competition n.竞争，比赛 focus on专注于 look forward to期待 participation n,参加，参与 enrich,.使充实，使丰富 stimulatev.促进，激发 enthusiasm n.热情，热忱 schedule v.安排，预定 participate in参加 ahead of time提前 opportunity.时机，机会 widen v.拓展，扩展 purpose n.目的，意图 enhance.增强，提高，改善 affection n.喜爱，关爱 punctually ad.准时地，如期地 visual feast视觉盛宴 arrive at到达 theme n.(谈话、书籍、电影等的)题目，主题 十 话题句式 around3 hours..按照计划，比赛将在下周五上午8 点在大讲堂进行，比赛将持续3个小时左右。 引出话题先声夺人 6.The activity is scheduled to be held from 3:00 p.m. 1.A notice is given that some activities will be carried to4:30p.m.on our playground.活动定于下午3 out to celebrate Labor Day from April 27 to 29. according to our school schedule.4月27日至29 点至4点30分在我们的操场举行。 日，根据学校安排，我校将开展庆祝劳动节的相关 7.In addition,whoever is interested can go to sign up 活动，特此通知。 at the Student Union office..此外，任何有兴趣的人 2.May I have your attention,please?I have an 都可以去学生会办公室报名。 announcement to make.请大家注意一下。我要宣 8.All the students who have affection for soccer games 布一件事。 are welcome to watch it.欢迎所有喜爱足球比赛的 3.Attention,please!I have something important to tell 学生前来观看。 you.请注意！我有重要的事要告诉你们。 首尾结合余音回味 4.Aimed at enriching campus life and stimulating 9.Those who are interested in the activity are welcome. students'enthusiasm for Chinese literature,the 欢迎那些对这项活动感兴趣的人。 Classical Chinese Poetry Reciting Contest will be 1O.I am sure you will have a good time there.我相信 held in our school.为了丰富校园生活，激发学生对 你在那里会玩得很开心的。 中国文学的热情，我校将举办中国古典诗词朗诵 比赛。 11.Please get everything ready ahead of time.Don't be 主题部分娓娓道来 late.请提前做好准备，不要迟到。 5.As scheduled,the contest will take place in the I12.Looking forward to your participation.期待您的 lecture hall at 8 a.m.next Friday,which will last 参与。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 模板中黑体字 NOTICE The 2024 Student Volleyball Match is scheduled to be held in our school.In 部分是描写通知时 可以通用的部分，其 order to ensure the smooth running of the event,it is necessary to recruit 他部分可以根据写 volunteers to provide quality service. 作要求灵活处理。 The volunteers are required not only to be healthy and organized,but to be able to respond to emergencies flexibly.In addition,the ones with genuine passion for 主体部分往往 是一般现在时，有时 sports or related experience are preferred.Once accepted,the volunteers will receive 也可以用一般将 appropriate and efficient training in the gymnasium next weekend. Looking forward to your application. 来时。 文章人称以第 Students'Union 三人称为主。 Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 Wednesday 通知写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P234 跟踪训练1◆通知 (2024·辽宁省本溪市第一中学高二期末)周四下午，你校足球队将与光明中学举行一场足球友谊赛， 请你为你校足球社团写一则通知。内容包括：1.比赛的时间、地点：2.欢迎同学观赛助威：3.观赛注意事项。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Notice Football Club 跟踪训练2◆通知 (2024·江苏省盐城市实验中学高二月考)前不久，你校学生一同观看了神舟十七号飞船发射直播，大 家备受鼓舞。为使学生了解更多的航天知识，你校决定举行一次关于航天科学的讲座。假设你是国际学校 的学生会主席李华，请用英语写一则书面通知。内容包括：1.讲座的时间、地点：2讲座的目的及内容：3.希 望同学们踊跃参加。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Notice The Students Union 航英语 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能14 ◆对接答案P234 如何提高续写中的动作描述 一、动作精准化 例3孩子们哭了。The children cried.. Part1细致描写 Deeply moved by the story,the children began to 试比较下面两句： y.孩子们被这个故事深深感动了，于是开始哭了起来。 ①The little boy said sorry to his mother.小男孩 对他妈妈说对不起 跟踪练习 2 The little boy hung his head and mumbled an apology to his mother.小男孩垂着头，咕畩着向他母 I,根据提示进行句型升级（增加细节，注意逻辑关 亲道歉。 系和语义的合理) 我们来具体分析一下：第一句中“said sorry to” L.当母亲拿着杰克献给她的所有的野花时，她高兴 不带任何感情色彩，而第二句中使用了具体化的表 极了。 示“说”的动词mumbled(咕咴)，从而使一个不愿意 Mother was overjoyed when she held all the wild 道歉又不得不道歉的小男孩的形象栩栩如生地浮现 flowers Jack had given to her. 在读者脑海中。 (1)当母亲拿着杰克献给她的所有的野花时，她脸上 Part2添加适当的修饰成分 洋溢着幸福，热泪盈眶。(glow with happiness,. 除了精准选用表示动作的词语，还要给动词加 上适当的修饰成分。动作描写中最常见的修饰成分 well up)） 就是状语，如副词、介词短语(with+情感名词，with+ 身体部位，n+名词)等。 when the mother held all the wild flowers Jack 比如下面两句： had given to her. (DThe wolf also noticed them and turned its head (2)当母亲拿着杰克献给她的所有的野花时，一阵喜 back,shouting at Paul and Becky.狼也注意到了他 悦涌遍全身，她喜极而泣。(sweep over,stream) 们，回头朝保罗和贝基大叫。 (2At the same time,the wolf also noticed them when the mother held all the wild flowers Jack and fiercely turned its head back,shouting loudly at had given to her. Paul and Becky.与此同时，狼也注意到了他们，恶狠 2.看到那个不幸的场景，她难过极了。 很地转过头，对保罗和贝基大叫。 我们来具体分析一下：第二句中加上了at the Seeing the unfortunate scene,she was so upset. same time与此同时/fiercely恶狠狠地/loudly“大声 (1)看到那个不幸的场景，她默默地站着，泪水顺 地”这三个副词，把两个人遇到狼这个危险情况生动 着脸颊流了下来。(roll down,cheek) 表达了出来。 Seeing the unfortunate scene,she stood silently, 二、动作过程化 例1他上了车。He got into a taxi. (2)看到那个不幸的场景，她痛苦地摇了摇头，嚎 【句型升级】 啕大哭。(miserably,burst into tears) He stopped the taxi,jumped in with the suitcase Seeing the unfortunate scene. and told the driver,"Go to the police station, please.."他拦下了车，拿着箱子跳进了车里，然后对 司机说，“请到警察局去。” Ⅱ.用所给提示完成句子 例2她会兴奋地下车。She would get off the 1.他大发雷霆，用他那可怕的大眼睛瞪着我，大喊： car excitedly. “你真是个白痴。”(burn with anger) 【句型升级】 he glanced at me She would get off the car excitedly,laughing and with his big frightening eyes,yelling,"You are such dancing around.她会兴奋地下车，又笑又跳。 an idiot.” 三、高级语法动作表达 2.当夜幕降临时，简坐在草地上，盯着广阔的天空， 例I老人静坐。The old man sat quietly,. 害怕而饥饿。(doig,形容词短语作伴随状语) The old man sat under the sunset,reading the newspaper and listening to the radio.老人坐在夕阳 As night was beginning to fall,Jane sat on the 下，看报纸，听收音机。 grass. 例2没有买到票。He didn't buy the ticket, 【句型升级】 3.面对这四个强壮的人，狼可能会感到受到威胁，开 Having queued for 3 hours,he was told that the 始撤退。(doing,doing) tickets had been sold out.在排队等了3个小时后，他 the wolf might feel 被告知票已经卖完了。 threatened,starting to withdraw. Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 Friday读后续写示例指导l4 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·湖南省长沙市外国语学校高二期未)“Ir's been potatoes all week,mom!Can'twe go to the dinner for a burger and an ice cream?That's all I want for my birthday!"Eve's 8-year-old son Dylan threw his arms around her shoulders,looking at her hopefully.In her heart,she wanted to throw Dylan the biggest birthday party ever,with balloons and a delicious cake with 8 beautiful candles on it.But in reality,Eve could afford none of that.After being let go from the third temporary job and paying the overdue bills,she didn't have enough money left. "Sorry,baby.I can't afford meals..."Eve said sadly.Seeing tears in his mother's eyes,Dylan quickly changed his tone ()He'd seen her struggling to make ends meet and couldn't stand hurting her."Actually, mom,that potato salad looks delicious!Can I have some more?"He asked her cheerfully. After the humble meal,Eve did housework.Dylan took out an envelope hidden on his bookshelf.He'd secretly saved a few dollars from the lunch money his mom had given him over the past few years.He counted the money."$28!"His eyes lit up."I can get a good meal for mom!" Dylan slid out with the envelope and walked to the next block,where he saw exactly what he'd expected- the mobile food truck!He'd seen it a few times and wondered why the place was always crowded.He waited until the crowd waiting to buy food at the counter cleared away. "Sir!Please give me everything I can get for $28!"Dylan requested eagerly.But Martin,the owner of the food truck,replied."Sorry,kid.We're out of everything today!" Disappointed,Dylan was seated on the sidewalk,mumbling ()"It's my birthday,but I can't even treat her to a nice meal.She does so much for me.I thought,for once,I would do something nice for her."He kept talking out loud to himself,giving into his urge to cry. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 "Woah,happy birthday,boy!"Martin said,sitting down next to Dylan. The next morning.Eve woke up to find a food truck outside her house. 155 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Dyla在生日这天想要改变伙食，但家庭条件无法负担，他不忍心伤害 母亲，而后他拿出自己攒下的钱跑去餐车处，想要在生日这天为母亲买一份大餐来感谢母亲的养育之情的 故事。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Dylan,Eve and Martin. When:8-year-old Dylan's birthday. Where:In Dylan's house. What:Dylan treated his poor mother to a nice meal on his birthday. Why:"Sorry,kid.We're out of everything today!" (2)Details: DSeeing tears in his mother's eyes,Dylan quickly changed his tone. 看到母亲眼中的泪水，Dyan迅速改变了语气。 本句为人物描写，运用了现在分词作状语的用法来表达Dyln是一个心地善良、通情达理的好孩子。 2Dylan slid out with the envelope and walked to the next block,where he saw exactly what he'd expected- the mobile food truck! Dylan拿着信封溜了出来，走到下一个街区，在那里他看到了他所期待的一流动食品卡车！ 本句为动作描写，运用了slid out、walked to the next block、saw三个动作，where引导的定语从句，what引 导的宾语从句，这些都表达出了Dyln急切地想为母亲弄些好吃的东西的迫切心情。 3"Sir!Please give me everything I can get for $28!"Dylan requested eagerly.But Martin,the owner of the food truck,replied,"Sorry,kid.We're out of everything today!" “先生！请把我能用28美元买到的东西都给我！”Dylan急切地问道。但是餐车的老板Martin回答说： “对不起，孩子。我们今天什么都没有了！” 这两句为对话描写，运用了定语从句，副词eagerly,连词But和Sorry,kid.这一系列表达，突出了Dylan 为母亲购买食物的急切心情和老板的善良。 4He kept talking out loud to himself,giving into his urge to cry. 他不停地自言自语，忍不住想哭。 本句为心理描写，运用了动词短语kept talking out loud to himself和giving into his urge to cry,现在分词 作伴随状语，表达了Dylan在不能为母亲购买食品后的悲伤心情。 2.找线索 (1)根据第三段中的“I can get a good meal for mom!”和第六段中的“I thought,.for once,I would do something nice for her."可知，Dylan是一个非常有爱心、品德优良的孩子，他一定要在他生日这天为母亲 做些事情，这些线索在续写的第一段中可呈现出来。 156 Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 (2)根据第三段中的“I can get a good meal for mom!”和第五段中的“But Martin,the owner of the food truck,replied,‘Sorry,kid.We're out of everything today!'”可知，Dylan决定为他的母亲弄一顿美餐，但 是餐车的老板Martin遗憾地告诉他，食品已经没有了，这些线索可在续写的第二段中呈现出老板Martin 的善良，Dylan的爱心，母亲的感动等，以此来凸显主题。 3.定思路 (I)由续写第一段首句内容“‘哇，生日快乐，孩子！'Martin坐在Dylan旁边说。”及续写第二段首句内容 “第二天早上，Eve醒来时发现屋外有一辆食品车。”可知，第一段可描写Martin了解到今天是Dylan的生 日以及通过谈话得知了Dylan的真正打算。 (2)由续写第二段首句内容“第二天早上，Eve醒来时发现屋外有一辆食品车。”可知，第二段可描写Ev© 看到孩子为她购买的大餐后的喜悦以及最后的感悟：孝心无价。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体，争抢满分作文 "Woah,happy birthday,boy!"Martin said,sitting down next to Dylan.With kindness in his heart.he asked patiently in a soft voice to get to know the intention of the little boy who only got $28.Hearing what happened to dylan.Martin took him outside to purchase some fresh cooking materials for the big meal which would be prepared for Dylan's mother.Dylan was thankful to express his gratitude by giving all his money to the food truck owner. The next morning,Eve woke up to find a food truck outside her house."Hello!It's Martin."Opening the door.confused with all the delicious food in the food truck,Eve couldn't believe her eyes and felt like a dream."It was your son Dylan who prepared all these food for you.Enjoy it."Touched by these words,Eve,pulling Dylan into her arms,burst into tears.They sat together and enjoyed the meal. surprised to discover a note with 28 under a plate reading "Filial piety is priceless." 157 肩航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 ◆对接答案P235 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·广东省湛江市第二中学高二期未)I live in a small but lovely neighborhood.Our house is neither large nor luxurious.but it has a fairly big garden.My father loves his garden.He planted some seeds in it and took good care of the plants,watering them,applying fertilizer,weeding and getting rid of bugs.He was never tired of doing all that stuff.But at that time,I didn't understand why working in the dirt excited him so much. Unfortunately,in the summer vacation before senior high school,my father was seriously injured in an accident.He had to stay in bed for a while.My mother had several business trips,so she couldn't take care of the garden.I didn't want my father to worry.I said that I would take care of his garden until he recovered.I assumed that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water,and luckily it rained fairly often,so I didn't think much about the garden. One Saturday morning,my father said to me,"Christine,the vegetables should be about ready to be picked.Let's have a salad today!"I went out to the garden and was upset to see that many of the lettuce ( leaves and carrots had been half eaten by bugs.There were hundreds of bugs all over them! I panicked for a moment but then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables.When I was making the salad,my mother came home and saw the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen.I was embarrassed and admitted,"Dad would like a salad,but the garden is a disaster.I don't want to disappoint him, so I went to the store and bought some vegetables."My mother smiled,saying,"Honey,you know what is the right thing to do.” 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him. Feeling guilty.I decided to do the right thing. 758 Week14通知&优秀品行类读后续写 Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 ◆对接答案P235 第一节◆应用文写作 (2024·浙江省丽水市第一中学高二期末)假如你是李华，是学校英语协会的负责人。最近，你校准备 邀请英国心理学专家Curry Smith就学习减压举行一个讲座，请你用英语出一则通知。要点：1.讲座地点、 时间：2.讲座专家、内容：3.注意事项。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Notice School English Society 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·吉林省辽源市重点高中高二期末)When Anna thought she finally knew what life was all about, it dealt her a heavy blow.Her husband passed away suddenly.They had been making plans to get away on a dream trip to France.Now it was too late,and Anna wept over all the memories they wouldn't be sharing.She was heartbroken. "I'm so worried about Mom,"Anna's daughter Clara said to her son,Ron,one day."It's been over six months,and she's still sad.She won't leave the house,not for anything. Ron,a fourteen-year-old boy who had been close to his grandparents,was upset."Poor grandma!"he sighed.He knew his grandpa was her world.Ron wondered how he could cheer his grandma up."What if I start taking her out in the afternoon for walks the way she and Grandpa used to do?"he asked."That's a great idea, Ron！"his mother said. 159答案全解全析 would stay calm and not get scared looking at the唤走，Diane就低下了头，露出了失望和伤心的表情。我抓住 flood below. 机会告诉Diane可以叫它过去。 Minutes later,a rescue team arrived.Thankfully,it had [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“Diane的父母盯着 我，脸上露出怀凝的表情。"可知，本段可以写Diane在犹像中 stopped raining by then,making their task easier. 说出了话，在父母的震惊中，Diane和小狗之间有了互动。 The rescue team helped Matt and Ollie to safety. ②由续写第二段首句内容“我知道我必须抓住时机。”可知，本 Helen tearfully hugged and kissed her dog.Then,段可以写我借着Diane和小狗互动的机会，尝试进一步和 helen turned around to Matt and started crying even Diane more.“Idon't know how to thank you.You saved[范文] my baby's life today."Matt smiled at her and said, Diane's parents stared at me,their expressions skeptical. "I had a dog two years ago.I just understand your For a few tense seconds,Diane sat debating what to affection for him."Helen thanked Matt again and do,her lower lip quivering.Then,in a soft voice,she offered to send him home. called,"Puppy,come;please come,Puppy."Her parents'gaze flew to their daughter and their jaws 高分亮点 dropped in astonishment.I gave Puppy the signal to 高分词汇：①frightened ad.受惊的.害怕的②wg.摇摆 (尾巴)③scared ad,惊恐的，恐惧的④tearfully ad,含 go and she whirled around and ran over to Diane 泪地，泪汪汪地⑤affection m.喜爱，关爱 who slid off her chair to the floor.and kneeling. 高分句型：（句型1）Matt then put the dog on the car's roof hugged Puppy tightly around the neck.We watched, and climbed up and sat with Ollie,patting him gently so that Diane's parents in tears,as Diane and Puppy he would stay calm and not get scared looking at the flood snuggled happily together. below,(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句) I knew that I had to seize the moment.Sitting on the 2)Thankfully.it had stopped raining by then,making their task easier.（(运用了现在分词作状语】 floor beside Puppy and Diane.I tried to engage Diane in conversation.Hoping to keep the miracle Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 going,I asked her what she liked about Puppy.She 0第一节 hesitated momentarily and then replied,"She is soft [范文] and funny."As we talked,Puppy sat leaning against Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen. Diane,the little girl's fingers laced through Puppy's Thanks for the chance to speak here on behalf fur.As the session drew to a close,Diane embraced of us all.Dear Lucy.we are all sorry to learn that it Puppy again and said,"Good-bye."Her voice was is time for you to return to America.Words cannot soft yet clear.I was deeply pleased as she had convey our endless love and respect! made a remarkable breakthrough.And it was all During the last years,you've brought us not thanks to Puppy,who had worked her magic again. only valuable knowledge,but also numerous happy 高分亮点 moments.We do appreciate the way of your teaching. 高分词汇：①skeptical adi.怀疑性的 ②in astonishment惊 which seems to have a magic appeal to us.It is your 讶地③hesitate,犹豫，顾虑④nomentarily ad.顷刻之 patient guidance that enables us to learn effectively 间：马上，立刻5 embrace以，拥抱：欣然接受 and make great progress. 6 remarkable ad5异常的，引人注目的 Thanks again for all you have done for us.Wish 高分句型：（句型I)Sitting on the floor beside Puppy and Diane,I tried to engage Diane in conversation.(运用了现在 you a safe journey home and a happy life in the 分词作状语) future. (2)And it was all thanks to Puppy,who had worked her Thank you for listening! magic again.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) 高分亮点 高分词汇：①on behalf of代表②convey v.表达 Week 14 通知&优秀品行类读后续写 3 endless ad.无止境的，无穷尽的④numerous adj.众多 的.许多的⑤effectively ad,有效地：实际上 Monday 如何写好通知 高分句型：（句型I)We do appreciate the way of your Step Two词汇运用 teaching,which seems to have a magic appeal to us.(运用了 1.inform 2.pick grapes 3.experience nature 4.destination which引导的非限制性定语从句) 5.entrance fee 6.last 7.take part in 8.actively (2)It is your patient guidance that enables us to learn 9.outdoor activity effectively and make great progress.(运用了强调句型) OStep Three 句式表达 ⊙第二节 1.完成句子 [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了息有选择性减 (I)This weekend,our school English club will organize an 默症的Diac在父母的陪伴下来到我的心理治疗室，不愿说 activity of picking fruits. 话的她看到我的6岁的小狗，露出了撒笑。但是当我把小狗 (2)The activity will make us all experience nature 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (3)We need to get together at the gate of our school at six 高分亮点 o'clock on this Saturday. 高分词汇：①purpose n.目的，意图 ②enhance v.增强，提 (4)After we finish gathering,we will take the bus. 高.改善③affection n.喜爱，关爱④arrive at到达 (5)To get to the destination will take us about half an hour 5 punctually ad.准时地，如期地⑥visual feast视觉盛宴 (6)The entrance fee is 10 yuan per person. (7)Everyone can get about 5 pounds of oranges. 高分句型：（句型1）There will be a friendly soccer match (8)The picking time will last 2 hours. between our school and Guangming High School in the (9)You can take a cap and enough water coming Thursday,whose purpose is to enrich our campus life, 10)We hope everyone can take part in it actively! enhance communication between schools and improve our 2.句式升级 soccer skills..(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)】 (1 )This weekend,our school English club will organize an (2)Above all.do keep it in mind that friendship must activity of picking fruits,which will make us all experience come first..(运用了that引导的宾语从句) nature. O跟踪训练2 (2)After finishing gathering,we will take the bus. [范文] (3)It will take us about half an hour to get to the destination. Notice (4)The entrance fee is 10 yuan per person and everyone can Aimed at enabling students to acquire more get about 5 pounds of oranges. (5)The picking time will last 2 hours so that you can take a knowledge about space flight,a lecture themed on cap and enough water. space science will be held in the school hall at 2 (6)Hope everyone can take part in it actively! o'clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours. Step Four连句成篇 The lecture mainly consists of three parts,the Notice first of which is a brief introduction of the history. This weekend,our school English club will organize an activity of picking fruits,which will make recent launch as well as development trends of us all experience nature. space flight in our country.The second part We need to get together at the gate of our presented by the same experts will deal with the school at six o'clock on this Saturday.After finishing related scientific benefits.Additionally the third part gathering.we will take the bus.It will take us about highlights interaction,where participants can ask half an hour to get to the destination.The entrance questions they are curious about. fee is 10 yuan per person and everyone can get Those interested in the lecture are highlu welcome about 5 pounds of oranges.The picking time will last to take part. The Students Union 2 hours so that you can take a cap and enough water. Hope everyone can take part in it actively! 高分亮点 English Club 高分词汇：①acquire.获得②consist of组成 ③trend m.趋势，动态④additionallyad.另外，此外 Wednesday 通知写作跟踪训练 5 interaction n.互动，交流 Q跟踪训练1 高分句型：（句型1）The lecture mainly consists of three parts, [范文] the first of which is a brief introduction of the history,recent Notice launch as well as development trends of space flight in our There will be a friendly soccer match between country,(运用了介词+关系代词which引导的非很制性定 语从句) our school and Guangming High School in the 2)Additionally the third part highlights interaction. coming Thursday,whose purpose is to enrich our where participants can ask questions they are curious about. campus life,enhance communication between schools (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) and improve our soccer skills.The activity is scheduled to be held from 3:00 p.m.to 4:30 p.m.on our Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能14 playground. [跟踪练习] All the students who have affection for soccer 1.1.(1)Her face glowed with happiness,tears welling up in games are welcome to watch it.Be sure to arrive at her eyes the playground punctually and offer your cheers to (2)A wave of happiness swept over her.and tears of joy streamed down her cheeks both teams.With each participating team making 2.(1)tears rolling down his cheeks full preparations for the coming match.I'm sure this (2)she shook her head miserably,bursting into tears will be a visual feast for everyone.Above all,do keep II.1.Burning with anger it in mind that friendship must come first. 2.staring at the vast sky.frightened and hungry Football Club 3.Facing the four strong men 答案全解全析 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 As planned,a famous English psychologist named Curry Smith is going to deliver the lecture,in [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者爸爸一直 悉心照料着菜园，有一天受伤之后就交给作者来屈料，但作者 which he will help us analyse the causes of study 却没有花心思去做好，结果菜园里的蔬莱都被虫槽湖了。有 pressure.Additionally,he intends to offer us some 一天，作者父亲想吃自已种的蔬菜做的沙拉，作者怕爸爸伤 relaxing and interesting ways to reduce pressure. 心，于是偷偷去商店买了茏菜，后来被妈妈发现了。 Definitely,every attendee is welcome to ask questions. [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句“当我把沙拉递给父亲 During the course of the lecture.being polite 时，父亲似乎很高兴。”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：爸爸品 and active is a must.Also,it is crucial not to litter or 尝沙拉并表杨我将菜园照顾得很好，面我却非常道尬和羞愧 (学生也有可能在第一段续写父亲发现了端倪，揭穿了我，这 make noise.You are bound to benefit a lot from it. 样第二段的right thing就是我决定将功补过，在菜园辛勤劳 School English Society 作，只要能自圆其说也可以。)②由续写第二段首句“感到内 高分亮点 疚，我决定做正确的事。”可以预测：我向爸爸坦白了一切，而 高分词汇：①schedulev.安排，预定 ②auditorium n.观众 爸爸鼓励我将功补过。我学者父亲的样子在菜园劳作，同时 席：礼堂，会堂③deliver the lecture发表演讲 ④analyse 也在这次经历中获得成长 .分析，细察 ⑤pressure n.压力 ⑥definitely adv.肯定 [范文] 地，当然⑦crucial ad.重要的 My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to 高分句型：（句型I)A famous English psychologist named him."It looks so good.Your salad makes my mouth Curry Smith is going to deliver the lecture,in which he will water,"Dad couldn't wait to try it.He forked a piece help us analyse the causes of study pressure,(选用了“介词+ into his mouth and chewed slowly.his face 关系代词”结构的非限制性定语从句) (2)During the course of the lecture,being polite and spreading in a satisfied smile.Giving me a thumbs- active is a must.(运用了动名词作主语)】 up,he said,"Little did I know you are so good at gardening.You are a man of your word."My father 0第二节 [语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开，讲望了Anna在大夫 kept praising me.which made my ears burning. 去世后很伤心，女儿Clara很担心母亲。Clara的儿子Ron和 Feeling bad about what I had done,I forced a bitter 爷爷奶奶关系很好，他学着爷容的样子邀请奶奶Ana出去散 smile.How could I cheat my father? 步，但遭到了奶奶的拒绝。后来他想到一个好主意，想要学着 Feeling guilty.I decided to do the right thing.With tears 爷爷的样子给奶奶买玫瑰，但他需要先曦钱，并打算独自完成 welling up in my eyes.I told my father I didn't live 这件事」 up to his expectations and that the garden was a [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“第二个星期六早 上，他想找一份兼职工作。”可知，第一段可描写Ro用兼职工 mess.To my surprise,instead of scolding me,my 作赚得的崭水为奶奶买了花，并打算去看望奶奶。②由续写 father patted me on the shoulder gently and told me 第二段首句内容“当Ro来到奶奶家时，他看到她拿着玫瑰微 to turn to him if I needed any help.Under his 笑着。”可知，第二段可描写奶奶收到花后情绪好转，逐渐恢复 guidance,I learned to apply fertilizer,weed and 了对生活的热情。 remove bugs.The vegetables became better and [范文] better day by day,and so did my father.I began to The next Saturday morning,he tried to find a part-time job. enjoy taking care of vegetables and I finally After many efforts,he managed to land a part-time understood my father's pleasure of working in the job in a grocery store on weekends.Eager to help dirt. his grandma,Ron worked hard.And to save money. he stopped eating out and buying snacks.Finally,he 高分亮点 高分词汇：①chew.咀嚼，嚼碎 ②forced a bitter smile强 received his first salary.Ron went to the local flower 额欢笑③live up to达到，实现④expectation n.期待：预 store and ordered some flowers to be delivered to 期⑤fertilizer n,肥料，化肥 Anna's house that afternoon.Then he decided to 高分句型：（句型I)My father kept praising me,which made visit his grandma to see if the flowers would help my ears burning.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) and to see if his hard work was worth it. 2)Feeling bad about what I had done,I forced a bitter When Ron arrived at his grandma's house,he saw her smile.(运用了非谓语动词和what引导的宾语从句) holding the roses and smiling."Look,Ron!"she cried in Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 delight."Someone sent me flowers,just like your 0第一节 grandfather used to do..."She said that these [范文] flowers brought her good memories back.He said. Notice "It's so good to see you look better,Grandma."Ron A lecture concerning relieving study pressure is was even more determined to keep those flowers scheduled to be held at the school auditorium from coming.Anna slowly recovered her passion for life. 3:00 p.m.to 5:00 p.m.this Friday. And she was planning the trip to France she always 启航英语Ⅲ 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 dreamed of with her daughter and her son-in-law.as a foreigner.I can't wait to write to express my She never found out who was sending the flowers, sincere congratulations to you. and Ron is still keeping that secret. As the old saying goes,“no pains,,no gains.”I 高分亮点 remember that in the past few years you have 高分词汇：①grocery n.食品杂货店②snack n,零食，点心 sacrificed your spare time to improve your skills. ③in delight高兴地④determined adj.下定决心的，坚定的 Your devotion and diligence account for your 5 recover以.恢复（健康，精神，体力）⑥passion n.热情，酷爱 constant progress so that you really set an example 高分句型：（句型1）Then he decided to visit his grandma to for me and push me to move forward. see if the flowers would help and to see if his hard work was worth it.(由连接词if引导的宾语从句作see的宾语) As a Chinese chess lover,I hope you can teach (2)And she was planning the trip to France she always me some chess techniques.Sincere congratulations dreamed of with her daughter and her son-in-law,(省略关系 to you again! 代词的定语从句) Yours, (3)She never found out who was sending the flowers. Li Hua and Ron is still keeping that secret,(由连接代词who引导的 宾语从句作found out的宾语) Wednesday 祝贺信写作跟踪训练 Week 15 祝贺信&优秀品行类读后续写 Q跟踪训练1 [范文] Dear Peter, Monday 如何写好祝贺信 I would like to express my congratulations to you on your Step Two词汇运用 receiving the first prize of "Chinese Bridge"Chinese I.win 2.the first prize 3.competition 4.can't wait to do speech contest. 5.sincere congratulations 6.sacrifice 7.devotion I know that you were not good at Chinese at 8.diligence 9.set an example for sb.10.account for 11.technique first.However,you practiced speaking Chinese every Step Three句式表达 day.As the saying goes,"Everything comes to him .完成句子 who waits."Finally,you succeeded!In my mind,this (1)It's amazing. match is very difficult for a foreign student.So I'm (2)You have won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network so surprised that you become champion of this Challenge Competition as a foreigner. competition.If you go on studying Chinese harder, (3)I can't wait to write. (4)I want to express my sincere congratulations to you. you will have the opportunity to study in China.I (5)The old saying goes. hope to see you and communicate with you. (6)No pains,no gains. Sincere congratulations to you again! (7)I remember in the past few years you have sacrificed your Yours. spare time to improve your skills. Li Hua (8)Your devotion and diligence account for your constant 高分亮点 progress. 高分词汇：①congratulation m.恭喜，祝贺②Chinese speech (9)You really set an example for me and push me to move contest汉语演讲比赛③succeed v.成功，达成 forward. ④champion m.冠军⑤opportunity n,时机，机会 (10)As a Chinese chess lover.I hope you can teach me some 高分句型：（句型1）As the saying goes,“Everything comes chess techniques. to him who waits."(运用了s引导的非很制性定语从句) (11)I will give my sincere congratulations to you again! (2)If you go on studying Chinese harder,you will have 2.句式升级 the opportunity to study in China.(运用了if引导的条件秋 (1)It's amazing that you have won the first prize in the 语从句) Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. Q跟踪训练2 (2)I can't wait to write to express my sincere congratulations [范文] to you. Dear Jack. (3)As the old saying goes,"No pains,no gains." Congratulations on your winning the first place (4)Your devotion and diligence account for your constant progress so that you really set an example for me and push me in the long-distance running race at the school's to move forward. sports meeting! (5)Sincere congratulations to you again! You're the first exchange student to win this Step Four连句成篇 honor.We really appreciate your wonderful performance. Dear Peter, Following the successful conclusion of the sports meeting It's amazing that you have won the first prize is the excitement of collecting prizes.All winners of in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition:the event are expected to claim their awards at the 36